Premeer FF - Dil Ka Rishta Pg.43 *Promos* Jan.23

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Hi guys My name is Ayysha and ilove Kid desh specially Premeer.

I am writing a new FF based on Premeer and Meet. This is not going to have any eveil people its going to be a comedy (Meet) and Romance (Premeer). This FF is called "Dil ka Rishta" I am going to post the Summary for first and second chapter and tell me how you guys like it if I get some comments and tumbs up ' I will continue ' if you guys don't like it please be honest. As some of you may know I have another FF running its called "Journey to our Destiney". So Here is link ' check it out sometime and tell me what you think. All of the characters are same as the show and their personality is the same ' just the story line is different.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1246831/j-t-o-d-pg-145-the-end-feb-23-2010

(The LINK tO Premeer journey to our Destiney)

Here is the Summary

This is an FF on two beautiful couples ' that don't know what love means and never expected to fall in love with their buddies.

Prem who currently is a famous singer in bollywood. He has been popular for 4 years. Prem is planning on going to Dheli for his studies ' because he missed a lot in the past years. He is really nice and loved by all. Prem goes back to Dheli and attends collage. He is stared at by every where he goes and loved, but one day a different type of girl is new to collage. She becomes the girl every guy wants. Prem is dieing to see who she is ' and why every guy talks about her. But little did Prem know she was going to put an big impact on his life. Next block was Prem's Chemistry class and the teacher pairs him up with the new girl, but the girl wasn't in class at that time. Prem goes to get a water and talks to his friends by the founatian. Prem is talking but suddenly his friends stare at something looking like idiots. Prem follows their eyes and frezzes.

He sees a girl walking down the hall way with some girl, laughing. Her lips in to a cute smile and her hair into a little Pin flowing back by the wind. Her duptta flies every where and her anarkali hugging her figure thightily. Prem stares at her not noticing she was coming towards him. Suddenly she bumps into him and her binder drops ' making her papers fly all over the floor. PRem's friends leave followed by Heer's friends. Prem looks at Heer in a sorry way.

Prem ' "I am so sorry ' I was actually '" Heer smiled and collected all her papers.

Heer ' "Don't worry about it ' it happens ' at least you didn't do it on purpose like every other guy has been." Prem smiled and helped her.

Heer ' "I think I have seen you before ' I am not sure where though?"

Prem ' "Umm '. Probably .."

Screaming Girls ' "Hiiii '.. PRrrreemmmm '.. wiilll you eat lunch with us." Heer looked at all the girls and moved away. They dragged Prem by his arms. Heer stood their smiling. Prem looked by and gave her smile before he was dragged away.

So this is whats going to happen in the first two chapters '

I hope you guys like it ' please comment and tell me what you think 😊😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
Interesting concept
can't wait to read more
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very very interesting

and best of all it has no vamps👏

and its on meet and premeer
cant wait to read this
thanx for the pm
Kamal
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ya i can't wait to read this it's a really nice concept .. plzz continue with it and best of luck :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx for the pm yar...
this sounds really interesting plz continue soon....
do pm me for the updates...
take care,
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
Interesting concept.👏
can't wait to read more
update soon,.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, love the concept yaar!!! plz plz plz start soon and plz update your ff :just like heaven and journey to our destiny love~ Ramisha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww thanks guys i will update tommorow:)
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hey
its vry interesting
love the concept
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Interesting concept..
update 2nd part as soon as possible plzz...

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