POEM: Naina's loss and gain.

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Hey ppz.

hope you are all doing well and good. I have written a poem expressing Naina's thoughts about Yuvi;s revenge. Its a small attempt and hope you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoyed penning it down!😊

Losing And Gaining.

My sorrows knows no bounds,
after the truth that i found,
For him it was just a game,
revenge was its name..
He said I never meant to hurt you,
But it was neccessary that i do,
I asked, was there no love at all
And if this has only been my fall?
You shall soon one day know,
when your love shall one day go.
I pray that you never go through this pain,
for only i know what i have gained!

Thanks for reading.

Comments and criticisms wellcome.

Tc,

xxx

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

OMG MJ it's so apt to the situation!! bloody revenge shattered our princess' glass castle

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

You have perfectly described her woes, her feelings.....its beautiful !!!!
btw, my name is priyanka

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---ayesha---

@---ayesha---

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Its totally amazing.esp loved this line

For him it was just a game,
revenge was its name..

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princessuma
OMG MJ it's so apt to the situation!! bloody revenge shattered our princess' glass castle

thanks Sumi.. I hate to see tears in Naina's eyes, but it looks like its going to be her constant companion for quite some time!! but i like it that she is crying and not wailing like Parvati or tulsi - l😆

And yes, Naina has seen the reality that shattered all her dreams.. but sooner than later is always best.

thanks for replying sumii...

xxx

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sumaiya

@-bhootni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

i know MJ i hate her tears too...and I am glad that they are silent tears...no over the top melodrama...i love that!!

lol and you welcome *hug*

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Akash sharma

@Akkisharma

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

hey thanx for the poem actually ths story also based on me

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Starry_night
You have perfectly described her woes, her feelings.....its beautiful !!!!
btw, my name is priyanka

Thanks for replying Priyanka. Naina is too shaken by what Yuvi has done to her, so she's going to be sad for some time now!! but i know she will cope up with it just fine!! 😃 She's Naina after all!! 😉

Originally posted by: ayesha09
Its totally amazing.esp loved this line

For him it was just a game,
revenge was its name..

Thank you for replying ayesha (apologies i dont know your name)..

i am glad you liked it.

xxx

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: princessuma
i know MJ i hate her tears too...and I am glad that they are silent tears...no over the top melodrama...i love that!!

lol and you welcome *hug*

trust me, you have no clue how glad i was to see her silent tears!! Thats why i soo love Naina.. she's a practical romantic, and a strong softie !! 😉

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#10

Originally posted by: akash_sharma
hey thanx for the poem actually ths story also based on me

wellcome akash (apologies i dont know your name).. based on yourself? well, i am sorry that you had to go through a tough phase like Naina, and pray that all becomes well in your life!

And thanks for replying!

xxx

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