Ek Kamra-Mayur+Sajan FF Part 4 pg 16

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The wind was blowing slowly, as the darness covered the sky. Well what am I suppost to say? It is pretty cold and dark out here.

Gunjan-Di please don;t make me do this, agar bui ne catch kar liya toh trouble mein phass jae ge.
Nupur-Don't worry Gunjan mein hoon na.
Gunjan-Ok par agar mein trouble mein phassi aur appne bolla "Mein? Mein kab thi tere saath?" Toh?
Nupur-Don't worry mein pakka tere saath trouble mein bhi phassoon gi. Ok? Now, would you climb the ladder already?
Gunjan-Accha theekhe.
I slowly, climbed the ladder, which lead to Bui's room. I got in from the window, and saw her sleeping obviously. I tiptoed to the little drawer besides her bed, and slowly got the keys. Then I slowly climbed back the ladder.Di was waiting for me.
Nupur-Itni derr kyun laagadi? Kya milli?
Gunjan- Haan di mujhe keys milli.
I get it out, and we both smile.
Nupur-Accha abb jaldi chal andaar, isse phele Bui uuth jae.
Gunjan-Haan.
We went inside the house, and I get lost in my thoughts again. I think about how our parents died in an car accident, about 5 years ago, leaving us with Bui, our dad's sister. And how Bui always took care of us and love us. And how we spend 5 years in this house. This house has so much memories. And we knew ever single corner in this house, except except that room, that Bui has never let us open. We have never seen what is inside it. And now we had took Bui's keys in the middle of the night to open that door, and see what's inside it. Now, I stop thinking. We were standing right in front of that room.
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By god, it's so cold out here, plus dark too. I look at the sky, no moon, no stars, nothing. Wow, pretty creepy.
I got the ladder for Gunjan to climd up and get the keys from Bui's room. It would be a lot easier if Bui don't lock her room's door, and we could easily smeake inside to get the keys. Well anyways, she always does, and now we had to open that door and see what is inside it. Plus the love letter that was for Dia from Benji, mistakely slipped that door, and if Bui sees that letter, she would like freake out. So we had to go in that room to get that letter, and see what's inside it. Gunjan and I have always wondered, why in the world Bui has never let us go in that room. After our parents death 5 years ago, we have always lived in this house with Bui, our dads sister. She loves us very much, and we three lives here. Her husbend had died when we were very little. And we never heard about if she has childrens or not. Well anyways, Gunjan climb the ladder, and I stay down. I wait for like 7 to 10 minutes. Where is that girl? Then she finally comes, and I ask her for the keys, and she has it. We decide to go back inside, and I put the ladder back where I found it. We walk, to that mysteries room, without saying one word. And we reach it.
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Nupur-Gunjan open it.
Gunjan-No, you do.
Nupur-Fine then give me the keys.
Gunjan hands Nupur the keys. And she trie to open the door with the varieties of keys.
Gunjan-Di, jaldi karro warna Bui aa jae gi.
Nupur-Ek second, open hi nahi ho raha hai.
Some seconds passes.
Gunjan-Di?
The door unlocks.
Nupur-Lo ho gaya.
Both Nupur and Gunjan look at each other.
Gunjan-Should we go in?
Nupur-I guess.
Ummmm, hi I am Lina. Love Mayur and Sajan too. And well this is deffintaly not my first FF, I have write like lots of them, lol. Well this idea came to me, when I was thinking about my aunties house, and that one room, that myteries room, that was locked. And when I asked her about it, she says she doesn't even know about it. She has never even opened it. It had been locked for years. That gave me an idea. And I wanted to write this FF about it. Do tell me if you like it or not. That if I should continue it or not.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yes! I wanted to be first.

Back to the story:
Omg, I really want to know what's in that room
akhir raaz kya hai?
continue soon desi girl!
Edited by dmgmjht4ever - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds very interesting Lina..do continue!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tht was cool plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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cont soon lina dear
i need to noe wats in that room!
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Please continue and add me to pm list
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HII!!!
i really like ur story!!!
plzz continue soon!!!!
and also add me on ur PM list too
THANKS!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start
plz continue soon
i too want to know the room raaz hehehe..........
N than for the pm dear
love
sana.
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i liked it dear

gunur were sweet
continue soon
luv
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cool start........i likd it...........wanna read more...........😳😳

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