*Journals Of An Addict* Entry# 3 pg 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mru_bee

Maham... Mruuu.. 🤗

wat a post.. love ur name too "Journals of An Addict" Thanks.. i kinda like the name too.. 😆

What beautiful description of Pri's inner struggle.. What was super awesome.. Thanks once again.. glad you enjoyed reading it..

I think I wrote it somewhere before, but in normal circumstances, Pri wouldnt have come within even 100ft distance from Damzie,, but now he couldnt stay even a feet away.. The force, watever we may wish to call, attraction, love , hate , still brought them together every time .. It made them dance to the tune of "mohabaatein". Nicely put.. and agreed.. they were bound together by an invisible chain you can say... they tried to stay apart.. but apparently destiny had some thing else entirely in store for them..😍 sounds a little cheesy i know.. 😆

I still wonder, Ela Gujral kept a bodyguard for Damziee coz of the Avni kidnapping incident. Then wat was Pri protecting Damziee from? Who was he expecting would attack Damziee that he wouldnt even move away from her? It wasnt as if Damziee had a slew of enemies or nething.. so I think all that reasons, Pri gave to stay on guard during the sequence disguised the real reason, he couldnt stay away from her.. 😆 hahahhaha.. Good point there... Hmmm Pri does try to use alot of excuses as a facade for his 'real' intentions.. 😛

One can write pages and pages on even one PriDa scene, and yet seem that something more needs to be written.. Couldnt agree more.. even i thought what i wote wasnt good enough.. there was just something missing...

Powerful characters that had some powerful nasha over us, that we still want more ..

This was a super duper awesome first entry.. Maham.. looking forward to more of these .. Thanks alot pal.. and thanks for giving your two cents will try to come back with more.. 🤗

-- Mru

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparajhita

Hey Maham...🤗 Hey Apsy.. 🤗
Thanks a ton for the PM...and yaah..ofcourse you were supposed to PM me...varna my iron,steel and wood ka danda abhi bhi hai...😃😆 Haha yeah i kinda guessed that and as i value my life alot so did it just in case.. 😆

Wonderful take my friend.....awesome...👏 Thanks alot.. 😊

Yes, there was something which was attracting Prithvi towards Damini...
There was something which was urging Prithvi to protect Damini, and this was more than a body guard's job..

He didn't know what was it, was it love, was it friendship, was it hatred, he had no idea.

Damini was dancing, Prithvi was looking everywhere but not towards Damini, initially.
But then, he turned his face, his eyes glued to Damini.
He saw her, he wished he could continue staring at her like this.
But then, he came into trance, he realized what he was doing and turned his face again.😊
But he couldn't continue this,he had to stare Damini again.

There was a fight going on, between his mind and his brain, and he was totally confused.😆

Very nicely expressed over there.. obviously we think alike.. 😊

Okay, pehle hi bahut lamba ho gaya....and please don't mind my stupid comment on your wonderful thread...main itna hi likh sakti hoon...😳 Thanks alot for the reply yar.. dont mind long ones at all.. and this was not stupid.. 😊

Love,
Zaalim Insaan..😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: PallaVI711

Jabse tumko dekha hai sanam, kya kahe kitne hai, bechain
maybe these were his thoughts standing outside

for she is soon going to sing
Jabse tumko paya hai sanam, dekhu sapne, din rain

Pallavi

Nice lines over there.. very apt...
Thanks for replying..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: jakhushi

Maham.....🤗🤗 Khushiii.. 🤗🤗

Babes you do it again.......Hmmmmmmmmmm.....what do I write after this. awww thanks.. 🤗
Just love the concept. Haha good to know that..
Addicted....Ohhh yes that we are....and what an amazing Addiction PriDa was.....such was the strength of their dose that months later there are many who still remain under that nasha.....despite attempts of other 'shots' (pun soo intended😉.)....we cant get over the addiction of PriDa introduced through GauCha. Hehe yeah.. we are all hopelessly goners yar... and nothing can compare to the drug that is PriDa/GauCha.. 😃😃
As for this particular scene, I had loved GK in this scene....first time when GK scored (ohh dear more puns😛) over CS for me was in this scene. The way he expressed his dillema between his heart, his yearning, his desire, the hunger in his eyes for a glimpse of Damini against his 'Mission & Maksad' dominated by his brains. i dont remember how i initally felt when i first saw this scene.. but yes i really and truly love GK in this scene now.. he expressed amazingly well through his eyes.. *claps*
And such a treat for his and our eyes when he finally gives in....Haiiii. Yeah very true.. 😆
Ofcourse what followed is History (in PriDa land definitely)....The way they come together.....well I am not a poet, so I cant do justice to it........but it looked so right....He holding her & protecting her, she in unwilling surrender....both lost in each other. A Perfect & much needed Shot for Addicts😊. yeah.. and the way he had one arm around her shoulder and the other clingling possessivley onto her waist.. was.... er do i really need to say it.. and Damini's senses coming alive under his touch and her realization about the close proximity of their bodies... 😍
"There was something beautiful in the way Prithvi looked at Damini, there was something beautiful in the way that his will used to weaken every time he saw her, the way his senses used to come alive and his heart used to beat, really beat. Not steadily like it had been doing for years but like a wild incontrollable animal thumping out a symphony of Love, passion and desire, and in all this there existed some unexplainable connection between them that was the purest thing in the world. The most beautiful of all. And that was Love. "
Absolutely loved what you wrote here....Beautifully described girl. Touched a chord, actually quite a few😳. Spectacular Like PriDa. awww thanks glad you liked it so much.. 🤗
Keep them coming......Just cant get enough of PriDa or your write ups. When they come together.....well we are talking about a bad case of Addiction then.😛 haha Addiction is a small word for this kind of mind numbing craziness... 😆 Thanks for replying.. 🤗
Khushi.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Maham!🤗

Thanks for such a Wonderful PriDalicious post!😳😃

The way Prithvi's brain and heart fought!😆...but it was the heart at the end which won!⭐️ and thanks to that we all fans have become crazy!😛.


Do write more! Waiting eagerly!😃


Nachiket
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dark_Star

Hey Maham!🤗Hey Nachiket..! Nice username btw.. like it.. 😆

Thanks for such a Wonderful PriDalicious post!😳😃 you are most welcome.. glad you liked it..

The way Prithvi's brain and heart fought!😆...but it was the heart at the end which won!⭐️ and thanks to that we all fans have become crazy!😛.hahaha yeah..and er just crazy?Tongue😆


Do write more! Waiting eagerly!😃 will try to come up with something else soon.. thanks for replying..


Nachiket

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Maham... a beautiful post indeed... 😊 It's always a treat when you share your insights with us. 🤗
Here's some of my thoughts... 😆 (Don't throw tomatoes when it's over... you asked for it. 😛)
At the beginning of the scene, given the angry young man Prithvi is, I thought it was unlikely of him to stay put at his position even after Damini had tipped him off. He had stopped in his tracks when about to leave in a fit of rage. Was it just duty that he was doing? Possibly not... her being safe meant a lot to him, or precisely, to his heart. 😉
Inside the room, we have Damini recollecting instances where Prithvi had got on her nerves. It's a wonder (no, not quite 😉) she remembers each one of them! Then comes the dance, to cheer herself up a bit, which leaves Prithvi to have a hard time in dealing with his restless heart with an iron hand. That expression, when he is stealing quick glances at her, and the next moment, turning back and breathing heavily, so as to recompose, pretty much conveys what he was having to go through.
I remember GK in an interview, talking about this sequence, where he said that this was the first time Prithvi was experiencing a womanly charm in the usually rough and tough Damini. This aptly explains the amused smile playing on Prithvi's lips as he took in the elegance of the figure swaying before him...
The collision in the end, with Damini falling into Prithvi's arms, had a magic about it. His keen eyes taking in every detail of her face, which looked divine in the soft blue glow of the room... Her initial repulsive expression changing into one which bore a dreamy look... and all the while the melodious title tune playing in the background... enough to cast a spell over you... 😍
Won't say any more... presenting you with some magical moments I captured from the YT video.
I wish to run away from my feelings... but not when I see myself in your eyes...
😍😍😍
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Okay... it's over... thank you for sitting through the torture. 😆 (Only the written part, i.e... 😛 The pics are a delight, of course. 😃)
Thanks Maham, for coming up with this. 🤗 Looking forward to the addict's next entry! 😃 (Oh, did I say, I LOVE the title! ⭐️)
- Ishaan
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG awesomely written as always Maham!! Ahh even i am always amazed by this scene!! There is definitely something magical in the dance and the intense look of Prithvi's eyes!! It kind of just binds them together in the moment despite the fact that Prithvi is watching from afar. And the way Prithvi trys to evade the situation but still ends up turning to look..ahh that was just awesome😳!! Anyway I guess that is all, you have written everything soo well makes me want to go watch the scene again!! Don't know if made much sense here but win't say much more cuz what you have written is terrific!!!😃👏Waiting for more and do PM me so i don't miss it!!!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1shaan

Maham... a beautiful post indeed... 😊 It's always a treat when you share your insights with us. 🤗 Thanks Ishaan.. Glad you like all the babbling.. 😆

Here's some of my thoughts... 😆 (Don't throw tomatoes when it's over... you asked for it. 😛) Oh yeah..damn. 😆
At the beginning of the scene, given the angry young man Prithvi is, I thought it was unlikely of him to stay put at his position even after Damini had tipped him off. He had stopped in his tracks when about to leave in a fit of rage. Was it just duty that he was doing? Possibly not... her being safe meant a lot to him, or precisely, to his heart. 😉 haha.. yeah Prithvi Saxena always becomes a slave to his heart when it comes Damini Gujral doesnt he.. 😆
Inside the room, we have Damini recollecting instances where Prithvi had got on her nerves. It's a wonder (no, not quite 😉) she remembers each one of them! Then comes the dance, to cheer herself up a bit, which leaves Prithvi to have a hard time in dealing with his restless heart with an iron hand. That expression, when he is stealing quick glances at her, and the next moment, turning back and breathing heavily, so as to recompose, pretty much conveys what he was having to go through. Nicely expressed over there about Prithvi's inner struggle..
I remember GK in an interview, talking about this sequence, where he said that this was the first time Prithvi was experiencing a womanly charm in the usually rough and tough Damini. This aptly explains the amused smile playing on Prithvi's lips as he took in the elegance of the figure swaying before him... Yeah.. that was one of the main reasons that Prithvi's lips quirked up in that smile.. love that bit...
The collision in the end, with Damini falling into Prithvi's arms, had a magic about it. His keen eyes taking in every detail of her face, which looked divine in the soft blue glow of the room... Her initial repulsive expression changing into one which bore a dreamy look... and all the while the melodious title tune playing in the background... enough to cast a spell over you... 😍 Very nice Ishaan.. like the way you uinderstand Prida..! Great description of the scene..
Won't say any more... presenting you with some magical moments I captured from the YT video.
I wish to run away from my feelings... but not when I see myself in your eyes...
Whao.. Great lines yar..! *thumbs up*
😍😍😍
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Okay... it's over... thank you for sitting through the torture. 😆 (Only the written part, i.e... 😛 The pics are a delight, of course. 😃) No.. it was a pleasure reading your take.. and thanks for the caps.. i was planning to add them too.. forgot.. 😆
Thanks Maham, for coming up with this. 🤗 Looking forward to the addict's next entry! 😃 (Oh, did I say, I LOVE the title! ⭐️) No Problem.. Glad you liked the idea.. i love the title too.. 😛😆😆
- Ishaan

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigirl_18

OMG awesomely written as always Maham!! Thanks alot Fati.. and i love you for loving my work.. have i ever told you that? *hugs* Ahh even i am always amazed by this scene!! There is definitely something magical in the dance and the intense look of Prithvi's eyes!! It kind of just binds them together in the moment despite the fact that Prithvi is watching from afar. Nicely done yar.. liked the way you descirbed how they are bound to each other.. And the way Prithvi trys to evade the situation but still ends up turning to look..ahh that was just awesome😳!! Anyway I guess that is all, you have written everything soo well makes me want to go watch the scene again!! Don't know if made much sense here but win't say much more cuz what you have written is terrific!!!😃👏 Thanks alot pal.. glad you liked the entry.. !Waiting for more and do PM me so i don't miss it!!!😊 Sure will PM you.. thanks for replying..!

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