Michi FF: The Proposal (One Shot) - Page 8

Originally posted by: unnati72003

Great Story thank you so much hun😃....i love Milind in totally new avatar so glad u liked this Milind😃......i know this was just one shot FF.....but if u have time....can u plz continue ur story.....i would love read further.....plz....this is my request to you.......if u don't mind.............. actually i did try to write a continuation to this story but it was not coming out well so i dropped the plan..so sorry hun😳

Thank You....once again Fab Story.....loved it...... thank you unnati! by the way, i think this is the first time u r reading one of my fics ri8?😃thank you so much for reading this🤗

Unnati

Originally posted by: shabopanchi

excellent👍🏼

Okay even though I'm alittle miffed that you STILL haven't updated either of 'Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You' or 'Man Of My Dreams' 😭 (but I guess that's up to you and of course how your thoughts flow!)

I guess all I can say is please please please please!!! Update one of them SOON!!!!😃😃😃

Anyway back to this one shot FF!! Only 1 word comes to mind AMAZING!!!👏👏👏 Really amazing!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: Aqsa_91

Okay even though I'm alittle miffed that you STILL haven't updated either of 'Can't Take My Eyes Off Of You' or 'Man Of My Dreams' 😭 (but I guess that's up to you and of course how your thoughts flow!) omg! how glad am i to say tht i just updated can't take my eyes off of you yesterday😃😆... man of my dreams will update it soon😊

I guess all I can say is please please please please!!! Update one of them SOON!!!!😃😃😃 updated eyes...will update man soon😃

Anyway back to this one shot FF!! Only 1 word comes to mind AMAZING!!!👏👏👏 Really amazing!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ thank you so much hun🤗🤗🤗

I LOVE this Prachi she's sooo cute and sweet and alittle naive!😃 (when it comes to Milind I mean!😉)hahhaa yeah when it concerns Milind... and i must say, M is lucky for tht😉😆 I ESPEACIALLY LOVE this Milind!!😃 Really he's so cute and KNOWS what he wants! Definately is a bit naughty! (I love that lol!😃😳 even me😳... he is mature, serious and a little bit naughty when it comes to Prachi)

I love how you put such a cute and romantic spin on a common thing of when a girl finally decides she wants to get married (and too an arranged marriage!)👏 thank you so so mcuh hun😃

My cousins going through the same thing right now and she's a nervous wreck!😆😆 ( I know I shouldn't laugh at her but it can be soo funny at times! lol!😆HAHAHAHAHAHAHA )

Their sort of official first meeting was really sweet! I mean the way he kept helping her out in his sutle ways!😃 With the bra thing and that Ranvir bit!😆😆 That was funny lol! he was impressing her😉 j/k

"I am not a lesbian." Prachi says quickly.

😆😆 lol! That cracked me up!! 😆😆 MM was her first proposal, so she didn't want him to think she is a lesbian😆😆 And the way he was checking out Ayesha just to piss her off!!! 😲😆😆 he affects P soo much

I loved how you made Prachi so expressive in this!😃 The way she gaped at him when she first met him lol!😆😆 (That definately would have been my state to!!😆😆even mine😳😆😆) And the way she FUMED when he called her sweetheart or was checking Ayesha out lol!😆 She definately became possessive quickly!😆 ain't all girls when it comes down to Milind Mishra😉?

I loved Prachis thoughts

She was not going to marry him she will never marry a man who goes calling unknown girls sweetheart.

lol!😆 And how Milind could read those thoughts!😊 That made me smile! he knows her too well... he has been stalking her for yrs now na?😆😆😆

Then the whole ice cream and kheer thing! ( okay first of all SHOCKED!!!😲😲 HOW can anyone NOT like ICE CREAM!! 😲😲) But still cute part!! 😊 thank you... first it was going to be kheer and he wanted ice-cream.. but then i felt Milind wud rather like kheer than ice-cream so decided to make it like this😃

I loved how he remebered everything he told her and them dancing together! 😃 madly in love-stalker 😆😆 The whole masquerade dancing mystery guy thing really cool! lol! 😃 thank you😃

I liked the whole Prachi-Alaap relationship in this even if their wasn't much😃 (I wish they had done atleast abit of that in the show😭 oh well on Prachi's wedding with Varun, Alaap tells Neev tht he wud do anything for Prachi...ever since then for me Alaap is a loving brother for Prachi, can't help have him otherwise😆😆) and the Milind-Alaap friendship! And Sukriti after Alaap! lol! 😆😆 Alaap is completely opposite to wht he is in the show hehehehe

"Looks like we Mishra-s are behind you Shah-s." Milind says chuckling.

(loved this line! thank you)

I thought it was really cute the way he had to make it seem it was his Baba's idea for the marriage lol!😲😆 Very sneaky!😆 he cudn't have sukriti believe tht he was in love with some1 and was trying to marry her na? Sukriti is very good at blackmailing and stuff😆😆😆 And than she ate his ice cream! Soo cute!😃 so happy u found it cute😛

REALLY liked this one shot! 👏👏Amazing ⭐️⭐️ (like I said before lol!😆) thank you so so much😳

Anyway GREAT one shot but . . . . . (just a suggestion or a request in away) could you maybe do atleast an Epilogue to it or something! I don't know something like the day of the wedding or a day in the life of their marriage maybe I dont know up to you! 😳 Basically depends on where your flow of thoughts lead you or thinks this is the perfect ending! (I don't mind anyway sounds amazing as it is aswell lol!😆) hehehehe i had decided to end it here...many had asked me to continue this.. but i just got two-three scenes of their date, and i doubt i can write an update with tht😕...will try hun😊

Anyway to stop my ramblings GREAT oneshot!👏⭐️ and . . (SORRY just got to say it!) thank you so so much hun😃

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update the others soon!!!😃😃 have started updating all my pending ffs😃

Originally posted by: angel_sintu

that is very nice. really enjoyed it. do write more of these👏

Originally posted by: kuku..

thank you so much hun...so glad u enjoyed it...will try my best to write few more ffs😃