MiChi FF: Dear Mia Note Pg 54 20/02

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<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hi! Wow ok *nervous laugh* well errm I'm not sure what to say😕😕 I guess well this is the first time I have ever even attempted to write something and than to post it on here!!!!! 😕😕</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Gotta say alittle nervous on what everyone is going to say! Hope you all like it and thank you for coming to read it! Please comment I would LOVE to hear what everyone thinks even you silent readers!! Criticism is welcome just as long as its constructive and nicely put please!!!😃😃 </font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Ok well getting to the FF *clears throat* well this is about a girl writing in her diary well log . . . . . If it's on the computer it's a log right??? I'm not sure??😕😕 anyway well its about a woman who finds her old log/diary from when she is a girl and starts to read it remembering when she had actually started this diary.</font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">The first part is about the woman finding the log/diary and reading it the rest of the FF is all about her as the girl writing in the log/diary and how she meets her first love!!! 😊*sigh*😊*shakes head* </font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Anyway lol! Getting to the point this is a MICHI STORY!!! ⭐️ L-O-V-E-D Kayamath!!!! But they did wreck it abit the only thing that kept me interested was the chemistry between MiChi ❤️*sigh*❤️ anyway sorry going alittle off track there 😳*embarrassed laughter, clears throat*😳 I guess you could guess by now who the woman/girl is in the FF?? *nudge nudge* eh lol of course! Anyway enough with my ramblings lets get to the first part of the FF!! well here it is!!</font></p>
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<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Errm *clears throat* sorry to interrupt just wanted to say that in the first part when she is thinking something it will be in italics and when she says something that will be in bold, just thought I would clear that up!! </font></p>
<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Oh also a BIG BIG BIG BIG BIG X 1000 THANK YOU!!!!! To Nagina91!!! For all the help!!! I really needed it for the first part she was my personal spell and grammar checker!! But she's a silent reader so I know she won't comment 😭*wipes tear*😭 but please you other silent readers don't follow in her footsteps! Please from one fellow silent reader to all others PLEASE comment!😊 Oh and also I guess you might be wondering why this FF is called Dear Mia but all will be revealed!!! Anyway on with the show . . . . no, story. . . . . no, FF yes FF!!</font></p>
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<p align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">*Ta Da!!!!!*</font></p>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">A woman walks towards her childhood room and stands in the door way taking it all in . . . this was where she spent most of her time, this was her everything, this was her. . . . . </font>
<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"Sigh," she couldn't believe that in a matter of a few hours this will never look the same again.

</font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">This was her room, her comfort zone, her everything if anyone wanted to know anything about her they could; just by looking around this room. She walked in looking and touching everything, trying to remember it all. Everything was still there, still the same well except for the fact that it was clean, a bit too clean for her taste. 'Mama' she knew her mum was behind it, with a little smile, she carried on looking through her shelves that will be cleared away soon. </font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"Sigh," she shakes her head, trying to shoo away the tears that were starting to gather in her eyes as the thought struck her, 'this won't be my room anymore', walking towards her bed, she grabbed the empty cardboard box placed on the bedside table. On the side of the box had been scruffily written </font>

<p align="center"><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">PRACHI'S CRAP </p>
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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Rolling her eyes, </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">'Bobby' </font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">"Idiot!"

</font></font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Sitting down on the edge of her bed, placing the box on her lap, she looked around unsure of what to do. </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">'I guess I should start packing things away' </font></font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">the thought of having to take apart her room, made Prachi groan and slump back on to her bed, with a big huff.</font>

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<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Her head shot up, unsure of where the noise came from. She took a quick look around her room to see if anything had fallen . . . . </font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">'Nothing. That's odd!?' Moving the box aside, she stood up, walking towards the door to see if the noise had come from somewhere else around the house. She took another quick look of her room, when something shiny, caught her eye from under her bed. Stepping near it, </font></font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">"gasp."

</font></font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">It was her folder! Her diary! She couldn't believe it! Quickly grabbing it and jumping on to the bed, she made herself comfortable. If it</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">'s the last thing she did in her room, she would read it. 'All I ever did was write and vent everything in to this, I don't think I ever really sat down and read what I wrote'.

</font></font><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Opening the small folder, she looked at the first page of her own jumbled thoughts. A smile crept on to her face. She remembered when she decided to print it all out and put it in a folder to keep. She never really liked the thought of her diary being handwritten. </font>

<font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">"</font><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">Okay . . ." she started to get alittle excited! Wriggling in her seat, she took a deep breath and started to read. </font></font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font size="3">"So first entry . . . . .
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<div align="center"></font><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Well . . . . . . . . . . Errrm that's it!!! For the 1st part that is I was thinking of adding the first entry of the log/diary but than decided against it I guess I want some feedback first! 😊</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">I know its not much! but this honestly was the hardest part for me writing in a story teller type way I'm not good at it and I got really nervous and self-conscious about it and I know it's not that good! But trust me it gets better!! 😃😃</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Because in this FF the way 'young' Prachi writes in her log/diary is exactly how I write my ramblings and all so it was more easier for me and I didn't have to think to hard it just flowed and I felt more comfortable with it! </font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Anyway sorry rambling again!! 😳*blushes*😳 please please please comment!!!! PLEASE!!! 😃😃</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS">I might put the 2nd part up tomorrow but that all depends on your comments!!😃😃</font></div>
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<div align="center"><font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Part 1 - Page 1</font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#0000ff" size="3" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Part 2 - Page 3</font></div>
<div align="center"><font size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Note - Page 6</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 3 - Page 6</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 4 - Page 9</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 13</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 5 - Page 15</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 17</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 6 - Page 19</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 22</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 7 - Page 23</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Note - Page 28</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 30</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 8 - Page 34</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 36</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Apology - Page 37</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 9 - Page 39</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 41</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 10 #1 - Page 44</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Part 10 #2 - Page 46</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Note - Page 48</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Note - Page 51</font></font></div>
<div align="center"><font color="#ff0000" size="3" face="Comic Sans MS"><font color="#0000ff" face="Verdana">Preview - Page 51</font></div></font>
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey aqsa awesome yaar..

would love to read more and definitely the girl's diary and your rambling..

from my side its👍🏼

continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you!!! 😃 If there are enough people that like it than I will I promise!! 😊
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Hai aqsa
Nice update
plz cont soon
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hi Aqsa, welcome hun....
beautiful michi ff.... 😃 👍🏼
plz cont...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice one dear...loved the line prachi's crap...lolz...welcum to writers blog!hv fun writing....

Love
Nihita
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi Aqsa.
Nice FF.
And also ur introduction speech😆
Pls continue soon.
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awesome update. l really like the story. please cont soon.

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Hai aqsa

Very nice update

plz cont soon

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Originally posted by: nimmi101

Hai aqsa

Nice update
plz cont soon

Thank you!!!😃😃
I will be putting up the 2nd part today!! I will usually post a new part once a week but I really want to know what you all think of the first diary/log entry!! 😊

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