' Lamha Urs And Mine' MayUr ff (full story posted)

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Hi friends,
Here is my next story with MayUr.. a two shot one shot whatver u want to call it. Its very simple and hope u like it. Its a time pass and hope ur time passes smoothly enjoy reading this one.
A very special special thanks to dearest Mahak for making the wonderful Banner, its amazing and just soo sweet. Hope u all like it as much as I loved it.
Posting the story soon.. tc
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Lamha Urs And Mine
Mayank enters the party. He looks around to search if Nupur has arrived. He has to once let his heart understand fully that she doesn't love him at all.

Nupur enters the party and looks around to see if Mayank is present. She wants to look at him and make sure he doesn't love her at all.

They both look for each other but looking in the opposite direction couldn't see each other.

Let me see you properly again,

I know looking at u I will be in pain,

Dil sapney dekh raha tha,

Anjaney rastey par chal raha tha,

I love you and felt U also do,

Now I realize it was never meant to,

Tum basgaye dil mey hamesha ke liye,

Tum humey nahi chahtey Asuu keh gaye..

Adhiraj notices Nupur and goes towards her, while Gunjan looks at Mayank and walks towards him. Gunjan chats with him. Here Adhiraj compliments Nupur and they chat. Mayank and Nupur while looking in search of each other have a glance and their eyes stop at each other finally. They look into each other's eyes from distance and in the vision also notice the people along. Mayank notices Adhiraj with Nupur and Nupur notices Gunjan with Mayank. Both now don't go to meet each other but stand at their place.

Gunjan chatting happily hugs Mayank and Nupur looks at them with jealousy pain and hurt. She is absolutely heartbroken. She tells her heart, not to think about him so much now, understand and accept the fact. Mayank loves Gunjan and that's not going to change. She controls her tears not to flow.

Adhiraj pushes her to listen to him and holds her hand. Mayank observing that feels very jealous and angry. His heart can't take anyone else to be that close to Nupur. What can he do if she doesn't love him? He is heartbroken, in immense pain and can't see anyone else be loved by her in front of him.

My love for u can never end,

I can't be at ease and pretend,

Pyaar hai aur dard badhta jaa raha hai,

Tum kisi aur ko chahoo yeh manjar dard pahuncha raha hai

I know U have every right to choose whom u want to love,

It's just that I had wanted to be lucky and be loved,

Shayad kuch duayein haqueeqat nahi ban sakti,

Kuch sapney sach nahi sapnaa hi banker rehti..

Samrat enters the party it's his birthday. With his arrival all clap and shout and music begins. Samrat with his trademark charm attracts one n all. Mayank & Gunjan walk towards him, Nupur and Adhiraj as well. The whole gang along with Dia, Benji and Uday join in too. The birthday cake was brought in and the cake was cut with loud music dance on the floor. Mayank though usually bit annoyed by the loud music couldn't feel it could be anything more than what loud cries and pain his heart is going through.

Nupur also chatted smiled but her smile was for few seconds and soon her disappointment of not getting her love made her feel emotionally drenched.

It's a happy occasion of course,

Still tears are inside and want to flow,

Khushi ka mahool dikh raha hai,

Ander sey dil roo raha hai,

Want to smile, laugh and not let anyone see my pain,

What can I do when heart feels there is nothing in life now to gain?

Gam bhaari hi nahi khoal hota jaa raha hai,

Dil ko cheer hi nahi Dil ko anginad ghav de raha hai..

Mayank and Nupur came forward to gift Samrat. Mayank gave a basket ball with the name SAMRAT on it and many adjectives starting from every letter.

He told him now he can praise himself to no lengths and these adjectives will help him at any point. Samrat laughed and said he doesn't need to when Mayank is around to help him, Mayank replied, there is no guarantee to be here always who knows at next moment he may not be anymore. Listening to it Samrat got shocked and said what is he saying and why did he say something like that? Nupur heard and she was shocked as well, she felt someone had taken away her ability to breathe, her heart was in pain and her eyes teary and angry why Mayank even dared to say something like this. She kept looking at him and listening, Mayank told Samrat he meant not that way, but that with close girlfriend around, if he isn't there at that very moment. Mayank hugged Samrat; Samrat hit him on his chest for scaring him. Nupur was too moved and wanted to hit Mayank too but she had to control her emotions and smiled with lots of difficulty towards Samrat and gave him a silver bracelet written SAMRAT with a star on the letter S. Both Nupur and Mayank standing close felt they would cry if they looked at each other, their emotions were running high now. Mayank tried to hide the sad feeling his heart carried which had given up on saying anything beautifully and nice but just painful thoughts. They both went away from there as they felt they would spoil the happy occasion.

Love the moments we were together,

Love U forever and forever,

The thought that we will part away,

The thought that U will choose someone else and live with him all the way,

It hurts, it hurts, and it makes me feel in pain and in pain,

I wish u happiness for sure still I am getting so insane,

I can't just forget u and can't see anyone else with u,

I feel angry with life, I feel to cry and hug u tight...

Dia caught hold of Nupur asking her to wait and Benji asked Mayank why he was running away so soon without eating. They pulled both of them back inside. They told it's such a happy occasion and after a long time the whole gang is together celebrating. Mayank looked at Samrat and saw Gunjan giving him a gift. Nupur observed Adhiraj greeting Samrat and she smiled. Samrat hugged Gunjan and Gunjan was blushing. Nupur was taken aback. Adhiraj asked what's going on and he was informed that Samrat has proposed Gunjan and she has said yes. Nupur was listening & wondering while everyone was clapping and smiling. Adhiraj wished both and said he was happy that at last Samrat accepted him as his friend and it won't be late when he would accept him to be a good match for his sister Suhani. Mayank wondered what was going on. Both Mayank and Nupur were happy in their heart but confused in mind. They looked at each other now and had so much to ask and share.

Kya jo humney sunaa woh sach hai,

Pyaar ka sapna kya tutta nahi hai,

Dil mey khushi hai lekin ghabrahat hai,

Kahin yeh dhoka to nahi dil ko horaha hai,

Chalo aaj kehdey sunley aur pyaar ko paa ley,

Chalo aaj dil ko dimaag sey jeetney dey..

Mayank: That day you were to meet me at the bookstore, you told me you had to go with Gunjan but Gunjan called me up and told she has not plans of going with u. Saw you along with Adhiraj that day. U need not lie to me I felt. Just clear me up what had happened.

Nupur: U saw me with Adhiraj that day? I didn't lie I was thinking to call up Gunjan and go with her for the submission of the form as she too had to, But later Adhiraj called me up to meet him as his parents were here and they wanted to talk about both of us getting married. I went met him and explained to his parents that we are just friends and told them about Suhani.

Mayank was smiling, relived and so glad. Still he asked her,

Mayank: He on the next day brought movie tickets he was asking u to come along with him.U were quite excited to go along with him. Much time you were spending with him and I felt may be u'.

(Nupur looked at him with an expression of what u felt? She smiled and laughed about what all he is assuming. )

Nupur: I really don't know how u noticed these things. We actually wanted Suhani to see all this and get jealous. Adhiraj and I planned this so that she gets jealous and somehow show how much she likes and loves him. It was one-sided love till then, Suhani was not admitting it due to Samrat disliking Adhiraj. I never noticed u actually saw these'. And u felt I was dating him? (She smiled looking at him, his face said the whole story how he was jealous and how happy he is now to know she isn't dating Adhiraj. )

Nupur: Meri baat to sun lee what were u doing with Gunjan at the restaurant. I wanted u to be with me when the results were posted. I was so nervous and where were u? with her? What was happening? I felt u wanted to be with her not with me '. She was special someone for u' (She looked at him with intense look)

Mayank: No, No' she is not special she is a friend.. She loves Samrat and I knew that from long, she was not admitting to him or herself. I realized she is feeling he deserves someone more charismatic. I met her and told how much Samrat needs her, wants her and he truly is happy only with her. I was doing all this for Samrat and Gunjan.. I am not seeing her at all' never.. never could I or would I

Nupur: What about Taking her to that beech.. I was following u.... u needed to be alone with her on the beach?

Mayank: U followed us?.. u felt I was.. (He smiled and looked at her, knowing she is so jealous her anger can be felt even now, with her tone') It was Samrat's plan to tell her to come to a certain place, I told her I am taking her to meet a friend of mine, and dropped her there at the beech. Samrat had made many arrangement there.. and it was the time, the place and the day he proposed her. I was only participating in dropping her there' the surprise plan was Samrat's idea '. I played my part and came back home.

Nupur and Mayank both were smiling now, and felt they are fools for not listening to their hearts. They were relieved and very glad. They both now felt before more misunderstandings happen they should convey what all is there in their heart.

What all we started to think?

Insecurities and misunderstandings cropping,

Main kaise Dil jo keh raha tha uspey vishvaas nahi kar rahi thi,

Dimaag jo dikha raha tha uspey yakeen kar chukki thi,

Accepting that u didn't love me at all,

How could I not believe ur eyes which I felt never lied at all,

Pyaar dono tarf hai saaf dikh raha hai,

Chalo Kehdey baatein dil ki Pyaar ka Ikraar horaha hai...

Nupur: So who is ur special someone? (Mayank looked straight in her eyes.. as if saying u can read who it is right... and Nupur blushed')

Mayank: My special someone' she has arrived into my heart and I have her in my soul too. I love her and I love the fact that I met & I know someone like her.

Nupur blushed, smiled and felt is she that special someone. Is her heart giving her the right signals? This dream is true or is the heart going to go through what it did these days. Sleepless nights, eyes wet and life dull. Mayank could sense a tensed feeling in her heart. Making him know she wants to hear clearly who the girl is.

Mayank: what about ur Love in ur life. Has he arrived yet or not?

Nupur smiled and looked at him: he arrived long back.. He is special to me, he is all I could ask for, want for in life. He makes me feel I am beautiful through his eyes. I feel he loves me and I love him too. He doesn't say anything and I feel so much through his eyes. I keep taking more n more; I smile and show him how much he means to me. I want to be with him for a life time. It's very painful to go through a heartbroken state. I really don't want to lose him ever. It hurts when I misunderstand he loves someone else..But it hurts the most when he says he may not be here anymore'. It kills me inside.. (Her eyes were full teary as she recollected the moment he had told Samrat he may not be there anymore)

Mayank recollected what he had spoken to Samrat in that depressed state and knowing he has hurt her so much and somewhere glad she is talking about him. He was sad with her teary eyes.The eyes which glow and he feels good to listen to her, look at her.. He brushed aside his emotional state and hers and asked her to wait as he comes in few minutes. Nupur sat there looking at the celebration which was happening. Mayank came and with him was a plate full of PaniPuri Golgappey as they call.. Nupur had a bright smile as she screamed, Pani puri' By God I love it!. Mayank looked at her face; the bright eyes the tears disappearing as the smile enveloping the whole face with charm beauty and innocence. She looked at him with happiness knowing he knows what makes her to jump with happiness. She took the plate of Pani puri and took one and had it. She was all set to finish the other one and was enjoying having them.. She was smiling.. As she ate.. She looked at him,

No one knows how to bring a smile on my face better than u ,

No one would ever be the perfect one only u and u,

Love is all about what I feel when I look at u,

Love is all about what I feel and know ur eyes tell,

Love is beautiful and U are my Love of my life,

Love is wonderful and life will be as well when I become ur wife..

Mayank: U know Nupur, I have observed while u have Pani puri U are very excited when it's in front of u, u want it totally and u are very glad it came in front of u. U take it with extreme care and with ur delicate hands, u love it and say it with ur eyes when it's close to u. When u have it , there is extreme happiness on ur face, u don't care what the world is doing and how u look .. u want to feel the taste and enjoy it to fullest. After having it there is so much peace inside u, ur face is bright beautiful. (Nupur was listening she always knew his eyes not only look at her but feel her emotions. )

Mayank with utmost emotions and looking at her with lots of love: There are two puri's left in the plate, u can see.. One is empty and the other one is filled. I give u a choice' (he dropped something inside the empty puri and looked at her raising his eyebrow)

Nupur looked at the puri and saw there was a ring inside it..she looked at him with stunned eyes'

Mayank: I want u to accept me in ur life with the same feeling. I want u to be mine happy excited, loved, and be at peace whenever u are with me. I love u Nupur and I really do. I have loved u from the day we became friends. Loved u as a friend and later the love got deeper and deeper. Now when I want u to be with me forever I was scared of loosing u to someone else. I know u will remain within me always but with me also I want to carry u, In my heart I always do, in my arms I want to. In my eyes u are there, in my sight I want u. In my path I meet u every day, in my journey let me walk with u. I love u and will always do. Nupur can we get married and become a couple in love. With so much to share, care and be one forever.. Accept the ring as a token of my love' can u carry it in ur finger and spend the rest of life's journey with someone like me?

Nupur was emotional with his words' there were two most amazing things in front of her and she loved every bit of both. She kept her hands on her face, keeping her excitement to calm and stay. She pulled her hands towards the ring and took it out, she looked at Mayank and with eyes saying.. I LOVE U LOT' she kept the ring aside..and Mayank was wondering what she is doing.. She took the other filled puri and poured some of it in the empty one and now two pani puri's were ready for each one.

Nupur: I never knew I would at last get ur love. I loved u so much that I can't express in words. I wanted to spend my rest of life with u and was wondering how could I see u with someone else.. I wanted u to be happy and always be mine too.. But when I felt u won't be mine , my heart was in pain and heart explained me , let him love anyone his choice don't u mind.. I am glad at last that U love me too..I love u so much that I want to be with u , in ur heart, in ur soul, in ur eyes, in ur sight, in ur arms, in ur path,in ur journey as our life starts' I can't see anyone else to be my special someone, as I can never forget I feel lucky only when I hear U love me and consider me as your special one. I want to carry this ring, wear it, and feel be loved truly and truly Love the one who gave it'

She blushed as she asked him to put the ring in her finger' he held her hand they looked at each other and the slight touch of fingers made them feel too cozy and loved totally. Nupur was shy still looking at him, knowing the smile the happiness on each other faces is something they never had seen or felt. As she wore the ring, he kissed her hand. She wanted to pull her hand away but somewhere down didn't in the end. She loved the kiss on the hand and was too shy too..

she felt it getting into her heart and make her know love is pure. They fed each other the pani puri

and they said. I LOVE U with moist eyes... Mayank was holding her hand and looking into her eyes. She was blushing happy and knew it's the beginning of their journey together.. Mayank was pulled into the party to play the guitar.. Mayank pulled Nupur to sing along..

She sang while he played the guitar, the love was in the air and the fragrance all around.

Nupur singing the song' looked into his eyes.. saying so much and feeling the love through their eyes..

Love Love Love is beautiful,

Pyaar ka har lamha wonderful,

Let's stay together U Me as One,

Ek hokar chalengey har raah mey hum,

We can feel the magic,

pyaar ki hoti hai jo kashish,

With hearts beating for each other,

Dil kehta hai jee uthey tumhe pakar''

All my dreams have come true,

As love has touched me through n through,

Every corner of my heart is lit with bright stars,

It's the fragrance of our love making me feel beautiful throughout,

I truly want to say I love u, more and more every day,

I feel strong and happy, with u beside me along the way'

Love Love is beautiful

Pyaar ka har Lamha wonderful..

Dil ki har tamanna puri aaj hogaii,

Ishq ki sagayee Mohabatt sey hogayee,

Dil key kamrey mey roshni bikhargayee,

Prem key rangoo ki yeh gulabi chaa gayi'

Aaj naachu Aaj gaalu, kehta yeh dil baar baar,

Khushi mey jhum jauuu, tumhari hokar aaj,

Sapney sareey sach huey hai, Tumko pakey Jee uthey hai,

We are there for each other, let's sing this song forever..

Love Love Love is beautiful,

Pyaar ka har lamha wonderful'

To listen to the song check download from this Link but Mayank wasn't ready to play Guitar to someone else voice u see..lol

http://www.easy-share.com/1909826602/LUAM.mp3

*************************Story ends*****************************

I had a great time writing this story and hope u had a good time reading it too. I would like to thank Mahak for making me feel my work is good enough to be read and I would specially like to thank Divya as with her comments on my previous story the whole Pani puri proposal came up into my mind. Thanks to all my readers of my previous ff on MayUr 'Ek dinhi Sahi' and my silent readers as well. Keep smiling and tc.

Bhoomi

Edited by bhoomikauttam - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yipee!

now i am sooooooooooooooo happy!

i came first!

even before u could post the story, i reserved! i am so happy! sooooooooooooooooooo happy!

oh! so they both want to see each other and confirm that they both don't love each other at all!

and i love the use of pics!

oh! toh yeh baat hai! both love each other but think that the other loves another.......i always think that sometimes its only misunderstandings and misconceptions that come in love's way!

i so love ur poetic lines......they always convey the emotions and my heart always feels them!

hoye re! mayank ne aisa kaha? lekin may be he was beyond hurt that he said all that!

thank God that atleast they came to know that gunjan and adhiraj aren't for mayank or nupur!

main toh har faisla dil se leti hoon.......glad that they too did that! atleast they clarified everything.....

mayur bhi na! sirf doosron kwe baare mein sochte hain! khud ka toh koi khyaal hi nahi hai!

the description u gave regarding love was beautiful.....i have no words to describe it......and i always love ur poetic lines in between.....

mayank nows her so beautifully.......he knows what she loves and what she doesn't......i am so happy!

waah waah! kya tareeka hai propose karne ka! di aap itne ache ideas laati kahan se hain? and how can u write such beautiful verses? how can u write such different lines everytime of proposal? i so love it!

sometimes even the slightest touch of someone u love gives u a whole new feeling.........

di i so loved it.......

i loved each and every bit of this story...........i loved each and every verses of this story.......

i so love ur work..........











i want to comment more......but i am falling short of words.

i completely loved the song and ur voice even!

BEAUTIFUL!

i am so happy to be ur frd and also a reader of this story..........

LOVED IT!

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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uff what an ff yaar.....i was so engrosed in it...simply no words..u r such a realistic writer..hats off...
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👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Simply Mind Blowing Awesome No Words To Describe You Describe Very Well How They Think For Each Other They Love Some One Else Sooooo Sweet .... Along He Knows What She Like What Not Wowowow Awesome ...Great Must Say You Know How To Show All Emotions .

Mind Blowing Bhoomi I love The Way He propose her wowow I love it thank you for pm Dear...
You are very Talented writer
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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

yipee!

now i am sooooooooooooooo happy!

i came first!

even before u could post the story, i reserved! i am so happy! sooooooooooooooooooo happy!

oh! so they both want to see each other and confirm that they both don't love each other at all!

and i love the use of pics!

oh! toh yeh baat hai! both love each other but think that the other loves another.......i always think that sometimes its only misunderstandings and misconceptions that come in love's way!

i so love ur poetic lines......they always convey the emotions and my heart always feels them!

hoye re! mayank ne aisa kaha? lekin may be he was beyond hurt that he said all that!

thank God that atleast they came to know that gunjan and adhiraj aren't for mayank or nupur!

main toh har faisla dil se leti hoon.......glad that they too did that! atleast they clarified everything.....

mayur bhi na! sirf doosron kwe baare mein sochte hain! khud ka toh koi khyaal hi nahi hai!

the description u gave regarding love was beautiful.....i have no words to describe it......and i always love ur poetic lines in between.....

mayank nows her so beautifully.......he knows what she loves and what she doesn't......i am so happy!

waah waah! kya tareeka hai propose karne ka! di aap itne ache ideas laati kahan se hain? and how can u write such beautiful verses? how can u write such different lines everytime of proposal? i so love it!

sometimes even the slightest touch of someone u love gives u a whole new feeling.........

di i so loved it.......

i loved each and every bit of this story...........i loved each and every verses of this story.......

i so love ur work..........











i want to comment more......but i am falling short of words.

i completely loved the song and ur voice even!

BEAUTIFUL!

i am so happy to be ur frd and also a reader of this story..........

LOVED IT!

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,
I am very happy dear that you were there when i was posting. I could
in the end get the baner u made and it looks so much nice.. it adds
my feelings to the story as I feel emotions attached to a story are
there in making of the banner and the ending whcih justifies sums up
things. Glad dear i have ur love in the beginning of the story as it
starts:)

I am glad dear that u liked the pics and i just tried little.. many
times i use to edit the snap and add them but now i have become too
lazy to do all that.. so timepass ke liye added to make it look at
them as well..
yes they feel they lost their love and how sad they r and how
gradually they know they were just thinking in too much.. there
wasnt anythign like that..their heart was right..

Awww glad u like my poetic lines.. they are pretty easy to write and
it happens with the flow of the story..
In the end they glarify.. agar chaley jatey to?? we make things look
complex they actually r not.. thats life na.. hehe..
Awww u liked those LOve moments.. the propossign bit..hehe i had
this idea when i read and replied to Divya abotu so many thigns we
like to eat and I felt someone like Nupur who likes all masala chat
and panipuri can be proposed in this style..filmy nahi but still so
much cool.. so must fun.. less serious.. glad u liked that.. ab yeh
sab ideas crop into my head as my readers friends are awesome... :)

glad dear u liked the song.. my nose was working so good that the
song soundeed better i guess..lol.. ahh i am a bad singer..btu i
love to listen and sing for myself.. look here i made u all to
listen such a voice.. actually i wish someone better singer sang.. u
were to sing.. may be next time I will make u ..and also Divya is in
the queue for my playback round.. hope i get ur dates at that time..
:)
aww for me those sweets, flower and the hug..lovely..thank u so mcuh
mahak.. and plzz take good care of urself.. rest relax and keep
smilign always.. it just amazes people around.. tc
Bhoomi
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Originally posted by: achoose

uff what an ff yaar.....i was so engrosed in it...simply no words..u r such a realistic writer..hats off...

Hi,
glad that u liked this ff.. very simple but hope u had a good time
reading it. aww u were engrossed in it..thats a very nice
compliment..i hope i can keep u engrossed in so more of ff..hope
so.. realistic writer..ahhh i wish i do that.. there are some more
thoughts in my mind..still not confident i can carry off them with
start and finsih..thanks for boosting my confidence.. thanks so much
..
tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: monikaseth

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Mind Blowing Bhoomi I love The Way He propose her wowow I love it thank you for pm Dear...
You are very Talented writer
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Hi Monika dear,
I am glad that u liked my work so much..and u are absolutely sweet
heart for me.. I feel so touched u are always there to encoruage me
and thats such a great feeling.. my friend i adore what u feel for
me I can feel the warmth everytime u reply to my work ... be it
story or poem or a entry in a contest.. good to know u enjoyed the
story and liked what evry was happenign in it.. U feel I am talented
writer..I am more than happy to know i have friends who are
genuinely talented but more than that have a heart of gold..luvu
always.. tc Monu,
Bhoomi
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i love it tittle bhoomi
the nore you write bhommi more i love your every work ,thx mahi for making this lovely banner,bhoomi whenever i saw your pm i just want to read as soon as possible........

Pyaar hai aur dard badhta jaa raha hai,

Tum kisi aur ko chahoo yeh manjar dard pahuncha raha hai

wow lovley lines very truely showe the emotion of every person i love these lines........

Shayad kuch duayein haqueeqat nahi ban sakti,

Kuch sapney sach nahi sapnaa hi banker rehti..

i love when sam said he does not need it when maynk is there i love the trust which he has in maynk .........i love it but nups feel said

bhoomi you write everything so perfect every word .
maynk or nupur to kuch or hi soch rahey they,i love it when they both relize it.....
or maynk ka prorpose karne ka style bahut jyda acha tha yaar ,i just love it....
or phir jaisse nups ne blush kiya i love it

lovely one shot ....... or every poetry line too

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wonderful bhoomi !!!
MayUR have their own charm !!
I simply loved it !
The way they were jealous of seeing the other with someoneelse, Nupur's pain on mayank's dreadful words and then the way the misunderstanding was cleared ....superrrbbb !!
And the BESSSHHHHTTTTT of all.... PAANI PURI !!!! 😃 ummmm....I simply love it yaar and now am so much tempted to shut my lappy and first go and have it ! 😆 😆
Wonderful sweetie...
hey...why dont you like something on RN... i mean Rajveer- Naina...I would love it yaar ! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely fic bhoomi but me very angry with u and u know why

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