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after the separation of 6 long years finally heer got to know about the truth of that night she was feeling very guilty for hurting prem like this she don;t know how to face prem's eyes.She was crying like a child and cursing herself omly then prem enters the room where heer was lying on the bed holding their wedding album in her hands.
PREM:tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? wo bhi akele
he came close to heer and sat on the bed only then he noticed that heer was crying.
prem: tumhe kya hua?kya tum court ke faisle se khush nahin ho?



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hi! guys sorry if u feel it was too short



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prem moved his hands to heer's cheeks and removed the tears.

PREM: tumne jawaab nahin diya heer

HEER: aisi baat nahin hai prem.main pichle 6 saalon ke bare mein soch rahi thi wo dard jo maine tumhe diya wo takleef jo tumne meri wajah se mehsoos ki tumhe bina kisi galti ke 6 saalon tak tumhari chahat se dur rakha.


PREM:haan heer ye sach hai ki mujhe pichle 6 saalon mein bahut takleef hui.main jeena bhul gaya.har pal tadapa hu tumhare liye tumhe dekhne ke liye tumhari us ek mafi ke intezaar mein par agar mujhe itni takleef hui tumse door rehkar to main ye bhi janta hu ki tum bhi mere bina kitni adhuri thi tum bhi harpal mujhe yaad kliya karti thi aur us raat bhale hi mere aur ashlesha ke beech kuch na hua ho par hum dono ne us dard ko saha hai.


HEER:par prem galti to meri thi na main tumhe samajh hi nahin payi.


PREM:nahin heer aisa nahin hai us raat main bhi to tumhe nahin samajh paya tum par shaq kiya aur sabke samne tumhe kya nahin kaha


HEER: tum us baat ko bhul jao prem jo kuch bhi hua wo sirf ek misunderstanding thi.


PREM: agar yahi baat mein tumse kahoon to.


HEER: par prem.............


PREM: shhhhhhh.(prem puts his hand on heer's lips)kuch mat kaho ab na mein us bare me sochunga aur na tum wada karo.


prem takes his hand in front of heer to take the promise and heer gives her hand in that of prem.
prem puts his hand around heer's waist and moves closer to her


PREM:by the way heer aaj mausam kitna suhana hai na aur tumhe pata hai chahat bhi so gayi hai.(naughtily)


HEER: toooooo(pretending that she can't understand what prem was saying)


PREM: to yeh ki main is waqt apni biwi ke saath apne bedroom mein akela hoon aur mausam mujhe shararat karne par majboor kar raha hai.


heer smiles as she was feeling prem's hand moving to her back from the waist. he slowly opens the dori of her blouse and makes heer to look into his eyes.then slowly he takes heer's necklace off and kisses on her neck.after that he puts his lips over heer's and the light fades{AKELA CHOD DO BECHARON KO}


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harshiitii thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice
continue soon
pm me when u continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start!
continue soon!
plz pm me next time!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsum yar do write plz add me in ur pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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superb os
do continue soon
Edited by priya.harshiti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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103 VIEWS AND ONLY 8 REPLIES ITNA BURA THA KYA? 🥺
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome!!!
glad that prem and heer decided to forget their past!!!
really love premeer scenes!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice start..

add me to ur pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its short os but its really sweet, prem always want to romance with his wife, we ladka kabi nahi sudrega
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Posted: 15 years ago
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THANKS FOR UR COMMENTS AND APPRECIATION. 😊

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