FF: Tum Se Hi chap13, pg17 23/05 - Page 16

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

gr8 part...plz cont soon

Will try to post as soon as possible! 😛😛

Originally posted by: phool527

ok fine.. no jootis.. since the update was not that bad and u had a good excuse.. i wouldnt want jai too feel bad after u noe wat.. lol. anywayz great part hun.. continue soon.. hope jai realizes soon..ek tho yeh roshni pecha hi nahin chodti... i hope he cathches her red handed with another guy.. thats wen hes gonna realise wat a ahem ahem roshni is.. and wat a dumb a** hes been to bani.. the poor girl.. anywayz continue soon.

Am so glad for no more jootis!😆😆😆 Glad that you liked the part! Will post more JB scenes! will continue soon! 😊

Originally posted by: *Guli*

haila u updated Yes indeed😆😆😆 LOL

and it was all a dream!

thank god it was jai's dream!!!!! that tells u something Yep it definitely does!😉😉😉

jai forget roshni!!! Lets see what happens!😉

not worth it

now bani... she's something! 😳 Yeah she definitely it! will continue soon!

Originally posted by: noya28

hi
great part but feeling sorry for poor bani 😭 as her life has been shattered by those words. plz continue soon
thx

Am so glad that you liked the part & thanks for commenting😛! Will continue as soon as possible!

Originally posted by: sangitadas

Great updates. Very nice I must say. 👏 👏 👏 Thank you sooooo much for the lovely comment! 😛😛😛

I like your writing style too - simple and lucid. 😊 I'm glad that you liked the way of writing! Thanks again!😛😛

SO JW has been the duffer after all, poor Bani! 😭 Well couldn't expect anything better from him. 😕 Agge dekhte hain kya hota hain😉

Please update soon. Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon

hey there!

Glad that you liked the part!

Will try to update hopefully😳

YAAAAAAAAAAAY Ur gonna update!!! Again!! :) Pls do soon!

Hey there dear its been over a year but no update, 😲 😲 😲

hey dear