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rockin_gal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#551

Omg omg omg!!! I'm in deep deep luv wid dis story.... Gosh y did u hav 2 stop?? Lol but seriously I wanna like read this 4ever... I want maan 2 pay her another visit 😆 ok now plz plz plz update ASAP cuz I cnt wait for it.. 😊

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#552

Originally posted by: tes_v1
Soumya,

Another fun-filled update! Superb as always! Loved Geet's jealousy! Aw, no! I told you I don't want the night to end so sooooooooooooooooon! I'm sure you didn't have a mug of hot chocolate with whipped cream and chocolate sauce today hence, you're being such a spoil sport! Go and have it before you update again! 😡

tia, 🤗

no i did not have a cup of hot chocolate with whipped cream and chocolate sauce, i was in fact thinking of having black forest pastry.....😉 ........... but i did not...!!!
hello .......maan's coming back into geet's house...!!!! 😛....relax..... and they are all alone till sunday afternoon...!!!!! 😲........ lets see what they do!!!!!!

Soumya

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#553

@rituka : thanks honey 😛

@naina: thanks naina....😊..... i'll surely add you to the list...!!!!! 😃

@rocking_gal : sure gal....i will update ASAP. 😛..... thanks for reading...!!!!! 😊

Soumya

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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

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Posted: 15 years ago

#554

let maan visit her
that will be cool
it can bring the story forward

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: desigurl953
let maan visit her
that will be cool
it can bring the story forward

sure honey....!!!!! 😃

Soumya

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sravani899

@sravani899

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Posted: 15 years ago

#556

soumya

really and update dear

actually its rainy here also and we the whole class did mass bunk ha ha ha

and really nice and sweet update dear

really maan and half naked wow

geet is fumming and angry wow and now she is jealous oye hoye

and let me tell u maan said second time thanks to other girls no he dint said thanks to other girl he said thanks to me as i am one of them and seeing maan without blinking my eyes and i am licking him as he is to my eyes ha ha ha ness all over ha ha ha

as pinky and her dad were not there so geet is all alone

what matters dear if maan is in geets house or geet is with maan at his outhouse both will be all alone right ha ha i am turning into evil he he he

well answer to ur question dear

how abt geet to say the meaning of dd and cut the phone immediately

but want maan to come to geets home as she cutted the phone immediately

well nice and superb update dear

well soumya

with love

sravs

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#557

Nice part

Geet was really jealous of those gals

Liked the way Maan replied her politely n sweetly

DD lets c wat Geet says as full form of DD

I hop she says Dhust Danav that wuld be fab😆😆😆 to c Maan's expression

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: sravani899
soumya
really and update dear

actually its rainy here also and we the whole class did mass bunk ha ha ha

and really nice and sweet update dear

really maan and half naked wow

geet is fumming and angry wow and now she is jealous oye hoye

and let me tell u maan said second time thanks to other girls no he dint said thanks to other girl he said thanks to me as i am one of them and seeing maan without blinking my eyes and i am licking him as he is to my eyes ha ha ha ness all over ha ha ha

as pinky and her dad were not there so geet is all alone

what matters dear if maan is in geets house or geet is with maan at his outhouse both will be all alone right ha ha i am turning into evil he he he

well answer to ur question dear

how abt geet to say the meaning of dd and cut the phone immediately

but want maan to come to geets home as she cutted the phone immediately

well nice and superb update dear

well soumya

with love

sravs

mass bunk sravs?????? 🤣c🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣hi chi chi....bad girl...........😉.....
anyways good u dint go else i'd have to wait till evening to read ur comments.....!!!!!! ....haahhaha i'm evil too..... u know...... 😈..........

gosh girl,......u're really getting all XXXXXXXXXXX..............XXXXXXXXX rated haaaaaaan???? 😲............... but i love the idea u gave.... that would be out of the box....maan landing up with geet either way..... and he's angry that she cut his call....that would be cool...wonderful sravs...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

that's what i'm gonna do.......!!!!!hayyeeeee hayyyeeeee lets get maan and geet a little XXXX.....XXXXrated now......!!!!!!! 😳

i love your emoticons.......!!!!!!! 😛.....btw did i give u enough hugs to make u smile again???or u need some more??????? 😉

Soumya

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uzma

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Posted: 15 years ago

#559

awwwwwww soumya!!

part 26 rocked!! OMG!! i love it soooo much!!

although it dint haf maaneet buh it waz stil superb!!👏

and i simply adooooooooooorrrreee dadi!! shezz soo gud!! and shez soo smart lol!! how she supported and guided him waz written beautifully---

"Maan, if you think something you talk or something you do will remind her of her past, then change what you do. Change it to an extent that her memory is re-written with just you and only you. If you think everytime you face her will remind you of her past, then maan for that one minute forget that she was ever married, only remember you love her and usher your love on her. You will see the change not just in you but also in her."

wow soumya---i got stuck here fer quiet a long while!! amazing amazing amazing dialogues! itna acha kaisay likhti ho yaar??

so far this part has been the most touchin part fer me---i really love it!

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soumya

@pickle6586

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Posted: 15 years ago

#560

Originally posted by: uzmakhan
awwwwwww soumya!!
part 26 rocked!! OMG!! i love it soooo much!!

although it dint haf maaneet buh it waz stil superb!!👏

and i simply adooooooooooorrrreee dadi!! shezz soo gud!! and shez soo smart lol!! how she supported and guided him waz written beautifully---

"Maan, if you think something you talk or something you do will remind her of her past, then change what you do. Change it to an extent that her memory is re-written with just you and only you. If you think everytime you face her will remind you of her past, then maan for that one minute forget that she was ever married, only remember you love her and usher your love on her. You will see the change not just in you but also in her."

wow soumya---i got stuck here fer quiet a long while!! amazing amazing amazing dialogues! itna acha kaisay likhti ho yaar??

so far this part has been the most touchin part fer me---i really love it!

omg omg omg omg....finally uzma....!!!!!! 😛.....here u are....!!!!!

thanks honey!!!!! i'm glad u really liked that part...!!!actually i didn't really want to write it in hindi..u know..it would be really tough and since daadi is all modern and belongs totally to 21st century i thought i'll just put her feelings in english...!!!😉

thanks gal for commenting.....and good to see u back.....🤗🤗

Soumya