Just Love (Meet)-updtd Pt-6 Pg-14 30/09/10

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Finally i decided to post the first part to this one...............To those who wanna check out the teaser, here's the link:



INDEX:
Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 4
Part 3: Page 6
Part 4: Page 6
Part 5: Page 8

Part 6: Page 14



Character sketch:-



Harman Juneja: A superstar..........His on-screen romantic image, handsome persona had girls drooling over him........

Preet Juneja: A photographer by profession, he is a complete opposite to his brother....He hates being in the limelight, is a workaholic............He is extremely charming and hot............


Meher Mann: A bubbly 19 year old girl.............A typical girl who dreams that one day she would find her prince charming who would take her away with him...........She is extremely beautiful but believes in dressing up simply...........


Teji Mann: A feminist......The fact that she was left by the man she loved, Meher's father made her extremely ambitious and cold hearted....................


Part- 1:


"What will you do now,then...", Teji glared at her daughter who continued eating her breakfast avoiding her mother's eyes....."Now that you've lost your job i intend to know what you're planning to do with your life??"


"Ma i didn't exactly lose it...It was only a temporary job for a few months, you knew that...Mr. Khanna would have kept me longer if he could"


"Don't talk to me about that chauvinist", she said angrily.."hiring girls out of the school so he can get away by paying minimum wages"


"I mean how long will you spend your life taking up these temporary jobs"...."Meher", she sighed..."Baby look at yourself, you're a young 19 year old girl............you have your entire life ahead you.......and here you are wasting time doing these stupid jobs"


"Mom please!!!"


"No Meher i woudn't have had any problems if you had a real ambition.....Go ahead open your own restaurant or become a master chef................but i know you if i let you train to become a cook you'll end up slaving for some overbearing man......."


"You're right mom, i'll do that because that's me...............I'm never going to be a high powered business woman, because its not my type..........So please let me live my life the way i want to"


"You're right why am i even wasting a minute on you.......", saying this she left for her office............

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The journey to the Juneja's took Meher about 45 minutes.........Pedalling as fast as she could, she started to climb the led her to her destination.....The Juneja Mansion stood back off the roads in its own grounds..It was surrounded by 6 feet long hedges.........which meant that Meher had to stand up on her padels to oversee it.........She knew that they were hardly any people around at this hour and so this wierd act would go unnoticed...........


She stood up on her pedals trying to see into the grounds.......She heard the sound of splash and then the sound of someone swimming.......It was the first time there had ever been a sign of life at the mansion, and her heartbeat quickened in excitement......


She was too engrossed to notice that she was coming towards the drive ............Nor did she notice a black BMW coming out of the gates........


Her cycle imbalanced and the BMW hit it, whirling Meher into the air, making her land on her side of the drive, her skirt pulled upto her thighs, and grate deal of mud embedded on her flesh.......


A young bearded man, with his face crowned by a thatch of black hair stepped out of the car...........

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"Are you alright??"..........He looked as shaken as she was........"Are you badly hurt"


"I...I don't think so"..............She tried to move her leg............."Nothing seems broken"...........She tried to pull her skirt down in embarrasement and winced when the fabric touched her bruised skin......


"Where the hell did you come from", the man demanded..."You came at me out of nowhere!"


"I was riding on the grass...........beside the fence", she admitted sheepishly.......


"You're not supposed to ride on the bloody grass", he snarled........His eyes, looked blood red and strained........She wondered if he was drunk........


"Now can you please explain why on earth were you using the sidewalk instead of the roadway....Were you planning a burglary", he looked at her suspiciously....


"Of course not", she snapped back...."I-I wanted to see.......hoped to catch a glimpse of....of Harman Juneja", she said lamely...


"God save us!!!........A fan!!!", he looked at her with distaste....


He pulled up his sleeves of his shirt......and squatted down beside her.............She noticed that he had a rumpled experience altogether.........His boots were pretty old and his hair seemed as if they had been uncombed for days...........


She found it wierd that a guy like him was doing in the driveway of Juneja Mansion.......


"What the hell is going on Preet??", said an unmistakable male voice................


Meher's heart skipped a beat...........She had heard this voice a million times, in countless movies, making her melt............It was none other than Harman Juneja............

P.S.: Okay so this is the first part............I'd like to know what you people think about it........Should i continue???


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Posted: 16 years ago
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you better continue! It is so different and cute!!!! I love it! Please update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yup ! u shd definitely continue !! a very different story and I love the concept ! But I don't like this Preet, he hasn't life *wink wink* ..
looking forward to the next part, aur haan update the 2 other FF's too !
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh hell yeah you have to continue this!! and most inportantly I would whole-heartedly appreciate you pm-ing me all the time when ever you update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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something very different he please do continue thna you so much for the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. you should definitely continue this 😊 its so good and different and i love your writing 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow... fabulous...
you shud totally continue RHEA...
i told you before that i am not a big fan of Meet stories but you are the only person who manage to make me stick to them....
awesome...continue soon....

regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omgg Rheaa heyyy 😃 yessssss anotherr FF, girll u havee to ...no u NEED to continueeeee
ii dont kno what ii love more..your creativee thoughts or ur FF's becausee they r just so0o AH-MAZE-ING !!!!!! ..............totallyyy lo0vee the neww conceptss....ii dont even havee hte exact wordss to writeee right now...sincee im likee stilL in a dazee......girl lemee just tell u....u've got me HO0KED !!! lolll
plzz plzz continueeeeeee
nd thnk u so0 much for the pm......lemme kno again when u updtaee kk
luv Rumsha<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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like aleays likd it................it ws soo coite.........:P

nd yes ill appreciate u continung ths one as well as the othr ones toooooooo
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnime

Yup ! u shd definitely continue !!....thanks taz i will........a very different story and I love the concept !..thank u once again!!! But I don't like this Preet, he hasn't life *wink wink* ..i promise to make u fall wid his character!!!!!!!!😉
looking forward to the next part, aur haan update the 2 other FF's too !......yah i need to work on 3 fics nw!!!

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