My First Love! a SG /MN OS!

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hey guys..............heres a OS on SG nd MN!

MY FIRST LOVE!



My first love wasn't didn't have a happy ending…………………………………………



Samrat's POV
Hey , I'm Samrat…… Samrat Sharma…… I'm in college , 2nd year, today is my first day in excel college.



As I entered the campus I could see that my charming smile was already making girls drool over me! Actually its always been like this. Girls always go ga ga on seeing me. When I was in school also it used to happen. I enjoy the attention I get from girls and as for the boys are concerned most of them are just jealous losers!


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Now making way to the principal's office I crashed into a girl…… She was a student I guess, her hair were left open and she wore a magenta salwar – kameez , but something was unusual………Oh! Her chapals……… they had ghungroos. Weird! She shook me out of my thoughts and said


"By God!!! Ankhien hain ke Button!!!" (yes its Nupur, srry if u thought gunjan hai!)
"Oh! I'm sorry but tumhe dekh ke chal na chahiye" I said being sarcastic and I headed to the principal's room. There he was sitting.

"Good morning, u must be Samrat, right?" he asked me and I answered in a yes after that he guided me to my class where I saw the same girl sitting with a guy. Must be her boyfriend. I was introduced and found myself a empty seat in front of that girl's.


After sometime she said "Hey my name's Nupur and he's Mayank" before I could answer the boy interrupted and said "Nupur main apna intro khud de sakta hoon! Tumhe dene ki zaroorat nahi hai" somehow I couldn't help but like this guy so I asked him "Friends?" to which the both said "FOREVER" and looked at each other and soon they were fighting again so I asked dome random person do we have classes today to which he replied no but we have to sit in class for another 40 mins……They both kept on bickering when suddenly Mayank said "where is Gunji?" to which nupur said "bas woh aarahi hai" I wonderd who was "Gunji" so I asked nupur "ab yeh gunji kaun hai?"

Nupur answered and said "Gunji meri twin sister aur……aur………before she could say any further Mayank screamed "GUNJI!!!! Tu aagayi!" as he said this I turned around to see the girl and freez the moment I saw her everything seemed to have frozen. She looked like a angel in that white and pink knee length dress. That moment the bell rang and Mayank got up and hugged the girl…… I don't know why but I didn't like it one bit……


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Days passed do quickly now me and Nupur have become best buddies , now I really love Gunjan , yes I realized it on her birthday party but I'm still confused about her and Mayank's relationship, they tell people that they r best mates but whenever I turn to look at her I find her staring at Mayank. Today I've ask Nupur all about this!


POV ends!


Nupur's POV


I was sitting on the steps………Mayank , Gunji and Dia (our cousin) had bunked college and gone for a movie. I was thinking why didn't I go they had asked me also to join them. Was I avoiding Mayank??? , Did I still like him??? Do I love him even now??? Before I could continue wid these questions I found Samrat sitting next to me and saying that yes you love him! I wanted to argue back but I shut up as he told me to tell about mine , Mayank and Gunjan's Friendship story………


I started telling him we were in 7th grade when…………………
(GUYS D PARTS IN BRACKETS IS WHAT NUPUR IS SAYING PRESENTLY)

*FLASHBACK*
Nupur beta , gunjan beta yeh hai Shilpa Sharma , humari nayi padoosi aur yeh hai unka beta Mayank………( bauji ne humme milwaya tha aur mujhe yaad hai tabhi Mayank ne pehle gunjan se dosti ki thi)
"Hi main mayank aur tum?"
"main gunjan tumhe kya kya pasand hai?"
"Mujhe pardayi karna aur tumhe"
"WOW! Mujhe bhi" ( phir woh dono baatein karne lage………… phir hum ek hi school aur class main the aur woh dono best friends bangayye mujhe toh Mayank par crush tha aur ab shayad pyaar hogayya hai!)

*FLASHBACK ENDS*


With that I got up and went home…………………I didn't feel like staying there!


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Months passed and we five shared a very special bond……… now it was the end of the year our exams were over and we got the result…………Gunji was 1st then Mayank den it was CJ den it was me and den Samrat! And tonight was farewell party!


I was dressed in my fav peach dress……………I spotted Mayank telling Samrat "today M gonna propose her wish me luck" I felt sad for myself and Samrat as I knew he loved Gunjan! But then why was he smiling!


After 3 hours :

Everything is went dark and there was a spotlight on gunjan…………I knew it was mayank!

POV ends!

Samrat's POV


I appeared into light and said "Gunjan Bhushan……………… U stole my heart on the day I saw u! I really LOVE U! from d day I saw u!!!!!! Please say u love me too! With that I turned around to leave!


Just when I was about to go I felt someone hugging me from the back………I turned around and saw gunjan………she had tears in her eyes and said "I love u too! I always looked at u in class but the moment u would turn around I would start looking at Mayank so that you don't come to know!!!!!!"
I felt so happy that I lifted her up in my arms after a while I put her down and smiled at mayank and threw the mike to him and said "now its ur turn"


Nupur's POV


I saw Sam confess and gunji accepted………………I was so happy fro them…………
Then Mayank bent on his knees and said " Nupur I kno you love me since school days……………Even I loved u since back then but I never had the courage to tell u tht I LOVE YOU! And that's why I always fought with u please say yes!
I stared at him and said yes and we hugged each other tightly…………………After a while I saw gunji nd Sam smiling nd mayank said gunji knew it all long!


POV ends


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After a year :

This is how we got together ! said all 4 to benji nd Uday their new friends!!!!!!!!!

Then Sam and Nupz said "My first love wasn't didn't have a happy ending………………………………………… but a Happy Beginning!

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so it was very crappy but still do comment!

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sammy4u thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear that was great loved it
Edited by sammy4u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow adz...!!
omg...it was such an awsum os yaar...!!

luved d way u described d povs of diff ppl...!!
n esp sam...!!

it was jus awsum...!!

do write more...!!

n thanxx for d pm..!!

--radz--
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏 Hey bubzy, nice one.liked it v. much. 👍🏼 keep writing. Aur AR pe v likhna.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very cute os dear...loved it to the core......
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Originally posted by: sammy4u

hey dear that was great loved it



thank u sammy di! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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👏👏👏👏fabulous update
loved it a lottttt
ek baat bataun i had already guessed ki something like it didnt have a happy ending but a happy beginning jaisa kuch aayega⭐️
yaaay i was right😃
osam os
with loads of luv to u
tani🤗
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Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

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edited=)

wow adz...!!
omg...it was such an awsum os yaar...!!

luved d way u described d povs of diff ppl...!!
n esp sam...!!

it was jus awsum...!!

do write more...!!

n thanxx for d pm..!!

--radz--
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Oh! thank u so much! 😳 😳 😳
btw I'll call u radz di! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow dear
it was lovely ff
so sweet and simple
do write more
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awesome really very nice.. i loved it..... hope u write more of these..

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