KOI MIL HI GAYA -prida FF.. CHAP- 5, Pg- 14 ! - Page 9

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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
nw again................ i dnt hv enuf wrds 2 THNK U ALL DEARssss 4 such cutey sweety cmmnts.... so me sending tons of hugs 4 all those who read , liked n n tuk grt pains 2 cmmnt ... THNK U ALL SOOOOO MUCH !

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sry wil gv individual replies nxt tym... bt all ur cmmnts r treasured... 😳

okies.. nw im rdy wth a lame update... dnt xpct anythng gud in it... had this writtn 4 a very long tym nw.. n was adding few lines evryday.. wasnt in a situ 2 write at a stretch... n so im cmpletely undrstnd if u dnt find anythng interestn in it.. coz i myslf didnt ! šŸ˜•

n dats d reason 4 this awful delay... really sry 4 dat...😳

the name is changed 2 "KOI MIL HI GAYA.." 4m 2day onwrds as indicated b4... 😳

-luv Niki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Jus wen evrthng seemed fyn..suddenly Pri's arms were occupied yet again…. Nly dat this tym she had lost her conciousness fully…….



CHAPTER - 4

It tuk pri n d rest arnd hm 2 realise wat actually hapnd… he tried calling her… bt er… he dint knw her name… then sm1 4m d crwd hlpd hm wth her name… it was minnie… jealousy clearly written on her face… she said… "she is Damini…err... Damini Sharma…" she said wth spite.. Jus wen pri was abt 2 kal dat name… smbdy kpt a hand on his shoulders… he trned 2 see dat it was his dad.. He dispersed of the crowd sayn dat he was sry 4 the incovinience caused n they shud all go bk 2 enjoyn d party as she needs sm fresh air ..sayn so the crwd dispersed all muttering smdng undr their breaths… he then cntinued 2 pri.." beta , I thnk u betr drop her 2 her house..dnt thnk she wil gain consciousness nw.. Sayn he trailed off.." Pri a bit embarrased as to wat his dad mite b thnkn of this gal who was in his arms unconscious… smhw he dint want his dad 2 thnk bad abt this gal… he tried 2 say smdng in her defense .. n said.." dad I thnk its 1st tym she has drunk… guess d poor gal was very upset abt smdng… must b dat guy..n trailed off"[he said the last wrds wth utter despise seeping thru his wrds… he dint knw why.. Bt jus d thot of dat prsn who made the lady upst was gettn on his nerves… 4 dat his dad calmly said… " hmmm… u jus drop Damini hm n cm… need 2 talk 2 u…" Pri was a lil astonished n cnfused at his dads behaviour … n seeing his cnfused luk his dad tld hm… jus go strait 4m here… till u find a circle.. 4m there take a lft.. N its 3rd house on the right side… the Brindavan Mansion.. N sayn so he lft 2 attend 2 the rest of the guests wthout further cmmnts…

p'ri stil cnfused as 2 wat was happeng arnd him 2day ..he wasn't even in a state 2 ponder ovr dat..esp wen a enigmatic lady was lying unconscious in his very arms.. He then gently carried her thru the side exit 2 his car… jus wen he was carrying her he realised.. She was mumbling smdng… n had drifted in to a deep slumber… n no...he also dint fail 2 acknowledge da fact… dat she lukd er… almost out of this wrld..as if dat was a bad thing 2 be….hmmm... This was his way of sayn.. She lukd Divine… beautiful esp wth dat gentle moonlite making her face glow gracefully…. "Bt hello ! It is Pri khanna v r talking abt here !".. He thot ! " hey I nvr like gals ! Wats wrng wth me 2day ?! O yeah ! Blame it on dat spiked juice ! Must b dat evil minie's deeds !" a mock anger shwng up on his face jus wth d thot of d gal who spoilt d image of his fav minnie mouse ! …so thinking crazyily he gently placed her in d back seat of his merc n drove off.. His eyes stealing a few glances of d new sm1 in d backseat evry nw n thn.. unknowingly….


Her hair had fallen all ovr her face… sm weird thots wer gng 2 creep into his mind ……jus wen he had subconsciously stopped his wheels in 4nt of a sprawling mansion.. BRINDAVAN ,read a name plate…

He askd d security 2 let hm in sayn dat damini was wth him,.nt feeling well n he had cm 2 drop her.. N aslo askd who else was at hm .. D sec personnel infrmd him dat his boss n mam were out n dat her sis ,avni..was at hm..he thnkd hm n drove in.. Until a gal in her early twenties wearng a simple indian outfit hurriedly opened d door as is she knew they were cmng… she came runing 2wrds d car.. Bt seeing hm, her face fel as if she was expcting sm1 else.. Whm he guessed was damini.. So he said .." I think d person whm u r expcting is on d back seat… Miss. Ahh...Avni sharma.." he tld hesitantly… she gv hm a worried luk n went on 2 open d back door 2 find 2 her horror damini lying thr unconscious.. Tears almost filling her eyes..wen pri who was by nw standng bhind her said gently.." she had a lil 2 much drnks 2nite.. Bt dnt wry.. She is fyn nw.. She is jus asleep ".. Hearng his voice, she trned 2 meet his eyes.. He was having a cncrned face… n her eyes shwd gratitude… she then bent 2 caress her sis face..n again trning 2 luk at hm, n he wthot sayn anythng offered 2 carry damni 2 her rum..

He laid her on her bed ,wen again he noticed those few strnds of her hair falling onto 2 her face… he was ovrcm by a sudden urge 2 move it off her face… bt avni's voice broke his trance.." Thnk u so much 4 this help… MR.." " Prithvi khanna.. U may cal me dat..n its no big deal.. Was my duty as a host " he tld graciously… " u r jus being humble nw.." she said n smiled… n then introduced herslf as Avni Malhotra… he wnderd 4 a mmnt abt d dfrnt surname.. Bt then thot its none of his business n bidding her gudbye n tk their leave.. Nt b4 he had a silent glance 2wrds d lady who came as a whirlwind into his life 2day.. Taking him onto unknwn paths he has nvr treaded b4…n he cudnt resist adding..even though he knew cmpletely well dat it wud sound inappropriate…" take care of her.. She seemed very upset."n trailed of…

Even though he dnt want 2 return back 2 dat lame party… he knew he had 2… his dad was thr..n he wantd 2 talk 2 hm… he was wndrng wat cud it b about…

At the party he managed 2 sneak near his dad wthout gaining much attention of others.. His dad on seeing hm askd.."hw is she nw? Did u tk her safely hm ?" ..he smiled seeing his dads cncrn n replied.."yes dad she is fyn.. I dropped her safely n her sister was thr,avni..im sure she wud tk gud care of her… u tld u wantd 2 talk 2 me smdng…" 4 dat he replied.."nt nw.. Lets go hm n talk ..i thnk anodr half an hr n we wind d party…im nt intending 2 stretch it till midnight as u younsters do.." he said smiling meaningfully at pri.. Who had a sheepish smile..

Back at the KHANNA MANSION :


"pri do u knw who she was ?" his dad askd hm..

" yeah dad.. Miss. Damini sharma.. Sm1 tld me dat in d party 2nite.."

" she was drunk badly ?"

Smdng in his hrt felt bad dat… he dint want his dad 2 thnk bad abt dat lady… n 4 sm reason beyond his cmprehension he felt the need 2 defnd her image..

"no dad… guess she wasn't used 2 drinkng.. N guess smdng went wrng 2day ,dats why…." smhw evn though he felt his wrds repetitive… he jus needed 2 say dat...

B4 he cud cmplete his sntence… his dad replied wth an amused smile playing on his lips… " pri… I knw she is a nice gal… I can nvr evr possibly thnk bad of her…"

Pri suddenly was taken aback wth dat answer… 1st bcz he dint realise he was defnding dat lady… or the mre embarassing fact dat his dad had caut his weird cncrn for her.. N the mre amusing part was hw on the world did he, his dad knw her n hw was he so cnfident abt her character ?!... Jus wen his dad undrstd his reacns n was gng 2 answer hm.. Mrs. Khanna senior enterd the rum casually…….


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okies this is 4 ma Mrujeeeeeeee n soni sweetu... see.. nw dnt blame me 4 d update.. hehehe.. u bth nly were askn 4 it ! šŸ˜† šŸ˜†šŸ˜†..abb bugatho ! hehehehe šŸ˜† šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†


- lUV nIKI 😃😃



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Posted: 16 years ago
#83
yayy you updated !
Believe it or not Niksyy ... I was jst thinking of you and your ff !!
Wohoo ... will come back soon !
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
now this is not something i had expected from you.
you could have made it twice the size.
but well you have your work and i understand
BUT PLEASE CONTINUE SOOON.
i loved every bit of it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#85
i will not blame u for small update bc i know that u r busy
thanks niki for updating
u r wonderful wonderful writeršŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
gr8 part dear but toooo short cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#87
finally an update from u NIKI šŸ‘šŸ¼ good one! hope his father drops another bombshell in the next update... update soon... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88
Hi nikkišŸ¤—I had given up hope u updating ur FFšŸ˜†But glad to see u did.Loved it and really liked the way pri was defending damz in front of his father but was feeling embarassed about it:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#89
niki hw r u dear ?
thank u soooooooo much dear 4 updating eventhough u r busy.loved it..........pri defending damz infront of his father............taking care of her.........dropping her home safely.............telling avni 2 take care of her........
plz update if u have time.will wait 4 it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
man did i miss it.....sry yaar....but now caught hold of it

fab ff it is yaar......cn u add me 2 ur pm list pls????

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