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Posted: 15 years ago
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A very warm welcome to all my LNMDJains
wish u all n love ne mila di jodi a happy anniversary!!! or birthday......whatever u like

todays day is very very special for all of us!!!
because on this day only we got our love our life "Love ne mila di jodi..."
n the fabulous six..
who made us fall in love with them...
duniya ki sabse special jodiya
PriDa SaVni VarNi....or i shud say GauCha,KarNeet ,SiShank

i have got something for all of u
For all Lnmdjains
guys i have not made it but watch it u ll b happy!!!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JI8hKB_uXbE......made by crew of lnmdj i have juss uploaded it...




For SaVnians......i have made a vm[new]

SaVni vm on dil ibadat


SaVni OS-sad story
how he went away from her.......

avni had a boyfriend ,she grew up with him
his name was sameer

to her he was the only one for her the most important and precious
but to him she was just another girl

one day
avni:hey sameer wanna go to watch a movie
sameer:i cant
avni:why???do u need to study at home or something
sameer:errrr......no
avni:then what r u doing?
sameer:i m meeting up with .........a friend

it was always like that with him
he met girls in front of her........like it was nothing!!

for sameer she was just another one of his girlfriends....
the word "love" never came out of his mouth

from the day she has known him
she has never heard the word "i love u" from him before

there weren't any anniversaries at all
sameer didn't say anything from the first day and it continued till 100 days..........200 days

everyday before he would say good-bye
he would just hand her a gift,everyday..without fail
she didn't know why?

then one fine day
avni:ermmm..sameer
sameer:what is it.......dont drag ..juss say
avni: i love u
sameer:errm .........you....what ?juss take this gift ..and go home........

that was how he ignored her "three words " n handed her the gift

then he disappeared as if he was running away
the gifts she received from him everyday,filled her room one by one
there were many

then one day came
it was her 18th year old birthday
when avni got up in the morning,she pictured a party with him..
she stranded herself in her room
eagerly waiting for his call

but
lunch passed ,dinner passed.....and soon the sky was dark......
he still did not call
it was already tiring to look at the phone anymore

then around 2.00 am in the morning he suddenly called her n woke her from her sleep
he told her to go outside her house
avni was very excited

avni:sameer
sameer:here ....take this
and again he handed her a little gift.....
avni:whats this?
sameer:i didn't give it to u yesterday...so i m giving it to u now.....its getting late i m going home now byee
avni:sameer wait.....do u know what today is?
sameer:today.....whats so special about it..


her heart sank,she thought he would remember her birthday.He turned around and walked away like nothing had happened

before he could get away she shouted "wait"
sameer:u have something to say?
avni:tell me tell me that u love me
sameer:what did u say??
avni:tell me please .......its just three words
sameer:i dont want to say that i love someone so easiy,if u r desperate to hear it,then find someone else

that was what he said.........then he ran off
her legs felt numb and she collapsed to the ground.
He didnt want to say it easily..how could he ..she felt that....... maybe he is not the right guy for her

after that day she stranded herself at home crying,just crying.he didnt call her although she was waiting
he just continued handling her a doll every morning outside her house
thats how those gifts piled up in her room....everyday

after a month she got herself together
and went to the college...
but what made the pain resurface was that
she saw sameer on a street with another girl
he had a smile on his face.......one that he never showed her......as he touched the gift
she ran straight back home......
and looked at the gifts in her room
and tears fell ,why did he gave these to her?
those gifts r probably picked out by some other girls
in a fit of anger she threw the gifts around
then the phone rang it was him......
sameer:plz come out to the bus stop outside ur house
she tried to calm herself down and walked to the bus stop
she kept reminding herself that she was going to forget him....that its going to end
then he came into her sight
he was holding the gift

sameer:u came,i thought u were upset
she couldnt help hating him.........acting like nothing had happened .......
soon he held out the gift as usual
avni:i dont need it........
sameer:what.......why?
she grabbed it from his hand and threw it on the road
avni:i dont need this , i dont need it anymore......i dont want to c a person like u ever again...
she spat out the words....
but unlike any other day his eyes were shaking...
i m sorry" he apologized in a tiny and shaking voice.........
he then walked over to the road to pick up the gift
avni:u stupid juss leave the gift and throw it away..
but he ignored her then.....
~honk~honk~~~~
with the loud horn the truck was heading towards him
avni:Sameer move!move away.she shouted as loud as she could
he stood up and looked at her with sad teary eyes and said
I Love u avni

the boom

she screamed and she cried.......but nothing could bring him back.......
No matter how much she wished she could take back the words that she said to him.,she couldnt
And that was how he went away from her......................


That's how he went away without even opening her eyes to say one word to her
After that day, she had to go through everyday with guiltiness and the sadness of losing him And after spending two months like a crazy person she took out the gifts

Those were the only gifts he had left for her since the day they started going out. she remembered the days spent with him and started to count the days when they were in love


"I.lo..ve you??"
Those words came out non-stop. I love you

avni thought: Why didn't I realize that.That his heart was always by my side, protecting me. Why didn't I realize that he love me this much I took out the gift under the bed , that was the last gift the one that fell on the road. It had his blood stain on it. The voice came out, the on that I was missing so much

she found a letter in it saying:

"Avni Do you know what today is? We've been loving each other for 486 days. Do you know what 486 is? I couldn't say I love you'. Um' since I was too shy.. If you forgive me and take this gift I will say that I love you.... everyday.... till I die... avni I love you...."


The tears came flowing out of her eyes. Why? Why? she asked god, why do I only know about all this now? He can't be by my side, but he loved me until his last minute

For that and for that reason to her it became courage to live a beautiful life.


SaVni OS-2[very short]
teen shabd

avni : sameer kya tum sachme mujhse bohot pyaar kartey ho
sameer:haan avni, Of course
avni: main tumhare mu se sunna chahti hu.....i want to hear u saying that
sameer: I don't have to.
avni: kyu...
sameer: kyu ki
avni: I just want to hear you say it in words.
sameer: I can't...
Avni started to cry softly and said:To fir pakka tum mujhse pyaar nahi kartey..
The two continued to walk in silence. They
reached the home.
avni:kyu sameer tum kyu nahi keh sakte
sameer: tum sachme janna chahti ho
avni: (hesitantly) haan batao na
He hugged her gently, kissed the tip of her nose
and whispered in her ear,
"kyuki pyaar ko jahir karne k liye teen shabd kafi nahi hote



more is coming guys
but lack of time.........
will add more till tomorrow....

For PriDa n VarNI fans
i m goin to make siggies hope u ll like it.........





Edited by juhi_karneet - 15 years ago

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karneetholic thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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my heart just broke into pieces reading sams rude words.........loved it..
karneetholic thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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update soon...loved it
Edited by karneetholic - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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How could Sam be so rude and that too to someone like avni?😕felt so bad for her. Anyways really well written OS....loved the surprise😊
and Yippie....it's lnmdj's 1st aniversary,can't forget this date!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnxx fr the links di .. awesum .. the first one was fab .. n d rest too
n tho os .. mahn .. too sad .. bt luved it ..
-Juhi. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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note : guys sorry sorry sorry
i m really sorry for the inconvinience ...some part of my first os was incomplete
i have added the incomplete part of the first os............plzz read it......

sorry i forgot to copy!!

plzz read it now u ll understand everything
Edited by juhi_karneet - 15 years ago
.Aparajhita. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Juhi,🤗

Yeah, this day is the best day ever naa...I so agree with you.😃

And coming to your OS(s)-

The first OS was mind-goggling...👍🏼
Five starts to that one.⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Seriously how emotional, how touching!
SaVni parted away, when they were at the verge of meeting...
Woh gaana hai na..."Hum the jinke sahare, woh hue na humaare......Doobi jab dil ki nayya, saamne the kinaare."😊
Wonderfully written wonderful concept.👏

The second OS was also too good, seriously loved it.😊

Update soon.

Apsy.

-Juhi. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparajhita

Hey Juhi,🤗

Yeah, this day is the best day ever naa...I so agree with you.😃

And coming to your OS(s)-

The first OS was mind-goggling...👍🏼
Five starts to that one.⭐️
Seriously how emotional, how touching!
SaVni parted away, when they were at the verge of meeting...
Woh gaana hai na..."Hum the jinke sahare, woh hue na humaare......Doobi jab dil ki nayya, saamne the kinaare."😊
Wonderfully written wonderful concept.👏

The second OS was also too good, seriously loved it.😊

Update soon.

Apsy.




heyyy apsy
yaaaa this day is even imp than my bday
thank u so so much
for the lovely comment
glad that u liked my work.........
did u read the full 1st os......cuz i had forgoten to add the last part......



.Aparajhita. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: juhi_karneet




heyyy apsy
yaaaa this day is even imp than my bday
thank u so so much
for the lovely comment
glad that u liked my work.........
did u read the full 1st os......cuz i had forgoten to add the last part......




My comments are tortures....sorry..
And yeah...I read the full OS...you added a scene after the accident scene na....i read it..😃
490362 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr88,,,
Loved it,.
Do update soon...


Love from...

Hina..


😊

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