*Love Forever* savni ff(upd chap 8 pg 25)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heeeyy alll..😊😊...m startin m 2nd ff wich will be a savni ff...bt obviously it's gonna ve all d oder characters also...
here's d 1st chapter..
dis will be a luv story in school wer our sam will be in 10th and avni in 9th...damini and roshni will also be in 9th wereas pri n var will b in 10th...
hope u all enjoy dis...

WILL OPPOSITES ATTRACT????


"come in sameer".mr. bhalla said in a bored voice.
"good morning sir."a 15 year old boy entered mr. bhalla's office.his voice seemed more bored than mr. bhalla's did.
obviously he was bored.it was after all the most natural thing for him to be in the vice principals office every alternate day.
he came and sat on the chair opposite to his head.
he sat back in the chair and the light was glinrting of his brown hair.his eyes were twinkling and teasing and he had a smirk on his face.
he looked no less than a greek god but currently a bit bored.
"good morning sir.how are you this bright and extremely beautiful morning?"
his grin got wider and mr bhalla grounded his teeeth, clearly frustated.
"what did u do now sameer.?"
"umm...nothing much ...i just set up the fire alarm."
"WHAT?SAMEER THAT WAS YOU...WHAT THE HELLL..."mr. bhalla trailed of.
"control bhalla. control.blood presssure , bloood pressure."he muttered to himself. with much difficulty he smiled a forceful and painful smile.
"it was you..HA.."he exploded."it was you..HA HA HA.."
" mr. B do you..i mean would you like me to accompany you to agra."sameer said in a mocking tone, pressing his lips together so that he won't explode with laughter.
"SAMEER..i told u not to call me mrB."mr. bhalla barked.
"why do you do all this sameer.you have a lot of potential in you and yet you waste all of it just to be cool."
he stared at sameer , praying and hoping that he would see some repentence in those glittering eyes but he was expecting something impossible.
his anger clouded his mind and he banged the table with all his might.
"i m not going to punish you anymore, since it is useless but consider this your last warning till expulsion if, you put one more foot out of the line.is that understood.?"
sameer rolled his eyes.
"cool..ok mr. B it was nice talking to you. see u later."
sameer strode out of mr. bhalla's office leaving him fuming with anger.
"relax bhalla, relax.1 2 3 4 5 ..."he continued counting till 10 to cool down his anger.
he sighed heavily.
"one day sameer , one day you will surely change.
i m positive .i don't know how or who is going to change you but time is changing and i m sure your change is going to approach you soon."


CHANGE
CHANGE
CHANGE.


it was raining cats and dogs in burnpur ,
a small town in bengal.
the railway station was more crowded today . in the midst of all this chaos stood a family .
a young girl, definitely not more than 14.
her eyes were sad and it was clear that she was trying to hold back her tears but her mother wasn't that efficient as she was crying her heart out.
her dad's expression was blank but a strange sadness had clouded his eyes.
"Avni"
"yeah"the girl looked towards her dad.she was pale and the blush which was usually prominent on avni banerjee's cheeks, was not there today.
she tried to smile but it was painful.
"yeah dad"
"i ll miss u .aami tomake khub miss korbo."
"dad."she burst into tears.
"dad"she ran to her dad and hugged him.
"dad i don't want to leave.dad you know how much hard it will be for me to adjust in a new place.dad you also won't be there. dad i ,,..."
"ssshhh.."mr. banerjee interrupted his daughter.
"i know sweety but think about your brother.he has his boards this year and he needs your mothers support.and dont worry i ve applied for my transfer. soon , very soon i ll join you in delhi and we will live together, happily.ok?"
"shuncho"mrs. banerjee said to her husband.
"you will come fast right.
"yeah dear.everything will be okay."

avni's brother rahul banerjee stuied in a boarding shool in delhi but this year he had his boards therefore he asked his mother to come over to delhi.
mrs banerjee left her job at once, took the t.c from avni's school and decided to leave for delhi but mr banerjee could not accompany them.he hadn't got his transfer yet.
their relatives had booked a house for them and they got ready to leave for delhi without any further thoughts.
but now that ,they were going to be seperated in a few minutes the family couldn't help but cry.
avni was devasted as she was soon going to lose everything.
she was leaving behind her friends, her school, her house, her hometown and most important, her dad.
she didn't know how long she would' ve to stay without him.he had applied for his transfer but obviously it was not going to be that easy or fast.


"COOO"

they heard a whistle.
the train was approaching them.
it came to a halt and people were pushing each other to climb on to it.
mr banerjee took the luggage inside and was waiting for avni and mrs banerjee to climb onto the train.
avni looked back to see her birthplace , maybe for the last time,
tears rooled down her eyes.
she rubbed her eyes furiously and jumped onto the train.

another whistle was heard which denoted that the train was to leave the station soon.
avni came to the door to see her father standing there with tears in his eyes.
"avni. take care of yourself , mumma and dada also.ok sweety.don't worry , i m going to join you all very soon but you've to be strong , ok dear and always remember that i luv you."
"dad"
avni knew her dad loved her a lot .she practically meant everything to him.
"dad , u ...u .."she stammered, trying to speak between sobs."dad ..take care of yourself and.. and i love you to.i know that everything will be alright.bb..bb..bbyee dad..dad"
"byee sweetheart."

the train had started moving. soon it was speeding and avni saw her father drift away from her .
she trudged back to her seat and broke into fresh sobs.
but then she thought of her mother.if she had lost her dad , mamma had lost her husband with whom she had spent the last 20 years.
"no avni.be strong.you know dad will join you soon.calm down."
she went up to her mother and hugged her.
her mother broke in her arms but she supported her.
"i just hope delhi's good" was avni's final thought before drifting into an uncomfortable sleep.



meanwhile in mother's international school.
"prithvi , prithvi paas the ball to me."
sameer was calling out to his best friend, his chuddy buddy.
"sam."
prithvi yelled back.
he passed the ball to sameer and he scored a neat goal.
the bell rang just then and the boys groaned.
their games period was over.
"abe yaar..abhi vibha ka period hai.
"kabhi kabhi to lagta hai ki woh khud hi history se aai hai ."sameer guffawed.
"nice one sam."
varun spoke up.
"by the way sam what happened in bhalla's office today?"
"bhalla..guess what pri ..dahi bhalle ne mujhe punish nahi kiya.."
"wohooo...wat ..u serious sam..wow..seems he has improved."
"but sam ..i don't get it why did you ve to set of the alarm and how long do you plan to stay the bad boy of mothers?"
"varun chill...heyy sejal."
"sameer called out to a girl.
"chal varun abhi bhabhi ji aa gayi hai."pri said.
varun burst out laughing.
"ha ha ha..very smart pri.you guys go to class i ll join you soon."
"vibha's going to bite your neck of."
"as if i care."

sameer went upto the girl and rubbed on his flirting skills for a while.

he had a huge grin on his face.
i m sameer saxena the bad boy, the flirt , the superstar of mothers obviously along with prithvi and varun and i will never change.


hope u all enjoyed d 1st chap...😊...
do comment all...😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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🥳🥳woooppppiieeee first to reply!!!!Dancing🥳🥳

chandzzz
@sam's behavior...😆...hey bhagwan...😲......itna courageous @15..😆....wonder wen he becum's a lil' older............bachna ae teachers/haseeno

@avni's emotional-departing-part...🥺....luved it.......... u excecuted it really well..👏....poor gal..........🥺...

@pri-sam-var-convo/part---luvely.....😆😃😆😃

@intro+concept--loved it.............10 0n 10
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wayyy to go update soon m eager to know wat happens wen our

new gal in town😊 meets naughty flirt of school😉.................

yipeee one more savni ff🥳🥳🥳.

....thanksss on that note🤗🤗🤗

luv
gunseerat
Edited by Gunseerat - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first of all chandz, i nvr knew u were a bong..amio bangali..so thnx 4 d bong feeling in ur FF

secondly, gr8 concept dear..its awesum...teenage love wid savni...wow...

thirdly, superb start..luvd it..very funny sam part..n verys enti avni part.....

do upadte soon...coz m dying 2 knw wt'll happen next..

antara
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey chandu di !!!

really nice start !!
👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey hi chandu😊
its really a nyc concept
loved sam a lot
amazing dear 👏
& avni is d dearest
plzz update it as soon as possible
thnxxxxxxxx 4 pm dear 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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reserved

will edit it tonight..


and thanx for including prithvi in it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Chandu=)
Lovelyy Concept..Loved It
Sam Is Soo Cutee..Hehe
Do Cont.Soon
Thanks For The PM..!!
-Mehek-
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr888 Yaar...
Loved The Start....
Cont Soon...
Thanks For PM...'
*Sana*😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very cute chandu............uppdate us soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr888 Chandu..
Loved the start...
Do cont soon...
Thnx for the PM...

Love from
--Hina--

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