AR---KISMAT... part 6 updated...

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HAI FRIENDS I M HERE AGAIN WITH A NEW STORY... WHICH ALSO BE SOLVED IN 3-4 PARTS I HOPE U WILL LIKE IT....

part 1---page 1
part 2---page 3

part 3---page 5
part 4---page 8
part 5----page 9
part 6---- page 11

Kismat


" well done armaan you have done great work once again'. Humein tum par naaz hai'. You are the best c.b.i officer in the the whole police team' we r proud of you'." Said c.b.i chief.. while giving him a medal'

" thank you sir' mera yehi sapna hai ki main apne desh ki sewa karo'"

After that there was a great party for armaan's success' every one was enjoying instead of armaan' he is a c.b.i officer but alone in this whole world his family left when he was 18 years old' he did not join his father's business as it always made him remind of his father' party lasts for very late'

Next day '

In early morning' armaan's cell start ringing' " hello'" aid armaan in a sleepe tone'

" sir main ritu bol rahi hoon chief ke office se' who aap se milna chhate hai ' aap pls aa kar unn se mil le..theek 10 baaje '

" okay.. ritu'"

in chief officer's office'

" come on armaan ' there is a new case for you' "

" new case.. sir'"

" hai armaan it is in Mumbai'"

" Mumbai sir..????"

"Mumbai 'wahaan bahut se beer bar hai jinne mein drugs ka business hota hai aur hai patta chaala hai ki wahaan ladakiyaan bhi kharidi beechi jaati hai' aur unnhe jism bechne par majboor kiya jaata hai'"

" what'. Ye aap kya kahe rahe hai'"

" main theek kahe raha hoon' ye reports yehi kahe rahi hai'"

" par sir wahaan ki police kaya kar rahi hai'koi action kyun nahi leeti'"

" who log kuch nahi kar rahe ab tumhe hi kuch karma ho gaaya is sub ke peecheye kaun hai patta laagao' aur wahaan ek inspector tumhare is sub mein help kare gaaya'"

So Mumbai is my next destination'

Mumbai here we go'''.

Precap:- how will armaan and riddhima will meet' kya kabhie kissmat unnhe milaye gaayi'.




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chahatmalhotra thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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FRIEND HOPE U WILL LIKE IT PLS LEAVE U COMMENTS
AND SILENT READERS PLS PRESS LIKE BUTTON....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woah Chahat its really an awesome one mind blowingso cutesound interesting plz continue it soon & thanks for the pm


"You dry the tears that fall from my eyes.
You bring sunshine to brighten my sky,
You rescue me when I'm scared and alone,
And take my hand to lead me home.
A friend like u is a flower,
A rose to be exact.
I don't know how to say this,
But I want to thank you very much,
For always being there for me."



"The bond of friendship is everlasting,
True friends never say good-bye,
There is pure truth between us,
That will never die.
You are my inspiration,
You knew when I was hurting,
You helped me with my troubles and pain,
For staying close by and being a friend.
And to end this off I just wanted to say,
That if you need a friend,
I'll be there till the very end.
I wanna thank you "





Nidha
Edited by nidha1983 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start 😊
but update ur another too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i know guys i have not updated my another ffs.. but this concept is in mind from solong pls bear with me... i will update that also pakka plomish...
Edited by chahatmalhotra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: chahatmalhotra

i know guys i have not updated my another ffs.. but this concept is in mind from solong pls bear with me... i will update that also pakka plomish...




nahiii.. first update this one.. pleeaseeeeeee......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey!!!

intresting one,,,

really liked it...

conti soon....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Chahat,
waw interesting concept you gt for this story really,
lets see how will they meet now and Armaan is in c.b.i cool makes story more interesting do continue the next part soon plzzzzzz thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg.....you have to continue...it was amazing
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANKS LOVE WAITING TO READ MORE

YOU KNOW TOTALLY DIFFERENT STORY
LOVE HEAVEN

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