New FF-One Wild One-Chapter 3 p.8 February 13th

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One Wild Party!
"Today,we're here to annouce the engagement of Mr.Preet Juneja,"Uncle(Mr.Juneja)said.Everyone smiled and clapped as I nodded and smiled as I clapped."Preet is getting married to his best friend Ash,"Uncle said and Ash smiled and walked up the stage.I'm losing the one I love the most...............I thought as I stood there looking at both of them.Preet has been my best friend since we were five and like a guide in my life.Preet always supported me when I was there and guided me,helped me in my studied,and best BFF ever.Sort of,I started to crush on Preet more than ever since seventh grade and that crush increased and soon I wanted to take the "F" out of BFF and make him simply my BF.But,somehow that didn't work out.Preet found someone special waiting at his doorstep or actaully should I say dorm room's step in his university.Preet went off to a different university and found Ash there.Ash was actually a clasmate at Preet's class and soon they got assigned for projects,then slowly project nights on which they worked on projects together turned out to dates then dates turned to late night dates,and then late night dates turned out to makeout sessions,and then it turned into a meeting with the whole family and including me,and soon later Preet propsed to Ash.And I was sitting there shocked with my jaw wide open and thinking that why did God steal Preet away from me?!Why did this happen to me?!Why did I lose someone?!And also I did feel guilty I lost someone I loved because I couldn't tell him my feelings.Now..............life had ended for me and laso it ended more.My parents' left me last month.They decided to go to God.........They died in a car accident and I was alone.Alone and alone in this world............I thought as I walked through the crowd as Preet slowly placed the beauitful diamond and ruby ring into Ash's hand.
I walked towards the small mini bar and sat down the barstool.The bar wasn't filled with many people because most of them were lost in seeing the engagement of Preet and Ash,but some found alcohol more entertaining."What would you like to have ma'am,"The bartender said looking at me."Anything to get rid of the pain on my heart,"I said leaning on the counter and looking at him."Okay,then let's give you some wine since I do see your not a drinker,"The barteder said."I'm not a drinker,but I think I'm becoming one,"I said looking at him and he nodded and filled my glass of wine."Thank you,"I said and I took the glass and drank it one sip."Hmmmmmm...................one MORE!"I siad hiccuping and he gave me another glass and before I knew it I drank more and morenot stopping."ONE MORE BABY!"I said loudly as I laughed and he nodded and filled another glass................................................................
Prem's Point Of View****************************************************************
I slowly walked through the crowd holding my glass of wine and thanking everyone as many congrtualted that my brother was getting married.I didn't care one bit since I'm not that much interested into my family.You see I was born into the Juneja family,but had a total different personality.I hated everything that invovled my family because my family for me was a crazy family.There not my type.I mean dad well he's too serious,mom well is always involved in high class parties,and Preet is just not my type.He's too serious and always wants neetness.No wonder I decided to become a docter and not get involved in the fmaily hotel business.Sooooooooooo not my type.I just love dto explore the human body.I loved how tythe heart worked,the muscles,and bones.I loved everything that included science.My world was actually a different world.In my world everything was about me and always will be.Somewhow anger does loosen on me,but still it's me.
I walked through the crowd and out to the pool area where everyone was going wild and widely dancing.I ignored them and rolled my eyes as I walked through and there I stood there shocked as I saw Heer.Heer what is she doing here near the mini bar?!Weird of her I mean I know Heer sicne she was about five and I was ten.She was a goody and goody and never got in trouble,but always placed me in trouble.No wonder I never talked to her much because somehow when she was near me she always fell and people blamed me that this big kid hit the little one as if I would hit a girl.I know how to respect ladies.I thougt as I stood there.I looked at her and she sort of looked very hot in her red gown.She wore a very beautiful dark,deep red dress which seeped through her skin as the dress hugged her tightly into a large hug.Her back was covered with red laces from the dress from which a little bit of skin was showing.Her dress were strapless and that made her more attractive............but wait what am I thinking?!I mean how can I get attracted to her?!She's not even my type!I thought as I looked at her.But,atleast I should help her I mean come on I think she's drinking after all last month her parents' passed away and I think she didn't get that support that she wants.An dalso,she's drinking a lot I mean there are about fifteen wine glasses around her.I'm surprised she didn't pass out yet.I thought as I walked towards her...................................................................................................
Heer's Point Of View****************************************************************
"I'm a wildcat baby!I mean look at this!"I said smiling as I looked at the wine glsses around me."Well,what can I say you drink a lot like your competeing for a race,"The bartender said looking at me."Well,sir!What can I say!I'm no competing for a race,but just a bit down!I mean who wouldn't be!Your niot a girl sir,so you don't know how women feel when their man is stealen by another!I mean it's not fair!God!He left me!"I said as tears filled up in my eyes.I felt a tap on my shoulder and I turned around to see Prem.God!Great now he's here!I mean now everyone's going to think that I'm a drinker even I'm not!Now,it's my ex crush's older brother or actually should I say loner!I mean every since I've been beginning to know the Juneja family I've always see Prem as the loner.Always,backing out on family naights,camping trips,parties I mean everything!And I sort of hate him for that!I mena come one spend some time with family!I thought as I looked at him."What do you want boy?!"I said looking at him."Heer,stop drinking wine.THis wine is too strong for you,"Prem said looking at me."Well,I'm strong enough for strong wine mister!"I said looking at him."Look,Heer your not a drinker na dthis is not for you!"Prem said looking at me."It is for me Prem!Okay,anyways now just leave me and for your information I'm legal for drinking,"I siad looking at him."Well,FYI you just can't handle alcohol,"Prem said looking at me and I glared at him."One more please!"I said and I took the glass and drank it in one long sip."You Prem Junnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeeeeejjjjjjjaaaaaaaaaa!Don't you dare think I can't handle wine!You know I can handle it and as much as glasses I drink of wine I won't fall!I'm ready to even dance!I'll show you"I said grabbing his collar and looking at him."No!Heer get down you're going to fall!"Prem said grabbing my waist."Look,Prem I'm not going to fall down!I'm powerful enough to stand hear and daaaaannnnnnncccccccccceeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"I said screaming out loud."No!Look,Heer just get down and how about I drive you to your apartment,"Prem said looking at me."Apartment?!No,babe I'm in the mood for a wild night!You see I'm a tiger,"I siad and I lightly scratched his face."Owwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Prem said screamin gout loud and I laughed as I looked at him."You know let's have a deal!You're going ot have five glasses of wine with me and then I'll go home!"I said,but you know I'm smart.I'll fool him I'll talk and talk and involve him in conversation and never making him drive me home and also I'll drink more wine!Ooo-la-la!I thought as I smiled."Okay,fine,"Prem said and I smiled as I sat on the counter while he sat on the barstool."One more drink!"I said loudly."Heer,why are you drinking so much,"Prem said looking at me."Well,look it's simple I'm a wildcat tonight,"I said looking at him."No,there's something wrong no wonder your drinking.I eman whcih girl drinks who wears a purity ring.I eman if she can stay absteince then she can stay away from alcohol,"Prem said."Well,fine let me tell.I was crushed by your stupid brother Preet!I love dhim all my life,but somehow he
found a way to crush my heart!"I said looking at him and he looked at me shocked."You loved Preet,"Prem said."I lvoved him,but now who cares?!He's someone else's!Not mine's!Who cares now I don't find naything attractive about him!His stupid hair is not my type!His eyes are plain bor-ing!And now listening to his words make me think as if I'm going to die!"I said."Okay,"Prem said raising his eyebrows."You know!Prem you look better then him!Hate to admit it,but he sort of look like my prince charming!Just look at that jawline of yours'!Those muscles make me forget myself and making my heart beating faster then ever!And you soft silky hair that attracts me morethan ever!And those beauitful eyes of yours' hypontizing me!And those beautiful lips making me wnat to kiss you!I feel like a teenage girl again well,I'm twenty-one,so not that young,"I said smiling."Um............Heer let's take you into he hotel afterall the party is in here in the hotel.Okay,try to remember,"Prem said grabbing my waist."NO!I want to stay here with my firend named wine!"I siad looking at him."How,about we take your friend wine with us,"Prem said."Really?!Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Let's go friend,"I said laughing and hiccuping as I took the wine bottle and got off the counter."Okay,come on,"Prem said."Let's go babe!"I said laughing as I wobbled and tried to walk.Prem grabbed my waist and I feel quickly into his arms."Hmmmmm..............my prince charming!"I said as I battled my eyelashes for no reason."Prem where are you going?"Uncle said looking at Prem."Dad,Heer's got drunk.Long story and telling you later.Right now I'm going to handle her,"Prem said."Okay,fine,"Uncle said."Good night uncle!See you tomorrow!And hey can I say one thing!You are loooking good!I bet aunty can't resist you!Like I can't resisit Prem right now oh sorry my prince charming!"I said luahing as I looked at him.Uncle looked at me with his jaw wide open as Prem stood there frozen with his eyes wide-open."Heer,just close your mouth,"Prem said looking at me."But,I told him the truth!"I said looking at him."Yes,you did!And you know what I think you're telling the truth!Thannk you!"Uncle said and he smiled as he walked away.Prem's mouth dropped open as I smiled."See
I cheered him up!Come on!Let's go to the room!"I said grabbbing his tie and making him walk as he walked after me."Heer,you're falling down a lot!Let me jsut carr you!"Prem said."Really,my prince charming!"I said and he nodded and pciked me up."You are very heavy!"Prem said."Hey!"I said hitting his shoulder."Okay,sorry,"Prem said."You know,I was thinking.You are very handsome and young.Didn't you find anyone yet?!"I said looking at him."No,I didn't find the right one,"Prem said."What about me?!"I said looking at him as he carried me intot he hotel lobby."Well,you are a bit different,but somehow you look like an fairy.The one who's always gliding and soaring and taking risks.A bit clutz like you,but still very beautiful and cute.And tonight you look more than a fairy.In your beautiful red dress and long silky hair,"Prem said looking into my eyes as we walked into the elevator.And the door slowly closed..................................
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The elevator opened and there stood Heer and Prem into a deep passionate kiss.Prem's lips ran over Heer's lips silently kissing her more than ever with as much as passion.A spark went in and Heer went wild and moved her lips more firecly against his as his lips moved more firecly against her's as her lips trialer up his neck and wrpaped them around his neck as he hands wrapped securley around his waist.As they're kiss deepened Heer wrapped her legs around his waist as he held her more up and they slowly walked out fot he elevator. Prem's hands moved her zipper down as he took out his room key and opened the door and slammed it not letting go of Heer's lips once.Heer moaned as I slammed her agains tthe wall and slammed agaisnt her.She blushed firecly as Prem kissed his neck passioantely and slowly going down making her maon more and squeal.Prem mvoed his lips up and trailed her cheek whispering into her ear."You are my fairy anf you know what you are going to stay with me tonight and no one else.Not even with my brother.Tonight I'm going to wipe him out permantely out of your heart!"Prem said and he kissed Heer with more firece passion and slowly letting her hair loose out of a soft flower clip.Heer through off his jacket and shirt as his lips trailed to her zipper and kissed her there.And without any hesisitation the night went on and the moonlight fell upon them as they kissed eachother with more passion.



Meanwhile Mr.Juneja deicded to see Prem where he was because the guests wer eabout to leave and he wanted Prem to see them off.Mr.Juneja wandered everywhere around the halls and even called Mrs.Juneja to help.After a while everyone started to look for him and even tried his phone,but you see Prem was busy."Gayathri where is Prem?!I looked for him everywhere and called for him?!WHere is that boy!"Mr.Juenja said."I know!WHere is Prem?!"Mrs.Juenja siad with a worried look on his face."Dad where did you see him last time,"Preet said."Lat time he took Heer with him into the hotel.heer got drunk,so he decided to take her and make her rest,"Mr.Juenja said."Maybe Prem's there,"Ash said."yes,we should go there and check,"Preet said and everyone quickly wlaked inot the hotel and took the long elevator which went up to level thirty.Fianlly the elvator stopped and they walked out.



"Mmmmmmm.................Prem..............."Heer said softly as Prme kissed her neck passioantely and her bare shoulder."You are so beautiful,"Prem said looking at Heer."I'm beauitful.Thank you no guy has every told me that,"Heer said smiling."Well,I'm happy I'm the first one,"Prem said and he kissed her lips as she smiled and wrapped her arms arond his neck."Youa re a wildcat,"Prem said naughtingly."I am.Well,thank you,but hey don't say that again,but who cares I'll forget what I told you since I'm not feeling well yet.I still have the wine on my brain,"Heer said."Me,too,"Prem said and he kissed her passionately.


"Okay,let's see if Prem's in here,"Preet said and they all nodded and they slammed open the door,but stood there shocked.There stood a horriable scene.Prem had wrapped his arms around Heer as they kissed eachother with more passion then ever and they spread there kiss wildly."MR.PREM JUNEJA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU ARE GONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"Mr.Juneja said loudly as Heer and Prem letted go of eachother and laid there in shock as they looked at everyone who stood there in blaring anger clearly shown on their faces.



I hope you all liked this one-shot!If you all like it and I get twenty+ comments I'll right another part!Anways bye for now!



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Awsomeeeeeeee Job Jasmin loved it =)

Please continue and write more =)
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Jasmine


U HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL

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i bet everyone wants that


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omg!!! it was so so good...
i mean wow!!! really passionate...
plz write a continuation to it...
but seriously in didnt like the fact they being iteruppted by the family... HELL!!!
but that doesnt mean i didnt like it...
it was damn good...

regards,
Suhana.
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lol....nice os! very interesting ending! i don't mind u continuing as i'd love to see how u're gonna continue this!!!! love
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OH MY!!
whats gonna happen next!
pls update soon!
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Awww Buttercup123 you are back. I missed your ffs. thanks for this OS but you have to continue.
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Reminder: I hope you went through the forum reminders in the sticky. But this is still another reminder to every writer. One shots should have one single thread and not to make separate threads each time. Update one shots in the main thread and just edit the title with its page number and have an index in the post for readers. Please see to this from next time.

Desh DT.
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hmmm. Interesting.. wondering wat will happen next.. prem and heer are sure to be dead I think...
please update next part soon...
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omg!!! it was so good...
really passionate!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it very much.

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