Premeer Oneshot ~Ek Duje Ke Vaaste~ : (10/25/09)

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By: Palchin
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He heard some rattling of keys. He didn't know when he fell asleep on the sofa while admiring her. He came home late today and found her sleeping peacefully on the bed. She looked so beautiful in that light blue colored churidar. Her simplicity had always attracted him. He knew he was always attracted to her.

He met her 2 years ago through a friend and they ended up becoming friends. From friendship, they become so close. The next step was becoming girlfriend-boyfriend. Everything was going smoothly. For Prem Juneja, she was just another girl that she was really attracted to. But he also knew that this girl was special. She was the both beautiful of all his other girlfriends. And he also knew that Heer Mann was madly in love with him. She loved him so much and it hurts him to cause her this pain.

But he just wasn't ready. How can Prem Juneja get married? He was only 23 years old. Heer was only 22 years old. They were so young that marriage was way out of question. When she told him that she loved him and wanted to marry him, he felt the ground slip beneath his feet. He had never considered that marriage was important. For one whole year, they were happy living and being with each other. But a few months ago, she told him that it was important they get married.

He had seen her get impatient when he didn't answer her. When he said that he didn't believe in marriage, he broke up with him. He didn't know what the matter was. Even though they broke up, she didn't leave the house.

Not because she didn't want to live there, but because she didn't have any other home to live him. Her parents had died in a car accident when she was little. To live with him, she had sold everything she ever had and put all the money into her best friend's wedding. She had trust in Prem when he offered here to live with him. But she didn't know that that time that she would fall madly in love with him. He was so nice to her and she was complied into loving him. She didn't even regret the fact that she had slept with him the other day. She just loved him SO much.

Prem didn't know why she broke up with him. The day after she asked him if he would marry her, he got the biggest shock of his life. When he woke up that day, she had found Heer making coffee in the kitchen. By now, they both were just strangers living with each other. But Prem really cared for her. Maybe even more. He didn't know what he felt for her. But when he was the sadness on her face, it broke his heart. Even though she didn't care about him, or acted like she didn't care, she always made food for him. They were just on "no-talking-to-each-other" terms. He slowly made his way to the dining table, the whole time staring at her. Prem didn't know what he felt for her. But he was desperate to know why his bubbly, talkative Heer had turned into a quiet, depressed Heer. He couldn't stand her sad face.

He watched her as she came to him holding his mug of coffee. She gently placed in on the table, not looking at him. After placing it, she turned to leave.

As she turned around, she found everything around her twirl and turn blurry. She held her head with both of her hands. A sharp strike of pain erupted in her head and she found herself losing her balance. The last thing she remembers in that he had held onto her from falling.

He instantly caught her when he saw her clenching her head. He had never seen her like this. What the hell was wrong with her?

He instantly picked her up, gently placed her in her unconscious state, in his car, and drove as fast as he could to the doctor's office.

After admitting her in, he sat there, in the doctor's office. He was so tensed that he couldn't even think or function properly. He was son scared. All he could do was pray to the one above to keep her ok. After about half-an hour, the doctor had arrived. She must have been in her late thirties. She had a bright smile on her face and she was holding onto some papers. As she approached him, he gaze fell on the delicate girl coming out of the same room. She looked as beautiful as ever and her beautiful churidar complimented her figure. But his gazing was interrupted as he noticed the doctor walk up to him. What she told him made his mind go blank.

"Hello Mr. Juneja. Heer is perfectly fine. This is a usual symptom at this stage." The young doctor informed him. He was confused. What stage? What's wrong with her?

He looked at Heer and saw that she had her eyes lowered.

"What do you mean?" a curious Prem asked the doctor. His heart was beating really fast and he was worried for her. But the moment he asked the doctor, he saw Heer walked away and leave the room. What is she hiding from me?

"Mr. Prem, Heer is 2 months pregnant." His mind went black once again. His breathing seemed to stop. He felt himself being suffocated. His heartbeat was increased at an irregular rate.

"As time goes by, there will be a lot of this happening. I advice you that you take good care of her diet, her happiness, and most importantly her stress level. Please keep her happy. It's not good for her to be sad." The doctor prescribed a few medicines and after taking the prescription, he headed out.

As he looked around for her, he spotted her standing in front of a tiny murti of Shivji. He looked at her sweet figure. She had her eyes closed and her hands were clasped together. She was silently praying. For the first time in the last two and a half months, he had noticed a certain glow on her face. This glow made her look so pure. Now everything made sense to him. How could he be so stupid? He ruined her life. She trusted him so much and what did he do? Get her pregnant? He felt so disgusted of himself.

The ride back home had been a silent one. But he couldn't stand it anymore. The minute he got him, he couldn't stop himself from asking her. When he entered, he saw her ignore him and go straight to her room.

Without thinking even for a second, he followed her into her room and closed the door behind him. She instantly turned around when she saw him. She looked at the closed door and then at him. Then he slowly moved closer to her. Now this scared him. What was he going to do to her?

At last he cornered her into the wall and held onto her shoulders gently. His eyes were slowly welling and seeing his eyes, her eyes also teared up.

"Why didn't you tell me?" Prem asked Heer softly.

As she got her thoughts straight, she had to tell him the truth about how she felt.

"I don't want you to feel sympathetic for me." She whispered back.

"I know you don't love me. You always cared for me and took care of me." She gently took his hands off him.

"I don't want to push any relationship on you Prem." She said this and looked away from him.

He stared at her. She was right. He cared for her a lot. But he wasn't sure that this was loved for her. Today, as he heard her answer him, he felt a force of respect fill up his heart.

He had nothing else to say. He didn't want her to ruin her life.

"Kill it Heer." Prem uttered in very soft tone. The moment he said that, her eyes shot up to him. He saw her red, teary eyes. She was angry now. With letting him speak further, she gave him a tight slap.

"DON'T YOU EVEN DARE TO SAY AYTHING AGAINST ME BABY. I KNOW YOU DON'T CARE! BUT DON'T YOU EVER THINK ABOUT KILLING IT!" He had forced her to yell at him. He was quite surprised by this. He had never seen her angry. He was only saying this for her benefit. He didn't want her to go through the pain of carrying his baby.

"But Heer-" she cut him off.

"I know you don't care about it. But don't say anything against it. I'll die if something happens to him." Her precious tears trailed down her eyes and she pushed him aside.

Since that day, she hadn't talked to him and listened to him. He had told her something that had made her hate him. Now she was five months pregnant. This morning, as he was leaving for work, he had heard her talk to the phone with the doctor. Today she had her appointment with her doctor. He was happy to know that she was taking care god care. He had also tried his best to get all the prescription medicines and getting healthy foods so that she was in good health. He didn't know why, but seeing her go through so much pain irked him. The vomiting, the dizziness, the weakness, the fever, and the discomfort she has to endure angered him. She was always so sweet and polite. She never asked anything from him. But the one time she asked him if he would want to marry her, he refused. She was caring his baby. Not once had she asked him for any help. He had to make her stop her working because it was too stressful for her.

As he slowly woke up after hearing the sound of car keys, his gaze fell on the bed. She wasn't there. He jerked up and looked around the room. He instantly got up and went out of the room.

He searched around for her in the living room, family room, and the in the kitchen. There she was. She was holding onto her car keys and putting her cell in her purse. But as she walked out, her eyes fell on her. She instantly stopped and a nervous came over her face. Prem glanced at the clock and then at her.

"It's 2:00. Where are you going?" Prem asked in a serious tone.

"Why do you care? It's none of you business." Without saying another word, she walked out of the house.

"Girls and their attitude" saying that he, he followed her out of the house. He saw her walking down the street. He caught up with her and walked by her side.

"Where are you going at 2:00 at night?" Prem asked.

"Where can I get chocolate-ice-cream-with-double-whipped-cream-and-dark-chocolate-on-top-with-chocolate-sprinkles?" She sounded so impatient.

"Wh'What?" he was not able to catch head or tail of what she way saying.

She stopped and looked at him.

"Mujhe abhi mera chocolate-ice-cream-with-double-whipped-cream-and-dark-chocolate-on-top-with-chocolate-sprinkles chahiye!" She said.

"Heer its 2:00 at night." He tried to explain to her. But she couldn't control herself. She held his collar tightly.

"LISTEN! I have never been a fan of chocolate ice cream. But because of you, I need this ice cream right now."

Prem finally understood. She was having a craving. And like him, the baby liked chocolate ice cream. A slight smile came onto his face and he looked at her sweet face.

"Prem I need ice cream RIGHT NOW!!!" She was whining now.

"Okay okay. I'll get it. Just sit here." He made her sit on the little porch on the street. But then thinking of the night, he thought that it would be best if he took her with him.

Without wasting any time, he went to a five star hotel. He settled her into a comfortable seat and went to give his order. Thank god the hotel was open for 24 hour on Saturday nights. After ordering Heer's chocolate-ice-cream-with-double-whipped-cream-and-dark-chocolate-on-top-with-chocolate-sprinkles, he went back to give her company.

He had never seen such a big smile on her face before. At the sight of the ice cream, she started smiling like a little toddler. Her happiness bought a smile onto his face.

He saw her savor over the different flavors of the ice cream. She was content after eating just two spoons. I could see that she was somehow exhausted. I decided to take her home and get her to sleep. She was pretty tired. He told her that he will get a car to take her home but she insisted on walking.

As we walked side by side down the road, the silence took up the space. But after a while, Heer spoke.

"I'm sorry. I woke you up." Heer said looking at him. Prem clearly heard her but didn't answer her. The silence took over again and they finally reached home. Heer walked inside as Prem locked the door. She was walking towards her room when she felt his grip around her delicate wrist. She turned around to find him standing really close to her. He slowly pulled her closer towards himself. She looked into his caramel colored eyes.

"I'm sorry." He stared to say. He held onto her hand with both of hi hands pleading for forgiveness. His eyes started to well up.

"I'm so stupid. All this I loved you but I was never able to understand. I caused you so much pain. I just wanted you to be happy because I don't deserve your love. I'm really so-" He felt her warm fingers on his lips. He saw the tears that were drifting out of her eyes. He slowly wiped her tears away. Without saying anything else, she hugged him tightly. He hugged her back as well.

As the parted, Prem confessed what he had never confessed to himself.

"I love you Heer. I really love you. It kills me to see you in pain. And I have made up me mind. I want to marry you as soon as possible. Mujhse shaddi karogi?" He asked.

"Of course karungi. " she said smiling at him. He gently held her face in his hands.

"I love you." He told her. Then he glanced down to her stomach. He gently touched.

"And I love you too." Saying that he glanced back at her. With saying anymore, she hugged him.

Kitne hi door door hon hum donon ke raaste
Mil jaate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Jaise dil hai dhadkan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise aankh hai darpan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Jaise barkha saawan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek sajni ek saajan hai ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Us rab ne jab dil diye
Dil ke do tukde kiye
Dono mein ek naam leikha
Ek radha ek shyam likha
Ab ye dil dhadakte hain
Milte aur bichhadte hain
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Hum donon ek jaan hain
Do dil ek armaan hain
Lekin ab is mod kar
Dekhein daaman chhod kar
Waqt ka hai ye faisla
Hum tum ho jaayein juda
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Maangein khushiyon ki dua
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste

Ek duje ke vaaste
Ek duje ke vaaste .

Hey guys! Here's just another Premeer Oneshot from me! Hope you guys enjoy it! Please do read and comment! I will try to update for my Fanfics by next weekend. I have been a little busy so I wrote this to make up for it. Sorry for the delay and I hope you enjoy reading this. I don't thik this story was that great but I had to post something for you guys! So here it is and do tell me how it is! Take care and Love ya!

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My Fanfics and Oneshots:

~Hostage~ PH FF:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1152484/ff-hostage-pg-45-part-19-11-22-09-new

~Obsession~ PH FF:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1245606/obsession-ph-ff-pg15-part-6-12-04-new

~Beautiful Moments in the Rain~ PH OS:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1268508/beautiful-memories-in-the-rain-suprise-oneshot

~Ek Ladki Bheegi Bhaagi Si~ PH OS

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww Honey you did such wonderful job :D
Love reading your FF's and Oneshots... your such an awsome writer :)
Great job with the OneShot
But can you please PM me when you next write a oneshot Pleasseeeeeee :D
Love reading them pleasee do PM me
Love - Ayysha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fabulous one shot Palchin... beautifully written 👏 👏 👏
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great

hope u write more OS

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hiiiiii its such a sw8 and lovable update
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well written .....kinda resemled salaam namaste , but this one was a sweeter one....do write more
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You always leave me astounded wth ur shots. I just readung ur shots u really cast whole story in just one shot.
beautifully wrtn, splendid job
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It was really goood

waiting for your updates
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aww that was so touchy.........so sweet .............luvd the way u wrote it............very well written..............fabulous job............can u plz ad me to ur pm list n pm me whnwvr u write nethng else......plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz:D
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it reminded me a little of salaam namaste, but THIS is FAR way better.loved it.thanks

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