AR ShortStory: One Hug [Part 4 Pg 18]

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Hey guys!!! I am Maryam and this is my first short-story. I hope u like it and this will be really small, and the highest amount of parts will be five. This is my imagination with a little bit of DMG touch but the old one not the new one. There will be Rahul and Muskaan too as the side roles and this story will be in english and i wanna delicated this whole story to my BESTEST FRIEND CELIA.
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Part One

Part Two

Part Three

Part Four

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The story takes place in Chicago, IL. Today, the four interns of HartGrove Hospital is going on a trip to a village, for the annual checkup. Those four are best friends they met each other in this hospital for the first time.

"ARGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH where is buddy?," asked annoyed and frustrated Muskaan

"Dont worry Muski.. he must be stuck in the traffic," said Riddhima

"Hello ladies, Who are both waiting for?," asked rahul as he came with his bag

"Oye Rahul where is Armaan?" asked Muskaan

"Oh he is right behind you," said Rahul

"Hello lovely people how are u all?," said ARmaan as he boarded the bus

"idiot where were u? U know the bus is leaving in two mins," said angry Riddhima.

"oh sorry basket... u know na chicago's traffic," said as he took his seat beside riddhima.

The bus started and so did their journeY



Today is the second last of their this village camp. They are leaving tomorrow in the morning. Its three in the afternoon and they(four friends) are done with their work and are roaming by the jungle.

(NOTE: GUYS THIS IS AMERICA SO EVERYONE WHERE WESTERN CLOTHES HERE..INCLUDING RIDDHIMA)

"Finally all the work is done," said armaan

"ya finally.. i am so glad otherwise it will looking like that it will never end," said Muskaan

"hmm.. i am so tired," said riddhima leaning on a tree

"i know kiddo," said Rahul(i needed to put a stone on my heart to use this name😳🥺🤣)

"kiddo?," asked Armaan

"ya armaan rahul is my bro.. not real bro one..he is my cousin but he is like my real bro," said riddhima😳

They kept walking with silence... suddenly armaan asked," Muskaan what is ur surname?"

"Garewal," said Muskaan

"TUM AUR RAHUL BHI BHAI BEHAN HO??????" asked armaan😲

"No... NEVER... Rahul is husband stupid😆," said Muskaan

"oh," said Armaan

Suddenly, some bad people came running to them with guns in their hands. When the boys saw that they hold the girls' hand and started running to different directions. Armaan was holding riddhima's hand and Rahul was holding Muskaan's.

Armaan and Riddhima:

Armaan was holding Riddhima's hand and running. He new those people was following them didnt know them. So when he saw that Riddhima couldnt walk any longer he got an idea. He suddenly stopped by a tree, and pulled riddhima with his hand, which one was holding riddhima's hand, towards him. Riddhima came jammed to his chest and Armaan immediately wrap his hands around her waist. Before riddhima could say anything, Armaan whisper in her ear," warp ur hands around my waist and trust me. Riddhima did as she was told. Now no one could see riddhima but they could still see armaan face. So armaan had no choice then hiding his face in riddhima's neck.

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Armaan and Riddhima's POV

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Hey guys i hope u like that
will continue it soon maybe in a day or two
plz comment it really matter
thank you
Maryam😊


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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey mariam!!!!!Nice one.Plzzz continue soon.
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hey MARYAM....😛

congratz on new FF🥳
nice concept
looking forward to read more
keep continue
Thanks for the PM

love
prinz😳

Edited by Prinnia - 15 years ago
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nice story.love their hug.plz continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome start
cant wait for the next part
con soon
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hey... itzz an interesting cute part...
gud start :)
cant wait for the next one.. :)
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awwwwwwww..........soooooo cuteeee...........cont soon n thnx fr d pm
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Nice one
Continue soon
Thnx for the pm
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thanks 4 the awesome update
loved it
loved armaan calling rahul and muski brother and sister
cant wait 2 read more
con soon
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awesum start..

waiting for nxt part..

thnx for the pm..

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