FF: Dooriyan -mre Premeer scenes pt3. pg12 (17/11)

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minuu

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Posted: 16 years ago

D O O R I Y A N
Fan Fiction - By Minu :]

Hi All 🤗 This is my FIRST ever fan fiction i am writing. I am basing my fan fiction on Premeer 😍 as i LOVE the jodi. Hope you enjoy reading it, please mind any mistakes as this is my first time writing a fan fiction. I have used a mixture of both Hindi and English in my fan fiction. 😳

Note: Please DO NOT PM me about continuing, I will update whenever i get time to write the next chapter.

Enjoy reading. Love Minu.

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INDEX

Part 1 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1288905&PID=25776769&#25776769
Part 2 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1288905&PID=25795511&#25795511
Part 3 - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1288905&PID=25841267&#25841267

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PART 1

Heer: Prem ab cholo uto, kam peh nai jaana hai?
Prem: Uff Heer, Nahin. Not today, i want to spend time with you. I have taken a day of work.
Heer: Aur Bauji? He gave you the day off?
Prem: Haa, Yes, he did. You no heer i'm such a dramabaz and bauji loves me. So he let me off.
Heer: Well, Mr.Prem get up and get ready. Fresh ho kar awo.
Prem: Whatever you say my darling.

Prem went to go get fresh, whilst heer went downstairs to help out in the kitchen. Nashta Tayar hai, said Meher. Bauji, Preet, Harman, Maya, and everyone went onto the breakfast table and started breakfast.

Preet: Heer Bhabhi, Prem bhaiya kahan hai? Kam per nahin jaana?
Heer: woo Preet..
Bauji: Harman, I have given Prem a day off from work today. he wanted to spend time with Heer.
Preet: That's not fair Bauji. I want a day off to.

Prem came downstairs. Everyone looked at him. No word from anyone.

Prem: Good Morning everyone
Preet: Morning Prem Bhaiya. Bauji has given you a day off i want a day of work to. I want to spend time with Meher.

Meher and Heer looked at eachother. Bauji said nothing.

Prem: Preet oye you to? Yaar chal saab saath kayi gumne jata hai..
Bauji: Ok, you four go out somewhere, day off for both of you today. Jaw biwi ki saath ash karo.

Heer Looked at Prem and Blushed. Meher looked at Preet and Blushed. Both couples were happy they got a chance to spend time with eachother.

Preet: Prem Bhaiya, where shall we go? Any Ideas.
Prem: urmmm..
Meher: urmm..
Heer: I no, lets all go...

*To Be continued* Hope you guys enjoyed reading the first part. 😳

Edited by -anonymous- - 16 years ago

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Fatima

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Posted: 16 years ago

unreserved the reserved place
hey dear
hows u dear?
aww it was soo sweet update.
prem is a dramebaaz cho cute.
hope u continue soon
wait for the next update.
luv
Fatima

Edited by -fsn- - 16 years ago

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Mrs.Pattinson/Robert/Cullen/Edward

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiii Awsomee Job =)

Really Really great and well written =)

Loved it soooooo much and can you please PM me when you update :D

Okay so Premeer was awsomeee i could soo imagin there sence right in front of my eyes :D

Awsome job yaar please update As soon as you =)

Love Ayysha😳

Edited by xoHarshaxo - 16 years ago

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@LotusPetals

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome FF dear =) .. both Premeer and Preet were cute ..
update soon and add me to ur PM list :)

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poonam

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey

Awesome Nice

Do Continue soon

Plz Pm Me when u update

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arshiya

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome ff ..........plzzzzz do continue

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minuu

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thankyou so much for your comments/feedback guys 🤗🤗 Hope you enjoyed reading the first part, will post the second part soon. 😳 I have added people who have asked me to PM them when i update to the PM list :)