POEM: Yuvi's forgiveness

Hey guys.. here is the poem i wrote from Yuvi to Naina.. hope you guys like it!!

Forgive me!

Sorry is the word,
not used in my world,
i have never needed to apologise,
as i thought it was againt my stride.

Now, it has become my single companion,
as of when i stand here,
I see the reflection of my deeds,
And i realise i never paid any heed.

For all the love and advice i got,
I ignored it thinking they know naught,
now i know better, they had been right,
and now I stand all alone, without any might.

If only she could believe me when i say,
I am sorry, trust me once again,
And i promise never to hurt you again!!

Very good MJ..i loved it..

Originally posted by: 0o.Leah.o0

Awwwwww !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was SO cute !!! Loved it to the core !!

Write more !

Originally posted by: anjananazir

Very good MJ..i loved it..

That was awesome and the last part was so cute.

Originally posted by: Starry_night

That was awesome and the last part was so cute.

MJ dis issssssssssssssssssss so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet

Originally posted by: 1kaarzoo

MJ dis issssssssssssssssssss so sweeeeeeeeeeeeet

do write moreeeeeeeeeeeee:)

MJ this was sooo good!! you know what you should create another post with all the links of your poems...like I did with my shots...cus I would love to read them again!!!