FF-Opposites Attract, Note-Pg-115

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Hello everybody my name is Sia, as suggested before I am presenting you with my first FF. Any criticism is welcomed as it will only help me to improve. Any suggestions whatsoever let me know. Silent readers 'if you like it', please press like button. Only one expectation from you all. Please write long updates, I love them. You can include what you liked in my update, what you didn't. But that is just a suggestion, you can write anything you want. Just kidding.

I will only continue if I get minimum five responses. I don't think I am asking for much. I hope you enjoy it and find it interesting.
Opposites Attract
Introduction

Fate plays an important in shaping our lives. It possesses such power over us, that no matter what we try, we can't escape ourselves from its hold. It makes us meet such people in our lives who have the capability to change it completely. In this story too, fate got together two such people, and then made them so important for each other, even though none of them wanted that from life.

Arrange marriage is a concept where girls and boys are usually apprehensive before tying the knot. Heer and Prem are no different. This story is about how they meet through their parents, how Prem falls in love with her, who then has to try very hard to convince this gal that they are made for each other and they should try their fate in marriage. This is the story about two people who are so different from each other and yet so perfect for each other.
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I would detail out about the characters as and when story would progress. But prem and heer have only one sibling. Preet is prem's brother and nihaal is heer's.

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Part -1

This is the story of Heer, a simple and beautiful girl in twenties. She was a girl who never gave a chance to her parents, to be not proud of her. When her friends were enjoying life with their boyfriends, Heer didn't believe in all this. All her life she had yearned for just one thing- independence and she knew she could achieve only through one path- by developing her career. She always obeyed her parents, knew when they can be angry or not, and always tried not to hurt their feelings. She always gave up idea of hanging out in discs or watching a movie with her friends as she knew her parents would not approve. Such was Heer. She always knew that if she fell in love, her parents would never approve of such a thing, and thus tried her best to stay away from such stuff. This didn't mean that she didn't have friends who were boys but she tried her level best that they don't fall in love with her, as she was very clear in her mind that she would marry where her parents and her brother would approve, and she trusted their opinion a lot. She had resigned herself completely to this idea of arrange marriage, and knew she would marry one day a man, selected by her family members, who will be best suited for her.

Apart from this all, Heer's friends knew her as a very vivacious, bold and lively gal. It was as though she was leading two lives. She believed in giving her best in whatever work she indulged herself into. She was always among top five students in her class and thus her friends also knew that she was hard working gal too. She was full of confidence and she was known to be an adventurous gal as she loved taking those dangerous adventurous rides in different amusement parks and sports like bungy jumpy and river rafting. It gave her the feeling of being free. She knew exactly what she wanted from her life and wanted to achieve it, determined to remove all hurdles from her life.

Heer didn't had much expectation in life for her husband except one which was must according to her, that no matter what, but her husband must understand her. Nobody could boost of this thing that they understand her completely because nobody did, and thus she always hoped that her life partner would be the one, who will understand her fully. He should be her best friend, though she had been lucky to have many good friends in her life, but none of them had a capability to become her best friend. Something or other was always missing in all of them. But this didn't crush Heer's feelings, and she always hoped that God will listen to her one day and will answer her call by making her husband her best friend. But one fear always lingered behind, what if her expectations aren't fulfilled? Then she knew her hopes will be crushed forever. And to beat this feeling, she wanted atleast a year before her marriage, where she can do what she wants from her life and enjoy it completely in her own terms. Just one year where she would live her whole life. But has fate written something else for her?

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Index

Introduction and Chapter 1- pg 1

Chapter 2- pg 4

Chapter 3- pg 9

Chapter 4- Pg 13
Chapter 5-Pg 17
Chapter 6-Pg23
Chapter 7- Pg 27
Chapter 8-Pg 34
Chapter 9-Pg41
Chapter 10-Pg47
Chapter 11-Pg 56
Chapter 12-Pg60
Chapter 13-Pg71
Chapter 14- Pg 83
Chapter 15-Pg 103

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This is my pm list for this ff, if anybody wants to be added or if I have left anybody, do let me know😊

--Sarah--

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Posted: 16 years ago
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so was it? should i continue. do let me know
Sia
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It's seems interesting.. would love to read it... so I think you should continue writing it...
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was an amazing start
cant wait till the next part
do add me 2 ur pm list
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Originally posted by: Nitty2910

It's seems interesting.. would love to read it... so I think you should continue writing it...

thanks a lot. i will surely update soon. glad you like it
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Originally posted by: Kamal_23

was an amazing start

cant wait till the next part
do add me 2 ur pm list
and update soon
Kamal

thanks a lot. i will update soon. i will add you and will pm you next time. thanks for encouraging me
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I like the concept!! I think I shld continue!!
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i like it!! pls continue!!
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hii i loved ur ff concept plz continueeeeeeeeeeee
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hi sia
it seems really intresting.................do continue soon
pm me when u update
luv
Fatima

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