Blaze of Glory-New jun23- part 5pg 36 - Page 31

Originally posted by: PaNa4ever

JUJU!

You must be on an agenda to kill me with this FF because I am truly speechless right now.

I had a feeling that AA would come next. Thank god Navneeta was with Atul (He was running after her, bless him!).

Anjali trapped in the elevator - I could feel her panic and fear, what an awful situation to be trapped in when everyone else was evacuating the building! For obvious reasons, this reminded me of the AA elevator scene...Except this one was far more intense and gripping...Scared me to death, yaar.

You captured Anjali's personality so well, especially in this part:

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She hated this. She hated crying, she hated feeling so helpless, not able to help herself. If nothing else, she wasn't going to let Atul down.[/quote]

As for Atul, what can I say? This is the Atul that I would have loved to see onscreen...A strong-willed, confident, caring person who is a dependable friend...The way he realized that shouting at Anjali would only make the situation worse shows just how well he knows Anjali, and I loved how he had more faith in her than she did...Or perhaps he helped her to gain enough confidence as well, since she didn't want to let Atul down.

My favorite lines were "I trust YOU, but I don't trust myself!" and "If you can't believe in yourself, then believe in me!" Perfect, Julle!

Just when I heaved a sigh of relief, Atul was in the face of danger...My god, that was another heart-stopping moment that nearly killed me! Anjali's panic set in again, and it brought tears to my eyes...She felt like she was abandoning him when he needed her...

I don't know how you write like this, Julles...Like every part, I could see what was happening in my mind's eye...But this part in particular was so traumatizing, probably because it's so unlike anything we'd get to see with PaNa, ever...I could see everything so vividly in front of my eyes.

10 on 10 for this part, hun! You truly surpassed my expectations, as I knew you would! *runs off to reread the part* Love you!

PS - I'm sorry that I always write so much! You must expect that from me...😆 It's a bad habit of mine, especially when my favorite actors are the subject!

Originally posted by: ruky786

i loved the part thank u so much for the pm continue soon looking forward to the next part

hey thnkx for the pm 😊. sorry for late reply.
awesome parts 😊.
cntinue soon n pm me 😊😊😊.

omgggggggg..dis is one of my fav parts...just loved atul here...he was being so brave for angie....loved d whole part where he saves her...reassures her and makes her believe and trust him...i love dis atul....loved anjie's part..esp where she thinks she can't let atul down...her fear and all are so well written julles...loved it😳👏

seriously dat whole part was just amazing and i loved this line "it was a leap of faith literally"....aww julles...from where u come up with such rocking lines yaar..too good

loved d latter part too...when atul falls down...oh how i wish anjie wasn't forced to leave..i wanted her to search for atul....atul saved her life and he always looks out for her...and i wanted anjie to save him now...poor anjie she must be feeling so helpless when she's made to leave

can't wait for the next update julles and i hope u r not thinking of killing anyone.....no one knows where atul is and now with anjie leaving..how would he be saved?!?

u better continue soon..i seriously can't wait...loved dis part...really did...u rock julles😳👏

btw i loved how u tried to put in sum lighter moments in..like navneeta asking him haven't u run like this and atul says never for my life..lolz and how he's abt to say i do run away from dr. kirti..but stops mid-sentence...and he enquires innocently with anjie whether she pressed d open door button😆...dat was a very nice touch😳👏

Hey dear,
First of all, I am really sorry for the late reply but I was busy in exams and now that I came I have to go through lots of FFs. So I am trying to catch up with everything.
Anyways ur FF is really awesome. You wrote really well the parts.
I am really enjoying it.
From now on I'll try to comment on regular basis.
Please continue soon and thanks for the PMs.

Luv u<333
Kashish

hey where have u gone missing????
continue soon

nice ff.. update soon.. and pm too

Hey

Just read all the parts...loved all of them, esp the first one as i guess the others were more intense..that one had me smiling.
Loved TACOS..LOL...but what followed OMG..and u haven't yet told us wat happened to Rahul and Muski...u have got to update soon.
Loved the parts and Shubhankar, all freaked out about his daughter missing in the building..it really got to me...felt so sorry for him but PAdma was so strong and the way she consoled Kirti too..that was great.
Than Anjali-Atul scene...It was weird to see the roles reversed here, with Atul taking control and Anjali all scared..hehe but i have to say u portayed it very well...cud feel the anguish.
It was great.

Do update soon.

krati!

missing ur fick
still waiting 4 u 2 continue....
Continue soon