My Baby - MINI - AR - Pt 5 [A] - Pg 20 - Dec 12

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My Baby
MINI - Armaan Riddhima Fan Fiction


part one - page 1

part two - page 7

part three - page 12

part four - page 17


hello friends

this is a new mini fan fiction on armaan riddhima, named my baby. i wish you all will like it. please do leave your comments and please press the like button if you find my updates and posts deserving. here is the introduction for all of you. will continue with an update, if i get enough number of readers. thank you for the support again.

my other fan fictions, based on armaan riddhima











Pyaar Hua (one shot) - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1253684&TPN=5

Saathiya (one shot) - https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1253684&TPN=17


PART ONE

that was it. he lost his memory. he doesnt remember the glorious 18 years of his life. biologically, he is a 24 year old man, who is deeply in love with riddhima gupta, but his mental capacity is equal to a 6 year old kid.

riddhima, who was shot on her spinal cord, luckily got fit and fine, and now, she is able to walk. it had been 3 months since such a dreadful incident happened in the lives of armaan mallik and riddhima gupta.

riddhima looked at armaan, who was sleeping peacefully in his room, and as she was about to turn back and make way towards her home,
she found her dad, shashank gupta, glaring at her.

shashank: riddhima, abhi, issi waqt, gaadi mein baitho, aur chalo mere saath. just right now and i dont want any explanations.

riddhima: papa but..

shashank: no riddhima. i am not going to listen to you. armaan is like a bad omen for you. whatever happens to you, is because of his
immature and silly decisions. and moreover, now his mentality power, is just equal to a toddler of 6 years old. and i think you should move on. you are not supposed to take his name from today. i am getting you married.

riddhima: PAPA kya aap ko pata hai, ki aap yeh kya keh rahe hai ?

she immediately turns towards Billy, who looks on the other side, and will feel really sad for his son's fate. he never thought that, such kind of problems would arise in his life and for the first time in his life, he took an issue in a really serious manner, and hated shashank for telling all that.

riddhima continued: papa, aap aise baatein kaise kar sakte hain ? huh ?
aaj taq maine aur armaan ne, aap ko bohot respect kiya aur har baat par, aap ke permission liya hai. i wish ki, aap ko yeh baat yaad hai ki, aap ne mere aur armaan ke liye ek shaandar reception party rakhe the !!

shashank: rakha tha riddhima. lekin aap donon ki engagement abhi taq hui nahi na. riddhima, tum abhi bhi bachchi ho. aur mere saath ajao.

riddhima: sorry papa. meri ab ek responcible doctor hoon. kal hi, meri internship poori hogayi hai. and, just to infrom you, yeh angooti joh mere haath mein hai na, woh armaan ki pyaar ka tofa hai. fact is that papa,
me and armaan are engaged, and i am going to marry him soon.
let whatever it be. no one can stop us this time papa.
just think of it.. you yourselves have agreed for our wedding when armaan was normal. you praised him for each and every movement of his.
and today, just because, he is suffering from an abnormality, you are telling that, i should leave him ? this is just not for the first time papa.

i have observed such behaviour of yours many times. not just now.
when armaan met with an accident, you felt pity for me, and thought of curing him. when you came to know that, he can not get his memory back, you insulted his behaviour, him and his values infront of the whole family.

and then, when he again proposed his love to me, even though he did not get his memory back, you again changed your face to a different shashank and arranged our engagement grandly and today.. you are accusing him of everything, just because, i will listen to you, and obey you ?

and if it is like that, i am so sorry papa. this time i am not with you.
if i would have been in the same condition, armaan would have taken care of me, with just one point in his mind that, i am his only love and i am his
BABY. and he is MY BABY now. no one can seperate him from me.

i will take care of him, and i will prove to these so called experianced doctors that, my armaan will be fit, fine and safe, inspite of whatever happened to him. if you want to accept him as his son-in-law,
then just do it papa, or forget that, i am your daughter.

shashank: you know riddhima, tum ne aaj mera insult ki hai and after what all you spoke right now, i can never consider you as my daughter. and let me tell you, you are an adopted one, and you just proved it.
you never had love for me. you only wanted my money right ?
you are such a cheat riddhima. i hate you. never ever step into my home.

friends
here is the update. well, i will be looking forward for your comments and will only continue this fan fiction after knowing your views and if you want me to continue. please do press the LIKE button if you find this update and the concept deserving.
thanks a lot for your support.

love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello friends,
just updated the part one of my fan fiction, my baby. please do read and leave your valuable comments. please do press the like button if you find the updates deserving. thank you.
love
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice start Deepu!!!!! Wish to read further soon. Count me in! :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Nice start Deepu!!!!! Wish to read further soon. Count me in! :D

thanks a lot for the comment prasanthi di.. will continue as soon as possible.
keep reading and giving your valuable comments...
loads of love
deepu 😃
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bilash, sasya, riddhima1, vruls,
thanks for liking. will be waiting for your comments.
love
deepu :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice strt..............luvd it..............😊😊............
do continue soon...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww!!!!!!! such a lovely concept!!!!

armaan as a 6 year old.that is simply different.

armaan has risked his life for ridz several times but cant shahsank see that?

i am glad ridz has decided to support armaan.love her for this.its always armaan that supports her but in this its diff.

update soon. and dont keep us waiting for too long
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelina_2005

hey nice strt..............luvd it..............😊😊............

do continue soon...........

thanks a lot for the comment angelina.. will continue soon. keep reading and commenting..
luv
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanyoprithviraj

awww!!!!!!! such a lovely concept!!!!

armaan as a 6 year old.that is simply different.

armaan has risked his life for ridz several times but cant shahsank see that?

i am glad ridz has decided to support armaan.love her for this.its always armaan that supports her but in this its diff.

update soon. and dont keep us waiting for too long

thanks a lot for the comment !!
yeah.. armaan has a 6 year old mentallity. exactly.. shashank only sees his comforta and life.. that is why, riddhima confronted him. me either..
will update the next part, when i get some more responses..
luv
deepu 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice one..continue soon..
plz PM me whenever u update..

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