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Hey my friends here is one shot on mayur. Actually it was not an 1 shot. After writing we found it become a larger one. So u can called it as mega shot. Since it become larger I divided it into two part.

And we (me and tapoor) want to dedicate this mega shot to our januable, sweet , best friend b.day girl Aditi. Adi its 4 u.

(guys most of the part in this shot was written by tapoor. So give a big hand 4 her.)






Mayank: hey adi kya kar rahi hai tu.

Aditi: kuch nehi Mayank.

Mayank: Agar kuch nehi hai to tu itna pereshan kyun hai.

Aditi: nehi Mayank mein perashan nehi hoon.

Mayank: Accha agar aisa koi baat nehi hai to koi apni b.day ki din apni muh fula kar betha rehta hai kya?

Aditi: kyun b.day sirf meri hai, tera nehi hai kya. Tera mood bhi to kuch accha nehi hai.

Mayank: aisi koi bat nehi hai.

Aditi: Aissi hai. Actually u miss a lot Nupur. Right?????

Mayank: Adi meine kaha na aisa kuch bhi nehi. Mein usse kyun miss karunga?

Wo mera lagti kya hai. Mayank fuming with anger.

Aditi: lekin Mayank

Mayank: baas adi mein or kuch sunna nehi chati hoon.

After saying this he left the room quickly.

Aditi: mein janti hoon Mayank mujh jaisi tu bhi usse bahut miss karti hai.

Lekin kya nupur humko itna miss karti hai. Aj hamara b.day hai lekin wo abhi bhi ek phn tak nehi kya. Kya abroad jakar log itna badal jata hai. Mujhe nehi kamse kam Mayank ko to wish kar leti. Kya wo apna promise vul gaya?

At this time Adis ph ringing. She received the call.

A: hello kaun hai?

N: mein bhoot hoon, ha ha ha!!!!!!

A: nupsi!! Nupsi tu(She was very happy) Kaisi hai tu? U know im just waiting 4 ur call!!!!!

N: kyon koi khas baat hai kya?

A: (Little bit sad after hearing it). Nehi koi khas baat nehi. Aisi hi.

Tu baata kaise hai tu. Tera India aneka kya hua? Kaab aa rahi hai tu

N: nehi yaar mein aa nehi pawongi. Actually ek study tour k liye mujhe bahar jana par rahi hai. or mein aab raste main hi hoon. meine socha ki tujhe baata du.

A: to tu India nehi aa rahi hai or tu sirf ye bata ne k liya mujhe ph kya?

N: ha, kyun. Mujhe koi or baat batani hain. Tujhe aj ho kya gayi hai.

A: nehi muje kuch nehi hua. I m fine.

N: accha bata Mayank kaisi hai?

Aditi: wo thik hai. Mein usse ph du.

N: nehi nehi aab meri pass baat karne ki time nehi hai. Mein baad main baat kar lungi. Aab rakhti hu. Bye.

A: ok bye.

Aditi thinking herself 'nupur tu itna badal gayaki aab humare liye teri pas baat karneke liye time bhi nehi hai or wish karma to dur ki baat.

She had tears in her eyes.

She just recalling their sweet memory that they spent in Excel college.

(Flashback)

[This part written by tapoor -my sweet fr]

In the picnic

Mayank , Nupur , Aditi, gunjaan, samrat, diya, uday, Cj, adhiraaj, suhani, Benji, RV.all r going to picnic in Adhiraj's firm house.

S : sab baithe baiteh bore horahe hai. Chalona koi game khelte hai.

G : ha. Thik hai per hum konsa game khelenge?

U : Main batau? Mujhe ek bohot hi interested game yaad aya hai.

S : konsa interested game?

U : jara kha ke dekha.

ALL : keyaaaaa??????????

U : ha ek show haina jara nachke dikeha. Ussika version hai ye. Issme jo jayda kha sakta hai wo winer hoga.

M : Uday, phir to tumse ye trophy koi nehi chin sakta.

D : shut up dodo. Apne idea apne pass rakho. Hum kuch excited khelenge.

U : Khana bhi to kitna excited haina deets?

S : who tere liye hai dude. Chodo ye sab. Chalo hum sab truth and dare khelte hai.

ALL : yes.

Phir sab round hokar baithte hai. Or game start karte hai. Pehle phass ti hai diya.

N : so diya? Truth ya dare?

D : Dare.

ALL : wow.

B : so diya. Tum hume ek item song pe dance karke dikhao. U know na item song??????

D : keyaaaaaa???????????????

B : keya tum itna nehi karsakti? Tumne hi to dare chuna hai. Ab to karna hi padega.

D : ok. Guys.

Phir diya dance karti hai ( le le le lele maza le song from wanted).

Sab ladke palke jhapkana bhi bhool jata hai. Gunjaan samrat ki or suhaani adhiraaj ki akhoper hath daal ke cover kardeti hai. Diya ka dance khatam hone ki baad phir se game start hoti hai. Iss baar phaasi Aditi.

S : so aditi truth ya dare?

A : dare.

ALL : wow. Ye huyi na baat.

G : so aditi, tu keya karegi?

N : main batau? Aditi bohot accha gana gati hai. Pls aditi suna na.

A : gana or main?

ALL : ha pls yaar. Suna dena.

Aditi mayank ke taraf dekhti hai. Mayank nodded.

A : thik hai. She started.

Do dil milrahe hai , magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai, khabar chupke chupke

ALL : wow. It's 2222 gud aditi. U r a great singer.

Aditi sharmaker thanks bolti hai. Phir se game start hoti hai. Iss bar phaasti hai nupur.

Aditi : so npus? Keya karna hai? Truth ya dare?

N : mmmmmmmmmmm. Truth?

B : are nups or truth? Kahi mere kaan to nehi bajrahe hai?

N : benji!!!!!!!!! (angrily)

M : Chodo na. main qus karta hu. Nupur keya tum kisi ko I mean kisi ladke ko like karti ho? ( interested tone)

N : (blushing). Mmmmmmm. Oh. Ye, aaaaa. Accha yes.

M : konsa ladka? ( excited hokar nupur ke samne ajata hai)

N : Mayank ye dusra qus hai. Srif ek hi qus puchna hai.(smiling)

Mayank or kuch nehi kehta. But wo bohot nirash hota hai. Or Aditi apne bhai ki face dekhakar hasti hai.

A : (herself) Do dil milrahe hai , magar chupke chupke

Sab ko ho rahi hai, khabar chupke chupke.


Sorry dear we have written it within a short period of time just for Aditi.

So I couldn't check it properly. So I beg ur pardon for any grammatical mistake.

Thanx a lot 4 reading it. we will post part 2 later.

Love uuuu all.

Faria(fariaa70)

Tumpa(tapoor)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh first to comment

me partying.
lol
acha first of all
happy b-day Adi
hope u had a great day
and Fariaa and Tapoor sachhi mein
love this OS a lot
Nupur went away to study and
then it is Aditi's b-day and also Mayank's.
So cute
and then the flashback
when they were playing truth and dare
superb!
too good
loved it to the core
and everyone picking "dare"
mein toh humesha "Truth" pick karti hoon
lol
par sacchi you two did an amazing job
love this OS
par ek question hai
does it have a second part?
I don't really know
but I think
so if it is
then plezzzzzzzzz
do update it soon
once again
awosme OS.
-Lina-
Edited by rkmnkp - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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superb os.I just loved it.I loved the song sung by aditi,I loved picnic part.

thanks fariaa70,tapoor for wonderful os.thanks for the pm dear.
sorry for late comment.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part n happy birthday adi!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awwwwwsome OS yaar

you both Rock
loved it to the core
loved the song aditi sang Do dil mil rahe hai
nice work
do continue ASAP
im waiting
And Happy Birthday Adi
Luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Faria and Tapoor!!!
awesum post!!!
i luvd it...
but how did nups change???
i mean...pleaseeeeeeee do cont sooon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my sweet sweet friends faria aka pari for me and tapoor .....both make me emotional today........
first the birthday thread and then this os
faria and tapoor in my life no body give me this heart touching gift ,this was my memorable gift for life time .....i will print this and paste this in my room so i alwys remember that in my life their is some friend who love me
and write this sweet os for mr ..........
im very happy to read this .......
faria me and maynk i will die yaar agar mera or mayu ka birthday same day ho ....bye god this is the second gift
or phir nupur ka phone i love it ..........

or the college flashback
angel im very bad in singing yaar mera song sunker to sarre animals aa jayge
per tere liye kuch bhi.

tapoor tune mere liye time nikala yaar im very touched with this yaar.

or phir dia ka dance dekhker to or bhi happy ho gayi
or phir nupur ka truth accept karna lovely os.







faria im very happy to have friends like you ,thank you for your friendship.
i know i need big punch for saying this but today god bless me with your friendship
Edited by adi_gupta - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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(In Mayanks room)

Mayank took the photo from his wallet. It was nups photo which was snapped on Ahmedabad tour. It was one of best tour in his life.

(Flashback- Ahmadabad tour)

[This portion was written by my dushman tapoor]

Nupur or mayank dono Mayank ki kamre me baithe hai. dono hi bohot khush hai kiyu ki wo academic meat jeet gaye hai.

N : Mayank maine kaha na hum dono best jodi hai or hume koi nehi harasakta.ab dekha?

M : kuch nehi kehraha hai bus usse dekhraha hai or smile karraha hai

N : ab hum jab wapas jayenge to hamare welcome ke liye principal sir khud phool ki bouqet leke khada hoga. or hamare liye red curpet bichaya jayega or pure excel college ki student hamare naam ki banner leke khada hoga or
M : bus, bus , bus apne dream per jara control karo. aisa kuch nehi hoga.

N : haye. kiyu?

M : Main haar saal ye compititon jeet te aya hu. mujhe experince hai.

N : accha? to phir itne mehnat ka keya faida? (dissapointed tone)

M : kiyu kitna kuch shikha tumne or dekho hamare dosti bhi hogai.

N : ha ye baat to hai. btw mayank tumhare haath me keya hai?

M : ye? ye invitation card hai.

N : kiski invitation?

M : party ka. haar saal hota hai.

N : wow. phir to bohot accha hai.hum jaroor jayenge.

M : per nupur party ka dress coad western hai.or tum???????

N : western????? koi baat nehi. actually packing karte waqt galti se mere bag me diya ka ek dress ayagaya hai. chalo aaj wo bhi kaam ajayega.
M : per nupur?????????

N : koi per war nehi mayank. cahlo ab tayaar ho jate hai.

In the evening

Mayank was standing on the corridor . he was wearing a blue jeans and black T-shirt. He looks soooooooo dashing.

At this time Nupur came by wearing a western dress(The dress that sanaya wearing in ITA award function). She looks so hot or cute.

Myank just staring at her.

N : mayank keya main acchi nehi lagrahi hu?

M ; nehi nehi tum acchi lagrahi ho.

N : thik hai ab chalo.

At party

Mayank or nupur party hall me khada hai. sab se baat karraha hai. mayank ko ye saab accha nehi lagta. wo chup cahp khada hai. tabhi ussne notice kiya ke do ladke nupur ki taraf ugly look de rahe hai. or tease karrahe hai.mayank bohot gussa ho jata hai.

M : Nupur chalo yeha se.

N : kiyu? abhi to aye hai.

M ; maine kaha na bus chalo yeha se.

Tabhi wo do ladke kuch comment karte hai.

b 1 : keya mast ladki hai.

b2 : keya lagrahi hai yaar.isski tange to dekh.

Mayank ki gusse ka para bohot high ho jata hai.

M : bus bohot hogaya. ab chalo

N : nupur tum itne gusse kiyu horahe ho?

then the boy said

b 1 : are ye kon agaya bech me?

b 2 : shayad akele hi................. ha ha ha

M : keya kaha? phir se kaho.

b 1 : kiyu?

M : maine kaha phir se kaho

N : mayank keya karrahe ho? jaane do na

M : nehi main sunna chahta hu. keya kaha tumlogone.

B 2 : are ja ja. jayada noutanki maat kar

Mayank gusse se pagal hojata hai or samne jo bhi milta hai lekar b 1 ko hit karta hai.

N : mayank stop it. pls chalo.

phir nupur mayank ko khichkar woha se leati hai.

N : mayank tumhe ye sab karne ki keya jaroorat thi?

M : or tumhe aisi kapde pehen ne ki keya jaroorat thi? (Angrily)

N : keya? mayank tum mujhse aise kiyu baat karrahi ho?

M : maine tumhe maana kiya tha na? per tum kisiki sunte kaha ho?

N : bus mayank bohot hogaya hai. mera jo maan kare main wohi pehoongi.

M : ha tum pehente jao or main marta jaoonga.

N : mayank how dare u? tum apne aap ko samajhte keya ho? mujhe tumse koi baat nehi karni

M : mujhe bhi tumse koi baat nehi karni hai.

Nupur at room

nupur apne kamre baithke ro rahi hai.tab bhi Aditi ka phn ata hai

N : hello adi?

A : tum ro kiyu rahi ho nupur?

nupur aditi ko sab kuch batati hai.

A : Nupur tum Mayank se naraz maat hona. tum jaanti ho na wo tumhe kitna pasand karta hai?

N : keya???????????

A : mere matlab as a frnd. issiley wo tumhe lekar possisive hai. or ye baat to sahi hai ke agar tum waisi kapde pehne huye the issiliye uss ladko ne waisa comment kiya.
N : Aditi?

A : ye maat samajhna ke main apne bhai ke side le rahi hu.per ye such hai na ke haar ladhki ko kuch decent to hona chahiye na?
N : per ab main keya karoo? Mayank mujhse bohot gussa hai. wo to mujhse baat bhi nehi karraha hai

A : main apna bhai ka gussa janti hu. wo jayada derr tak gussa nehi reh sakta. tum jao or usse baat karo.

Mayank terrace per baitha huya hai. nupur usske paas jati hai. nupur ne ek white churidaar pehni hai. wo bohot khubsoorat lagrahi hai.

N : i m sorry mayank

M : mujhe kiyu sorry keh rahi ho?

N : actually tum sahi the. mujhe waisi kapde nehi pehen ne chahiye thi. sorry. ab dekho na main phir se wohi sidhi sadhi gao ki gori baangayi hu. jaise tumhe pasand ho. ab to maaf kardo.
M : nupur tum bohot khubsoorat ho. pr isse nakli sazawat se kharab maat karo. kiyuki khubsoorti sadhgi me hi hai.

N : yes mr. mayank sharma. jaisa aap kahe ( her nautinky style). to maaf kiya?

M: ha (smiling)

N : to phir frnds (aapne haath ko age karte huye)

M : forever ( phir dono hi haath milata hai)

(Flashback End)

He smiled after recalling the memory. It was the starting of their new journey. Journey of their frship-only frship? For him it was also the journey of love. But for nups- may b it was just a normal frship .

Mayank sighed again. Now he remembered the play scene in Excel college

(Flashback play scene)

After finishing the rehearsal all were busy with unnecessary gossiping.

S : chalo na yaar kuch khelte hai.

B : per keya khelenge?

D : chalo aakho akhoome khelte hai

U : ye accha idea hai

Mayank was reading a book just little bit far away from them.

A : Mayank chalo na tum bhi khelo

M : mujhe nehi khelni ye baccho ka khel

N : By god mayank tum to bachpan me hi buddhe hogaye ho. chalo hum sab hi khelte hai

They started with RV-Dia . Here Dia won. Then samrat -gunjaan and this time Samrat won.

B : chalo nupur ab hum dono khelte hai

N : ha chalo

Nupur apne aakhe bandh karti hai lekin jab wo akhe khulti hai to samne benji nehi mayank baita huya hai.nupur bohot surprise ho jati hai per kuch kehti nehi. game shuru hoti hai.
koi ek dusre se aake nehi hata raha hai.or paalke bhi nehi jhukaraha hai.then suddenly mayank winked at nupur. or nupur apnek paalke jhukaleti hai

ALL : Mayank jeet gaya. mayank jeet gaya.

N : nehi. nehi issne cheating kiya.

M : keya? keya kiya maine (make puppy face)

N ; tumne cheating kiya.

M : batao na maine keya kiya?

N ; wo tumne

M : ha maine?

N : tumne , tumne , kuch nehi.

Then Nupur ran away from there.

At corridoar

N : cheating karke jeet ta hai. cheater kahika. then she bumps into mayank

M : kaha jarahi ho?

N : tumse matlab?

M : matlab se hi to aya hu.

N : keya?

phir dono sath sath baith te hai

M : tumne kaha nehi ke maine keya cheating ki.

N : tumne , tumne aakh kiyu mari? it's a bad habit. agle baar kisi or ladki ko marne se pehle 100 bar sochlena

M : kisi or ladki ke bare me soch ne ka forsaat kise hai. tumse, srif tumhi se hi to hum ye gustakhi karsakte hai

N : kiyu? main tumhari lagti kon hu?

M ; bata du?

N : batao na.

mayank slowy closer to her

M : bata du ( he look at her so lovingly)

N : ha batao na.

Myank came more close to Nupur and hold her hand.

M : nupur wo , wo

Then suddenly nupur winked at mayank. mayank surprised by her sudden actions and he left nupurs hand .

Then Nupur ran away from there by showing her thumbs. Mayank just stood still and just lovingly looked at nupr.

By this time Aditi came here who watched everything from other side of the corridor
A : hmmmmmmmmm. aag dono taraf bara bar lagi hai per koi ye maane ko tyaar nehi hai.

(Flashback end)


(This worst part written by me but tapoor help me a lottt. Thanx sweety)

Mayank try to ignore his feelings. But he cant.

He just thinking and thinking about Nupur.

Mayank: mein kyun Nupur ko nehi bhul sakta.

Oh GOD plz help me.

Kya Nupur sach much mujhe yaad nehi karta????

Kya wo itna badal gayi hai???

He had try to control his emotions, but couldn't.

A lone tear escape from his eyes.

Mayank, Aditi call him from the door side.

Mayank quickly wiped his tears.

Mayank: ha Adi bol.

A: Mayank sab log hall room main hamara intezar kar rahi hai. Jaldi chal

M: tu ja Adi,mujhe kuch accha nehi lag raha hai. Mein baad main ata hoon

A: Par Mayank''.

M: plz Adi u go. I'll come later.

Kyun cake nehi katna hai kya? Dekho jaldi se chalo mujhe bahut bhook lagui hai. Itni der se kuch nehi khaya.

Both adi and Mayank r frozen after hearing the voice. It was none other then nupur.

She stood near the door wearing a pink dress with her beautiful open hair. She just looks like an angel.

Nupur: kya hua tum dono mujhe aise kyun dekhrahi ho. By God mera makeup thik hai na? ya meri galo mein koi pimple uth gaya. She looked really worried about it.

Aditi and Mayank burst out into laugh with their teary eyes.

Aditi: hugged Nupur. Nupsi tu kiasi hai. Pata hai mein kitna khus hu tujhe dekh kar.

Nupur: ha ha pata hai mujhe. Mein hu hi aise. Pyara sa, cute sa ,morena ki Rajkumari Nupur bhushan. To sab log mujhe dekh kar khush to jaruru honge.

Lekin mujhe lagta hai koi ek ko sodkar sab khush hua.

A: tu kiski bat kar rahi hai.

N: Or kaun teri wo akdu,sadu, bhai ki.

A: r a wo tujhe sab se jaida miss karti thi.

N: ha wo to mein dekh rahi hoon. meine kab se bakbak kiye ja rahi hoon, lekin ye to kuch nehi keh raha hai.

M: tum kisiko kuch bolnne ki mauka doge, tab to koi bolega na.

Nups give angry look to Mayank.

N: ha ha bolo kaun tumse mana kar rahi hai. Sadu kahika!!!!

A: pher tum dono shuru hogayi.

Aab cake katna hai ya nehi??? Nehi to b.day gujar jayega or tum dono aise hi jhagarte rahogi. Mein hall room main chalti hoon. tum dono aa jao. She winked at Mayank.

N : Mayank kuch kahoge nehi?

M : kiyu ayi ho? hamdardi dekhaneke liye? mujhe tumhari humdardi ki koi jaroorat nehi hai

N : mayank mein to.

M : bus nupur bus . ab or nehi.

N : mein to ayi thi tumse kuch kehne ke liye or kuch sunnke liye bhi . Then Nupur

Started crying and threw a card to him which she wanted to give him on his B.day

Mayank just took the card from the floor and started reading-

Mayank meine bohot socha ke tumhe keya gift du. pr kuch pasand hi nehi aya. phir maine socha ke iss se jayada khubsoorat gift keya hosakta hai. " The rest of my life" . aaj main tumhe apne puri zindegi derahi hu. I love u mayank.

M : oh shit. ye maine keya kardiya.

He running towards Nupur.

M : nupur pls stop.

N : nehi mayank bohot bolliya tumne or maine bhi bohot sunliya ab or nehi.

M : nupur sorry

N : nehi mayank. jaante ho woha abroad main maine tumhe kitna miss kiya. hurpaal tumhare bareme hi soch ti thi. kab tumse miloong, kab tumse baate karoonga.

M :

N : ya sab acche hai. sab mujhse bohot pyaar karte hai. aditi, gunjaan, samrat, diya, uday, benji sab acche hai. per tum bohot bure ho. bohot bure. main ja rahi hu.

M : jakar usska hath pakadh ta hai. jab sab itne acche hai to jaana jaroori hai keya?

N :

M : I love u nupur

N : itni si baat kehne me itna waqt lagadiya?

M : keya karoo aisa hi hoo mein

N : ab khade khade mera muh keya dekhrahe ho. chalo mujhe apne bahome lelo.

Then they hug each other

A : ab tumhari reunion khatam hogai ho to cake katle?

Then they cut the cake,

A : Thnk God. tum Mayank ko usska pyaar or mujhe mere dost wapas kardiya. thank u God 4 ur special bday gift.

It is really one of the best day in my life, a memorable Birth Day.


Hey adi I wish ur each and every b.day become a memorable b.day.

And wishing u a very very happy and enjoyable lifr\e dear.

And all the best

Thanx a lot 4 reading it.

Love uuuu all.

Faria(fariaa70)

Tumpa(tapoor)

Edited by fariaa70 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey faria & Tapoor
Awwwwwwwsome update yaar
loved the way Mayu got angry when the boys were teasing Nupur
The flash backs were superb
The game was cute
loved Mayur to the core
Lucky girl aditi to see Mayur confession
Love you
Nidzy
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Faria and Tapoor!!!
twas xelent!!!
luvd it yaar...
luvd d 2 flashbacks!!! =P
awesum post!!!
Adi...u'r really lucky!!😉
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 16 years ago

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