mayur the loving birds..; prt 23 pg 53 last part - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
Hi Pari,
its a very very lovely, cuty part.
just lovedddddddd it.
thnx a lottttt 4 ur nice part.
keep updating.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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part 7..

that night both were thinkikng of the other...... they had a very nice sleep.......... next day in college.....

in canteen..

a new face was seen in the canteen......

n to s: heyy sam whos that? (pointing to one girl)

s: ohh... she.... she is sheena....

n: new in the college?

s: not really..... she was mayank's classmate and was absent for last days coz she was on world tour...

n: u know her???

s: yupp...... she thinks tht she is the most beautiful girl on earth and every body knows she is not...... well be aware coz she is totally mad for mayank... wo mayank pe lattoo hai.....

n: mayank pe...... aur wat did u say ?? mein kyu aware rahu???

s: hav to go now..... bye....... (and he leaves.)

(in nupur's classroom....)

nupur was sitting next to mayank... sheena came in...

sheena to nupur: excuse me its my seat....

n: wat?? dis is yur first day in college... i suppose..

s: yess... but mayank ke pass waali seat hamesha se mere liye reserved thi........

(hearing this wen nupur got no reaction by mayank's reaction she was abt to leave.... but...)

m: sorry sheena but yeh seat kabhi bhi tumhaare liye reserved nahi thi.....

s: but myank mein hamessha tumhaare saath bethti thi...

m: wo isliye kyuki mujhe pehle koi fark nahi padta tha ki kon mere paas bethta hai...... koi mera so calles frnd nahi tha so....... but now meri ek frnd hai and i feel wo mere paas beth sakti hai......

(the teacher came.... nupur was still sitting with mayank and was happy that mayank wants to sit with him)...............

that's it guys i know its short but hav no tym now...

hope you will understand......... do comment......

part-8 page-5...

Edited by pari.theprinces - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23
Hiii.....Nice update.....Pls Continue....
And do pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
nice ff plz do continue soon!!!
eagerly waiting
ashna😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
thanx......... i will try to update it soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
wow yaar...
twas a very nice upd8...
really...
just luvd the scene where mayu threw out that sheena and asked nups to keep siting!
well, cont soon..
and thanx 4 d pm!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part dear.....but u pmed me an empty message.....plzz give the link next time onwards....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
its too much short.
but anyway a good 1.
hope next 1 will be longer .
keep updating
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

part-8

after the class mayur went to the canteen....... and jealous sheena followed them.... nupur mayank samraat and gunjan were sitting 2gether😊.. sheena came and sat near mayank... mayank did not mind.. but nupur was not comfortable with this 😡and samrat cud see this on her face,,,,, there were no grup talks bcoz usually they talked of their secrets etc but all was spoiled by sheena,,,,, finally samrat brole the silence.....

s: heyy mayank aaj tum mere ghar aa sakte ho?

m; kyu???

s: kya yaar.. aana na plzz kuch kaam hai...

m: thik hai....

(at sammy's house)

m: tumne mujhe yahaan kyu bulaaya??

s: arre yaar just for fun......

m: hmm..... koi baat hai kya???

s: wese baatein to tu chupataa hai...

m; mein??

s: yupp... yehi ki sheenA TERI GIRLFRIEND hai...😆

m; WHAT😡?

S: haan sheena bata rahi thi ki...

m; just shut up okk........

s: par usne to sab ko......

m: wat??? kese.... wo jhooth bol rahi,,,,,

s: but.... well bol rahi hogi.. lekin sabse jyaada shock to nupur ko....

m: nupur?>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> usne nupur ko... wo jhooth,.,,, pata nahi nupur...... wo kya sochegi?? ,,,, mujhe usse kal sab clear karna padega aur... nahi aaj hi phone pe... Oh no uska to phone .. uska cell no. ,,, nahi mein uske ghar pe.. iss waqt?????? SAMRAT....😡

S: wo oh.. dude.. calm down..... nupur ne uska believe nahi kiya...

m: uff,,, (maynk took a deep breath).... thank god..

s: well nupur ke believe na believe karne se tumhe kya fark padta hai???

m: abb... wo ... mein... bas,,,, nupur,,,

s: okkkkk..... to ab??

m: kya,,,,,

s; tumhaari gaadi aage badegi ya nahi?

m: konsi gaadi??⭐️

s: pyaar ki gaadi...

m: pyaar ki??????

s: kyu tumhe nupur pasand nahi hai kya??

m: nahi...

s: kya??

m; mera matlab hai pasand hai.. par uss tarah nahi...

s: ohh,,,,, thik hai to phir tumhe wo baat bataana zaroori nahi hai.,,,

m: konsi?

s: nahi wo nupur se related hai to....

m: bataao......... mujhe,,

s; par..

m: bataao......(he ordered)

s: jab sheena tumhaare paas aati hai to nupur jalti hai....

m: really (he said happily... but then he realised samrat is listening)... i mean WHAT???

(BUT that happy tone was enough for samrat to understand)

while moving to his home mayank thot of nupur only,.,,,,

mayank to himself: yeh mjhe kya ho gya hai?? kahiin mein nupur se pyaaar😊.......... shaayad..... par kya nupur mujhse???😛

on the other hand nupur was also lost in mayank's thots,,,,

nupur to herself: mein bhi kya mayank ke baare mein hi soch rahi hoon,,,

(next day in college)

sheena to nupur: dekho tum mayank se door hi rehna warna...

n: warna kya sheena??

sh: warna tumhaare liye accha nahi hoga.......

(mayank was listening... wen mayank came)

sh: chale mayank.......

m: (turning towards nupur and ignoring sheena) chale nupur....

n: (hardly able to control her laughter)👏:👏 haan...... byee sheena..

nupur to mayank: mayank tum bhi na.....

m: mein bhi kya nupur (coming closer to nupur).

n: wo tum..... (now mayank a step forward nupur a step backward)

m: bolo nupur... (nupur stuck on the wall)..

there is an eyelock... mayank moving more closer.........

n: mayank....

m: byeee........ (and mayank leaves)

(after reaching home, mayank calls nupur)

m: hello...

n: mayank... (as nupur says mayank gunjan arrives)

G: mayank ka phone hai..

n: haan...

m: nupur.... (samrat is standing next to him)

now dere is a long silence on the phone.... neither mayank is speaking something nor nupur... it seems both are counting others breath,,, they start dreming of the other on phone.... after an extra long silence both samrat and gunjan get irritated ki wat are you both doing... gunjan nupur se phone cheen leti hai aur samrat mayank se..

samrat and gunjal on phone togetherly screeming: AB TUM KUCH BOLOGE / BOLOGI BHI.....

this screem make mayur come out of their dreams......

gunjan: samrat..

samrat: gunjan....

(sajan laugh a loud)

gunjan: i think tumhe mayank ko leke yahaan nupur ke ghar aa jaana chaahiye....

samrat: iss phone incident ke baad to aana hi padega....... warna ambulance bulaani padegi..

(mayank give samrat an angry look😡)

s: accha to hum aate hai.....

(they leave for nupur's house...)

at nupur's house....

s: yeh phone pe kya ho raha tha?

m & n: kya? (saying lyk they dont know anything)

s: yehi mann hi mann kya baatein chal rahi thi..

m & n: kya? (saying lyk a thief been caught)

s: kahiin ek doosre ke sapne to nahi dekh rahe the..

m & n : kya....😲 (saying lyk how cum he know..😉😕)

s: ab yeh alag alag tones mein kya bolna band karo😉........ aur bataao yeh sab kya ho raha hai😃??

part 9 page 6

Edited by pari.theprinces - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow....i m the first one to comment...this was amazing........i loved ur update......it was toooooo short but tooooooooooo good........wow it was truly terrific......sheena tried to say but mayank ignored her......jhel mach gayi bechaari ki.......loved the update......continue soon.........
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 16 years ago

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