Kaise Kahe Hum(RN fic)'The Concluding Part' pg. 99

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#741

Vow kitna funny update tha part 17 na,😉 Naina ne kitne aaram se keh diya tha Raj se ki vo shaadi karna chahti hai Raj se, 😲 par mujhe lagta hai ki yahan Raj ka Naina pe gussa jayaj hai aakhir itne asaani se Vishu ki maut ka gum bhool kar kaise vo Naina k saath shaadi kar sakta hai? 😡 Par Naina ne to jaane ka naam hi nahi liya aur tan man dhan se jut gayi hai Raj ko manane me. 😆

Ohhhhhhhhh ye irritating Moti bi na, koi aur time nahi mila tha us ko Raj aur Naina k beech aane ka 😡? Raj ka dialogue mujhe bahut accha laga jo us ne kaha tha ki haan ab shayad vapas jaane ka waqt aa gaya hai.😊

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#742

Superb part 18 dear. 😊

Raj ko apne aap ka hosh nahi tha, par Naina ne apne aap par kaboo rakha aur un dono ko koi aisa kadam uthane se ruk gaye varna na jaane us ka kya anjaam hota? 👏 Naina ne jaane me hi bhalai samjhi aur kuch had tak vo sahi bhi hai is baar.😃 I loved dadi maa n wanted to give her a big hug kyounki jis tarah se unhone Raj ko manaya shaadi k liye i think koi aur nahi kar sakta tha.😉

But present time me Raj aur Naina ka rishta sudhar raha hai that's gud sign 😳, Raj maan gaya Naina k kehne par ghar jaane k liye ye bhi accha raha. 😉 I think now the secreat is going 2 b revealed soon.

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 16 years ago

#743

Wondeful, brilliant ,superb update.very romantic and passoinate update.Alekh's plan is done , alekh ka tease karna niana aur raj ko bahut aacha laga and now both raj and naina clear their all misunderstnadings.Great , alekh aur appu's marrige ho gaya aur raj and naina are still in their romatic mood.

Dono ki bacche ho gaye hain.Ur epilogue is superb.

But,I'm very sad ,that this fic is end .Pls start a new fic.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!Superb!!!!!

thanks dear 😊 😊 😊

Raj stopped Naina from switching on the light and Naina was spellbound looking at the view!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

Us ko umeed nahi thi na ki itne kam time me Raj itna kamaal kar sakta hai. 😆 😆 😆

Raj had decorated the bed with rose petals and the room was lighted with candles!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏How romantic!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj gifted Naina a two piece nighty and asked her to wear it!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiiii!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj Naina ki tareef kar raha hai and she is blushing!!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab jyada intejaar to ho nahi sakta hai na, jitna kiya bahut kiya tha. 😳 😳 😳

Raj abhi bhi Naina ke peeche padha hai ke Aalekh ke room mein kya huya tha!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Sab pata hona chahiye na janab ko. 😛 😛 😛

Naina ne sahi kaha ke Raj bada shaitaan hai!!!!!!! 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Kaise usne Naina ke muh se Aalekh aur Appu waali baat nikal li!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Pata kar hi liya na us ne, kitne tricks hain na us k pass baat nikalwaane k liye. 😉 😉 😉

Raj keh raha hai ab woh batayega ki wahan Appu ke saath Aalekh ne kya kiya tha!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj and Naina are sooo romantic and passionate!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was sizzling hot!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

The song is very nice and just perfect for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

thanks a lot dear 😊 😊 😊

Naina ne bahut intezaar kiya hai ke Raj usse apna banaye hamesha ke liye!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Sahi me, par aakhir Naina ki kismat me vo pal tha na jo us k liye hi bana tha bus us ko vo mil gaya. 😳 😳 😳

Aaj raat unke beech saari duriyan khatam ho jayengi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj ko ab pata chala what he missed all these years!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh 3 saal aur 8 maheene dur rehne ki kami Raj ek hi raat mein puri karne par laga huya hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab poore time yahi dialogue maar kar vo hasil karega na jo us ko pehle nahi mila. 😉 😉 😉

Finally Raj and Naina became one and their relationship was complete!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

I hope iske baad dono ki life mein aur koi pareshani na aaye aur hamesha dono ek saath khush rahe!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Ab dono humesha k liye khush hi rahenge ek doosre k saath. 😃 😃 😃

thanks 😊 😊 😊

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Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

#745

awesome ending and a perfect one.....👏

this fic was all about ups nad downs in a relationship and u brought up here very well.........it was gr8 to see both rn finally one n happy family....👏

dis updt was again gr8 1...rn were romancing ...aalekh teasing.....n den role reversal wer naina was teasing.....it was all amazing....😉😳

loved aaleh charachter here......afterall it was him who brought rn together......

awesome fic.....gr8 ending ......awesomely presented by......⭐️⭐️⭐️

gr8 work dear......hope to see another frm you soon....😊😛

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#746

It's ended😭
actually m feeling sad becouse it Ended.but toooo Happy that Finally RN have a lots of happiness in their life.😃
u ended it really nice way.i have already told u it is 1 of my verrry favorite fic of urs.i just luved it n m gonna miss it.

wonderful writing dear👏Amazing fiction.keep it up.👍🏼

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#747

Hi vertika......

wow !!!!!!! superb part dear.....this is an awesome fic with a perfect ending 👏 👏

alekh aur appu ki shaadi bhi hogayi n appu gave birth to a baby boy......too good

raj n naina r so happy .......they truely deserve the happiness .......after all the pain they went through ........n they named vaishali to their baby .....so cute

u r really an amazing writer n i loved all the parts of the fic ...........n now i am sad that u r ending this fic............n i seriously hope that u start a new one

🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗🤗🤗

this one for u dear for giving us such a wonderful fic

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: pinka28
the part was really good really good
i appreciate it.
thanks a lot dear 😊 😊 😊

but yaar if you plz dont mind
yaar IF pe bhut se young readers hai... we should write and put stuff on IF keeping their innocence in mind. And some the content of this update can actually effect them.
and most important you didn't even put any PS note in beginning.
I know that's y i edited the update dear.

i am not criticizing. becoz i have no right and beside i like your update really... specially last 2 para and last two line of RN. and also the UPDAte's beginning was dam too romantic 👏 👏 👏 seriously i like your update.
Thanks a lot again 😃 😃 😃

may be i am wrong, plz dont mind
and sorry if my words hurts you. bas yar kahna tha bta diya
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pinka

thanks 😉 😉 😉

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: Deepanwita
HI VERTIKA HOW R U ?😊

UD WAS WONDERFUL👏
JUST LOVED IT👏
MINDBLOWING👏
SUPERBBBBBBBBB👏
AWESOOOOOOOOOME👏

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART

EAGARLY UD SOON

LOVE🤗
DEEPA

I am absolutely jhakaas dear, how's u? 😉 😉 😉
Thanks for loving it. 😳 😳 😳

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi
the update was hot n romantic

naina ko aakhir batana hi pada na alekh aur appu ki baat

raj is so romantic

plz continue soon

Thanks dear for ur lovely support n liking 😃 😃 😃. Raj is very naughty. 😆 😆 😆