KOI MIL HI GAYA -prida FF.. CHAP- 5, Pg- 14 !

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Posted: 16 years ago
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haiya dearys !! 🤗

well soni sweetu was askn me 2 write a scene... [ yaaa even aftr knwng dat i cant write a wrd proprly ! heheheee 😆]... So i was racking ma brains 4m ystrday 2 thnk upon a stryline.. n this is wat i had ended up wth.. well hopefully i wil cmplete this.. ! u see im a cmpletely Lazzzzzzzzzzzy personality sittn here !! so wil update wenevr possible ..so plzz dnt thrw joothe at me ..! 😕 😆
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bt b4 all that.. i want u all 2 plz read da 1st part n plz say me wetr i shud cntinue wth dis nnsense or not ! By da way read at ur own risk.. cz at da end u mite hv feel u jus wasted few valuable mins of urs ! ooopsie..dats scary ! 😕 😆😆

n yaa nw wth da DISCLAIMER .. well.. u thnk why im putting this up ??! hmmm.. well u wil knw as u read da stry..! 😉


DISCLAIMER : This is prurely FICTIONAL story .. no resemblance intended 2 any real person or incident at all n evry character mentioned here is fictional ! NO TRUTH n NO OFFENCE INTENDED 2 anyone ! 😳


CHAPTER -1 [ introduction]

It's a prty.. a business party ..on a beautiful evening..was arnd 7 pm... the hotel room was bustling wth guests ..all men dressed in stylish business suits n da ladies in elegegant n some in sensous evening wears enjoying away da evening... BT smwer in a corner sat sm1 who was least interested in all da hustle ..bustle arnd..all the happenings were so mindless to dat soul thr.. who sat thnkn wat all this fuss was abt.. He was clad in a complete black blazer n shirt sipping a drink ,sitting in a corner wnderng why all da gals r so mindless ? they were r literally drooling ovr hm n he paid no heed 2 them... in fact his face had an amused smile thnkn hw those gals chased hm even aftr he blatantly snubbed them off.. he sat thnkn.." ok.. I knw im gud lukn.. bt dat doesn't mean they keep buggn me like this ...dnt these gals hv any job other than dressing n hitting on boys ?! I really wndr wat any1 of them mite b doing in a business wrld ! no seriously ..certain thngs r jus cut out 4 men ! "

And dat was.... Mr.Prithvi Khanna..son of Mr.Balraj khanna.. They had recently relocated 4m London bk to Mumbai where his dad had initially startd da business' In London..their brand name was smthng 2 reckon upon as one of the best in da textile world..

Mrs. Khanna was a homemaker.. a lady wth a sweet persona , very amicable , emotional n a dotting mother 2 their only son Prithvi ..whm she called " baccha" ..! Mr. Khanna ..on da other hand was a very practical person.. he was more like a frend 2 his son.. he allowed Pri da freedom 2 choose evrythng ..well almost evrythng .... xcpt his career..

Nw cmng 2 Prithvi Khanna.. smart ,handsome.. well educated.. had done his Masters in Business 4m top business school in Uk..interested in adventure sports..especially bunjee jumping n horse riding..n has a secret passion 4 singing.. n plays da guitar n violin jus too well ..had always wanted 2 create a band n bcm a professional singer' bt was sucked into da business world due his fathers wishes.. actually was kinda emotional back mail sort of thing ,sayn he was da only son n sm1 had 2 tk up da business dat his father so hard-wrkngly created.. well he luvd his dad n there was nthng he cudnt do 4 him..even if it meant foregoing his dreams.. He was his mom's pet,dad's best friend n a loyal frend 4 all his dearest frens , sameer, roshini n varun.. He was a MCP.. bt dat dint mean he dint respect women.. he loved his mom , frns n all da ppl he felt who deserved respect..like Mother Teresa ...! Bt he felt dat certain thngs were cut out 4 men n certain thngs 4 women.. n wat he hated most da those type of gals who dressed 2 impress guys n nthng else.. well dat included evry othr gal whm he dint consider his frend or sister.. in shrt'he had no ideas 2 get married !

N 2day it was a home coming party ..umm literally ... a home coming 4 his parents.. well Pri wasn't quite interested 2 relocate coz all his frens circle was in London.. bt he did luv his mother country still ... so was trying 2 fit in.. bt da worst of his fears were dat.. wen he was thr he need 2 meet nly a few gals nw n then whom his mom wud smhw saying sm excuse wud set up a meeting wth him ,so dat he wud like her n agree 4 mrg.. bt here.. OMG ! he wud hv 2 meet God knws hundreds of gals ??! Uff.. da mere thot made him feel suffocated !



Dats all 4 2day dears.. do say me wetr u thnk its wrth cntinuing or not..😳 will update a bit later this week, if u want me to..😳

PS : oops 4gt 2 add.. plz do suggest sm title 4 it ! im very bad at writng u c ! so plz do suggest smthng.. i wil choose da 1 wch suits da best 2 da story wat i hv thot of in ma mind ... thnk u..😃

-luv niki..😊


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chapter -2 : pg -5

chapter -3 : pg -8

chapter -4 : pg -11

chapter -5 : pg -14

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Sonikins thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh jano sweeto hug u lots of kissess for u dear 🤗
coming up to story first csene cracked me dear so Awesome story line true mazza aa gya how can i say thankiee dear and plz don't say u can't write it is awesome start i m eagerly waiting to read it
hug u again 🤗
Edited by pridafan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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are you freaking kidding me.. .Niki....

You HAVE HAVE HAVE to continue... itna chotta piece... no fair...hmph....hahaha

Haila Pri toh master of all hai....hahahha...

I like the KUS angle ...now waiting for the SAB angle ,,, which i can guess is coming soonnnnn..

update soon... nahi toh mein PM pey PM karti jaoongi...😈

-- Mru
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haila ... Niki and short story ....taaaliyann!!
I'm back ! Soni, I gotta give you a hug for pressing Niksy to do this !
I loved loved loved it ... Loved the intro to the story !
You seriously rock Niksy ! 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
Just as Mru said , I loved the way you merged KUS and Kingie to one hawt Prithvi Khanna ! 😳 😳 😳 😳
Rach
Edited by rachel.fds - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ soni sweeto n mru jee :

Haila !! itni jaldi reply ????????! 😃 hehhee..

A BIG THNK UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU !! 😳


@ soni : awwwwww hugs n kisse 2 u 2 dear ! see i kpt ma promise ! tumne kaha aur hum nahi karein ?! yeh ho hi nahi saktha !n this is 4 yaa dear!!🤗


@ mru jeeeeeeeeeeeee !! 🤗
arrey sadda pri hai na ! usse tho all rounder banna HI GOGAAAAA !! hehhee😉... yup SAB kuch aayega ! intezaar kijiye mrujeeeeeeee !! hehhee.. jaise hamesha kehthi hoon.. INTEZAAR KA PHAL PRIDA HOTA HAI !! 😉 😆...





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Posted: 16 years ago
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That was great Niki, you should continue.
Prithvi Khanna MCP -wow.....
Waiting for the girl who would sweep our MCP off his feet 😃
Sonikins thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh my janoo niki thankie and next time don't say u can't write u impressed me dear already
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Niki ji chuppi rustom. Seriously love the part, plz continue we wanna see 1st meeting of PriDa. Anyways when you are going to introduce Damz?
Muniza
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Niksy, updated my comment !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Rachhhy huny ! thnk u soo much deary ! 🤗🤗🤗
glad u like it ! hmmm smhw was so impressed wth KUS .. so had 2 put it up smhw .. so thot why nt make 1 chracter myslf..! 😉 hehehee

@achu : THNK u dear ! yaa MCP pri... I mean dats wat i liked da most of pri in da 1st scene i saw in da whole shw ! his ATTITUDE !! man he was such a ATTITUDE DUDE ! n i was bowled ! so wantd 2 brng da gud ol' prida bk.. wel atleast in da beginning.. hmmm wel abt da gal?! she wil arrive soon !!

@ Muniza : awww.. thnk u sooooooo much ! .. DAmz wil arrive in da nxt part.. wil do by da end of this week ...😳


@ soni swts : thnk u huny !
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