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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part-7...payal's daughter Damini dates with Gautham
always.mihir sees it.he tests whether their luv is
sincere.he understands that their luv is pure.so he
supports them.
payal fixes damini's wedding with another
guy.so in the last moment damini-gautham decide 2
suicide.mihir finds it.he advises them.since there was
no option,he helps them 2 get married in the register
office.he comes back as if he does'nt no anything.
payal
becomes angry seeing damini as a bride.she scolds &
neglects them. mihir reveals 2 sujal that he is the 1
behind this wedding.
S loses his control:u saw
payal aunty's sorrow?how cud u giv them pain like this?u
r so cruel.1st day onwards u've been creating problems.u
r becoming a burden. mihir becomes upset.tulsi cud'nt
tolerate this.she gets heart attack.she gets admitted in
the hospital.tulsi becomes ok.
Sujal:sorry mamma.i lost
my control.i shud'nt hav behaved like this.
tulsi:its ok
beta...u plz don't giv papa pain.u no the problems weve
faced.
Tulsi starts telling their story.they had only
1 son-Rishi.he was spoilt.he drinks a lot.he marries a
rich spoilt girl Mohini without their knowledge.when
they came 2 no,they accepted her.mohini gives b'th 2
2kids.Vinayak & Bhumi.they were very close 2 their
grandparents.
mihir find out that mohini has got an
extra marital relationship with ansh's friend swayam.he
tells this 2 Rishi.but mohini turns R against mihir.

R:how cud u talk like this about my innocent
wife?what kind of a dad u r? he insults him b4 swayam &
mohini.both of them enjoy it.
unexpectedly hearing
mohini's words,rishi dumps them in the old age home.they
left india 4 america.they did'nt even enquire whether
they r alive there.
sujal-kashish shed tears hearing the
story.
mihir enters the room:get ready tulsi.we'll go
back 2 the old age home.why shud we giv burden 2 them?

tulsi cries.
Kashish:plz papa,don't go.plz don't leave
us alone.
sujal:papa,its my fault.i 'm really sorry.plz
4give me....i beg u.plz don't go.
he holds mihir's
hands. mihir hugs S.every1 becomes happy.they start
a new enjoyable life. Paayal accepts
Gautham-damini.unexpectedly ganga's uncle calls up
mihir:Rishi had called up. mihir was shocked.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#22
too good yaar contd.soon 👏
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 20 years ago
#23
Part-8....mihir tells:i'm willing 2 giv all my wealth 2
Rishi.i guess thats what he wants now.
he disconnects the
PH.
tulsi:why can't he giv us peace atleast now?
overhearing this,sujal-kashish get inside the room. they
had tears on their eyes.
kashish:if ur son comes,will u
go back?we'll become orphans again.
tulsi cries:no we
won't go..
mihir:sure.
S-K become happy.
they
decide 2 conduct the wedding anniversary party of
mihir-tulsi.but they did'nt want it.
K:we've 2.once we
were not invited 4 a party. S:in our party,both
orphans & the ppl who did luv marriage can cum.
they
agree.
the party day...all the colony ppl were
there.mihir sang.tulsi danced.suddenly a car cumes.it was
shocking that rishi gets out of the car.he was seen
dull.did've a leg.had a walking stick.vinayak-bhumi also
were there.they cum running 2
mihir-tulsi:dadaji...dadima....ppl were shocked.
paayal:who r they? mihir-tulsi kept silent. Rishi:i'm
their only son.but only these orphans gave them luv. all
were shocked.
mihir loses his control:why did u cum
here?now u insulted our poor children by revealing that
they r not our children.u r a truble maker. R
weeps:curse me dad.now i'm suffering 4 what i did 2wrds
my parents.i lost my leg in an accident.my wife left me
& went with my own friend.i'm physically weak.i had 2 do
sum operations.but it did'nt bring any gud result.again
i've 2 do an operation.i might lose my life.my children
will become orphans.i want my parents 2 cum with me 2
luk after them.
mihir:so we shud leave sujal-kashish 4
that?they only gave us luv when we were alone.
vinayak-bhumi:plz cum with us...now papa has becum very
nice..he does'nt scold us,does'nt beat us.
tulsi cries
in this confused state. R:sujal....kashish.......i beg u 2
return my parents 4 my innocent kids. K
cries...she runs 2 her house.S follows her.both of
them return with mihir-tulsi's bags.
K:u both hav 2 go
back....
mihir was shocked:what?
K:now these kids need
u both more than us.
tulsi:how can u tolerate this?
S:we'll take it as a sweet dream we had.
tulsi
-mihir hug them with tears.
R thanks them:i dunno how
2 thank u ppl.u'll go 2 heaven. their car
goes.S-K cry.suddenly K faints. she was
taken 2 the hospital. S was feeling difficult 2 face
others.but others did'nt feel bad.
paayal:u r sitting as
if u ppl hav dun sumthing wrong.we've heart.we don't
blame u...
ganga &the DR & K cum out of the room.
Ganga:there is a sweet news.sujal..u r going 2 be a dad.
S was so happy....K was shy. saahil:now don't
think that u ppl r orphans.u r going 2 get a child 2 luv
u. S hugs K.
Kashish gives b'th 2 a baby.that
day unexpectedly mihir-tulsi cum there .they were
surprised.
mihir:why?u never expected us?
S:we
dreamt of this beautiful scene.but did'nt hav any hope.
tulsi pampers the baby. S:where is rishi?
they become
sad.
mihir:he left 2 another world.
S:sorry...
K:and bhumi & vinayak...?
tulsi:they
went 2 school. K:papa...mamma...plz stay with
us.our child needs garandparents.also a luvly brother &
a cute sister.
S:yes.don't say 'no'.plzzzzz.
tulsi &
mihir smile with tears on their eyes as a sign of
willingness. they all hav a happy life again. THE END..
ambarinaaltaf thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#24
tooo good yaar contd. again a new story
KulBin thumbnail
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Posted: 20 years ago
#25
hey really nice part quite touchy... but good ending..
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#26
nice story........it ended soo soon.......but plz cont anoder one soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#27
too good 👏 u r really a ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

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