Mayur OS Gallery - Over-thinking Pg 21

Posted: 16 years ago
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hey everyone
this is my second one shot on mayur
i wud like to dedicate this to all my friends at the paradise, the Pagal Deewani's and The Crankies esp Rabbia n Piya di who kept on blackmailing.
Hope you like it.......


A Day to Remember


Nupur was waiting for a call. She had been waiting for it for a while now.
Nupur POV-
Wonder what is taking him so long? It is almost 11:40 and he usually calls me at 10:00. Being late is so unlike him, the day Mayank Sharma would be recorded in history. Today will be a day to remember I guess. But why isn't he calling? Is he busy with studying? Probably, but he doesn't forget to call me everyday, he says if he doesn't say good night to me, he can't sleep. Is he sick? Did something bad happen? No Nupur, think positive, go to your happy place.
She looked up and saw Mayank sitting in front of her, he was looking at her with a strange expression. When he saw her look up he smiled. Nupur couldn't believe he was there, sitting so close to her. She blinked and he was gone.
"You are imagining things Nupur, he isn't here." she said to herself, "But where is he?". Her train of thoughts were broken by the ring tone of her phone, Khuda Jaane could be heard clearly all around her room. "Finally" she thought and picked up the phone.
"Kya kar rahe the tum, Mayank? Kitni der se phone kiya! Tum thikh to ho na? Main yahaan pagal ho rahi hoon soch sochke ki agar tum thikh,"
"Nupur ek lambi si saas lo" Mayank interrupted her rant, "Itna sab kuch ek baari me kaise bol leti ho?"
"Chinta ho rahi thi tumhari! Mujhe kaise kaise khayaal aa rahe the, tum kya jaano Mayank!" she defended herself.
"Sorry Nupur, mujhe kuch kaam tha. Chalo ab mujhe jaana hai" he said.
"Jaana hai? Ek to itni late phone karte ho aur uske uppar se thang se baat bhi nahi ki. Aaye bade jaana hai." she raged.
"Sorry, Love you Nupur, talk to you later, bye" and he hung up.
"By God! Ye samajhta kya hai apne aap ko?" Nupur went to her desk and switched on her laptop. She started typing
What does he think of himself? He calls, that too over an hour and half late and doesn't even talk! That stupid idiot! And i was worried about him! What
She stopped typing, she felt as if someone was near her. "You're just imagining him again, Nupur. Wait, why am I? I am angry because of him! Yes, I am mad at him! She continued to type.

What does he even think of me?
She felt someone very close to her, then she saw and felt another pair of hands touch her hands on the keyboard, and they started typing:
He thinks that you are the most beautiful woman in the world and he loves you more than anything.
She turned around and saw the love of her love looking at her. She blinked and he was still there. She then went to pinch herself to make sure she wasn't just imagining again, Mayank saw that and stopped her.
"I am really here Nupur. No need to hurt yourself." he whispered to her.
"What are you doing here?" Nupur asked him. She was actually ecstatic to see him but she was still angry for hanging up earlier. He looked at her, in his she could see a little regret, a little happiness and a lot of love.
"You will find out" he mumbled and went out to the balcony and 2 minutes later he came back with a few shopping bags in his hands. "Is that why you wouldn't talk to me? You were shopping?!" He nodded his head to indicate a yes.
"But you hate shopping!" she was trying to make some sense out of what she just found out.
"Yes, I hate shopping, but to make someone special's day special I can do anything, even shop." he answered rather sweetly.
"What? Who? Why?"
And out of nowhere she felt Mayank's lips on hers. Nupur was taken aback at first, but responded with all her love. Chills went down both Nupur and Mayank's spine as they both kissed each other. Their simple kiss soon transformed into a very passionate one. Nupur felt like the happiest person ever, she wanted this moment to go on forever, Mayank felt at peace it was as if he had finally found something worth living for. Out of breath, Nupur pulled away.
Mayank hugged her, "Happy Birthday Nupur" he whispered in her ears. They broke the hug, Nupur saw the time, it was exactly 12:00. Mayank had come to wish her.
Mayank took out a perfectly wrapped box and gave it to Nupur.
"Open it" he encouraged her, as she was opening the gift, Mayank could see the excitement in her eyes, he continued, "Sorry maine pehle tumse thikhse baat nahi kari, agar karta to shayad tumhe pata chal jaata aur ye saara surprise kharaab ho jata"
Nupur opened the gift and took a gorgeous necklace. She was really touched by Mayank's actions. Out of impulse she hugged him again. Mayank welcomed her in his arms, happy to see her happy.
"Abhi aur bhi hai Nupur." he said and took out two small packets of ice-cream. "Thode se pighal gayi hai, par tumhe pehle bhi ice-cream ka milkshake piya hai na?" he asked with mischief. Nupur hit him playfully while they both laughed.
They both had their ice-creams together, feeding it to each other, all trace of Nupur's anger was gone, and was replaced by happiness, thankfulness and love. Thankfulness to God for giving him Mayank, happiness because she had him and love for him.
All the while Nupur was thinking this Mayank was looking at her and was saying the same thing in his mind. "I love you Nupur" he told her. "I love you too, Mayank." she replied. Nupur had been right, today will go down in history but not because Mayank was late but because Mayank had made this her best birthday yet.

i really hope you liked it
plz feel free to comment n criticize, its always welcum


Index

A Day to Remeber - Page 1
Nupur's Confession - Page 1
Unnamed - Page 6
My Cousin's Friend - Page 14
He Made Me Smile - Page 17
Over-thinking - Page 21
Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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heres the first one if you want to read it

Its around 9pm. Everyone is a little disturbed with the recent pool party at Samrat's farm house. Dia is in her room getting ready to sleep. Gunjan is trying to finish Professor Deodhar's project. Uday is busy in the kitchen having his frozen custard. Nupur is sitting in the leaving room near the phone, waiting for someone's call. She has decided to make sure that no one knows how bothered she is about what Sheena did. The phone rings. Nupur grabs it.
N- Hello, Mayank?
M- How do u know its me? It could have been someone else.
N-Because I just know. Anyways kaise ho? Did you miss me? Have you had dinner yet? Mayank tum pe chode to tum to kuch nahi karoge bas side me jaoge aur apni pyaari pyaari books ke saath lag jaoge
M- Nupur mujhe bolne dogi?
N- haan to bolo na! Maine kab roka hai? Itni der se to wait kar rahi hoon ki tum kuch bologe par agar tum bol nahi rahe ho to main kya kar sakti hoon?
M- Nupur main thikh hoon. Tumhe bahut miss kar raha hoon. Dinner abhi nahi khaya hai par tumse baat karte hi khalunga. Mujhe pata hai ki tum party se disturbed ho aur wo chupane ke koshish kar rahi ho.
N- Mayank aisi koi baat nahi
M- Ms Nupur Bhushan, jab tumhe pata hai ki tum mujhse kuch chupa nahi sakti to kyun try karti ho?
N- Nahi main theek hoon
M- (in an accusing tone) Nupur
N- Ok I'm a little disturbed but that's all.
M- Mujhe pata hai ki tumhe kaise khush karna hai
N- Kaise?
M- I love you Nupur!
N- (blushes) I know and thanks
M- usually jab log I love you bolte hai to jawaab aise nahi dete
N- to kaise dete hai?
M- you know how to
N- to main boloon?
M- (sarcastically) nahi, jao apni SRK ki film dekho
N- bolti hoon na taana kyun dete ho? I''I'.
M- I pe hi atki rahogi ya aage bhi kuch bologi?
N- Mayank tum mujhe nervous kar rahe ho
M- Thikh hai main chup rahoonga
N- I'.I'I'Mayank, Uday bhaiya aa rahe hai mujhe jaana hoga. Some other time. Bye!

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It is a little after midnight. Nupur had been in her bed for almost an hour now but sleep escapes her

N- (thinking) I couldn't say it again. Why is it so hard for me to say those three simple words? Whenever I look into his eyes all I see is love for me. And I love him too but then why do my lips freeze whenever I am about to say them? I can stand in front of the mirror and say it a thousand times then why can't I say it to him? I know Mayank is desperate to hear them and to some extent even I am to say them. And he deserves it. From small things like complimenting me or calling me at night to bigger things like arranging that wonderful first date for me or diving into the pool to find that locket Mayank has showed his love for me time and time again. And me! Nupur Bhushan can't even say a proper I love you to him! Ye kya ho gaya hai mujhe? Pura din to main bak bak karti hoon to phir kyun me use ye nahi bata pati ke main use kitna pyaar karti hoon?

Thinking this Nupur fell asleep.
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Mayank is still not asleep and is thinking about Nupur.

M- Nupur seems really disturbed by that party and Sheena. Kuch to karna hi padega uska mood theek karne ke liye.

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It is 8 in the morning. Gunjan is all ready for college and Nupur is still sleeping.

G- Di utho! Its 8! Aap late ho jaogi.
N- Aur 5 min soone do na
G- Di plz aap late ho jaogi phir aap Mayank se bhi nahi mil paogi

Hearing Mayank's name Nupur got up in an instant and started getting ready

N- (speaking in a hurry) Gunjan pehle uthana tha na. Pata nahi tu mujhe kyun itna late utha thi hai. Agar lecture ke kiye late ho gayi to daat padegi. Aur pehla lecture bhi Shukla ka hai! Wo bolenge aaj kal ke cchatro ko to samay ka mulya nahi pata!
G- Di, calm down! Don't worry, we'll make it in time. Main breakfast karne jaa rahi hoon aap tayaar ho kar aa jana.

Nupur got ready and was just about to go downstairs when the phone rang.

N- Hello?
M- Nupur, Mayank bol raha hoon.
N- Oh hi Mayank sorry kal maine aise hi phone rakh diya
M- (cutting her) kuch nahi hota Nupur. Anyways tum aaj college jaa rahi ho?
N- Haan.
M- If u don't mind aaj tum nahi jao to chalega?
N- (excited) Kyun classes cancel ho gayi?
M- nahi I was thinking agar hum kahin bhaar chale to'
N- (full nautanki style) kahin mere kaan to kharaab nahi ho gaye? The Mayank Sharma college topper jo kabhi class galti se bhi miss nahi karta college cchor kar bahaar jaana chahta hai?
M- Ji aapne sahi sunna
N- wah tum kitne badal gaye ho!
M- company ka asar padega hi na!
N- what do u mean by that?
M- kuch nahi to chalogi?
N- sure
M- ok to I'll pick you up in 30 mins
N- ok

Nupur hangs up the phone and goes and tells Gunjan that she won't be going to college today.
As promised Mayank arrived 30 mins later and picked up Nupur.

N- So where are we going?
M- The Beach
N- (excited) wow remember the last time we went there? It was so much fun!
M- tabhi aaj le jaa raha hoon
N- waise aaj kya mood bana ki mujhe bahaar le jaa rahe ho?
M- bas aise hi socha ki first date ke baad second date bhi honi chahiye
N- By God Mayank! Tum sach me kitne badal gaye ho
M- haan main bahut badal gaya hoon. You know Nupur I'm really glad you came into my life
N- Me too Mayank

They reach the beach and find a place to sit.

N- Mayank yaad hai jab hum pehli baar yahaan aaye the? And the fight we had about boys and girls? Aur wo couple yaad hai? They were having an argument too, n I helped solve it.
M- haan yaad hai. That was the time when we had just started getting to know each other.

Mayank notices something and says

M- Nupur wo dekho ice cream wala.
N- Chalo chalte hai na mujhe ice-cream khake kitne din go gaye!

Mayank and Nupur both go to the ice cream wala. They both have strawberry ice cream.

They both spend the whole day at the beach. Remembering and discussing from their first meeting to the confession.

The sun was setting and both of them were enjoying it.

N- sach batao Mayank aaj tum mujhe yahaan kyun laye?
M- (hesitates) wo main
N- bolo Mayank
M- actually Nupur tum party aur sheena ko leke itni upset thi to I thought that maybe coming here would take your mind off of things
N- You were right. It did help me.
M- I'm glad it did.
N- You know what Mayank? I really really love you a lot! And I can't live without you.

Mayank was surprised. He was not expecting Nupur to I love you to him. Nupur on the other hand was really happy that she had finally said what was in her heart.

N- Mayank I said it! Maine bol diya!
M- (smiles) Haan tumne keh diya n you know what? I love you too!

Mayank kisses Nupur's forehead and Nupur hugs Mayank tightly not wanting to let go.
Nupur suddenly felt relieved as if some burden was off her now. And she thanked God for bringing her to Mumbai from Morena, for bringing Mayank into her life and for making them both fall in love with each other, as both of them watched the sun disappear into the sea.


Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey huni. Both os are wonderful. I dint know u too write. And y dint u pm me? Am angry. Ab ek mayank dhoondne padegy to hav ice cream in te beach!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey mishu..both were awesome..!
1st one -
Mayank gave her a surprise?!..aww so cute..!..loved that n their kiss..😉
2nd one -
Mayank is damn sweet..lol..he took her to the beach to cheer her up..!..aww..n she finally said it! :P..kewl..
do write more
-Aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow yaar .......awesome part .................please write more.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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first and Second one are wonderful dear.. loved it dear.. keep writting like this dear...

Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: little_dragon

hey huni. Both os are wonderful. I dint know u too write. And y dint u pm me? Am angry. Ab ek mayank dhoondne padegy to hav ice cream in te beach!


didi im not good at pming n stuff i forget ppl or think i already pmed them
yea i write inspiration milti hai itne acche ffs jo padti hoon! but tbh both the times rabbia blackmailed me this time evn piya di constantly kept asking me, i think har baar main likhti hoon ek aur banda add ho jata hai to the ppl who keep asking me to write more😆
n lol plz go ahead i can never have too many jijus to tease😆

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww . . . twas cho chweet!! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow! both parts were awesome i m surprised tht u only wrote 2 one shots even when u r such a good writer do pm me when u write more

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was so sweet..
i loved it when mayank types his words ...awwwww

but u didnt pm me..!!i nearly missed such a wonderful mayur one shot...just imagine !!! LOL

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