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Posted: 15 years ago
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Frankly speaking I thought once again this story could have become intresting one but kya kare the persons sitting at creative/writer desk not using brains and try to make story intresting one..............
Chalo here is my attempt again... Let me know how do you feel? I am using all background given by creative/writer only. Thanks to Sujata for advice to start another FF.

1) Doctor's entry
2) Ira trying to control over Yudi by controlling baby to her only.

Rani in metal hospital and tries to prove doctor that she is normal. Doc doesnt believe her. Later doc get sympotms that she is normal and meanwhile in
palace Yudi decides to marry Ira.

Now here my story

Part 1

Rudra comes to meet Rani in hospital and meets doctor. He is amazed to see doctor as he is Yudi's friend. Rudra tells all truth to him and tells about Rani. Doctor insist Rani to take some special tests to clear his dobut. After tests it is confirmed that Rani is not mentally
unstable. Doctor decides to help Rudra and Rani.

Rudra brings doctor to palace. Yudi is happy to see his friend after so many days. Everyone insists him to stay in palace. Ira is against doc staying in palace but after Yudi's approval she is helpless. Shekhar(Doc) tells everyone that he would love to stay in palace but his fianance will be coming from London in tomorrow so he would prefer to stay outside. CR and RS tells him that its not an issue if finance also stay in palace. He agrees.

In the night; shekhar purposefully puts on discussion with Yudi that people having same faces exists in this world. Yudi initially denies but Shekhar gives him many proofs and he agrees. Shekhar asks Yudi about his wife; but Ira tells him that she is no more. Shekhar tells Yudi that
he has seen one patient in hospital who claims that she is your wife. Yudi is shocked to hear this. Shekhar tells there is one more intresting fact about that patient but he will tell that only after his fianance Shikha comes over here. Shekhar supports Yudi's decision to marry Ira as his baby needs another mother.

Next day, Shekhar comes to palace with his fianance and that is none other than Rani. Shekhar introduces Rani as his fianance Shikha. Ira creates drama there saying she is Rani and she is trying to play game with them to stay in palace. But Shikha simply says that she doesnt know who is Rani. Shekhar also tells everyone that how it is possible? He has been with Shikha since last 4 years and she was in London with him and she has never been to India before. Ira claims that this doctor and Rani are united and playing game with royals. Now Shikha(Rani) tells Shekhar how can he stay with such disgussting people who insults their guests? She was totally against staying with family. Because of him only she came here and on just her arrival she has to go through all this drama. It would have been better; if she would have stayed in hotels. She picks up bag and turns to leave. But RS and CR stops her and tells her that it never happened that their guests left palace unhappily. There seems to be some confusion but their family will work out on that matter.
Yudi to supports RS decision and orders Kali to take her luggage to guests room.

Once Rani is gone; Ira tries to convince Yudi that Shikha is Rani only. But Rudra cuts her off saying hows that possible? We all know that Rani is mentally unstable and in hospital. From which angel you found that Shikha is mentally unstable? Now Ira cant argue more coz it will make clear that Rani is perfectly fine. Ira comes up with plan that she wants to see Rani and Shikha together. Yudi agrees and tells her that he will tell Shekhar to take Shikha in hospital. Yudi meets Shekhar in night and confronts truth that Rani is his wife and Shikha looks same as her. Shekhar tells Yudi he was also talking about same fact yesterday that he has seen a girl who looks same as his fianance. But he never knew that Rani is his wife. Yudi requests him to take Shikha to mental hospital tomorrow. Shekhar tells him that Shikha is already angry over today's issue and it would be really difficult to manage her. She is short-tempered. Yudi requests him and Shekhar agrees.
Rudra, Rani, Shekhar and family membrs dicusses about this issue and how to tackle that.

Next day Yudi, Ira, Rudra go to hospital. Shekhar pretends that he has taken Shikha to hospital by putting some excuse. Shekhar tries to take Shikha to Rani's cell along with Rudra, Yudi and Ira. But Shikha is scared of that enviornment and feels uneasy. Rudra tells everyone that he will stay with Shikha by that time they can go and meet Rani bhabhi. Rudra, Rani and Shekhar cleverly manipulates Yudi and makes him believe that Rani and Shikha are two different girls. Shekhar tells Yudi now he should believe that Shikha is not Rani. Ira tries to convince Yudi that it seems that Rudra is also supporting Rani. Rudra gets angry on Ira for putting baseless accusation on him. Meanwhile; Shikha realizes that she has been brought up to hospital just to check that Rani and Shikha are one. She gets angry and leaves the place though Shekhar tries to handle situation.

Angry Shikha returns to palace and argues with Shekhar why did he take her to hospital? Why he is giving so much importance to these people. They had enough insulting her. Now she no longer wish to stay in palace and leaving right now. She leaves for her room to pack her stuff. Shekhar tells Yudi he already told him that Shikha is short tempered.She doesnt like anyone interferes in her personal matter as she has been brought up in London. It was him who forced her to stay here because they asked him to do so. But he never thought they would get such bad treatment as royal guests. Now he cant hurt her anymore and he is also leaving with her. Yudi feels bad about all this.
Shekhar and Shikha are set to leave but Yudi stops them and asks for forgiveness. He specially appologies to Shikha and requests her to stay back. He assures that no one will again accuse her that she is Rani. Rani feels bad that Yudi is apologising to her and decides to stay back.

This is first victory of Rani and I am contiuing with more.....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!! Awesome victory Darshu!! Ira getting a dose of his own medicine.

I loved it when u made Yudi admit that he has a wife,Rani in mental hospital. Its nice to see Rani throwing so many tantrums even if she's acting-is she in western attire??
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks Purva... Well yes Rani is in western attires but decent ones...... You can imagine her with long skirts, Mega sleeves top and scarf...... Good make over, right?? 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice!!

I would love to see her like that-how I wish that Sampurn did what u have just written-it would've been such phun!!!

I don't have any doubts that Yudi would've been impressed!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yudi is not impressed yet; this part is to come......... Yes but Rani is throwing many tauntrams to make Yudi believe that she is not Rani and exactly opposite of Rani.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Darshu, OMG! I have so much pending work yaar.. This was the same thing you wrote in DOTW na? Hmmm..I like it!

I like the way you gave Rani the first victory..Meri baat maan and make Yudi repent to Rani and apologize to her as he has never done before!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Darshu di.... thanku.... am truly glad that you started this FF....
loved reading it yesterday only..... it was truly beautiful.... want to see more of Rani's nakhras and Yudi paying more attention to her.... and avoiding Ira altogether.... and later Yudi repenting for what he did to Rani...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Darsh , New FF - Cool !!!

I love as Sujji said Nakhray wali Rani ...i want her to teach lesson to this Yudi ...Aur Nakhra dikhao pljjj
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Roshni.

Darshu, OMG! I have so much pending work yaar.. This was the same thing you wrote in DOTW na? Hmmm..I like it!

I like the way you gave Rani the first victory..Meri baat maan and make Yudi repent to Rani and apologize to her as he has never done before!



Thanks Rosh!! Yes there is much to come... I will try to post updates daily...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujji0609

Wow Darshu di.... thanku.... am truly glad that you started this FF....

loved reading it yesterday only..... it was truly beautiful.... want to see more of Rani's nakhras and Yudi paying more attention to her.... and avoiding Ira altogether.... and later Yudi repenting for what he did to Rani...



Thanks Sujata for inspiring me to write this FF. Yaar we always wants to see YuRa romance and pata nahi yeh creatives ki gaadi Rani ki mahanta pe kyun atak jaati hain?

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