Hum dil dechuke new change in story Page1 -2

CONTEST : IPL 2026 Prediction Game

Page

Next Last

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey guys it wont be as sad as hum dil dechuke,,,,and would be totally different😛 coz of prasha

Characters:

shashank... Older son of Manhotra's😆😆

Mrs.Manhotra......Shashanks mom

Mr.Manhotra.......Shashanks dad.

shashanks didi

shashanks sister....anchal

shashanks cousin ...raj

Rai's

Araina...the real daughter of the house

prateeksha...first cousin of araina..lost her parents..

Bua..Araian's and prateeksha's dad's sisters

Mr.RAI:Prateeksha's dad's older bro

Mrs rai...araina's mom and very loving towards prateeksha too.

Milland....araina's older brother but consider both prateeksha and araina as his sisters...he is little protective and strict about his sisters helping in his dads business.

sujoy...Araina's younger brother...character like preet from KDMHMD.

Raunak:A very intelligent self made Chartered accountant...milland doesnt like him from college days..😆😆.

raunaks aunt:he was raised by his mom's sister ....

Edited by rose1982 - 16 years ago

Quote

Frequent Posters

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Scene 1:

Shashank comes back from London..His parents and whol family comes...they have big party next day and his dad announces that he is going to be new MD...Raj and shashank are buddies...raj has no interest in business and he wants to go for further studies...shashank is well respected and is very reposible and cares for his sisters...

Manhotra's are having huge celebration..Anchall has invited her friends and jokes arounds shashank

bhayia...No we need another announcement...Im waiting for that one....come on ,lots of pretty girls around...aap kahin tu apni doost say baat karo....shashank laughts at her and ignores her...and says this is mom and dad's job.

Anchaal :Bhaiya app nahi badley gay....

Scene 2:

Mr.rai tells everyone that everyone is invited tonight ...Mrs.rai says but where...he syas dont ask...just get ready..milland and sujoy an't home but prateeksha and araina get ready...

Prateeksha is wearing something green and araina something pink...

They both come to the party...and Mrs.rai gets big shock of her life...coz she finds out rai's eventually the family who raised her....she is schoked and hugs shashanks dadi...and ask them what happened and how that terrible accident of Mrs.rai seperated them..they share their moments....

araina and prateeksha are looking very pretty as usual....araina meets Mrs.manhotra...and Mr.Manhotra and Mrs.mahotra....look at each other...as they are saying something

Scene 3:

Anchaal happens to know prateeksha as she heard he sininging one time....and she convinces prateeksha to sing...and the family conivnces them too

Prateeksha starts singing and everyone including shashanka and Raj are there ..they all admire her...she gets to talk with raj who is continously following her...and staing at her...anchaal caught him and asked hmmm

lagta hai bhaiya app ko kuch kuch ho raha hai...

raj tells her kuch to howa hai.....

Prateeksha feels consious abotu raj staring at her.....

Scene 3:

Mrs.Manhotra talks to Mr.Manhotra about araiana rai....Mr.manhotra says that Mrs.rai was raised with them and im sure they wont say No/...and araina seems to be nice girl fo shashank...shanshank walks in and they ask him about araina he is shcoked...and he said ...he doesnt care because he trusts his mom and dad's judgement and his dad reminds him of a pomise that he is gonna pick a bride fo rhim and they share some momments...

Scene 4:

Raj cant get over prateeksha..and is thinking how to connect with he again..he talks to anchaal...Anchaal thinks she would invite pateeksha and araina and that way he cant meet prateeksha...

Next day prateeksha and araina comes...araina suddenly needs to go somewhere...and cnat get hold of drive..shashank offers he ride...parents are happy....Raj flerts with prateeksha ...and pateeksha gets confused..raj thinks before he goes to London...he will express his feelings to prateeksha...

Next day

Mr and Mrs.manhotra goes to rai house and rai''s are confused...that why they are brining so many sweets and things.....bua gets suspicious she talks to Mrs.rai that it has to do something with rishta..maybe their son shashank...

Mr.manhotra is open minded...he gets emotional seeing mrs.rai and tell her how...he thinks her daughter is exact picture of her and how they think she would be suitable match for shashank.....M.rai gets confused but then he says that shashank and araina should spend some time together they agree on that.....

they have dinner..shashank asks araina some questions...that night araina and her mom has meeting she tells her about wat shashanks daadi and parivaar did for her...that how she was an orphan and how she got adopted,...and all that....

Mr rai has meeting with manhotra's and shashank is delivering presentation..Mr.rai gets impressed....

Rai and manhotra family goes to a tip together...araina sees how shashank is helping and compassionate towards poor....raj tells prateeksha how he loved her at first sight....she gets confused and leaves...,..

prateeksha and araina are having conversation.....prateeksha tells araina that the only person she loves the most in this world is araina and she can give her life for her....they share sisterly moment...araina thinks of shashank saying that how he can give his life for his family and his sisters....she thinks shashank and prateeksha have same nature...

Next day

Araina says yes to her mom and dad for shashank...she goes back to her room and breaks down....she has flashbacks of raunak...whom she always loved...and he never loved her...he came closer to her but would always go away...

Araina's past:

{Araina has a past with raunak whee raunak was friends with milland but would come home very much.....he immediately fell in love with araina but then he and milland had a fight over a girl who liked raunak as well....raunak never liked he but milland did....

raunak was still meeting araina and explained her things...one day milland saw them sharing intimate moments and he draged araina nad insulted raunak based on his social status and called him a flert.....he told araina that she would never marry a guy like raunak...he uses girls....raunak was sad....he still couldnt keep himself away from araina and would see her everyday leaving or going somewhere....araina confessed her love to raunak and they decided to fight for their love...Milland gives some money to a girl to pretend as raunak exwife with a kid....and araina gets to know about it...she beaks down...raunak tries to explain but she doesnt listen...he says their love is pure and he cnat think of cheating her....and araina says from now onwards whenever she will see this moon ,she will remember of his unfaithfulness and she would never be able to love someone becoz love has lost meaning in her life....}

manhotra;s get to know baout araina;s YES...and they come and decide about engagement date....araina is still sad .,..prateeksha asked her what happened ano d she needs to forget her past and move on..she tells prateeksha that she would try he best to fufill duties of good wife but she cant love shashank,...love for her has lost meanings...prateeksha gets sad..raj comes to prateeksha;s room and prateeksha is shocked...he says wat do u think of two sisters getiing married to two brothers...prateeksaha and asks him what does that mean?

He started telling her the advantages of two sisters being married and living in same house.....prateeksha leaves and he telles her that he loves prateeksha and he will do anything to gether....prateeksha runs away...but then he captures her they have eye lock scene..he invites prateeksha somewhere and araina over hears and encourages..her next day they meet and he gvies a rose to her..he tells her ho beautiful she is.....and all that.prateeksha goes abck home and she has flashback of raj...and she smiles and go to bed.....

Next day prateeksha gets flowers and she sees that it shows raj's name on it....anda note that I love u..she tries to hide it but araina sees it.....prateeksha sees araina's chunri and is happy and wears it...araina tells her she is in dreamland with her raj....and she smiles

Next day raj picks prateeksha up and they pray togetther raj asks her waht she asked for she says..for her familys happiness...he gives a sad +funny look...he says I asked for u..she tries to leave and he says..I have accepted u as my wife..already no matter what u say...

she leave from there aqnd its started rainina ..he starts his car...but appearenlt there is a problem....he calls the mechinic..prateeksha tells him that the house is closeby and she can just walk..he tells her that he will walk her..and he puts his coat around her shoulder....

Edited by rose1982 - 16 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Shashank/araina engagement and Raunak's truth

The engagement preps are going on..prateeksha looks very happy....araina is still into her self....she has falsbacks of raunaks memories and promises....prateeksha puts a red chunari on araina and tells her she is the most beuatiful bride..araina thinks of a similar scene with raunak...and she runs away..

Prateeksha is shocked...she prays that she wants to see araina happy...enagement days go well shashank see sad..araina ...shashank dad announces the wedding in a week because...of the pundits prediction that its only shubh muhrat otherwise shashanks life will be in danger

Scene 2

Prateeksha is shopping with araina next day and they both see the same woman who claimed to be raunak;s ex wife...she was another guy.,....araina follows her....and gets to her house...prateeksha is with her too...she asks someone about her...and they say she isnt married and she has no kid....prateeksha and araina are shocked....on their way back they see this girl whom this other lady claimed ot be her and raunaks daughter...she was playing there....araina asks her ...who she is....and if she is raunak's daughter the girl says that aunty gave something to her to pretend that she is raunak's daughter..araina get more shocked..they go back and she cries and feel bad of not trusting raunak...then she has flashback of raunak confessing his love to her.....prateeksha cant see all that..and she says maybe last time she should meet raunak..araina said no there is no use...coz she is getting married to someone else and there is only 2 days left in her wedding.....prateeksha maybe for her dil ki tassli she should see raunak once and tell him that she knows the reality...she should meet her love once.....prateeksha calls raunak

araina...leaves with bua to get soemthings for people who work in the house..for shaadi gift...somebody puts a hand on bua;s face and takes araina......and then do something bad...araina is all shattered asking for help..nobody is there..bua calls prateeksha that she cant find araina and she was faint for few seconds..prateeksha gets worried...bua and prateeksha are on door and they see araina coming and she is wounded..they both get shocked and cry...and they wash her wounds and ask her who did that..and araina is like a statue..prateeksha cries...very hard she tells bua she cant see it..bua says it happened coz of her.....prateeksha hides everything from parents..

araina cant talk...she says one thing that she is dead....

prateeksha says that im not going to leave those people tell me who they are..bua tell her to calm down..they are worried about marriage..araina has threat not to marry shashank////..prateeksha calls raunak...

she tells raunak everything..and raunak is shattered he cries for araina...he says he is going to kill those people..prateeksha tells her she is begging for his sisters life....she tells him to please marry her sister coz he is the only person who loves her truly and will accept her in any condition....she says araina was going to get married but I already thought that she should not marry shashank and then she gets this threat and all this happened to her......

raunak says..she is mine..i knew that I wished i can take her pains on me.///he said...he will protect her honor..e will bring happiness back to her life...prateeksha cries and they hug...

prateeksha brings araina to mandir but she doesnt want to come but somehow prateeksha manages,.she saws raunak and breaks down on floor...he lifts her up and tells her that he will never let her fall down..he tells that he is with her and she shouldnt be worried baout people.....he says i wish ic an take all ur pains....but i promise u from now on ur pains are mypain...and i will not let anyone to say anything against u ...

.........prateeksha is going back and seeing them and crying.. she stops....raunak and araina hug.....araina tells him she knows the reality but she cant break the marriage coz manhotra;s raised hermom..he says ur lying u think u will spoil my life she cries out loud and says yes why do u wanna marry me...i will only brin pain and dishonor fo ru..he says not marrying u wuld be death for me..and his only desire is araina.....she says her family's honor now she has to go with this decision..she tells him that she is going tobe someones wife but he can have her heart....she says she doesnt know if she would ever see him again but she wants him to move on too....raunak says im going to talk to your parents..she says u can fight with my parents but what about my situation..my parents would be so hurt after knowing this what i went through.... prateeksha is crying....and she goes straight to raunak and brings sandoor to him to fill araina;s mang....raunak looks at her...but prateeksha tells him to do that .she said your love is pure then why dont you give it a name....why do u want to live as people who are alive but are dead form inside...she tells araina that today if she wont marry raunak then she would never marry anyone else...raunak looks at araina....and prateeksha tells raunak...that raunak sometimes you have to go through alot and today if you loose araina 3 lives will be destroyed.....nobody would be happy and if he believes in his love then his love would win..this is the only way u can bring life back to my sister......everyone would accept their love...raunak steps forward and fills araina's mang araina is shocked...prateeksha reminds her of kasam..she hugs her....and tells her that she doenst have any thing for her bidaii...but all wishes and prayers...and she says she hopes one day mom and dad will accept this marriage and then they hug and she tells her that she is sad that she is leaving but she would handle everything and for her happiness hse can do anything and that araina is not alone she gives her hand in raunak's hand....and they leave....both sister cry..

scene 2:next day....

Prateeksha is infront of manhotra house.....In manhotra house....raj has to go somewhere becoz he gets to know that his moms sister is serious...in london...and raj is the only ne she has in the whole world so he goes to see her....and feels bad for not be part of shashanks wedding.....he sees prateeksha and takes her in the side and hugs her and tells her that he cant attend the wedding but verysoon he will ask for her hand,..and then she doesnt have to live without her sister....and then he says maybe shashank and araina can have their second wedding on his wedding day...prateeksha didnt answer anything she is balnk...and consouls raj and wish him all the best for his trip

Prateeksha asks for shashank and his mom then ask him if they can talk somewhere else...she talks to shashank and his mom about araina and rauank marriage....shashank and his mom is shocked...prateeksha explains how pure their love was and she asks for forgiveness to both of them and she tells them araina didnt want to marry but she persuaded her to...prateeksha tells him that she loves her sister and can do anything for her...shashank said if they dont get married...then the whole families willbe in trouble....and he cares about rai familys respect too....prateeksha says...she cant see her sister suffering .she cries and breaks down and tell them all things...she asks them not to tell anyone and how she trusts them...she tells shashank that araina had a threat not to marry u...also...shashank is shocked and wants to something...he prateeksha begs infront of him on her knees and he puts his hand on her shoulders and tells that she can do anything for her family's respect//says that he was doing this wedding for everyone;s happiness and no doubt araina is a nice girl...and he liked her too.Shashank mom says that wedding is tomorrow morning and everything is ready...and then she recalls that pundit said that shashank's life will be in danger if he doesnt marry tomorrow...she says I also chose my love and married shashanks dad and I know how it feels beta..wathappene dwith araina is horrible and she cant let her family name down..but yeh meray betay ki zindagi ka sawal hai...

Shashank...mom meri zindagi ko kuch nahi hota....araina 's life was in danger and she loved someoneelse anyway..she should be with someone who will love her and give her protection...why should we destroy 3 lives...

Shashanks mom looks at prateeksha...and says I have one way...she says I feel bad about saying it and but i know u love ur sister and I love my son... she ask prateeksha if tomorrow in madit..she will sit instead of ariana..prateeksha and shashank are both shocked.,..she tells them there is no other way......prateeksha thinks of moments with raj, she thinks of araina....and she says I will sit in mandit for the respect of boths parivaar...for someone she loves the most in this world..she again asks for forgiveness...mrs.manhotra says that she feels sad that this happened and she assures her that she will handle everything...and she apperciates prateekshas courage and love for her family...they leave...shashank has flashbacks of araina....and he says to himself....that it seemed like she was never with me...she liked me as a person but her heart was somewhere else...then he thinks of prateeksha ...he says that...i dont know how it would be like and what tomorrow would bring him..but he is just getting married for his family's sake....

Next day:

Mrs.rai looking for araina.....prateeksha tells them she will be here....barat arrives...mrs...rai is worried....bua and mrs.rai come to prateeksha;s room ..prateeksha explain everything to mrs.rai and bua...they all got shocked..mrs.rai cries.she breaks down in her room ....prateeksha tells her about mrs.amnhotra and shashank meeting.....mrs...rai says she feels bad for prateeksha..she says today she lost one's daughters happiness and sacrifing another daughter's happiness.prateeksha cries and tells her you are my mom..i never saw my mom but i know that u love me like mom so trust..me and please dont tell mr.rai he will break down they hug..she says we dont have timemrs rai says we cant tell this to anyone..and she knows mr.rai would never accept it as he is very strict about prinicple..prateeksha says...she will ask him to forgive her and will take the blame on her.self..mrs.rai kisses her forehead...and tells her I had so many armaan for my daughters and today everything is killed...they get prateeksha ready ...she looks very beautifull..mrs.rai gives her all her jewellry and tells her today if her mom was there she would have done more...but I always loved u as i lvoed araina...she tells her that her mom looked as beautiful in shaadi jora as she is looking....then she says thanks to her prateeksha hugs her and tells her that you are my mom ...why are u saying thanks to your daughter..and she tells her not to cry and that she will try to be a dutiful bahu and wife....mrs.ria once again kisses her forhead and then they bring her down..prateeksha looks at her and araina's pic last time ..she and mrs.rai hugs and then she says that though both araina and she left but she will get good bahus and then she will forget...but mrs.rai says..pagali...daughters are daughters...i will keep all ur memories...alive in my heart....and this would be your home always...prateeksha leaves and she has full ghonghat....she sits on mandit.....

Edited by rose1982 - 16 years ago

Quote

fiza

@Fiza28

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

wow ilike plzzzzzzz pm when u update

Quote

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Prateeksha has tears in her eyes under ghonghat.....shashanks dadi is very happy..Mr.rai is very happy too....they ask for bride to show the face but mrs.rai tells them that they cant show the face before rukhsati....

its ab shagun...

Mrs.manhotra gets to know that mrs.rai knows about everything...in her heart mrs.manhotra is happy that prateeksha is a nice girl.But she also knows her husband wont accept this as he values relations more than human emotions...

Shashank puts sindoor in prateeksha's mang and she remembers raj...and how he promised her...then they do all rasams,...pheras also went ok.....now its rukhsati.....andmrs.rai is said that she isnt able to send her daughters in proper way..prateeksha is crying......she asks them if last time she can go to her room...everybody asks for prateeksha and bua tells that prateeksha has lil accident andsomebody took her to the hospital but now she is ok....and is coming back on her way...mrs.rai cuts off and tells them that prateeksha cant see araina leaving like this...and subh muhrat is passing...maybe they can meet when araian comes back,,,,

scene 2:

Prateeksha in her room..she looks at her pictures with araina...and hugs the picture of araina.....and then she calls araina and tells her this shocking news...araina is schoked...

araina and raunak left delhi and they are in raunaks..aunts house.....araina is sad.....and shcoked..prateeksha tells her to come home when she tells her and she is sure everyone is gonna forgive her..prateeksha tells that how mrs.rai and manhotra and shshank agreed...they both cry...and she see mrs.rai and mnhotra standing...they hug and then prateeksha leaves....

At home..they do rasams...mrs.manhotra tells them that dulha is the first one who is going to see the face of bride ..so nobdy can see before him....they do ring rasam..and prateeksha wins...

Scene3

Prateeksha in Shashanks room...she says to herself today I have lost he trust of mr.rai and mr.mahotra...she thinks of wats going to happen but then she thinks of araina nad tell herself that she can leave anything for araina even her own life...and her relation with raj is now burried becoz she is married to shashank...

She is missing araina and her family and she cries....shashank comes in...she is still crying and he gives her a napkin to wipe off her tears...she takes it....Anchal and other girls come in and ask to see brides face...and everyone is shocked...Mrs.rai explains to anchal...but anchal knows that raj loves prateeksha too extreme and it would create tension betwee two brother..she takes her mom to the side and tells her about raj...and prateeksha...her mom gets sad...and prays that she will pray that her children get peace and happiness in their lives...

shashank comes in again
.he sits on the bed...prateeksha gets kind of confused of how this relation would look like.

He tells her

Mein janta hoon that you had dreams about your marriage, and so Do I.

I know that love is foundation of marriage.I also know that our marriage is a compromise to save the honor of both families.

BUt I promise that i would try my best to be a dutiful Husband.He tells her that they can bee good friends and can live life like that.He tells her that he loves his family alot and he knows his family will give her lots of love.

He appreciates her love for her family and then he stand up and walks towards the couch but then turns around and tells her thaks for doing so much for his family...she nods her head......

She thinks in her mind how she always though shashank is going to be his jeeju and now in one day her life is changed...she thinks of raj and then tell herself she cant think like this...she is married now

scene 4:

Prateekshai s sleeping its morning...she hears mrs.manhotra's voice...she immediately wokes up...shashank tells her that everybody is waiting for them for pooja...mrs.manhotra comes in and tells her tht she should wear red saari and comes down..she brings anchal with her and tell her to get ready...

anchal is sad and mad at prateeksha at the same time...she tells her to get ready and then she will see....prateeksha wears the saree ..she is looking very beautiful and she sits...anchal gives her sandoor and looks in her eyes sadly and then leaves....prateeksha closes her eyes..and with tears in her eyes she wears the sandoor....she sees mrs.manhotra standing on the door...mrs.manhotra helps her to wear the jewellry....shashank looks at prateeksha.....prateeksha thinks of raj and then immdeidaley looks at shashank..shashank tells her that she should not be worried he will handle this case...prateeksha tells her that she is worried about her sisters reputation and her family reputation...shashanks mom takes him outside..inside her heart she feelz for prateeksha becoz prateeksha sacrificed raj for her sister and married shashank also to save shashanks life...so mrs.manhotra tells shashank to take care of prateeksha's and parivaar's izaat as she is his wife now...shashank nodes...

and theygo down staris..everybody get shocked seeing prateeksha..mr.manhotra..gets shocked,,,,and every body is till....

then he yells ..yeh kya mazaq hai....shashank....

Shashank tells him yeh mazaq nahi hai daddy this is reality ...and I love prateeksha not araina thats why araina told me to marry prateeksha and also araina didnt love me....anchal gets a shock and she thinks araina decieved...raj....

mr.manhotra gets angry and tells prateeksha now i know why the ghonghat wasnt up...if we had to bring u ..u would have told us earlier...prateeksha doesnt say anything..shashank tells his dad...dad prateeksha is innocent..i loved her and i told araina that I love ur sister....prateeksha looks at shashank.....mrs.manhotra has tears in her eyes...

Quote

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

In rai house..mrs.rai tells mr.rai that prateeksha left early morning to see araina...mr.rai says something isnt right....

in manhotra hosue...shashanks dad asks him why he didnt say ta first that he like prateeksha and he wanted to bring araina as his bahu ...how come the kids decided everything and decieved him....and evryone....he tells prateeksha that today u prooved ur not real daughter of mrs.manhotra..she cries...shashank tells his parents that she is his wife now and they have to accept this truth....mr.manhotra walks out.....mrs.rai takes prateeksha to her room..shashank asks daadi for forgiveness.daadi walks out top...and then anchaal looks at her bro...with tears in her eyes..she thinks of raj who told her to give his letter to prateeksha and how he bought hte ring for her and now prateeksha decieved raj and now decieving shashank..shahsnak leaves prateeksha is in her room and sees shanshank and says thanks to him for doing so much...for her and her family..he says ..now we are pati /patni and its my responsiblity to protect u!he tells her...we are friend and as a friend he wants to tell her to trust him that everything will be alright and she should be strong and not cry otherwise everybody would be weak..he tells her that she has already doen so much and her family needs her..she cant break down.....

she nodd and tells she will be stronger for her family and ...she would try hard not to disappoint him and his family...he smiles and leaves...

mrs.rai comes to manhotra house..mr.manhotra sees her and ask for forgiveness of what his son did....(mr manhotra knows that his son asked araina to let prateeksha sit on mandit instead).

Mrs.rai doesnt say anything she has tears and mrs manhotra says she told her everything already...mrs.rai comes to prateeksha's roon she hugs her ...and sees shashank coming..shashank assures her that he will take care of prateeksha..she gives prateekshas hand in shashanks hand and tells him that now she gives her daughter to him and she trusts him and she trusts her daughter that she would only bring happiness in his life...shashank out his other hand over ...

mrs.rai takes shashank and prateeksha...but mrs.manhotra tells them that she and mr.manhotra will come and ask forgiveness from mr.rai...mr.rai is in shock and cannot believe it...

he comes to prateeksha with tears in his eyes and he says he always thiught this whole world can decieve but she cannot...today she has disappointed him and brought shame to him...shashank says unlc eits all my fault me and araina never loved each other...and i persuaded araina to marry raunak...everybody is freeZed..milland comes fromt he back...and want to hold shashanks collar but prateeksha comes in betwee,....she says he is her pati now.....

milland asks she isnt herslef..she isnt their prateeksha..she cries...he tells his dad they cant accpet it....prateeksha has ruined everything she ...killed everything for us and she is dead for us now and she can leave right now..mrs.rai tells him to stop all this and she calls prateeksha in..mr.rai has tears in his eyes and he is speechless.he say mauffi tu mujhe mangai chahiya...today my daughter has brought out family name down...he says she can come to the hosue...can have all benefits..but she will be always a stranger...he leaves mrs.rai hugs prateeksha and tells mr.manhotra please dont mind....and please accept my daugther prateeksha is my daughter too..she gives him kasem of her behan bahi pyar...and he says why is she doing that..she says coz raunak is a good guy..he is angel...and ur son ..i have no words for him..he is a precious gem...she says i can nver find a damad like ur son...and then she covers up and says that she wants her both daughters happiness and she cant see araina not being happyw ith shashank ..kids deserve happiness.mr.manhotra says she always wins....and she should not give him kasem..i will think this is ur daughter....and he says he hasnt forgiven his son..she says if u can do that much please forgive ur son..and accept them as ur bahu beta..she ask them to take ashwarwaad and he gives asharwaad hesitantly...

they g o back ..prateeksha again says thanka and shashank tells her that they are friends,..and no thanks between friend...mrs.manhotra comes in..and takes them to mandir...some women says that they look like new couple and they are made for each other..the both look at each other and then look away.....mrs.manhotra..tells them meri bahu lakhon mein ek hai...and ask them isnt she very beautiful....prateeksha smile shalf heartedly.....

..prateeksha is taking off her jewellry she sees shashank coughing...she gives him some water...immediately

Edited by rose1982 - 16 years ago

Quote

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

shashank says thanks and looks at her..she leaves...next morning rajc allas shashank to talk with his bhabhi...shashank tells prateeksha that raj is on phone she gets scared and tells him ..she is busy..and leaves...shashank think he will tell raj the truth when he comes back..mrs.manhotra tells shashank not to tell raj right now and maybe when he comes back already he is tense becoz of his khala...shashank agrees....anchal says he has all rights to know...one day he will know the truth..prateekshas over hears that but anchal leaves...mrs.manhotra looks at prateeksha and tells her to come to her room..she asks prateeksha about raj at first prateeksha was not telling and then she says...i dotn know what was that..it felt beuatiful but i cant say if that was love..and if desinty wants us to be together...she said she is trying to forget everything..mrs.manhotra ask for forgiveness that unknowingly she convinced her to marry shashank but prateeksha tells her i need to ask for forgiveness u did alot for my family this is a lil sacrifice....she tell hers not to worry and she knows now she is married to shashank and raj will also accept it.mrs.manhotra tells her not to tell shashank..

Quote

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

Next morning shashank's dad gets to know about a factory problem in some other city..shashank decides to leave immediately...shashank's mom decides to send prateeksha with him somehow..because of shashanks dad ,daadi and anchal's attitude...shashank tells his mom that it wont be good coz he ill busy and prateeksha will be bored....but shashank's mom really want them to go coz raj is coming back too.....she sends them together...they leave ...the factory and place where they stayis far from the airport...a car picks them up..there is a prob with car and they tell them it will take some time..prateeksha is walking and is gets lil far from shashnk and the driver...but she doesnt know shashank is looking fo her..and looking for some help..shashank is busy with driver....suddenly a bunch of guys run after prateeksha and she backs of and call shashank ..she is running and bumps into shashank shashank holds her and look at them...they tell her to leave everything otherwise their life is in danger..she gives them everything..they ask her for mangal sutar...and her bangels...she says she cant give it...they ask her she has to give them one thing...she takes off her bangels..mrs.rai gave her and she tells them "Lakin mungal sutar" nahin...they attack on her and shashank gets on the way and get attacked they see poilce coming and police takes care of them ..prateeksha is crying for shashank he says imok...she says no u have to go the hospital...they take him to the hospital....afer that they went back to the hotel...and prateeksha brings tea for shashank next morning and tell him thanks for the other night...he says no prob...he looks at her..she has her hair wet an dlooking very beautiful..he asks her if she doesnt want to have tea she agrees....shashank wants to shave but his hand is wounded...

prateeksha looks at helpeless shashank and ask him if she can help..he refuses...but then prateeksha helps him..they are lil awkward but then he says thanks to her..very romantic scene.....

shashank come back in the evening and prateeksha asks him to change his bandage...and he lets her..they both have an eyelock......next morning he takes her to see the town..they go to mandir...and he looks at her beuatiful and innocent face.,...in the night they are sitting among people who are talking...about love...around the fire and there is music...

prateeksha tells shashank somethings about her and araina childhood..shashank smiles and tells her she misses her sister alot..he can tell...he tells her he is very close to his sister too....then people ask them about their opinion of love..they start from shashank..they tell them they are sure they have "Mohabbat ki shaadi" coz they look like they are made for each other.they are lil awkward...shashank starts speaking about love...he tells how love is to die for urself and live for someone else and their happiness...prateeksha looks at him talking and questions herself...she thinks shashanks words have opened her eyes.....he goes on and tells themm...pyaar kiya nahi jata ho jata...its something uncontralable...he says if u love someone u r willing to loose evrything for that preson..he says he believes there is just oneperson made for every person....he says one day he knows he will know fullness of love

now its prateeksha's turn..yesterday what she though of love was just an imagee..she thinks about shashank and tells them she agrees with everything shashank said...and then she goes on..she says..love is deep..you arein true love when u cant see the depths of heights of its ...wehn its immeasurable...one lady says..her aurat ka lay muhabbat means to be someoneelse one day and leave whaever is hers for one person....then she goes on and says i think you both have found each other..she says no marriage can work without love...its only compormise..if you want to live life to the fullest the best way is to marry your love and be with your love always...people ask her how to find love..she says love finds people...connects to strangers...sometimes in form of destiny..but everybody experience love..in one part of their life...they look at each other and are lil awkward....

Back home mrs.manhotra gets toknow raj might have to stay few more days in London...

mrs.rai is tryign to connect with araina...araian comes to delhi and meets her mom somewhere...they hug and cry...she hands over some jewllery to her..araina denies to take them but mrs.rai forces her...she takes it....araina looks very pretty...mrsrai kisses her...and say thanks to raunak and she tells them today she has found best damads in this whole world....and he smiles ...araina asks for prateeksha ..she thinks of raj and prateeksha.......she tells her mom that how is dad..and she is quiet..

mr.rai is in his bed....and thinks of momments with jis daughter.s.....millind is trying to find the ways to get to raunak....

prateeksha and shashank goes back to their room..prateeksha thinks of shashanks..words....and tells herself that her affection or feelings for raj were not true love....love is what shashank described today...she says...she doesnt know what love is like......but maybe one day she will understand..she thinks of her marriage and tells herself...no matter what she has to stick with this marriage...she thinks of how lady says everyone experiences love one time in their life...love finds its way and find people and connect to strangers together...shashank is quiet too and standing by the window...prateeksha is still outside..shashank sees her and tells her to come inside coz its cold...she says she wants to sit here for a while..he sits besides her...and tells her....is she thinking about something she says..sometimes we dont know true meaning of things...unless we experience them...she looks at the moon....and is freezing shashank puts his coat on her shoulders...she says youa re cold...and why r u freezing...im like this...always alone ..in my thoughts...he said i dont have to remind u we are friends...and wat if some jangli janwar comes and finds u alone..he says he prefers to become a kulfi right here..she looks at him and laugh and they both go inside...next day..shashank leaves in the morning...and tells her today they will go up in the hills so she can see the real cbeauty of this area...she nodds...

araina calls prateeksha they both shared their momments prateeksha tells araina ho shashank saved her life..she tells araina to forget about raj..and she doesnt think that was true love..becoz she knows what a true love should be like...araina tells her...she wishes she finds her love in shashank...prateeksha doesnt say anything to her...

shashank comes back...they both go to the hill....he tells her about the area...its start raining.....and he puts his coat on both of their heads....he looks at her beautiful face in rain.....she eats bhuta...and he looks at her...he asks himself wat is happening with him...why he keeps looking at her....he tells himself woh hai he intni khubsoorat...shashank tells her some jokes and she laughs and laughs and laughs...as a person who hasnt laughed for long time....he looks at her that how beautiful she looks while laughing.....suddenly...she falls becoz of stone...shashank holds her they have an eye lock.....she cannot walk...shashask tries to give her sahara but then picks her up..they both lookin each others eyes....some gals tell each other how romantic jodi...bohat khubsoorat hein donoon...they feel awakward and look away....he is walking towards their place of stay as they both walked...then he brings her and lays her in bed and they have eye lock(like pkb)....

Edited by rose1982 - 16 years ago

Quote

topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

hey awesome ff
well written plz continue soon
plz add me to ur pm list if u have any

Quote

rose1982

@rose1982

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#10

next morning they fly back.... they come back....anchaal is showing rude behavior as ususal..they get to know mr.rai is in hospital and had an accident ////prateeksha gets shocked dns tarts crying ////prateeksha and shashank goes right away ...nobdy talks to them.....mr.rai needs blood and its hard to arrange blood at this time but shashsank get to know about the blood group gives his blood to mr.rai...mrs.rai says thanks...n he says ur like my parents why are u saying thanks to me....thats my duty.....prateeksha says thanks to shashank...mr.rai gets to know about his blood donation ....ne his heart melts towards shashank......he thinks shashank is a nice guy but then why he didnt respect the boundaries..........prateeksha tries to take care of mr.rai and he didnt let her...mrs.rai tells her to go home...she comes home broken.....and is crying.....and says some emotional things...shashank tries to comfort her....but she is crying and hugs shashank while he says something....shashank is at first shocked and hugs her back......anchall sees that and goes back to her room with full anger.....

Prateeksha is cooking in the kitchen next day.....suddenly her saari catches fire..anchal is sitting but she didnt notices..shashank comes back and sayhi to anchal she doesnt answer he sees in kitchen and then he sees fire on prateeksha's sari he runs towards prateeksha....and throw water on her saari the fire is going to burn her hand.....but shashank is succeessful..prateeksha is scared....shashank yells at anchal he tells her..she was sitting her and didnt see..what if soemthing would have happened to prateeksha and he gets emotional and hugs prateeksha...she hugs him back......she is out of breath he takes her to room ..anchaahl is all flaired up ...and she thinks today her bro went against her for this prateeksha......shashank takes prateeksha to romm and gives her some water and asks her if she is ok...he says promise him next time she will be careful she nodds....she looks at tension in shashank face...he tells her he will take her out tonight .....for change..and then leaves.....shashank goes into balcony and asks himself if what he is experiencing with prateeksha is love....he looks at her...n see her sleeping....he comes back to room....and cover her with blanket....in the evening.......mrs.manhotra helps prateeksha get ready to go out for dinner...they both look gorgeous......everybody is looking at them.....they have a dance at that place....they both dance and look in each other's eyes...prateeksha tells herself what is happening with her...when he looks at her...it bothers her...she feels electrick shocks inside her.....shashank is questioning his love too....

Quote

1 2

Hum dil dechuke new change in story Page1 -2

Related Topics

Explore Topics