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Posted: 15 years ago

hey guys..my name's Maria! i am a quiet member here but i REALLY wanted to start an ff after reading all the amazing ones people here have started!! so PLEASEEe comment so that i know u guys would like me to continue!!

P.S. i will try not to make the posts too long...keep them at a decent level, so u dont get bored reading...but hey, i tend to get carried away when it comes to premeer😳

P.P.S...i will try to update periodically b/c i read other ff's too and i know it sucks to have to wait...but i have school..so bear with me😊

okay no more buk buk

She stared at the tide of red, orange, and yellow dancing in front of her eyes'taunting her'reminding her that they had left. The very mom and dad that had given her blessings were now leaving her empty handed. She didn't scream in agony..only watched as the tears rolled off her face and onto the ground'tears that came in such heaps, they could surely diminish the flames of the fire her parents were burning in right now'

"Woh challe gaye di'humain chor kar..!!"

Heer came out of her trance and glanced at Meher, who was gripping her arm and yelling and screaming beside her. Looking into her tearfull eyes, Heer took an oath, right then and there that..

"Main ma baugi ki kami Meher ko kabi nahi mehsoos hone dongi'yeh ansoo khushi main badle doongi..yeh mera vada hai"

She knew she would take care of Meher to her full potential...but what about herself'who would become her support and who would be the angel that removed this pain from her life?

leave nice comments and leave your name too....cause as i said..im a quiet member, so i probably dont know you and vice versa 😆

-Maria

scroll down for the first chapter..soon :)

Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 2
Chapter 3: Page 2
Chapter 4: Page 3
Chapter 5: Page 5
Chapter 6: Page 6
Chapter 7: Page 8
Chapter 8: Page 10
Chapter 9: Page 12

Chapter 10: Page 14

Chapter 11: Page 16
Chapter 12: Page 18
Chapter 13: Page 21
Chapter 14: Page 23
Chapter 15: Page 25

Edited by mbibi - 15 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

Okay..here is chapter 1 :)

The next few days passed in a blur for Heer and Meher. Their parents were thier only family,aside from thier chachai,
Diljeet. Diljeet, however, wasn't very close to them so they hadn't had contact with her and her family in a while. Then on the 3rd day after thier parents death, Heer got a call. She went and answererd the phone.

Heer: hello

Diljeet: Heer, main teri chachi bol rahi hoon..tumhare ma bauji ka suna to bohat afsoos hua...sorry kay hum aa nahi sake..

Heer: koyi baat nahi..aap kaisi ho?

Diljeet: haan, main teek ho..acha tu vahi ghar main rehti hain na? Hum tumhe milne aarahe hain.

Heer:oh..acha, hum vahi ghar main rehte hain.
She then said good bye and hung up, leaving Heer wondering why Chachi had called her.

Diljeet on the other hand was thinking of how she would get her son Arjun married to Heer and how she would get to the
inheritance that Heer's parents had left behind.

Meanwhile.....

"Shoott...aj toh main gaya", he thought as he ran into the house. "Ma toh aaj mujhe bohat dantne wali hai...", he thought as he tiptoed up the stairs, hopeing his mom was asleep.

"Stop right there" he heard someone yell behind him, and he turned slowely, knowing he was caught.

And surely, there was his Prem Bhiya standing with his arms crossed over his chest.

"Preet, tu kahan tha?" asked Prem

"Woh..main.."Preet thought of lieing but he knew his Pb would not belive him, so he told the truth
"Pb, aik dost ki party thi, or time ka pata hi nahi chala..."

"Time?" asked Prem motioning to the clock on the wall, which indicated that it was 2

"Soooo sooo sorry PB..dont tell Ma, I promise i wont do it again" said Preet.

"yeah right" said Prem and followed his younger brother up the stairs

"You know Pb, i have an idea of how i can party without Ma getting mad..." said Preet to Prem
Prem raised his left eyebrow and asked," Acha, woh Kaise?"

Preet: Ma only gets mad at me for partying, so how about, next time you join me that way when we come home late, Ma wont get mad"

"Preetttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!", yelled Prem as he chased his brother up the stairs.

Okay this one was short, but its late and im tired :(
PLease leave your comments/critisims!!
thanks
-Maria

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Namrata Kumari

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Posted: 15 years ago

update soon...........DJ I HATE HER AS ALWAYS

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meeshti jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey ...

nice try !!!!!!😉

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munni_sheela

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice start

do continue

add me to ur pm list

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458742

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey its very nice

update soon

waiting eagerly

and pm me whn u nxt update

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Posted: 15 years ago

okay im doing chapters 2 and 3 together...but they r a bit boring 😳..sorry but they are neccesary to make the story move on! okay here you go!!

The next day, Heer woke up early to clean the house incase Chachi came. But her efforts went in vain when Chachi called and informed her that she wouldnt be coming over, as she is expecting a guest.

Diljeet's house: "Woh kab aayegi?" thought Diljeet eagerly waitiing for her friend. She smirked thinking of how she would make her wealthy friend from Canada, pay all the expenses of this "wedding".

About an hour later, she saw the front door open and in walked her friend yelling "Diljeet"!!!!.

Diljeet: GAYATRI !!!!!!

They embraced as Diljeets husband walked in behind her.

THe exchanged greetings and Gayatri immedialty asked about the girl Diljeet had chosen for Arjun. She wanted to know everything about her...but Diljeet was avoinding the subject...

Diljeet started her sap story of how low on money they were and how she would need Gayatris help to pay for the wedding.

Gayatri: Main sab dek loon ghi..tu bas mujhe us larki ka bata..naam kya tha us ka?..or woh Arjun ko pasand hai?

Diljeet: Gayatri, yeh shadi nahi hai, aik sodha hai..mujhe bahu nahi, inheritance chahiye.

"Inheritance?" asked Gayatri

As Diljeet explained to Gayatri how she would do the marriage but would leave Heer as soon as she got the money, realization hit her and she got up from her seat.

Gayatri: How can you even stoop so low? The poor girl has just lost her only family, and you are snatching away her money too? How is she going to live? How can you be so selfish?

Diljeet: What are you saying? You know how tight our money is and i'm your friend, why are you supporting Heer...someone you dont even know?

Gayatri: Main Heer ka hi saath doongi kyun ke woh aakeli hai or jo tum kar rahi ho, woh main nahi hone dongi! Us ko main tumhare saye se door apne ghar le jaoon gi!

She grabbed her suitcase and stormed out of the house, leaving a dumbfounded Diljeet behind.

chapter 3 will be up shortly!! dont foget to leave comments

-Maria