Not a fairytale(SAJAN FF)update pg 18

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hey all, My new Sajan FF
Not a long FF
Characters
nicks- dimi- dia
sam-samrat
mac-mayank
ben-benji
UD-Uday


NOT A FAIRYTALE
These are my own characters i juz named the fic as MJHT ff so tht u can relate to features and kinda will be easy to imagine them. So the story revolves around a gang ..more precisely a punk gang! they have their rules their style their attitude and...read on!

"Come on come on move fast! cant u see he's in pain!!" Ben screamed at the clerk who was pushing the stretcher.

"ben.." sam said in pain.
"you shut up sam, man am gonna kill him, u knw RV did that on purpose dont you?" UD said menacingly.
"Guys!" dimi screeched "this is not the time, sam is hurt we need a doctor first"
"excuse me! wats happening?" Dr. Armaan came rushing halting the clerk with the stretcher there.
"sam is hurt!" Ben screamed at armaan in anger "we need a doc!"
"oke can u please keep it low..this is a hospital!"
"m sorry on his behalf" dimi interrupted, she was dressed in her cheerleading dress."there was a basketball match going on, our friend is seriously injured."
Armaan turned to sam who groaned in the stretcher.
"Quick this way!"armaan led the group to a private ward, where sam was immediately admitted.
Dimi, Ben and UD waited outside for the doctor to come out.
the door opened, "nurse make sure you get the reports immediately" the nurse rushed off with few folders and samples in her hand.
"wats happened?" dimi asked.
"relax guys, i want to know how he was hurt"
"the game was played in a filthy manner!" dimi said disgusted.
"the rules werent followed" UD continued "one of the guys from the other team hit him right at the chest, we didnt realise it was serious as he continued playing...later when he aimed for the basket the captain of the other team pushed him and he felt quite badly to the otherside of the court, he hit his head then...ya so how bad is it?"
"well i guess he sprained his leg, his head injury is not that bad..hes not having a concussion either, its just a bruise little bleeding, the problem is his chest and shoulder guess its a muscle pull i mean a serious one, but dont worry he will be fine"
"oke" ben said "we got scared"
"he isnt, he wants to meet you guys he said a few names"
"whose?" UD asked.
"UD ofcoz ours" dimi rolled her eyes.
"ben mac i cant recall..well i guess its you guys" armaan replied.
"ohh well mac will be here in a while we just called him, thank u, doctor..?"
"doctor armaan" dimi smiled reading his name in his id card.
"mention not guys its my duty, so u all are college students?"
"no" UD said "m UD by the way and we all play in a basketball team in private clubs u see"
"ohh"
"ya we are post grads..."
"oke thts gr8 i must say none of u look like..i mean u all look so young"
all three of them grinned. "just the way we carry oursleves" ben smirked.
"oke i will join you guys later i have to go on my rounds" armaan left.
"aww isnt he cute?" dimi gushed.
"right!" ben rolled his eyes "did u see him he looked like a person tired of his life"
"hmmm you are quite right, he looked quite depressed but his tattoo was so cool and hot"
dimi, ben and UD entered sam's room.
sam looked up "hey guys!"
"man wats happened to ur voice" UD made a face.
"really my voice has changed?" sam asked dubiously.
"yeah u sound weak" dimi said quietly.
"geez guys! m so not weak" just then he groaned as he had attempted to get up.
"dude just lie down oke" ben said.
"cool room, u have got a view of the beach thru ur window" dimi murmured.
"yup dimi but i hardly care about that i wanna get out of here as soon as possible!"
the door opened as a young girl entered.She wore pencil jeans and a cute pink top over which she wore her white coat.
"hello" she greeted cheerfully.
"hii" sam greeted back
"m naina"
"naina nice name"
"well i want you to fill up these forms"
"whats it?" ben got up and took the papers.
"nothing much, its about his food and diet for the time being"
"ohh oke"
"ya so fill this form and submit it at the corner of this corridor...u guys must have noticed theres a geeky kinda lady at the front"
UD laughed.
"m sorry actually m new here..m i doing a bad job?"
"no" sam replied smiling.
"thnx and get well soon" with that naina exited.
"now thts wat i call a nice view" sam smirked at UD and Ben who returned equally.


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so thts the first part...u guys liked it? post in ur views whether i should continue it or not...
Edited by samrat_anki - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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GREAT PART THANKS FOR PM
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firstly congo for ur new ff!!!

awesome start...
bt u hurt sam in d begining itself
nyways...cont soon..
thanx for d pm.
Edited by charmee_sammy - 16 years ago
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good one contd........... and PM me
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Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

good one contd........... and PM me



ya..will pm u..thanks alot
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and please don't forget to pm me
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Originally posted by: princess_amira

nice ff, please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



thanks alot....will pm u
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Originally posted by: charmee_sammy

firstly congo for ur new ff!!!

awesome start...
bt u hurt sam in d begining itself
nyways...cont soon..
thanx for d pm.



thanks charu...
Edited by samrat_anki - 16 years ago
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grr88888 start dear...
luved it...
ye kya... sam ko starting mein hi hospital bhej diya.?? 😲
anyways.. cont soon..
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

grr88888 start dear...
luved it...
ye kya... sam ko starting mein hi hospital bhej diya.?? 😲
anyways.. cont soon..



aaree.....kya karu...bas aise hi..aaaye dekho hota hai kya..
thanks...

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