New One shot..Dutta saves Nakku from anna Pg9!!!!!

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Ok everyone............I can see u all r quite sad and unhappy............😭

Itnaa pressure of yesterday's episode upar se longggggggggggggggg weekend...........

Lekin no worries .............Main hoon naa?...............😊
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I will be soon updating this one shot.............Isliye all through the weeken do watch out for this topic..................👏😛
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Love u all............Love u Mishal..............u rock as Dutta patil.................😳


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Ok the scene begins with the last scene on Thursday………..

U see Nakku is in Dutta's room………..

His words echo in her head----Aaj main tujhey iss sazaa………..iss bandhan…………khus se azaad kartaa hoon……….

Tears flow down nakku's eyes………..

She picks her box and u see she reaches the door and stops…………turning around she gives one last longing look to Dutta's room…………

She takes in a deep breath and wipes away her tears ……….

She thinks to herself-----Saahib………..aap merii zindagii….meraa pyaar hain………..Jo faislaa aap mere liye logey…..sar aankhon par……….Jab aapney mujhsey shaadi kii……….Har pal har lmahaa merii zindagii ko narakh banaaney kii kasam khaayi…………Aur aaj jab uss sazaa se mujhey azaad karney kii baat kii……….sach toh yeh hai sahib kii aapkey saath bitaaya vo har lamhaa mere liye sazaa nahiin…………Merii zindagii ke vo sabsey khoobsurat pal the jinke sahaarey main aapkii suhaagan banker ………poori zindagii kaat saktii hai…………

Nakku turns around and walks into the hall………..

Wahaan wahii aayi sahib kii apologies………….I won't go into the details…………

Next u see Nakku walks out of the Patil niwas with her family when baaji comes out and stops them…………

He walsk upto nakku and gives the bag of money dutta had left for them…………

He tells him Dutta wants them to start life afresh……….

Baabi protests lekin greedy ganpat takes the money………..

Nakku looks down………..she doesn't know what to say………….and as she steps out of the house u see Kalaa think to herself----Aakhir yeh balaa tal hii gayi……….Iss Kaali Nakusha se mere bhau kaa peecha choot hii gayaa……….

On the road…………u see all four walk away………..quiet………..

Nakku walked aimlessly…………

Just last night she had thought she would win back Dutta's trust………..his friendship………….and may be…………one day his heart too…………

Like always fate had other plans for her……….

And as u see Nakku walks away with her family………..

Apney addey par Anna is breaking all his stuff angrily………..

He comes to know about Dutta escaping it all……….and ofcourse janaardhan tells him about Nakusha…………

Anna shoots Janaardhan and says----Meraa right hand banney kaa sapnaa dekhtaa hai saala aur khdu hii………Apnaa right had katvaa aaya uss dutta ke haathon se……………

Anna looks at The wound on Janardhan's right hand and smirks………..

Jus then a man walks in and says----Anna…………Humaarey aadmiyon ne dutta kii patnii aur usskey paivaar ko sadak par dekhaa hai………..

Anna looks at the man and smiles as an idea strikes him………….

Precap----Kalaa is with Dutta in the hall………….he stands lost in his thoughts………..Kalaa walks upto him and says----Jo hua achcha hua bhau……….

Dutta says to her----Taayi mujhey kuch derr akelaa chod dey……….

Just then baabi runs in and falls to dutta's feet crying----Bhau…………meri……….neri betii ko bachaa lo bhau…………

Dutta looks at her horrified…………



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Kaisa lagaa guys............Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments............u want me to go on naa?.............😊😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Kaisa lagaa guys............Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments............u want me to go on naa?.............😊😳



great sheeba hope same happens in show and they will not drag any more and continue with pace very very heart breaken after yesterdays episode poor nakku, after reading your ff feeling better know hope dutta comes to save nakku and soon Tasah reunite

Great going continue no need to ask
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesum blossom!!!😆
*reserved* will edit later
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PremLeoManav

Kaisa lagaa guys............Plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do send in ur valuable comments............u want me to go on naa?.............😊😳




Exccellent sheeba.....It should happen in the same way.....And MR.Patil should realise what he lost in his life....what a stupid decision he has taken....And again because if him NAKUSHA is in trouble....

To add on to that....Dutta should reach Anna's adda....Now he has to cry for her....Itna aasani se usko todkar choor choor kiya.....He should save Naku from Anna and in between again Naku save his life(she take the bullet to save Dutta(this is up to you Sheeba)) and Dutta fix Anna and now he should struggle to save Nakusha's life....but yes Naku behosh hone se pehle phir se she has to say"Sahib,me aapse bahut pyar karti hoo,our app teek ho muje kuch nahi chahiye."

Hey I have just added my comment...you can continue in the way you want....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sheeba.........really osam track yaar....
Pls aage aur uplaod karo naaaaaaaaaa..
like this only should happen......
But i am worried because Dutta will think about nakku lekin yeh
3 witches😡😡😡😡 will disturb his thinking...dats y im worried....
I hope Dutta ko raat din Nakku yaad aaye...........😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinkyk

Sheeba.........really osam track yaar....

Pls aage aur uplaod karo naaaaaaaaaa..


like this only should happen......


But i am worried because Dutta will think about nakku lekin yeh


3 witches😡 will disturb his thinking...dats y im worried....


I hope Dutta ko raat din Nakku yaad aaye...........😍😍



They and that bat AS will try to stop Dutta from going after Naku...and I think they'll guise it as concern for Dutta, but they will show their true contempt for Naku to Dutta.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thankx spandana..........Glad u enjoyed the part.........next one asap..........sill thinking..........Hope u enjoy it too dear..........😊.........I am soooooooooooo glad I could make u feel better dear...........🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Shweta ji..........waitingggggggggggggg...........udate ur comment dear............😳

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