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Posted: 15 years ago
Press Like Button if you vote for...for this Mayank & Nupur Scene to be sent to Creative Team of Miley Jab Hum Tum and used in their current track(s).


Written By Avani Patel (Sportskp)


Scene shifting to Mayank and Nupur's house (currently Samrat's outhouse) its morning, and Nupur is making toast. Mayank takes a shower and comes out.....Nupur puts the toast on the kitchen table, while she is about to go take a shower, Mayank walking towards the kitchen table grabs her hand. He walks slowly towards her and sweetly gives her a kiss on her cheek. She blush and quickly turns around.....she puts her hand over Mayank and says...abhi tum ko world's best coffee banaani (making) hai...she smiles and touches his cheek and leaves.

He smiles and goes towards the gas and makes the coffee. Nupur comes out and goes towards mayank how is setting up the mugs and suff on the kitchen table. Nupur quietly walks behind him and sprinkles her wet hair on face. He closes his eyes..remember the first time Nupur did that.

(flashback to the Chunky mishra place). The kitchen once again where her hair flows over Mayank's face. His heart skips a beat....while he keeps feeling something for Nupur which attracts him towards her.

(flashback to Chunky mishra place). Mayank on the table staring at Nupur and he keeps eating that mirchi.....while memorized by Nupur.

Coming back Mayank opens his eyes. Nupur smiles and lays her hand on his eyes. She says to him "I love you Mayank, tum humesha asie hi rehna". He smiles and grabs her....sensing where she is. He holds her hand and moves it down slowly. He says, Nupur....mein hamesh tumhara Mayank Shamra rahuga....woh Mayank jo ek pal Nupur ke bak bak door jaata, toh wohi Mayank apni Nupur se door nahi reh sakta.

She holds his towl, which is on his shoulder..and says Mr. Sharma...subha subha itna pyaar...by god...such mein hum yahaan aise rahe toh class kya....excel college bhi entry nahi dega". Mayank says...haan..woh toh hai....and he leaves to get dressed. Nupur finishes up and gets their books ready. While Mayank gets ready with his bag, Nupur asks him from the main hall "Mayank woh shukla sir ka kaun sa book lena hai?"

Mayank worried....goes to Nupur..and quickly says "Akbar ka raj" and says...."Nupur..woh tum ne chapter 5 read kar liya kya? Pata hai na...woh tum ko aaj question kar ne wale the". Nupur smiling says "haan baba....mein ne vividh bharati ke aandaaz mein padh liya. By god Mayank tum na...bhool gaye do mark se mein peech reh gayi tum se".

Mayank replies with big smirk "haan aur Mayank Sharma hamesha ki thara...# 1 pe tha". Nupur as usual makes her nauntaki wala smirk. She brings the bag, says... "mein aayi baal bana ke". He waits at the table so both can have breakfast and leave.

(breakfast)....

Both take their bags and leave.

Scene Shifts outside:

Mayanks runs out after seeing an auto rikshaw. He finds one auto wala, and calls Nupur to hurry up. Both arrive at college, when Mayank is about the pay the auto wala 117 rupees, Nupur say "aare bhaiya ruko, kyun 117 rupees? Aare hum kahan mumbai se morena ja rahe hai?" Mayank tries to cut her..."Nupur..." but Nupur stops Mayank.."nahi mayank parso auto wale ne 90 rupees liya tha. Aur hartal ka season nahi hai...ki rate badha te aaye". Nupur only gives 90 rupees, and auto wala comes out..mere baaki ke. Mayank is about to pay..but Nupur drags him.

Shift to Excel:

Mayank and Nupur enter the college and Mayank tries to explain to Nupur. Nupur says...bas Mayank....tum na...woh auto wala gadha kahin ka....90 rupees liya tha..parso aur abhi 117 rupees...dekho humko bhi kuch savings bhi karni hai. Tum jaante toh ho."

Mayank nods his head...and agrees. He realizes Nupur was really thinking logically once CJ passes by. "good morning guys!!...wah padkoo ko kya hua aaj?" Nupur replies "kuch nahi....sadu chera bana ke paise ke baare mein sooch raha hai". CJ replies "ohh....so aaj padakoo master money management ka course le rahe hai...biwi se?" Nupur nods her head.

CJ tells Nupur to come with her. Both leave..and Mayank is left back thinking..that really was Nupur so right. How did I miss such thing? Taab tak peech se koi haat tap karta hai Mayank ko.

(end of scene)


Edited by sportskp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Will go through tomorrow šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
Avu šŸ¤—
OMG! After today I am a big fan of you and your gallery.
First of all starting with the ads. They were all amazing. Very innovative and creative.😃
Coming to the VMs. WOW! They were simply amazing. All of them. I really love your song selection. It's awesome. I had never heard some of the songs but loved them after seeing your VM on them. The VMs are simply fabulous and really beautiful.😳
You really are a wonderful VM maker. The editing, scene and song selection was perfect.
Beautiful Avani, simply beautiful.šŸ˜
And now for the FF. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.
It was too hilarious, Avu. Simply killing. I still can't stop laughing. But it was cute too. You know it was like the sweet and salty types. Mostly salty. Awesome Avu, awesome. Loved it. Too too hilarious. Great Job. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Continue soon Avani.
It was just too good.
Loads of love,
Daania.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Avu šŸ¤—

OMG! After today I am a big fan of you and your gallery.
First of all starting with the ads. They were all amazing. Very innovative and creative.😃
Coming to the VMs. WOW! They were simply amazing. All of them. I really love your song selection. It's awesome. I had never heard some of the songs but loved them after seeing your VM on them. The VMs are simply fabulous and really beautiful.😳
You really are a wonderful VM maker. The editing, scene and song selection was perfect.
Beautiful Avani, simply beautiful.šŸ˜
And now for the FF. 🤣.
It was too hilarious, Avu. Simply killing. I still can't stop laughing. But it was cute too. You know it was like the sweet and salty types. Mostly salty. Awesome Avu, awesome. Loved it. Too too hilarious. Great Job. 🤣
Continue soon Avani.
It was just too good.
Loads of love,
Daania.



thank you šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— i will surely like give u big jhappi ji ā˜ŗļø thanks for the wonderful inspiring words.

i will post the vm soon and continue my vm "zinda rehti hai mjht ki fan fic" 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago


Previously:

Chiru with MaYur ahmedbad trip leaks out. Samarat-Gunjan get to know of what happened. Meanwhile Nupur is jealous of Mayank taking Sheeeeennna's name. Shukla is lost in gham that mayank bharmachari has become a premi.

Aage:

Shukla contines to talk about akbar when Uday says "sir yeh maine kahin suna haišŸ˜†" Shukla just is confused about the baalakšŸ¤”. Mayank is telling Nupur quietly, "yeh thumara bhai hi hai...koi shaak nahi" in this mast expression ishtyle




Nupur in her witty andaz pinches mayank and says "meri tareef thi ya mirchi wali bhadaas?" He jumps but luckily does say "ouch" as he hold his mouth before a single word could ever utter out.šŸ¤£ā˜ŗļø

Samrat Gunjan looking at MaYur just giggle. Samrat tells Gunjan "tumhe pata hai chashmish...inka pyaar kitna gehra hai. Pyaar kam par dosti zaada rang lati hai." Gunjan smiles and looks at samrat while doing her paper. She tells him "Samrat, dosti ho toh pyaar aur gehra hojata hai. Mayank aur Di ko dekhlo, ya humye."

Samrat quickly looks at Gunjan in shock. He actually felt "ji mein ne suna kya woh...sach suna?". 😳She smiles....but notices Shukla is about to turns towards the class..so she tells Samrat. Paper pe dhyaan do"šŸ˜†

Both continue writing but give each other the cute glances. The bell rings and devar walks in. He takes the paper from SG and tells them good job. You seem have grasped the concept as I see lots of pages. They both thank devdar and leave.

RV is the basketball court and sheena is walking past with Chiru ji.😳 RV notices them and jaan booch ke throws the ball towards sheena and ball hits her. "Ouch" Chiru quickly aids Sheena. He says "kis ullu de phaate ne meri komal sundari ko cheda?"šŸ˜

She looks while RV gives a smirk to her. She says "Bina blind hua tumhe basketball kehla nahi aata?" Chiru too looks at RV. He pulls up his collar and goes towards RV. RV says "bacho ke beech mein nahi aana chaye" Chiru being super chaddi saver🤣 that he is..goes and replies back. "uncle ko beti ko ched na nahi chaye"šŸ˜†

RV pushes chiru "bacho ko uncle se aise baatein karte hai kya?" Sheena comes to pull chiru out, then Rv says "wah kya badhar aur Ms. Ashwairya ka pyaar hai". Sheena fumes and tells Chiru...."maaro chiru ji"

Mayank-Nupur & Samrat-Gunjan left class together late while uday left with benji. As MN & SG walk down they notice the hungama. Mayank says "mental torture ka naam aur nishaan nahi raha. Chiru Mhiru ne usko gold awards se bhi paar kar diya".
Samrat pours out laughing while Nupur & Gunjan make akdu face at the boys for their emitionsal atyachaar at Chiru ji.
🤣🤣
Nupur tells Mayank "aab kya bhasin gayi tail le ne...jaao na" Gunjan tells Mayank & Samrat.. "di sahi bol rahi hai. kucha bada na hojaye". Mayank & Sam go over..and hold RV from the back. Samrat tries to crack a joke Nupur ishtyle "Mere mogamabo kya tum ko yeh namoona mila tha?" Both Mayank & Samrat start laughing 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣🤣

Sheena and Chiru looked shock at SaYak (Sam-Mayank). Nupur laughs hard as It was too funny to see Samrat go like her
🤣 Gunjan is giggling when uday comes behind and scares the gals. He says "Gunjan kya hua?" Gunjan looks at Nups. Both just laugh.

Samrat & Mayank send chiru off, while they wink at him (giving hint to leave). Sheena pulls chiru out.....lets leave chiru ji. "hum ko practice kar na hai Talent Parade ke liye". RV says to SaYank, thanks but No Thanks. Mein aapna khud defend kar sakta hoon. SaYank says...."Hum tumhe nahi...aas paas ke Excel praani ko bacha rahe the jo tumhare atyachaar se dhukhi aatma ban gaye the".

Boys leave with the gals and Uday. Uday says...on his way out, that mein benji ko dena bhool gaya kuch. he leaves and says he will come back with Benji. SG and MN decide to go practice as the competition is near & this time princi said something different will happen @ Excel.

(In practice rooms the couples start)

***Song is featuring - ~ I hate luv stories~ - Title track***

Mayank starts off, and goes to nupur. he holds her waist and pull her towards him. He twirls her and practice (twirl practice). Samrat on the hold hand lifts up gunjan (lift practice)

imagine on the following vm by our fellow MJHTian
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=65mFeU9S58A




Precap:



princi & Devdar announce TP being hosted at Excel.
Shilpa Aunty with Mayank Nupur having fun.
Samrat Gunjan go at the beach




Guys I am working on a VM coming very soon 4 ya all. Its special for me as I want the passionate love story of Mayank Nupur to be shown through my eyes. I hope I can give the justice it deserves.

Love
Avani
Edited by sportskp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Beautiful VM avani...purani yaadein taza kar di....

beautiful song and choice of scenes...keep it up.šŸ‘
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update avani and the vm was awesome ...............the scenes used were too beautiful .................and the editing was superb ...............loved the vm lots ..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
aww...avani..
d ads... very really fantastic...
just luvd dem 2 d core..
luv ya..
-supriya..
(will watch d vms soon)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Beautiful Avu, it brought back beautiful memories.šŸ˜

It really was amazing. The editing and scene selection was brilliant.

And of course the song was awesome.
And the FF update , was just brilliant 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
šŸ¤— thank you so much!!! i am on the ground fainting Gagan said she loved it šŸ˜ ā˜ŗļø


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