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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome work..please continue soon..can't wait...i bet no one will stop reading ur ff n u will not need to close it when v all r there..pls cont..n pls next time post a longer part..:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey guys finally here with part one hopefully you'll allllllll like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Part1
USA
R&A Apartment

The room crept in silence,except for one sound:, the sound of pressing buttons echoed in the room, if you were there you would prorbably think the girl was addicted to typing. The suddenly what we didn't expect happened, a girl wearing a white churidaar slowly walked behind heer and jump on the girl typing, " diiiiiiiiiiiiiiii", the girl said annoyedly as the girl wearing the churidaar had disturbed her typing, " kya di chal uth Akshi", said the girl in the churidaar to akshara, who layed on the bed with the laptop on her lap, " par riddhima di kyun", asked Akshara, riddhima got annoyed and walked towards the plug and pulled it. " di aap ne yeh kya kiya", yelled Akshara, riddhima shockingly looked at her, Akshara realized her tone, " oh i'm sorry di, par di you are being fair, i was writing something and i didn't even save it", declared Akshara. Riddhima smiled, " pagali itni typing karegi toh..........." riddhima paused, Akshara looked at her confused, " toh......?", she asked. riddhima smiled, " toh kuch akshi chal ab tayar hoja hamari flight 1:00 pm ki hai aur ahbi 10:00 baje rahe hain", she demanded, Akshara, smiled, " accha theek hai di, i'll be downstair in a few minute".Riddhima smiled and left.

Hall
Riddhima stood there waiting for Akshara, until she saw her walk down wearing jean with a blue top and her hair tied up in a pony tail, and no jewellery except for a of anklet on her right feet. Riddhima smiled, akshara came down and they left.

International Airport of India
" arre preet teri nazar bhi kay urr gayi hai, look closely they should be coming by now", nagged his mom, preet made faces, and stuck his tongue at her when she wasn't looking, but his eyes lit up as he saw his sweet sisters, " diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii", he singed as he ran over to them, " preet", said riddhima and Akshara in chorus as they both hugged her. " preet tu kaisa hai, aur ma?", said Akshara, as she looked around trying to find her mom. " akshi ma wahan hai", he said pointing towards a directiong,Akshara smiled and ran to her mom and hugged her like a little 5 year old girl who had been away from her mom for too long, riddhima followed behind with preet by her side. " maa kaisi hain aap?", riddhima asked as she hugged her mom." beta ab tum dono agaye ho toh muhje kuch aur nahi chahiye", she said with tears, preet frowned, " maaaa main bhi hoon", he said kiddisly, Akshara and riddhi laughed at his behaviour." haan mere beta tu bhi hai, tum teeno hi toh meri zindagi ho!!", their mom said. " ma ab bas bhi karo yeh dono ahabi hi ayi hain aur tumne inhe rula bhi diya", said preet, Akshara and riddhi wiped their tears. " ma papa nahi aye", asked Akshara, " beta unhe kuch zaroori kaam tha" heer nodded, " chalien", asked preet annoyed. They all started to walk but then Akshara realized they had forgotten the luggage, " guys our luggage aap log chaliye, main leke ati hoon"Akshara said as she walked towards the luggage area.

Other part of airport
" bhaiya i don't understand one thing fiance woh aap ki hai, toh muhje kyun laye hain aap" asked naitik annoyinly to arman, whose eyes were searching for a special someone. " abbe fiance ke bache teri bhabi hai milna nahi chahta kya", said arman, naitik cutely smiled, " aise kehte ho toh phir sahi hai, ofcourse bhabi se milna chahta hoon", said naitik, he had never seen riddhima, but he had heard alott about her from arman, her simplicity, her honesty , how caring she is , then he saw a girl who exactly matched those qualities according to him, walk by , " bhabiiiiiiiiiiii", he said excitedly as he hugged the girl, " get off me, you idiot!", said the girl who turned out to be none other than Akshara, naitik seperated and looked at the girl, she looked soo cute when she was annoyed, he thought, " you idiot bhabi hai teri kya soch raha hai!", he said to himself," i knew it i told di, don't some to india, but she wouldn't listen, now losers like ........", before she could finish, naitik cut her off, " dehkiya bhabiji, aap hamari bhabi hai is liye chup hoon warna!". Akshara mouth hung open in shock, " bhabi ", she uttered, " you loser, pagal ho kya, why are you calling me bhabi?",naitik had enough, " pata nahi bhaiya ki choice ko kya hogaya hai, pata ni kaisi larki choose kar li hai", he said out loud, which brought arman out of his dream world and he looked over to see naitik with some unknown girl, who look quite annoyed, he ran over to them, " naitik yeh kya ho raha hai?", he asked, " bhaiya apki choice asi hogi maine kahbi socha nahi tha", said naitik looking Akshara up and down, arman looked confused, " ab tu kya bol raha hai?", Akshara had enough, " dhekiya mister, i don't know who you are, par apne bhai ko smajhiye, he really needs some help, he has been calling me his bhabi for the past 5 minutes", said Akshara and stormed away before, either arman or naitik could say anything. " bhabi?", arman looked at naitik who looked embarrased by what he had done, " i'm sorry bahiya muhje laga>.................", arman smiled and hugged him" lets go", he said.

Sinha Mansion

Akshara and riddhima had both settled in their rooms, and were umpacking, "di i told you not to come to india", said Akshara, as riddhima laughed as she heard about the incident that happened at the airport, " dii it's not funny", Akshara said cutely, " accha akshi yeh toh bata larka dehkne mein kaisa.........", asked riddhima, Akshara looked annoyed, " diii forget it you never take never take me seriously"," askshi i'm sorry, chal baba ab gusa dukh bhi de", said riddhi,Akshara smiled and hugged her. Soon they hug was broken by a shriek.. " preet kya hua", asked Aksharaas preet stood at their door screaming. " akshi what did you bring for me i mean, my present where is it?", he asked as he walked up to the duo, " di look yeh kahbi nahi badal wala", preet frowned, " riddhi diiiiiiiiiii", he said cutely, " akshi chup kar mere chote bhai ko kyun dant rahi hai", said riddhima, preet stuck his tongue out at Akshara, which didn;t go unoticed by riddhima, " preettttt", she held his ears, " acchahh. okkkk i'm sorry akshi dii", he said. Akshara smiled and hugged him, " it's okay".

Singh House
A&P room
Arman looked in the mirror once again to make sure her sherwani looked perfect, when naitik came from behind, i:" wahh bahiya kya lag rahe ho, bhabi is one special lady", said naitik as he hugged arman. " thanxz yaar, bas ab woh jaldi se is ghar mein ajaye.......", arman said with a cute smile, " hmmmmm looks like someone is too eager", said naitikteasingly, arman blushed and left the room." oheyyyyyyy oheyyyyyyy suna tha larkiyan sharmati hain, par yahan toh oppsite horaha ......."

while at the other house.
Riddhima was wearing a white lehnga,looking like a angel. She blushed as she looked at herself in the mirror, when Akshara walked in with the jewelery she smiled as she helped riddhima with getting, " woowww dii you look soo beautiful!!!", squealed Akshara, riddhima blushed at her comment, " thanxz, par don't worry jaldi teri bari bhi ayegi", she said , as Akshara froze in her spot as she heard ridhdimas sentence.

Preveiw: " aaj toh hum gaye bhaiya", whispered naitik to arman, whose mouth was open in shock, " aap kaho toh ahbi hi murh jayein!", asked naitik😆😆😆

hey guys, i hope you all like the part and sorrryy for the late update just beezzeeeeeee in skooolll

please read & coommmmmmmneeeeeeettttttttt!!!!!!!!!

-Sanam-

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Edited by PheliNazar - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice update dear......eagerly waitin 4 d next part................
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow dear very nice part....... update the next part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Woh!!!! its really a very nice update..........Keep it up.........Waiting for the next part....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey d concept iz very nice...plz post d update soon and if possbl plz pm me i will b waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kya baat hai sanma tussi e to kamaal kar diya ...mazaa a aa gya yaar...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice ff.....
a really good blend of D.M.G &YRKKH...
keep updating
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
please update the next part soon ....i m eagarly waiting !!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Dear modds

please close this thread.................!!!!!!!!!!!

-sanam-

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