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Posted: 16 years ago

MY DMG

ACTUALLY IT IS AN OPEN FAN-FIC "AR IN LUV"

WHICH REACHED TO MANY THREADS

AND LASTLY IT WAS CLOSED IN MIDDLE.

AS I DIDN'T LIKED IT CLOSING SO I M CONTINUING IT AGAIN..

FIRSTLY I WOULD POST PREVIOUS PARTS,

AND THEN I WOULD CONT

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Hello guys

this is my pm account( rockstar_mohit )

plz add this account to ur buddy list

for pms pms will be sent

only to those who will give

their views both comment and critcization 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mohit_aggarwal

ACTAULLY IT IS AN OPEN FAN-FIC "AR IN LUV" WHICH REACHED TO MANY THREADS AND LASTLY IT

WAS CLOSED IN MIDDLE.

AS I DIDN'T LIKED IT CLOSING SO I M CONTINUING IT AGAIN..

FIRSTLY I WOULD POST PREVIOUS PARTS, AND THEN I WOULD CONT

Hi mohit,
is it ur pending ff?
if u want to continue it then its really nice idea.
So go ahead.
All the best
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Posted: 16 years ago

     INDEX

     TOPIC              PAGE

INTRO                 1

PM LIST              1

PART 1               1

PART 2               1

PART 3               1

PART 4               1

PART 5               2

PART 6               2

PART 7               2

NOTE 1               2

PART 8               2

PART 9               2

NOTE 2              3

PART 10            3

PART 11            3

PART 12            3

PART 13            3

PART 14            3

PART 15            3

PART 16            4

PART 17            4

NOTE 3              5

PART 18            5

PART 19            5

PART 20            6

PART 21            6

PART 22            6

PART 23            6

PART 24            6

PART 25            6

NOTE 4             7

PART 26           7

PART 27            7

NOTE 5            8

     PART 28             9

NOTE 6            9

NOTE 7            10

PART 29           11

PART 30           13

NOTE 8             13

NOTE 9             14

PART 31            17

PART 32            17

NOTE 10            17

PART 33            18

PART 34            18

NOTE 11            18

NOTE 12            20

NOTE 13            21

PART 35            21

PART 36            21

PART 37            21

PART 38            22

PART 39            23

PART 40            23

NOTE 14            24

PART 41            24

PART 42            24

PART 43            25

PART 44 26

PART 45   26

PART 46 29

PART 47 29

PART 48 30

PART 49 30

PART 50 31

PART 51 31

PART 52   32

PART 53 34

PART 54 34

NOTE 16   35
PART 55 35

PART 56 36

PART 57   37

PART 58   37

PART 59 37

PART 60   37

PART 61   37

PART 62   37

PART 63 37
NOTE 18   38

PART 64 38

PART 65 38

PART 66 40

PART 67 40

PART 68 40

PART 69 40

PART 70 40

PART 71 40

PART 72   41

PART 73 41

PART 74 41

PART 75 41

PART 76 41

PART 77 42

PART 78 42

PART 79 42

PART 80 42

PART 81 42

PART 82 42

PART 83 43

PART 84 43

PART 85 43

PART 86 43

PART 87 43

PART 88 43

PART 89 45

PART 90 45

PART 91 45

PART 92 45

PART 93 45

PART 94 46

PART 95 46
PART 96 45

PART 97 45

PART 98 45

PART 99 46

PART 100 46

PART 101 47

PART 102 48

PART 103 48

PART 104 48

PART 105 48

PART 106 48

PART 107 48

PART 108 48

PART 109 48

PART 110 49

PART 111 49

PART 112 49

PART 113 49

PART 114 49

NOTE 20 49

PROMO 50
PART 115 50

PART 116 50

PART 117 51

PART 118   51

PART 119   51

PART 120 51

PART 121   51

PART 122 51

PART 123   51

PART 124 52

PART 125 52

NOTE 21 53

PART 126 54

NOTE+REPLY22 56

NOTE +REPLY23 56

NOTE 24    56

PART 127        56

PART 128 56

PART 129       58

NOTE 25 58

NOTE 26 58

PART 130 58

PART 131       58

PART 132 58

PART 133       59

PART 134 59

PART 135 59

PART 136 60

PART 137 60

PART 138 60

PART 139 60

PART 140 60

PART 141 60

PART 142 61

MORE COMING SOON
DEPENDING ON COMMENTS
AND CRITICISM

Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 13 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

A FANFIC ON ARMAAN ND RIDZ.
PART 1

I'LL CONTINUE FRM THE JUNGLE PART.

(RIDZ CHOSES DARE ND THEN....)

ARMAAN: THEEK HAI TO PHIR JUNGLE MEIN JAA KE BATAAO!

RIDZ: PAGAAL TONAHI HO GAYE.

ANJALI: OH COMMON RIDZ! YEHI WAQT HAI KHUD KO PROVE KARNE KA.

RIDZ: OK FINE. MEIN JAA RAHI HOON.(ND SHE LEAVES)

ATUL: AKALI JUNGLE MEIN BHEJ DIYA ?

SAPNA: BECHAARI. THATS NOT FAIR. TUMHE AISA NAHI KARNA CHAHIYE THAT.

ANJALI: LETS GO SLEEP.

(AND ALL OF THEM GO EXCEPT ARMAAN)

ARMAAN: KAHIN MEINE KUCH GALAT TO NAHI KAR DIYA? KOI JUNGLEE JANWAR AA GAYA TO?I
THINK I SHOULD GO THERE 2.

(HE LEAVES FR THE JUNGLE.)

ARMAAN: RIDHIMAAAAAAAA.......................TUM KAHAN HO?

(MEANWHILE RIDZ, SCARED, WALKING IN THE JUNGLE)

RIDZ: KITNI DARAAVNI GAJAH HAI YEH. BY THE WAY MEIN HOON KAHAN? PLZ KOI TO MERI HELP KE KIYE AA GAYE.

(AND THEN BOTH OF THEM CRASH AGANIST EACH OTHER ND SHOUT ALOUD)

RIDZ: ISSE KYUN BHEJ DIYA?

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mohit

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 2

"Ek toh tumhaari madad karne aaya hoon, oopar-se tum keh rahi ho kyun bhej diya isey?"

"Tumhaare yahaan aane se acha toh yehi tha ki koi jungli jaanwar aa jaata!"

And then both stand facing in opoosite directions, their hands folded.

Suddenly, there's a cast of lightning, and Riddhima suddenly jumps and hugs armaan...

Ridz then realises what she just did, and steps back.

Both then look at each other for a second, and then Armaan comes back to normal,

AND starts looking here and there.

Riddhima too looks down. "Ab waapis chalein?" she asks.

"Nahin, nahin. Mere paas mobile hain,

Dr. Keerti se kehkar poora camp yahin lagwa lete hain!" says Armaan, sarcastically.

"Mazaak karna band karo, aur yeh bataao ki kidhar jaana hai?"

"Main kyun bataaoon? Tum khud nahin ja sakti kya?"

"Dekho Arm-..." and then she stops.

"Okay, tumhaari zaroora kisey hai, main khud hee chali jaaoongi, thanx a lot!"

And Ridz goes away, angrily.

"Pata nahin apne aap ko samajhta kya hai, fool!

Aur usey kya lagta hai, main darti hoon, bilkul nahin, 'uuuuaaaaaahhhhhhh'!" Ridz suddenly stops,

she hears the roar of a wild animal, likely to be a lion.

"Oh God! Ab main kahaan jaaoon?!" She walks a little further and there!

Whiiiiiiiissssssssshhhhhhhh! She gets tied upside down onto a tree, very unknowingly.

She then realises what she's just been through, and shouts for help.

"Bachaao, bachaao, koi hai? Koi hai kya yahaan? Please help me!"

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PART 3

LISTENING 2 HER SHOUTS ARMAAN COMES THERE.......

ARMAAN: JUNGLEE JANWARON SE BACHNE KA YEH KONSA TARIKA HIA?

RIDZ: SHUT UP ND HELP ME.

ARMAAN: EK TO HELP KARNE AAYA HOON AUR UPAR SE DAAT TI HO! TO PHIR LATKI RAHO.

(ND HE'S ABOUT 2 GO)

RIDZ: NAHI...NHAI....PLZ MAT JAAO. PLZ MERI HELP KARO.

ARMAAN: TUM NE KUCH KAHA ?

RIDZ: PLZ...PLZ...MERI HELP KARO......

ARMAAN: SHAYAD KOI SORRY KEHNA BHOOL GAYA!

RIDZ: OK I'M SORRY.

(ND THEN HE HELPS HER OUT)

RIDZ: THANX

ARMAAN: UR WELCOME.

RIDZ: AB KAHAN JANA HAI?

ARMAAN: MAURITIUS

RIDZ: WHAT!

ARMAAN: OBVIOUSLY YAHAN SE BAHAR JAANE KA RASTA DHOONDNA HAI.

(BOTH OF THEM R WALKING AND SUDDENLY IT STARTS 2 RAIN HEAVILY

AND THEY FIND A SHED WHERE THEY CAN STAY FR THE NIGHT.

RIDZ IS DRYING HER HAIR ND ARMAAN IS JUST STARING AT HER)

ARMAAN:(2 HIMSELF)U R SO BEAUTIFUL!

RIDZ: DID U SAY SOMETHING?

ARMAAN: (BACK 2 HIS SENSES)DID U HEAR SOMETHING?

RIDZ: YES!

ARMAAN: BHOOT....BHOOT....

RIDZ: WHAT?

ARMAAN: MAINE TO KUCH NAHI KAHA AUR TUMNE KUCH SOONA AUR
YAHAAN BHI KOI NAHI HAI TO FIR BHOOT NE HI KAHA HOGA NA!

RIDZ: WHAT R U SPEAKING

ARMAAN: NOTHING .MAINE KUCH NAHI KAHA.

RIDZ: TO YEH PEHLE NAHI BOL SAKTE THE?

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PART 4

RIDZ: TO PHIR YEH PEHLE NAHI BOL SAKTE THE?

ARMAAN: MEINE SOOCHA THODA TIMEPASS KAR LOON.

RIDZ: ACHHA TO TUM SOOCHTE BHI HO. VERY GOOD! SOOCHNA ACHI BAAT HAI.

ARMAAN: P.J.!

(IT IS STILL RAINING HEAVILY.

SUDDENLY IT THUNDERS AND RIDZ IS IN ARMAAN'S ARMS!

BOTH R HUGGING EACH OTHER AGAIN.

IN THEIR DREAMS....SUDDENLY RIDZ REALIZES WHAT SHE WAS DOING...)

RIDZ: OH! I'M SO SORRY

ARMAAN: SORRY FR WAHT?

RIDZ: (BLUSHING)

ARMAAN: (BREAKING THE SCILENCE)

I'M GETTING BORED .WHAT DO V DO NOW?

RIDZ: LETS PLAY TRUTH. SAACH SIRF SAACH.

ARMAAN: OK I'LL ASK FIRST. TUM KISSE SAB SE ZAYADA PYAAR KARTI HO?

RIDZ: PAPA ............... MY TURN.

KIS TERHA KI LADKI SE TUM SHAADI KARNA CHAAOGE?

ARMAAN: (THINKING....SOME1 LIKE U!)

EK AISE LADKI JO BEAUTIFUL HO,THODI BOHOT INTELLIGENT HO,

AUR SABSE PYAAR SE BAAT KARTI HO,
KISI MEIN BHI DISCRIMINATE NAHI KARTI HO AUR JO THODI BOHOT ROMANTIC HO!

RIDZ: OK.

ARMAAN: AUR TUM KISSE SHAADI KARNA CHAATI HO?

RIDZ: EK AISA LADKA JO INTELLIGENT HO,

HANDSOME NAHI BHI HUA TO BHI CHALEGA

BUT JO MUJSE PYAAR KARTA HO AUR KABHI KISSE KO HURT NAHI KARTA HO...

ARMAAN: THEEK HAI

RIDZ: KYA TUM MERE DOST BANOGE?

ARMAAN: KYA?

RIDZ: KYA TUM MERE DOST BANOGE?

ARMAAN: SOOCHNA PADAGA!

RIDZ: ARMAANNN........

ARMAAN: MAZAK KAR RAHA THA. HAAN.

RIDZ: ISKA MATLAB TUMNE MUJHE MAAF KAR DIYA?

ARMAAN: AGAR NAHI KIYA HOTA TO KYA TUMSE AISE BAAT KAR RAHA HOTA?

MEINE TO TUMHE SANJEEVNI SE NIKALNE SE PEHLE HI MAAF KAR DIYA THA...

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PART 5

RIDZ: TO PHIR AB TAK BATAYA KYUN NAHI?

ARMAAN: MEINE SOOCHA THODA TIMEPASS KAR LOON!

RIDZ: TIMEPASS!! WHAT DO U MEAN BY TIMEPASSS!!!!!!!

TUMHE SAACH MEIN KISSE KI FEELINGS KI PARWAH NAHI HAI.

MEIN TO YEH SOOCH RAHI THI KI TUMNE AB TAK MUJHE MAAF NAHI KYA.

AGAR MEIN MAAFI MANGNE KE LIYA KUCH KAR DETI TO????????

ARMAAN: THEEK HAI. THEEK HAI! ISMEIN ITNA GUSSA HONE KI KYA BAAT HAI?

RIDZ: MEIN TO KHUD KO HI KOSNE LAGI THI,

KI MEINE ITNI BADI GALTI KER DI KI TUM MUJSE ITNA GUSSA HO GAYE!

Armaan: Badi Galti toh thi, lekin voh sabh pichlee bath hai...let's forget it.

Agar hum dono koh dost banna hai tho phir hamara beech bharosa bhi hona chaiya...manzoor.

Ridz: Manzoor.

Armaan: Acha tum doctor kyun banna chaathi thei...

Ridz: Mein apne Papa ke bahut izzat karthe hoon,

aur un par naaz hai ki voh kaise logoon ke maddath karthe hain...

mein bhilkul unki jaise bhan na chaathi hoon..aur thum...?

Armaan: Mere dad ke vajah see...lambhi kahani hai...phir khabie bhataon gha..

yehi samajhloa..kuch saabhath karna chatha hoon. Aur

Sabath karne ke bath..Riddhama..Yo Basket...mein apne dil se bhaath kar raha hoon..aur

tum tho lala land mein ghus kay.

Wake up basket..teek hai.

Armaan thinks to himself: Yeh tho basket kuch aur cheez hai...

soothe hui kithne innocent or khubsoorat lag rahe hai.....

Armaan gets up and picks riddhama up in his arms and puts on the makeshift bed.

And admires her beauty while unbeknowst to him feelings are stirring up in his heart...

feelings that won't be able to stop from growing even if he wanted to.

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Posted: 16 years ago

PART 6

Armaan could see the innocent child in Riddhama's face.

How he wished he could take her to Dr. Gupta immediately.

He knew that would make her smile more than anything

and he desparetly wanted to please her, but didn't know why.

Why was Basket affecting him this way..

what was going on with his heart...he meant his mind..

Armaan (thinking to himself): Yeh dil kahan takpak aya.

Armaan out loud: teek hai, fikar mat karo...

thoree dher mein subha hoa jayege..and

then I promise Basket mein thume tumhare papa ke paas laijaonga.

Ridz: Promise...

Armaan: Promise.

Ridz: teek hai abh thum thoree aur dher soa jao...

aga hoa saktha hai bahut lambha safar hoa aur..Armaan, Armaan...

Ridz saw that Armaan had already fallen asleep.

So she lay down as well...and gazed at him while he slept.

Ridz thought to herself, how childlike he looks when he is sleeping...

no arrogance or obnoxiousness coudld be seen...

Ridz thinking to herself: Kiya yehi asli roop hai armaan ka...

Armaan apna papa koa kya sabath karna chatha hai...

kitna dard tha unki bathoan mein.

Mauka mile ga thoh mein zaroor phir sai puchongee....

Ridz was a little scared and she thought to herself that it was

better to lay closer to Armaan than on the other side of the shack.

So she got up and lay down closer to himself,

and for once in her life...she feel protected.

Her father had always protected her,

but this feeling was different and

she had never felt it before....

Ridz: Armaan....Armaan...

Ridz realised that Armaan was in a deep sleep..and

she didn't want to disturb him. So she closed her eyes...and

the only vision that came to her was the one where

she had hugged Armaan in the forest out of fright.

With that vision Ridz feel asleep again.

The morning sun shone in Armaan eyes waking him.

He felt happy...He smiled,
he hadn't felt this happy in ages.

He put his hands on his chest and felt another hand....

was it the bhooth.....he felt a little more..

it was a delicate and soft hand...he opened his eyes and looked down,

Riddhama had placed her hand over Armaan's chest.

The tossing and turning had moved Armaan and Ridz closer.

Armaan softly picked Ridz's arm up and placed it beside her.

He got up and moved to the other side of the shack....and waited

Armaan (thinking): mein yehein bait ke meri basket ki jagne ki intezaar karonga...

meri basket...what's happening to me.

He heard Riddhama stir in her sleep and

he watched her intently as she slowly woke up...

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PART 7

RIDZ: ARMAAN TUM KABHI UTHEE?

MUJHE PATA BHI NAHI CHALA.

ARMAAN: TUM TO WHAAAN PAR SOOYI THI NA.

(POINTING TO THE PLACE SHE WAS SLEEPING)

PHIR YAHAAN KAIE AA GAYI?

RIDZ: WOH.. WOH.. MUJHE DARR LAG RAHA THA

ISLIYE TUMHARE PAAS AA GAYI.

ARMAAN: WOW! BASKET KO DARR BHI LAGTA HAI!

RIDZ: ARMAAN............! STOP IT!

ARMAAN: OK.

RIDZ: SO WHAT R V DOING NOW?

ARMAAN: LETS SEARCH FOR SOME FOOD FIRST AND

THEN WE'LL FIND THE WAY BACK TO THE CAMP.

RIDZ: FINE. ANYWAYS I'M HUNGRY 2

ridz:mujhe bookh lagi and im very thirsty

armaan:yahaan par koi mcdonalds nahin hai ki main

tumhare liye hamburger with frenchfries n coke lekar aaon

ridz:mazaak mat karo

armaan:ok basket

ridz:chalo ab bahaar nikalne ka raaste dhundte hai

warna hum dono humeshakeliye ghum hojayenge!!!!!!!!

armaan (2 himself):main toh chahta hon ki

hum hamesha ke liye gum hojaye!!!

ahhhhh wats happening 2 me

ridz:ab chalo bhi kya soch rahe ho!!!

armaan:coming na basket!!!!!!!!!

suddenly as they are walking

ridz feels that there is something

in her sandal n she starts laughing

ridz:hehe hehe

armaan is staring at her a question was on his face

armaan:tumhe kya paagalpan ke dore parte hai

ridz:hehe he shut up hehe he armaan hehe

hehe hehe meri sandal main kuch hai hehe!!!

armaan stares at her feet

armaan:kya hai??????????????

ridz:hehe hehe he no hehe hehe idea

armaan bends down

armaan:wait a moment

ridz:kya hehe kar hehe ho?

armaan:wait meri maa!!!

armaan ridz ki sandal utaar ta hai aur aur

ussme se doh cheetiyan nikal ti hai

ridz shouts

ridz:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cheeti cheeti!!!!!!!!!!

armaan:aaj kal ki ladkiyaan bhi naa!!!!!!!!

ridz hand was on armaan's shoulder

aur woh apna haath itna zor se uske shoulder

pe press karti hain ki armaan ko bohut acha lagta hai

ki woh apna haath pyar se uske feet pe malta hai

thodi der ke liye woh bhi behek jaati hain!!!!!!!!

Edited by mohit_aggarwal - 16 years ago