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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: missypatel

you updated :) ...a sealed kiss at this point would have turned the tables for nobody's benefit i reckon :D ...another somebody behind her, wasn't one enough now :P

nice! ...cont soon!

~nij

ur right, kiss at this time ? naah :P thanks for commenting nij! :)

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#422

hey
finally an update
it was cool n rocking
thanks for t he pm
update soon

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar
hey
finally an update
it was cool n rocking
thanks for t he pm
update soon

Thanks! 😃

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rav

@-midnightsun-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: -Neetz-

lol, you think that was mushy ? C'mon rav, you and me both know that it wasn't 😆 yeah, i guess 'lovely' is a better word, i think i can accept that ;) i'm trying to get there, really, trying to inject some romance into my fics :)

i'm still confused. I'm not too fond of the extended version :S looks like i'm gonna skip it. But thanks for being the first one to comment! 😃 the first comment is always special =)

Love ya too! =)

come on neetz.. me bein the 'mushy' one here... i m an expert at recognising the sweet stuff when i see it...😆.. lovely is a cherry on the top...😃 skipping the extending version...? 🥺 kya yaar.. mera dil tod diya... oh well... up to you... wouldn't want to rush perfection now would we... lv from... the official mushy one... (i just made myself official) :O... :P

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#425

hey nice ff
plz add me to ur pm list

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 16 years ago

#426

hey neeta
great part
liked the AR bond.. which is still developing but its cute
aww the lovely moment was spoiled by that stupid horn :(
but y r the police behind ridz all of a sudden????
i mean they've been quiet till now n suddenly come into picture :S weird
but our ridz is super smart
update soon yar

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#427

woah Neetz its really sweet one but too short one so now again someone is behind her ek kam that ek aur aur kitna dushman hai Ridhima ka plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: prernawaghray
hey neeta
great part
liked the AR bond.. which is still developing but its cute
aww the lovely moment was spoiled by that stupid horn :(
but y r the police behind ridz all of a sudden????
i mean they've been quiet till now n suddenly come into picture :S weird
but our ridz is super smart
update soon yar

Hey prerna! :) Thanks a ton :D

nope, the police aern't behind ridhima all of a sudden, go back a few parts, i've mentioned that they started looking for her long time back :P

thanks again, shall update soon =)

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah Neetz its really sweet one but too short one so now again someone is behind her ek kam that ek aur aur kitna dushman hai Ridhima ka plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm

thanks nidha di! lol yeah, ridhima has alot of 'dushmans' 😛

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Neeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#430

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

come on neetz.. me bein the 'mushy' one here... i m an expert at recognising the sweet stuff when i see it...😆.. lovely is a cherry on the top...😃 skipping the extending version...? 🥺 kya yaar.. mera dil tod diya... oh well... up to you... wouldn't want to rush perfection now would we... lv from... the official mushy one... (i just made myself official) :O... :P

x

lol ur right, ur the mushy one..but still, i mean, by no standards would this scene be qualified as 'mushy' :P sorry yaar, the extension didn't turn out to be good :S but i'll update soon and try to give u all an official mushy scene asap! :DD