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Posted: 20 years ago
Chapter 68

Sahil is shocked.
Sahil: papa??
Kishore: haan sahil, i wanna know, main jaanta hoon ke maine tumse vaada kiya tha ke main tumhare aur vedika ke dhoori ke wajah kabhi nahi poochonga, magar aaj..aaj halath he kuch aise hain....sahil tumhari shaadi Aarti se horahe hai, Aarti aur Vedika dost hain, aur us se bari baat yeh hai ke aarti ke cousin, avantika, vedika ke babhi hai, vedika ke parivaar ke saath humara rishta bandhne jaraha hai, aur mein nahi chata ke tumhari aur aarti ke naye zindagi mein tumhare ateeth saaya ban kar saath chale.
Sahil doesn't respond.
Kishore: beta please...batao mujhe...please...
Sahil: yaadh hai papa, chaar saal pehle, Pune mein, valentines ke din, maine aap se kaha tha ke mein vedika ko shaadi kiliye propose karonga...us din award milne ke baadh......(Flash back shown)
Vedika and Sahil are very happy at getting the award. Vedika decides to take the special valentines couple photo of them both hugging each other. She tells Sahil to take the trophy and certificate. They agree and then Sahil takes Vedika out for a candle-light dinner. Vedika is impressed by the effort Sahil has put in for her. She is very happy. She hugs him and gives him a kiss on the cheek.
Vedika: i love you sahil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sahil: i love you too.
Vedika and Sahil have dinner, and then dance slowly to some soft romantic music. Both blend into the environment. Vedika has her hands around Sahil's neck and Sahil has his hands around her waist. Both have their eyes closed and feel each others heart-beat. Sahil then takes Vedika outside the restaurant, they stand hugging each other. Sahil is hugging Vedika from behind. Both are looking up into the sky, admiring the stars.
Sahil: vedika??
Vedika: hmmm
Sahil: (unhugs Vedika, and gets down on his knee) vedika, mein tumse bohat pyar karta hoon, aur is pyar ko ek atoot rishte mein badal na chata hoon , main tumse shaadi karna chata hoon vedika, (Vedika smiles) mujhse shaadi karogi??? (takes out a box of ring)
Suddenly fireworks off, they both look at the sky, a red heart forms, and in it, it says Will You Marry Me?...Vedika is soo happy, she turns and looks at Sahil.
Vedika: (is speechless and too happy) haan!!!!!!!!!!
Sahil is very happy, he puts the ring on her finger. He stands up and they both hug. Sahil picks her up and swings her around whilst hugging her. Both are very happy.(Flash back ends for a bit)
Kishore: agar vedika maangaye thi, to phir problem kya thi??
Sahil: (with a sad face) problem?? problem nahi dad, bhagwaan ka faisla samjho.
Kishore: kya matlab??
Sahil: matlab....(flash back shown again)
Sahil and Vedika go college one day, Sahil isn't feeling well and gets very severe headaches. Vedika is worried and requests Sahil to go and see the doctor. Sahil agrees, and goes to the doctor after college, Vedika doesn't go with him as she has to go home to Uma, for some urgent work. Sahil promises to go and visits the doctor. Doctor takes some tests and tells him to come back in a few days to see the results, and gives him some medicine. Sahil goes home and after taking the medicine feels much more relaxed. He talks to Vedika on the phone, who is relieved that he is feeling better, but still worried about the reports. After a few days, Sahil goes to pick up the results.
Doctor: i think you should sit down for a while
Sahil: sorry doctor, i don't have much time,actually i promised my fiance that i will meet her at lunch, aur mujhe dheer horahe hai...
Doctor: teekh hai to phir tum kisi aur din ajana, kyunki tumse baat karna bohat zaroori hai
Sahil: (looks a bit worried) kya baat hai doctor? anything serious
Doctor: yes and it's very serious
Sahil: (shocked) kya??...kya baat hai?
Doctor: (signs) sahil...sahil tumhe cancer hai
Sahil is shocked.
Doctor: tumhe brain tumor hai
Sahil is shocked.
Doctor: and your at the last stage...
Sahil is shocked.
Doctor: tum zyaada se zyaada sirf teen mahene jiyoge.
Sahil is shocked.
Doctor: im sorry Sahil...magar tumhe is sach ko maana parega, tumne apna check up karane mein bohat dheer kardi...tumhara tumor ab last stage par poonch chukha hai, aur ab koi bhi treatment tumhe teekh nahi kar sakhti.
Sahil is shocked. He takes the reports and leaves. He is walking out the hospital. He keeps remembering doctors words. Doctors words echo in his ears. Vedika's image keeps on appearing in front of his eyes. He is in total shock. He drives home, and doesn't go college that day. He is lost in his thoughts all day.
Sahil: (to himself) mein vedika ke zindagi barbaadh nahi kar sakhta...mein apne khush kiliye uski zindagi nark nahi bana sakhta...mein vedika ko suhagan ke roop mein dekhna chata hoon, vidva (widow) ke roop mein nahi...(he has tears in his eyes and looks at Vedika's photo) mujhe maaf kardena vedika...mein majboor hoon.
Sahil hugs Vedika's photo and cries. Days go by and Vedika is upset on hearing no news, she's been trying to call him, but he doesn't take her calls and has not been coming to college either. vedika is heart broken, she's even come down to his house once or twice, but sahil had beforehand told his servants to tell vedika that he is not at home. One day Vedika comes to Sahil's house, servant says he is upstairs. Vedika is happy and goes upstairs to Sahil's room, but before she enters she hears a girls voice, she opens the door a little and is shocked to see Sonia (College tart) in Sahil's bedroom. Sonia has her arms around Sahil's neck and he has his hands around her waist. Sahil is declaring his love for Sonia. She tells him to cut the crap as she knows he loves Vedika. Sahil laughs at her when she says this and says that
Sahil: i've only been having a time pass with Vedika, i don't really love her....i really love you (pushing sonia more closer to him) vedika is one of the most difficult girls to woo, so i took it up as a challenge and finally won her heart. she couldn't resist my charms for long.
Vedika is shocked to hear this. Sonia hugs Sahil and says she loves him. Sahil says he loves her too. Vedika is shocked and comes into the room. Sahil pretends to be shocked to see her.
Sahil: vedika??? tum?? tum kab aaye??
Vedika: (with tears in her eyes and is very angry) jab tum isi apne jhooti pyar ka ikraar karahe thi thab
Sahil looks at Sonia.
Sahil: dekho vedika...(walks closer to Vedika)
Vedika: (gets angry and slaps him across his face really hard) dekhliya jo dekhna tha maine...don;t you ever dare try to meet me again sahil..don't you ever dare...i hate you sahil..i just hate you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hate you echos a few times. Sonia is shocked. Vedika leaves the house crying. Sahil is upset too.
Sahil: tum ab ja sakhti ho
Sonia leaves and looks a bit upset too. Sahil cries over Vedika photo. He remembers past moments. After a few days, doctor calls Sahil.
Sahil: yes doctor
Doctor: sahil can you please come to meet me today.
Sahil: ya sure.
Sahil goes to meet doctor. The doctor apologies and tells him that his report got mixed up with another patients report. Sahil's report is here, doctor shows him. doctor says sahil is normal, the brain tumor report was the other patients.
Doctor: you are perfectly alright sahil..im sorry about the misunderstanding.
Sahil is shocked. He runs from the hospital and comes to the college, he asks about Vedika.
Vedika's friends say she is leaving the city today. Sahil is shocked. He goes to her house but he misses them. The house watchman says they have gone to the station. Sahil runs there too, but the train has left and he breaks down completely. his world comes crashing down in one moment. Flashback ends, with Sahil crying on the floor.
Sahil: aur bas, ek he pal mein meri saari dunya bikhar ke rehgaye....ek misunderstanding ne mujhse mera pyar cheenliya.
Kishore: kya tumne ushi dhoondne ki koshish nahi ke??
Sahil: ke thi papa...bohat koshish ke, magar vo kehte haina, waqt se pehle aur kismat se zyaada insaan ko kabhi kuch nahi milta....meri kismat mein vedika ko phir se milna, usi pana likha he nahi tha.
Kishore: (shocked and has tears in his eyes) itna sabh kuch hogaya aur tumne mujhe bataya thak nahi
Sahil: kya batata dad?? yahi ke aap ka beta zindagi ke is laraye mein haar gaya... ya phir yeh kehta ke aap ke bete ne pyar to kiya, pyar ka ikraar bhi kiya, pyar ko paya bhi magar phir khoo diya....
Kishore is very sad.
Sahil: nahi papa, mein yeh sabh nahi bata sakhta tha, isliye maine vedika ko bhoolne ke bohat koshish ke, magar kabhi bolah nahi paya.
Kishore: aur ab??
Sahil: ab kya dad?? ab jab mulaqat huwe hai to vedika kisi aur ki patni ban chukhe hai, aur vo dhruv se bohat pyar karti hai...aur dhruv bhi bohat karta hai
Kishore: kya vedika ko is sach ka pata hai
Sahil: nahi dad, aur ushi is baat ka pata chalna bhi nahi chaheye...promise me dad, aap vedika ko kuch nahi batayenge.
Kishore: sahil??
Sahil: promise me dad...please...waise bhi vedika ko sach bata kar humein kuch nah milega...vedika ke zindagi mein dhruv hai aur meri zindagi mein aarti...ab in sabh baaton ka koi matlab nahi hai
Kishore: teekh hai, i promise
Sahil cries and hugs Kishore. Both hug each other. Sahil is very upset and cries. Kishore looks at Vedika's photo. He has a confused and sad look on his face.

The End
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Posted: 20 years ago
very nice
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Posted: 20 years ago
Wow Yuvi....you have an awesome story goin on 👏 Poor ved...hopefully dhruv comes back soon 😭
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Posted: 20 years ago
Chapter 69.

Days go by, Sahil tries being friends with Vedika, but she just doesn't want to know him. Sahil is upset, very upset, he can;t concentrate at work and looks very sad all da time.Kishore notices this and decides that it's about time Vedika knew the truth. He calls Vedika at a coffee shop. Vedika comes.
Vedika: namaste uncle.
Kishore: namaste beta, kaise ho?
Vedika: main teekh hoon uncle..aap??
Kishore: nahi..main teekh nahi hoon
Vedika: kya??
Kishore: haan...(Vedika sits down and so does Kishore)
Vedika: kya baat hai?? aap kuch pareshaan lagrahe ho
Kishore: vedika main jaanta hoon ke tumhara ab Sahil se koi rishta nahi hai, tum ab kisi ke patni ho, aur sahil ke bare mein sochna bhi paap hoga magar phir bhi beta main chata hoon ke tum....(Vedika interrupts)
Vedika: uncle please, sahil ke bare mein mujhe kuch nahi suna...usne jo mere saath (stops and wipes away tears in her eyes) dekhye uncle, sahil mera past tha, dhruv mera aaj, sahil ko please mera past he rehne dejeye..ushi please mere aaj aur anewale kal mein na shamil kejeye.
Kishore: nahi vedika tum mujhe galat samjh rahe ho, main yeh nahi kehraha ke tum dhruv ko choor kar sahil ko apna lo...main yeh kehne ke koshish karaha hoon ke tum ek baar sahil se baat karlo...shaid tum duno ke galat fehme dhoor hojaye
Vedika: galat fehme?? nahi uncle, galat fehme mein to mein tab je rahe thi, yeh soch kar ke sahil mujhse pyar karta hai, magar nahi, vo galat fehme dhoor ho chukhe hai, ushi din jis din maine ushi us larki...(signs and is really upset-puts her hands together infront of kishore) pleas euncle, mein aapke aage haath joorti hoon, mujhe dukhon ke baadh dhruv ka saath milah hai, aur mein ushi kisi bhi kimat pe khona nahi chate...isliye aayenda mujhe sahil ko likar koi baat mat ke jeyega...(Vedika is upset, gets up and leaves)
Kishore is upset, he looks very sad as he is not able to do anything to make vedika forgive sahil. He signs. Vedika comes home to find, Dhruv has arrived. She is very happy, and goes running to him upstairs.
Vedika: dhruv?????????????????????????? (smiles and is very happy)
Dhruv turns around and sees Vedika. Vedika runs and hugs him.
Vedika: i missed you soo much dhruv....i love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dhruv: (doesn't hug her back) ya me too.
Vedika: (unhugs him) kya huwa?? sabh teekh haina??
Dhruv: haan....(about to go-Vedika stops him)
Vedika: (stops him) dhruv?? jhoot mat bolo...kya huwa hai, tum mujhse teekh se baat bhi nahi karahe?? did i do something wrong??
Dhruv: nahi, im just tired, main change kar ke ata hoon.
Dhruv leaves, Vedika is upset. She doesn't know whats wrong with Dhruv. Dhruv freshens up and comes out. Vedika is sitting on the bed. Dhruv sees her. Both look at each other. Dhruv walks upto the bed, lies down on the bed, facing the other way. Vedika is very upset.
Vedika: dhruv??
Dhruv: mujhe neend arahe hai vedika, kal baat karenge.
Dhruv closes his eyes. Vedika is very upset, she puts the blanket over him properly and goes out the room. Dhruv then opens his eyes and sits up. He is very sad. He looks at his and Vedika's wedding photo. Her mobile rings. It's Rahul. Dhruv answers it.
Rahul: dhruv?? tum Goa se wapas kab aaye??
Dhruv: bas abhi kuch he dheer pehle...
Rahul: great kaise ho??
Dhruv: teekh hoon
Rahul: acha suno..Sahil ke ghar e aaj ek party hai, aur tumhe aur vedika ko ana hai teekh hai
Dhruv: rahul mein to...
Rahul: nothing doing dhruv, please yaar, it will be a great laugh. ishi bahane hum sahil aur vedika ke college ke doston se bhi milenge.
Dhruv: sahil aur vedika???
Rahul: haan...actually sahil aur vedika ek he school aur college mein parte thi, pune mein...phir jab vedika yahan shift huwe they lost touch....newayz sahil ke party teekh 8 bajhe hogi, aur tum duno ko ana hai, teekh hai
Dhruv: ok...bye...
Dhruv puts the phone down and lies down. It's evening now, Vedika comes upstairs to find Dhruv all ready.
Vedika: (surprised) kahin jarahe ho??
Dhruv: (smiles) haan..magar akele nahi..tum bhi mere saath jarahe ho
Vedika: main??? kahan???
Dhruv: Sahil ke ghar
Vedika: (shocked) sahil ke ghar??? dhruv mujhe nahi jana
Dhruv: kyun??
Vedika: bas aise he...mann nahi hai, (puts her hands on dhruv;s chest) tum bhi mat jao.
Dhruv: vedika yeh achi baat nahi hai, rahul ne phone kar ke invite kiya hai, humein jana chaheye...mein gari mein neeche intezaar karaha hoon, tum jaldi se tyaar ho kar aa jao..teekh hai.
Dhruv leaves. Vedika signs. She doesn't want to go, but then gets ready to go. She is wearing, a blue sharara (in pic)...She does some quick make up, has her hair staight down, puts on matching jewellery and comes down. She goes outside and dhruv is in the car, looking tired of waiting. She smiles and Dhruv sees her, he stares at her for a while. He is speechless, she is looking very beautiful. Vedika comes and sits in the car.
Vedika: kaise lag rahe hoon??
Dhruv: (smiles) miss world
Vedika: (smiles and blushes) thanks...chalen??
Dhruv drives off and arrives at Sahil's party. Vedika hesistates, but dhruv takes her in. All are happy to see them there. Sahil looks at Vedika, he is speechless--she looks very beautiful Dhruv notices and takes Vedika to Sahil.
Dhruv: hey sahil, (shakes his hand)
Sahil: hi dhruv, welcome to the party.
Dhruv; thanks.
Rahul: dhruv??? (dhruv turns) kaise ho yaar (hug each other)
Dhruv: fine.
Rahul: hi vedika.
Vedika: (smiles) hi...rahul manshaa??
Rahul: erm....pata nahi ek minute...(sees her) vo rahe...
Vedika: (sees manshaa) main usi milkar ate hoon, excuse me..
Rahul: sure
Sahil watches Vedika go, Dhruv sees sahil watching and doesn't look quiet pleased, but still smiles. Vedika bumps into one of her old college mates- Kashish--her college best friend
Kashish: vedika??????
Dhruv, Rahul and Sahil watch Vedika.
Vedika: Kashish??? (hugs her)
Kashish: yaar i missed you soo much, tum pune se yahan kya agaye...hum sabh doston ko to bhool he gaye...
Vedika: nahi aise to koi baat nahi hai, vo to...(Kashish)
Kashish: rehne do rehne do...we all now what your going to say now..khair choro..come on meet the other guys...
Kashish takes Vedika to her old friends. She is very happy to meet them. She meets Tusshar too (Tusshar was Sahil and Vedika's best friend, it was because of him Sahil and Vedika got together).
Kashish: hey vedika, tumne shaadi ke haina, tumhari husband kahan hai?? humein introduce nahi karogi...
Vedika: ya sure...ek minute...
Vedika goes and comes to Dhruv.
Vedika: dhruv...come i wanna introduce you to some of my old friends.
Dhruv: ok...excuse me
Rahul gets Sahil another drink. Sahil watches Vedika and Dhruv.
Vedika: hey guys, this is dhruv, and dhruv these are my friends...
Dhruv: Kashish???
Kashish: dhruv????
All are surprised.
Vedika: tum duno ek dosre ko jaante ho??
Kashish: haan...ofcourse, we were in same school, but then i ad to shift to Pune. wow!!!!!! i can't believe this...(hugs Dhruv) tum vedika ke husband ho?
Vedika: (sarcastically) nahi...main to aise he ishi mera husband kehrahe thi...(laughs)
Kashish: shut up...
Vedika: anyways dhruv..this is...Tusshar...Pooja... Kajol...Ravi...Abhay...Arjun and Rohit.
All shake hand with Dhruv and all like him a lot. Kashish and Dhruv starts to dance together and talk. Vedika is with her friends, all of them are impressed by Vedika's choice..they all like dhruv...
Kajol: he's sooo cute
Vedika: (laughs) yeh i know...
Tusshar asks Vedika to dance with him. Vedika agrees. They dance together, on a slow song. Tusshar and Vedika talk to each other. Dhruv sees this and asks Kashish about Tusshar.
Kashish: Tusshar is Vedika's best friend. duno bohat ache dost thi...
Dhruv: oh right (to himself) agar mujhe sahil aur vedika ke baare mein pata lagana hai to mujhe Tusshar se dosti karke yeh sabh pata lagana parega...thats the only way...Tusshar he hai vo raasta jis par chalke mujhe Vedika aur Sahil ke rishte ke sachaye jaan sakhta hoon.

Dhruv looks at Sahil and then at Vedika.

Dhruv: (to himself) i have to find out the truth

The End. Will Dhruv find out the truth....will Vedika ever be able to forget Sahil..will Sahil ever be able to forget Vedika...How will Aarti react when she finds out the girl who Sahil loved is none other than Vedika...her friend...Will Vedika be able to save her marriage from the dark secrets of her past??? just hav 2 w8 n c...

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Posted: 20 years ago
finally dhruv is back hope da problem solved soon nice work 😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
Awesome!!!!!!!wonderful dialogues 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
very nice
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Posted: 20 years ago
i finally caught up! pls continue soon 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
yaar plzzz cont karo cant wait 4 da next part
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey guyz sz 4 nt continuin actually my mumz gone on holiday n i hav 2 do all da house work..n i neva gt tym 2 cum n update but weneva i do i wil continue..sz abt tht..take care

Yuvi 😳

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