prida: happily ever after (COMPLETED)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi guys! i am quiet new to this forum. After reading the wonderful scenes you right here i was really inspired so thought to write one. This is my first time writing anything so please ignore my mistakes😳.

HAPPILY EVERAFTER



scene begins

Damini is in her room standing in front of her dressing table brushing her hair.Prithvi comes out of the bathroom after taking a bath and hugs her from behind. she moves towards him and prithvi tucks a strand of hair behind her ear.she smiles and pri's hand moves from her waist to her back. damini's hand is on his biceps. they both are looking straight into eachothers eyes. pri moves forward leaving inches between them. pri finaly decides to end the distance betwen their lips and when they are about to meet some knocks at the door.

KNOCK.. KNOCK

prithvi looks at damini helplessly and she laughs saying go and open the door. he opens the door and roshni comes in. sameer and avni who are passing by their room also come in.
roshni to pri: i will sleep with damini di today
pri: but why
rosh: jeej you know that i am afraid of dark
pri: yes
rosh: last night i saw a horror movie with goldie. i slept alone cause i didn't wanted to disturb you guys as the movie ended very late. but in the mid night i woke and got scared of my own teddy. it was looking horrible in the dark.
avni: what
sam: you want to sleep with damini bhabhi cause know you afraid of your own teddy
rosh: no sam jeej the first after wakening up in the morning i did was that i threw the teddy out of my room's window.
pri: then why do you want to sleep with her
rosh: i am scared. i want to sleep with her and its been a very long time since i slept with her. she says this while looking at damini and giving her million dollar smile. damz melted at once and said ok. while pri looks at her with a puupy dog look and she gives a micheaviouse smile to him.
avni: why dont i also join you.
rosh: wow that's a nice idea we will spend night together enjoying just like old days
sam: what no
avni: shutup sameer we are sleeping togehter and that's done
sam: fine whatever i am going to sleep
prithvi and varun also go to sleep in varun's room.
the next morning all the three boys hear the girls screaming. they rush to their room and see that the girls are jumping on the bed and screaming.
pri; kyu hua hai tum log subha subha kyun cila rahi ho
dam: pri woh aaaaahhhh utaro ise utaro ise
avni and rosh: di on your back
pri: damini stand still and i will take it off
dam: avni now its on you
avni; sam ahhh.... utaro ise utaro ise
rosh: di stay away from me
avni throws it away from her hand and it falls on the bed. but before pri could catch him he runs towards damini
dam: pri save me
she loses her balance and falls but pri catched her on time. then he moves towards rosh who also loses her balance and varun catches her. before he could aim towards avni sam catches him
sam: kise gift karun
dam and avni: throw it away
sam: nahin main toh is coackroach ko damini bhabhi ko gift karun ga
damz: nahin
pri hardly controling his laughter: barhar phenco ise
then sam esorts him outside and the girls come back to their senses while the boys start laughing.
to be continued...
Edited by damini_23 - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@damini_23

OMG that was HILARIOUS .. so glad I came to the forum in my break at work..

ur FF brightened my mood .. cockroach .. haila.. never imagined damziee to be scared of it .. hahaha

Rosh being scared of her own teddy .. 😆 .. i am also not a fan of any such things in my room.. reminds me of some horror movie seen ages ago ... poor teddy gets thrown out.. awesome...hahaha


You have to continue dear..

loved reading this ...glad prida inspired you to write .. 😃

-- Mru
Edited by Mru_bee - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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glad Mru_bee you liked my post. i was really nervous about posting it.
thanks for liking it.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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@damini_23...
Hey...welcome dear to the world of Prida. whats your name btw...if you dont mind.
This is your 1st FF!!!! it was very good...very very funny...totally enjoyed it. The conversation between Sam, Pri & the 3 sisters were soo funny. Poor Pri..didnt get his kiss😭.
Cockroach...and song & dance around that...haaa haa😆😆😆😉.
You must continue...but 1 condition...you have to update fast.😆 .I am very impatient & greedy when it comes to PriDa FFs😳😃.
@ Mru..lunch break eh??😉
Khushi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jakhushi

@damini_23...

Hey...welcome dear to the world of Prida. whats your name btw...if you dont mind.
This is your 1st FF!!!! it was very good...very very funny...totally enjoyed it. The conversation between Sam, Pri & the 3 sisters were soo funny. Poor Pri..didnt get his kiss😭.
Cockroach...and song & dance around that...haaa haa😉.
You must continue...but 1 condition...you have to update fast.😆 .I am very impatient & greedy when it comes to PriDa FFs😳😃.
@ Mru..lunch break eh??😉
Khushi.



haha. Khushi.. are u dhamkofying her now?? hahaha...@damini_23.. now you are in for her pestering.. for updates ..hehehe

kya..lunch.. nahi rey.. i was just tired .. was working thro lunch ..

-- Mru
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Posted: 16 years ago
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totallly rocking parttttttttttttt
continuo it
love to read it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ITS AWESOMEEEE....PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh and can u please om me when u update???
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ufff sry for the typio i meant PM me...Thanks :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oooooo now even i can't sleep alone anymore, ghosts and cockroaches. but still i will be able to manage if you keep on write soon and long parts, coz that will let me have some prida dreams.
loved this part from top to toe
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, lovely work....cant wait 2 read ur nxt update..!!!.........gosh, even i hate cockroaches..., luv horror movies though😉

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