Silent love OS Note pg2 Nikki and Sonii

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The Salty Coffee

Mayank's POV

He met her on a party, she was so outstanding, many guys chasing after her,while he was so normal, nobody paid attention to him. At the end of the party, he invited her to have coffee with him, she was surprised, but due to politeness, she promised. They sat in a nice coffee shop, he was too nervous to say anything, she felt uncomfortable, she thought, please, let me back home. Suddenly he asked the waiter: would you please give me some salt? I'd like to put it in my coffee.

Everybody stared at him, so strange! His face turned red, but, still, he put the salt in his coffee and drank it. She asked him curiously: why you have this hobby? He replied: when I was a little boy, I was living near the sea, I like playing in the sea, I could felt the taste of the sea, salty and bite, just like the taste of the salty coffee. Now every time I have the salty coffee, I will think of my childhood, think of my hometown, I miss my hometown so much, I miss my parents who still living there. Saying that, tears filled his eyes. She was deeply touched. That's his true feeling, from the bottom of his heart.

"A man who can tell out his homesick, he must be a man loves home, cares about home, has responsibility of home," she thought. Then she also started to talk, talked about her faraway hometown, her childhood, her family. That was a really nice talk, also a beautiful beginning of their story. They continue to date. She found actually he was a man who meets all her demands: he was tolerance, kind hearted, warm, careful...he was such a good guy but she almost missed him! Thanks to his salty coffee!

Then the story was just like every beautiful love story: the princess married to the prince, then they were living the happy life...And, every time she made coffee for him, she put some salt in the coffee, as she knew that's the way he liked.

After 40 years, he passed away, left her a letter which said: "My dearest, please forgive me, forgive my whole life lie. This was the only lie I said to you, the salty coffee. Remember the first time we dated? I was so nervous at that time, actually I wanted some sugar, but I said salt. It's hard for me to change so I just go ahead. I never thought that could be the start of our communication! I tried to tell you the truth many times in my life, but I was too afraid to do that, as I have promised not to lie to you for anything..Now I'm dying, I afraid of nothing so I tell you the truth: I don't like the salty coffee, what a strange bad taste..but I have the salty coffee for my whole life since I knew you, I never feel sorry for anything I do for you. Having you with me is my biggest happiness for my whole life.

If I can live for the second time, I still want to know you and have you as my whole life wife, even though I have to drink the salty coffee again."

Her tears made the letter totally wet. Someday, someone asked her: What's the taste of salty coffee?

It's sweet. She replied.



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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!!!
m d first one to coment!!!
xelent OS dear!!!
hehe...salty coffee!!!
cool!!!
nd d xcuse mayu gave her was soo cute!!
twas verrry nice...
nd d ending was touching!!!
do rite more...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
Edited by A-N-S-H-I-K-A - 16 years ago
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Awsome yaar. it's not salty. it's soooooooooooooooooooo sweet . sweet & salty love
Edited by Tapoor - 16 years ago
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INDEX

The Salty Coffee - PG1

Silent Love Pg 1
Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

hey!!!
m d first one to coment!!!
xelent OS dear!!!
hehe...salty coffee!!!
cool!!!
nd d xcuse mayu gave her was soo cute!!
twas verrry nice...
nd d ending was touching!!!
do rite more...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)


thank a lot for commenting more will be up in a lil while😊

Lekha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow
it was really nice and touchy
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Silent Love

a specialstory dedicated to Sonia (sonii) and Nikki(Nikku)

From the very Begining, Nupur's family objected strongly on her dating Mayank . Saying that it has got to do with family background & that Nupur will have to suffer for the rest of her life if she were to be with him.

Due to family's pressure, the couple quarrel very often. Though Nupur loves Mayank deeply, but she always ask him: "How deep is your love for me?"

As Mayank is not good with his words, this often caused Nupur to be very upset. With that & the family's pressure, Nupur often vent her anger on him. As for him, he only endure it in silence.

After a couple of years, Mayank finally graduated & decided to further his studies in overseas. Before leaving, he proposed to Nupur : "I'm not very good with words. But all I know is that I love you. If you allow me, I will take care of you for the rest of my life. As for your family, I'll try my best to talk them round. Will you marry me?"

Nupur agreed, & with Mayank 's determination, the family finally gave in & agreed to let them get married. So before he left, they got engaged.

Nupur went out to the working society, whereas Mayank was overseas, continuing his studies. They sent their love through emails & phone calls. Though it's hard, but both never thought of giving up.

One day, Nupur was on her way to work, she was knocked down by a car that lost control. When she woke up, she saw her parents beside her bed. She realised that she was badly injured. Seeing her mum crying, she wanted to comfort her. But she realized that all that could come out of her mouth was just a sigh. She has lost her voice......

The doctors said that the impact on her brain has caused her to lose her voice. Listening to her parents' comfort, but with nothing coming out from her, she broke down.

During the stay in hospital, besides silence cry,.....it's still just silence cry that companied her. Upon reaching home, everything seems to be the same. Except for the ringing tone of the phone. Which pierced into her heart everytime it rang. She does not wish to let tMayank know. & not wanting to be a burden to him, she wrote a letter to him saying that she does not wish to wait any longer.

With that, she sent the ring back to him. In return, the guy sent millions & millions of reply, and countless of phonecalls,.. all the girl could do, besides crying, is still crying....

The parents decided to move away, hoping that she could eventually forget everything & be happy.

With a new environment, Nupur learnt sign language & started a new life. Telling herself everyday that she must forget Mayank . One day, her friends, Nikki and Sonia came & told her that he's back. She asked her friends not to let him know what happened to her. Since then, there wasn't anymore news of him.

A year had passed & her friends came with an envelope, containing an invitation card for Mayank ' s wedding. Nupurl was shattered. When she open the letter, she saw her name in it instead.

When she was about to ask her friend what's going on, she saw Mayank standing in front of her. He used sign language telling her "I've spent a year's time to learn sign language. Just to let you know that I've not forgotten our promise. Let me have the chance to be your voice. I Love You. With that, he slipped the ring back into her finger. Nupur finally smiled.

Sorry for the Typos and errors

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Lekha

Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey r these os original???????
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yep mahek they are... inspired from my encounters with Couples...
Posted: 16 years ago
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lekha!! both the stories r super sweet!!

@ the salty coffee - how sweet is mayank!
he drank the salty coffee his whole life!
salty coffees taste awful, i had tried it once, on a dare lol

@ silent love - again mayank is soo sweet!!
he learned the sign language for her!
n nupur, she's soo i can't think of the word
the way she was willing to let mayank go cuz of the accident
that is something very hard

loved both the OSs
waiting to read more from u

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