Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (PraShiv SS)

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Posted: 7 days ago
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Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 1

I dedicate this SS to AAA_mania who asked me to write a SS on the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.This story is inspired from the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.

The credit for the edits goes to the real editor.

Thank u so much Sydell for the beautiful cover page.

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Shivansh gave one chocolate each to a little boy and a little girl.

The kids were Pratham and Harini.

Pratham:Dad,you are so stingy when it comes to giving chocolates.

Shivansh:Because if you eat too many chocolates your teeth will get spoiled.

Pratham:Dad...

Shivansh:I will cook healthy food for you at home.

Pratham:Please don't cook food for us.

Harini:That's the worst punishment for us.

Shivansh smiled out of embarrassment.




A goon killed a man brutally by stabbing him on the street.Many people were watching it with fear.Among them there was a girl.She was Prarthana. After murdering the man,the goon left from there.Shivansh who passed by was shocked to see the dead man bleeding on the road.

Shivansh:Somebody has murdered him brutally.Terrible!

Immediately Shivansh called the police there.

The police officer Shivanya reached there.

Shivanya:Who killed this man?

Everybody was silent.

Shivansh:You all watched a murder shamelessly and not saying who killed him.Pathetic!

Suddenly Prarthana said bravely:I saw who killed him.

Shivanya and Shivansh were glad that finally someone spoke up without any fear.

Shivanya:What's your good name?

Prarthana:I am Prarthana.

Shivanya:You may have to come to the police station with us and identify the culprit from the photographs of the goons we have.You should give the statement and come to the court as a witness.

Prarthana:Sure Ma'am.

Shivanya:Good.Our country needs strong and courageous people like you.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh was impressed by Prarthana's attitude.



Prarthana's stepmother Seema was against her decision to go to the court as a witness.

Seema:They are very dangerous. Don't go there.

Prarthana:Maa,I can't sit quietly because of fear after witnessing injustice.If we keep quiet such criminals will flourish.

Seema was irritated.



Prarthana gave statement against the goon Naresh in the court and the judge decided to give him capital punishment.

Prarthana was happy.

Shivanya:Well done Prarthana. Bold girls like you should be in the police department.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh also smiled.

Shivansh:You have to be appreciated Prarthana.

Prarthana smiled at him.

Prarthana:Even you may have to be appreciated as you were the one who informed the police about the crime.

Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana:And your name?

Shivansh:Shivansh!

She smiled.



Unexpectedly Prarthana got kidnapped.Her family looked for her.But they didn't complain to the police fearing of the shame it will bring to the family.



After 3 days also Prarthana didn't return home.People started gossiping about her disappearance.They started saying that Prarthana eloped with someone.

Seema was very angry.

Seema:Finally Prarthana showed her true colour.She eloped with someone.

Seema's daughter Gayatri said:No Maa.Di will never do that.Something else has happened.

Seema and Gayatri were tensed.



The kidnapper told Prarthana:You maybe wondering who I am.I am Naresh's brother Bhavesh.

Prarthana was shocked.

Bhavesh:Because of you,my brother got jailed.He is going to lose his life because of you.I kidnapped you to kill you as a punishment.

Prarthana was shocked and scared.

Prarthana:Please don't kill me.He was a criminal.He deserves punishment.

Bhavesh:OK.I will not kill you.But I will give you another punishment.

He started looking at her in a dirty manner.

Prarthana got scared.

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Posted: 7 days ago
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Part 1

Amazing update... well written


thanks for the pm

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 1

I dedicate this SS to AAA_mania who asked me to write a SS on the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.This story is inspired from the movie Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai.

The credit for the edits goes to the real editor.



Shivansh gave one chocolate each to a little boy and a little girl.

The kids were Pratham and Harini.

Pratham:Dad,you are so stingy when it comes to giving chocolates.

Shivansh:Because if you eat too many chocolates your teeth will get spoiled.

Pratham:Dad...

Shivansh:I will cook healthy food for you at home.

Pratham:Please don't cook food for us.

Harini:That's the worst punishment for us.

Shivansh smiled out of embarrassment.




A goon killed a man brutally by stabbing him on the street.Many people were watching it with fear.Among them there was a girl.She was Prarthana. After murdering the man,the goon left from there.Shivansh who passed by was shocked to see the dead man bleeding on the road.

Shivansh:Somebody has murdered him brutally.Terrible!

Immediately Shivansh called the police there.

The police officer Shivanya reached there.

Shivanya:Who killed this man?

Everybody was silent.

Shivansh:You all watched a murder shamelessly and not saying who killed him.Pathetic!

Suddenly Prarthana said bravely:I saw who killed him.

Shivanya and Shivansh were glad that finally someone spoke up without any fear.

Shivanya:What's your good name?

Prarthana:I am Prarthana.

Shivanya:You may have to come to the police station with us and identify the culprit from the photographs of the goons we have.You should give the statement and come to the court as a witness.

Prarthana:Sure Ma'am.

Shivanya:Good.Our country needs strong and courageous people like you.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh was impressed by Prarthana's attitude.



Prarthana's stepmother Seema was against her decision to go to the court as a witness.

Seema:They are very dangerous. Don't go there.

Prarthana:Maa,I can't sit quietly because of fear after witnessing injustice.If we keep quiet such criminals will flourish.

Seema was irritated.



Prarthana gave statement against the goon Naresh in the court and the judge decided to give him capital punishment.

Prarthana was happy.

Shivanya:Well done Prarthana. Bold girls like you should be in the police department.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh also smiled.

Shivansh:You have to be appreciated Prarthana.

Prarthana smiled at him.

Prarthana:Even you may have to be appreciated as you were the one who informed the police about the crime.

Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana:And your name?

Shivansh:Shivansh!

She smiled.



Unexpectedly Prarthana got kidnapped.Her family looked for her.But they didn't complain to the police fearing of the shame it will bring to the family.



After 3 days also Prarthana didn't return home.People started gossiping about her disappearance.They started saying that Prarthana eloped with someone.

Seema was very angry.

Seema:Finally Prarthana showed her true colour.She eloped with someone.

Seema's daughter Gayatri said:No Maa.Di will never do that.Something else has happened.

Seema and Gayatri were tensed.



The kidnapper told Prarthana:You maybe wondering who I am.I am Naresh's brother Bhavesh.

Prarthana was shocked.

Bhavesh:Because of you,my brother got jailed.He is going to lose his life because of you.I kidnapped you to kill you as a punishment.

Prarthana was shocked and scared.

Prarthana:Please don't kill me.He was a criminal.He deserves punishment.

Bhavesh:OK.I will not kill you.But I will give you another punishment.

He started looking at her in a dirty manner.

Prarthana got scared.

Shivansh must be a really bad cook 😂😂😂😂
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Posted: 7 days ago
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This is going to be cuteee shivu has two cuties 🥰 🥰

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Posted: 7 days ago
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New Story Nice First Chapter Jasmine Your On A Roll With Your Stories

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Posted: 6 days ago
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Wow another story . I am excited.

proud of Brave Prarthana.

Bechari Prarthana go kidnapped.

I hope Shivansh Saves her from Bhavesh.

Ending is scary.

thank you for the pm and cannot wait till next part.


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Posted: 6 days ago
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I hope she gets saved!smiley19

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Posted: 3 days ago
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Thank you so much for the lovely comments friends.




Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 2

The kidnapper told Prarthana:You maybe wondering who I am.I am Naresh's brother Bhavesh.

Prarthana was shocked.

Bhavesh:Because of you,my brother got jailed.He is going to lose his life because of you.I kidnapped you to kill you as a punishment.

Prarthana was shocked and scared.

Prarthana:Please don't kill me.He was a criminal.He deserves punishment.

Bhavesh:OK.I will not kill you.But I will give you another punishment.

He started looking at her in a dirty manner.

Prarthana got scared.

Bhavesh tried to attack Prarthana sexually.

Prarthana hit him with a stick which she got from the near by table and ran out.



Prarthana reached her area.There the people were looking at her strangely.

"After staying with a man for a few days shamelessly she has returned home".

Prarthana was shocked.But because of physical weakness she did not react.She ignored them painfully and walked to her house.

Gayatri became so happy that she hugged her.

Gayatri:Di,you are alright?

Prarthana nodded.

Suddenly Seema slapped her.

Seema:With whom did you live for a few days and came back?

Prarthana was shocked.

Prarthana:What are you saying Maa?You think like that about me?

Seema:Yes.Because you are not my blood.

Her words pierced her heart deeply.

Gayatri:Maa,what are you saying?

Seema:You keep quiet.

Prarthana:Maa,I was kidnapped.

They were shocked.Prarthana told them the truth.

Gayatri:You suffered this much Di?I am glad that you returned safely.

Seema:What was the use of returning safely?Nobody will believe the truth.Because the society thinks that like a call girl you are staying with other men.

Prarthana was shattered.

Seema:That time itself I told you not to take any risk by giving statement against that criminal.Because of your deed,our family is having a bad name now.

Prarthana was in tears.

Gayatri:Why should we bother about what others say?

Seema:We have to bother as we live in this society.So Prarthana shouldn't stay in this house anymore.

Prarthana and Gayatri were shocked.

Gayatri:Maa!

Seema:Otherwise the bad name of our family will remain and Gayatri won't get good marriage proposals.

Gayatri:I don't need any marriage proposal by kicking out my Di.

Prarthana:Gayatri,don't fight with maa because of me.Maa is right.If I stay here it will affect your future.So I am leaving this house.

Gayatri was very upset.

Gayatri:Where will you go Di?

Prarthana:Don't worry. I am not a fool to commit suicide.I have the courage to live.I will live.

Gayatri was crying:Maa,please stop Di.

Seema was silent while Prarthana packed her luggage and left.



Prarthana was fired from her job because of her bad reputation and she didn't get accommodation in the ladies hostel too.

"This is a decent place where decent girls live.Not for the women like you".

Prarthana was shattered.

Prarthana:Please believe me.I am not that kind of a woman.

They pushed her out harshly.



Prarthana walked on the road crying.Shivansh who saw her stopped his car near her and went near her.

Shivansh:Prarthana, what happened?

Prarthana:A lot happened.I can't tell you anything.

Shivansh:We are not good friends.So it's difficult for you to share your pain with me.But still you can trust me.I swear!Don't hide your pain and hurt yourself more.

Prarthana burst into tears and told him everything. He was shocked.

Shivansh:You did a brave act,but you got punished.Our society is pathetic.But I will arrange accommodation for you.

Prarthana was surprised:Really?

Shivansh:Yes.

Prarthana:Thank you so much Shivansh.



Shivansh took Prarthana to a house.

Prarthana:Whose house is this?

Shivansh:My house.You can stay here.

Prarthana was stunned and nervous.

Shivansh:I know that you got scared.But I am not like Bhavesh.I will not even look at you in a wrong way.You can trust me.

Prarthana found genuineness and honesty in his words and got relieved.

Shivansh:You can consider this as your own house.

Prarthana smiled.

Prarthana:You are so nice.

Shivansh:Stop praising me and come with me to the police station to file a complaint against Bhavesh.

Prarthana nodded.

Suddenly Pratham and Harini ran towards Shivansh:Dad!

Shivansh hugged them.

Shivansh:Prarthana...they are my kids Pratham and Harini.

Prarthana smiled.

Shivansh:Children...this is Prarthana aunty.Today onwards she will stay with us.

Pratham and Harini were excited.

They shook her hands saying:Hi Prarthana aunty...

Prarthana caressed them softly.

Prarthana:Your children are cute.

Shivansh smiled.

Prarthana:Their mother?

The kids became gloomy.

Harini:Our mother is not there in this world now.

Prarthana was shocked and sad.She looked at Shivansh painfully.He was silent.

She regretted asking this question.To divert the topic Shivansh said:Children...you both study.Prarthana aunty and dad have to go somewhere.

The kids went to study.



Shivansh took Prarthana to the police station.

Prarthana complained to the police against Bhavesh.

The police officer Shivanya:How dare he?Such men should be shot dead on the spot.Don't worry Prarthana. We will get him the worst punishment.

Prarthana:I want to prove my innocence.

Shivanya:He himself will tell the truth to the world.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

Prartha was relieved.


Though Prarthana filed a complaint against Bhavesh,the police force could not trace Bhavesh as he had left the country and hidden himself from the world.


Prarthana kept in touch with her half sister Gayatri on the phone.



A police cop came to Shivansh's house.

He:I came here to arrest Prarthana.

Prarthana and Shivansh were shocked.

Shivansh:But why Sir?

He:We got an information that she is into immoral traffic.

They were shocked.

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A another wonderful update.

Bechari Prarthana went through so much . She got kidnapped almost raped and her mom told her to leave.

I am glad Shivansh found her took her home and he took her to the police station and she filed a complaint but what was that at end omg who filed a complaint against Prarthana that she is involved in trafficking?smiley3

coming to the cuties Harini and Prartham. They have no mom and they consider Shivansh their dad.

Are they Shivansh’s dads kids?


continue soon.

Well written and new twist at end.

Hopefully Shivansh will save her and protect her.

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