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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#641

hey dear sorry for late reply n sorry like button not workin. Was superb dear. Mayu n dia first meeting was nice. So this is how they started gettin close n this is te reason nupz left india! And watz this! Dia mannerless read nupz diary! Gosh wat more was written in diary? Plz let mayu get hold of diary n read everythin! Plz.... Tat would add spice to ur ff. Mayu reading n feelin wat he had done to lose a best friend like nupz who even loved him. And plz make behave indifferent wit him like as if she had not fallen for him n wat shez doin is just for dia n arti.

Loved it dear. Waitin for next part.

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#642

Awsome awsome awsome part. Zoah sacchi, now I am so curious about Nupur's past was. And Mayank and Dia's meeting was so cool. And no ways

you call this part boring?

This is great yaar.

You don't know how much this ff

means to me,

first of all

you, my rocking sis wrote it

and second this is just too good.

So you better stop calling any part boring,

because I take it seriously.😆

And it hurts.😆

Ok then,

all I can say is continue soon.

Will be waiting.

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topsyturvy23

@topsyturvy23

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Posted: 16 years ago

#643

hey waiting eagerly read what happens next thanks for pm plz update soon

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#644

Watagwaan Zoahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! 😆

Finally got a chance tu read yur ff!!! 😛

So sorry for the delayyyyyyy!!!

Part 2:

Wow amazing part zoah!!! 👏👏

I really admire yur writing style!! Yu make the scene come alive!!!!

Awww mayank-nupur scenes were so beautiful!! Mayank crying and nupur comforting him and then the baby scene was so cute!!! 😳

Ooo so nupur is samrat's siter and gunjan is mayank's sister right??!

The photo scene and nupur breaking down was so emotional and well written!!! 👍🏼

Hmm i wonder what ridhima has tu tell nupur?!!

Can't wait tu catch up with the next part!! 😛

Keep up the fab work girlie!! 🤗

Hinna xx

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#645

Part 3:

Another brilliant part zoah!!! 😃

Hmm i wonder what nupur is hiding from them!!! I'm wondering is the reason what i think it is?!!

Awww Arti!! Great name!!! 😛 goes perfectly with our favourite jodi 😉

Ooo they want tu get mayank re-married!! But mayu seems very angry!! Wonder what's gna happen now!!!

Thanks for the great part!! 👏

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#646

Part 4:

Woot woot!! Fantashtic update!!!! 👏👏👏

Again the scenes are so well executed zoah!!! 👍🏼 Love yur descriptions!!! 😳

Awwww the mayur scene was just wonderful!!! The way yu were showing nupur comforting mayank and fighting with her emotions!! 👏 Poor mayank!!

Aww felt bad for nupur tho..her dad doesn't speak tu her?!!

Wow the scene where nupur is thinking and questioning herself was so wow (sorry i don't know alot of words) lol

ooo eyelock?!! 😳

Aw mayank wants nupur tu look for a bride for him!! 😕

I wonder what's her secret!!!! I'm really intruiged tu find out!!!!!!!!!!!

Awesome update zoah!!! 😃

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Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#647

Part 5:

Great part once again zoah!!! 🤗

Absolutely loved the first scene where nupur catches his tear!!!!

Aww loved the cute refreshing flashback!!! 😛

Looking forward tu find out how mayank and dia met tho

Oh no return ticket??! 😕

Omg shilpa proposed tu nupur for mayank?!! 😲 ok that came out wrong but yu get what i mean!! 😆

Loved the way yu described nupur questioning herself!!! Awesome scene!! 👏👏

Can't wait tu see what happens next!!!

Keep up the fab work!! 😃

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Hinna

@.-BalleBalle-.

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#648

Part 6:

Excellent update zoah!!!! 👏

I really love yur writing style man!! 😛 I know iv said this soo many times lol but it's just wow!!! ⭐️

Loved the samrat-nupur scene!! Aww could feel the brother-sister/friend bond!!

Really intruiged tu know the 'raaz' man!!! It's so interesting!!!

I wonder aisa kya ho gaya jo nupur bhool nahi paa rahi!! 😕

Awww what a cute father daughter scene!!! 😳

Oh nooo mayank's angry again!! Poor arti!! he scared the little thing!!

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Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#649

Part 7:

OOoooo it was a dream!!!! Phew!! 😆

Wow i wonder what's gna happen when mayank asks nupur about the marriage!!!

haha but mayank said the same thing as nupur 'ok maa, but only on one condition, only if nupur is happy with this decision, only then' aww 😉

I am asking him to marry nupur not any witch, haha this line cracked me up!! 😆 i like how yu put light comedy in a serious situation!! 😛

nice description of the AR mansion!! 😊

Oooooo i wonder what's in the letter that left nupur so stunned!!

Why yu gotta leave it on cliffhangers zoah!!! 😡 😆

can't wait tu read next part!! 😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

#650

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates
Nice update....i am surprised Dia knew about this!.....will Mayank read that diary as well? i hope so!

thanks huni!

Originally posted by: little_dragon
hey dear sorry for late reply n sorry like button not workin. Was superb dear. Mayu n dia first meeting was nice. So this is how they started gettin close n this is te reason nupz left india! And watz this! Dia mannerless read nupz diary! Gosh wat more was written in diary? Plz let mayu get hold of diary n read everythin! Plz.... Tat would add spice to ur ff. Mayu reading n feelin wat he had done to lose a best friend like nupz who even loved him. And plz make behave indifferent wit him like as if she had not fallen for him n wat shez doin is just for dia n arti.

Loved it dear. Waitin for next part.

thanks soooooooooooooooooooooooo much priya!

well u gotta watch out for the next part to see if mayu gets hold of the dairy or not!