I LOVE U BUT..? (AR FF)inc Part9 on 86(22/05/2011)

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introduction... page 1

part 1...page 11

part 2...page 24

part 3...page 31

part 4...page 38

part 5...page 46

part 6 ...page 57

part 7...page 65

part 8...page 77

part 9 inc...page 86


Introduction

He finally entered the room after the lot of leg pulling by atul, rahul,muskaan,anjie n nikki. He entered in the fully decorated room with red roses. Smell of flowers was spread all over the room. The theme of the room was entirely red but not the bridal one this was "sauce vala laal" as he had arranged each and every corner of the room by himself. The room which used to be the all over white was turned in to sauce vala laal now. Red walls, Red bed sheet, red curtains, red carpet red flowers etc.


This was not all, under the layers of rose petals one figure was sitting covering its face with ghonghat (veil) on the bed was also in a suace vala laal bridal dress.


Her knees were touching her chin and hands which were full of bangles and rings were rested on the knees.


Armaan smiled to see her sit like that he knew that she was feeling extremely confused. He moved to the bed and sat before her but she does not made any moment. He put his hand on her hand and found her hand a little trembling; she instantly reacted to this and pulled her hand back. Armaan raised her ghonghat and totally mesmerized to see her in bridal attire.


He made her face up but she was still looking down. Since he had been sitting before her she had not looked at him even once. To see his dream beauty in his dream dress he could not resist himself for saying;


" oyye...hueee...soniyo...zra hmari taraf bhi dekh lo...itna bura bhi nahe lag raha".


He smiled but he could not get any response again. No doubt he was looking extremely hot and breathtaking in his white and golden sherwani.


Every girl would be envy ridhimma today to marry the most adorable doctor who had married to dr ridhimma gupta today'.. his lady love for almost past two years.


He held her hand in his but this time firmly and not to give her any chance to pull it back.


Armaan " ridhimma...mai ne hmesha tumhai apne sapne mai apni dulhan banee dekha hai lekn itni khobsurat to tum kabhi mere sapno mai bhi nahe lage...aj tum buhat khoubsurat lag rahe ho."


He signed and kissed on her hand. Then he made a little move to get close to her as he coming close to ridhimma, her heart beat were getting faster and faster. He brought his face near her in a kissing position at just a distance of few millimeters and he was about to kiss her when she said:


ridhimma " vooo...i think kay darwaza khula hai".

She pointed to door.


armaan looked at door and then looked at ridhimma who had taken a step back to increase distance among them.


Armaan " darwaza band hai ridhimma"


ridhimma " ohhh"


She looked in to his eyes first time he was looking at her intensely she saw passionate desire in his eyes which she had not been seen ever before in his eyes. She could not handle his gaze so she averted.


He again moved forward to reduce distance between them he touched her cheek and start to move to her when she again stopped her by saying

"tum dhodh (milk) pe lo" she pointed towards the milk glass placed on table just next to bed.

Armaan frowned at her she get scared and explained;


ridhimma " vo...maa ne kaha tha kay tum se pene ko keh don".

He smiled at her innocent explanation.


Armaan " u know naa...i hate milk...but i just love".


He moved again close her and took her face in hands and was about to kiss her when she again interrupted him;


ridhimma " phone...i think phone baj raha hai..."


armaan a little irritated this time " ridhimma...room mai koi phon nahe hai".


She asked innocently " achaa...lekn kiun...?"


armaan starred at her " ridhimmaaa..."


ridhimma " sorry...mujhy zra fresh hona hai..."


armaan "yaa...sure..." he stood to give her way.


She gets in to wash room and stood before mirror


" o my god ...ab mai kia kron...ab mai use kaise rokon ge...kaise batao kay how i am feeling...i am feeling so awkward to just think that he is coming too close to me...i love u armaan...but...but ... mai kaise bataon kay...mere lie ye sub buhat naya hai ...buhat ajeb hai mere lie...or mujhy kuch time chahea iss sab kay lie...mai tumhara dil nahe torhna chahte...per i am not ready yet..."


(i have this idea since ages now in my mine so just thought to write it down now...i am not satisfies with the title...if u have any better then suggest me plz)


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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow
Zara
i just loved it so much
truly awesome
i think the title suits it perfectly
but still, i'll try n think some more
like
how abt something like 'hesitant love'
u cud find better words with the same meaning
anyways
i really loved the concept
plz do update soon

love
pooja
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HeyDear,
OMG You left me speechless.
This is mindblowing really!
I loved all the lines heheh,
And now i am dying to see more and more and more!
Plz update part 2 off this FF,
Would love it to read, Proud of your work / Keep it up=)
LoveSurat.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwww....dis is such a cute concept Zara.....
do cont. wiv it....wud love 2nread Riddhima;z confused side....
plzzzzzzz cont. sooooooooonnnnn....
n add me 2 da PM list 2 hun ....
tc ots of love
JIA!!! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey ZARA....

Congratz on new FF
it's really awesome
Loved the intro
Title is also cool yaar
will love to read more of it
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

love
prinz

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey really nice intro dear.. plz do update soon if possible.. pm me also... thanx- misha=]
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woah dear its really rocking sound interesting so when she is going to ready😉 and how she explain him😆 plz continue it & thanks for the pm

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Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice add me to ur pm list
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wow. just loved it. very nice concept. update soon.
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hey zara..nice concept..
AR are married..wow..armaan saw that riddhima looked really pretty..n he fell in love with her all over again..
he tried to go close to her..but she kept makin excuses every time...n he got irritated too..
she loved him but she wasn't ready..um, thats pretty weird..i guess she should get used to it now...she has such a romantic as a husband!..i hope this doesn't create problems for them..
thnx 4 d pm
update soon

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