ll Uska Intezzar ll 2: page 9 21/03

hey guys and girls Um I know I have another FF hanging round and this Idea just popped in my head like out of no where in English at school and I was studying..because we were doing a poem about this girl who got presents from her aunt in pakistan..and it just gave me an idea...so enough of my bak bak lets get typing!

Teaser:

Happiness, laughter, love and care these were just some of the things she used to have....the few things that would make her day brighter and lighten up the mood. The few things that made it their little world, her fathers strictness, mothers blessings and the person whom she most cared for after her parents..her chachi...her chachi was that someone that made everything better for her. But know no-one could.

She laughed at the thought, a very shaky- hollow laugh the thought that no-one could do anything, God could but he didn't, it was as if he was punishing her and the rest who lived in that rat-hole for the sins the world had made. She silently prayed for a saviour, a person who would take all her pain away and give her love and happiness in return, but who could that be?

Instead of indulging into any more thoughts she rose from her bed and prepared her self with a smile for the sake of the rest and began to prepare her self for the rest of the day.......thinking of hope and positive thoughts.




so that is it
wanna definitely hear what you guys have to say about this hopefully you will like it and nadia aka my soaps please cheer up!...please because if your like this how will everyone else react!

hiiiiiii awesome teaser

^^

thank you kavya for starting me off!

HI dear i'm usually a silent member in this forum but your teaser made me come out of it 😃

loved it
please continue asap
please pm me when u update

Hi aashifa
wow u r starting another ff...............teaser seems intresting
do continue soon
is there any need to tell u that pm me when u update.
luv
Fatima

hey everyone thank you for the amazing response
I will continue soon once I can annoy kavya LOL

Originally posted by: premeer4rever

hiiiiiii
awesome teaser

waiting for more

intezaaaaaaaaarhum bhi karenge for the part1

hey kavya
thank you for the compliment
he he
intezaar karte rehna

Originally posted by: Binky

HI dear i'm usually a silent member in this forum but your teaser made me come out of it 😃

your writing is superb dear and i would love to read more of it and i hope you will post the rest soon

hey
well I am definetly glad I took you out of it!
thank you soo much!
will do and could I pm you?

Originally posted by: anoushay_kdmhmd

awesome teaser do continue

thank you 😊

Originally posted by: yasu09

interesting teaser..............................

thank you Yaz! 😊

Originally posted by: cute_bear

loved it

thank you sonia 😊

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

loved it
please continue asap
please pm me when u update

thanks...I will.....No problem..will do!

Originally posted by: meeshi.

hii
awesome teaser

continue soon

byeeeeeeeeee

hey!
thank you
will do
bye!

Originally posted by: angel_60107

sounds a bit confusing............and i am curious to read more...........................;plz continue soonn

oops sorry did I confuse you?...if I did I am terribly sorry!
Will do and soon your confusions will be cleared I hope

Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hi aashifa
wow u r starting another ff...............teaser seems intresting
do continue soon
is there any need to tell u that pm me when u update.
luv
Fatima

hey Baaj!
you bet I am!......thank you
will do
hmmm only If you want me too!
😆 😆 *kidding* I will!

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

loved the teaser........waiting for the first part!

thank you nikhita...and I am looking forward to your comments on the first part!!

Originally posted by: premeerrock

hey aashifa!!😊😊 really liked the teaser! u seem like a good writer so cant wa8 to read more👏⭐️ a very mature and a little bitter heer... not bad😃 cant wa8 for her savior to come and give her all the happiness and love there is in the world!😳😳!!keep it up and do pm me wen u update next!

love
hiba

hey Hiba.....thank you............er Hiba is that meant to be a compliment I am completly unsure 😆 Oh and I cannot wait to read your next comment!.......hmm Heer may have to do some growing up!......maybe he may come sooner than you think!.............I will!!




And now I would like to thank all the people who pressed the like button thank you!
here they are:

annwesha kayal, nspn.92, Premeer_chahat, premeer4rever, yasu09, PH4EVR, v_nikhita18, angel_60107, Princess92, mysticgoryfilms, Binky, -fsn-,

thanks dudes and dudettes!!

-aashifa-