|| Ishq Vishk || (Premeer One Shot)

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Heyy there...This one shot is a dedication to my favourite TV couple - Premeer... And also to my favourite movie - Ishq Vishk... It is going to be based on the movie itself... Hope you guys enjoy it... And do not forget to comment... Or at the very least, click on the "LIKE" button at the bottom of this post...

She had never in her life thought that this would happen to her. When Prem had proposed to her, she had been delighted. She had loved him forever, and when he asked her to be his girlfriend, she just couldn't help herself, but to say yes. She was a simple and quite girl, and he was the opposite. They met when they were in school, and from the first day itself, their friendship took off. It later turned out that their parents were also friends, from their school days.

Heer wouldn't have been more delighted when she found out that her parents had decided on her's and Prem's marriage when they were young. Moreover, when Prem proposed to her, she just couldn't keep her feet on the ground. But then, her world shattered.
Heer found out that Prem didn't actually love her. He just asked her out so that their college's two most popular dudes would allow him to come to Alibaugh for the weekend - but not without a girlfriend, and Heer seemed the easiest target. What made Prem so hyper, Heer didn't know.
Heer knew Prem was drunk, but she didn't care. She still loved Prem. But when his truth came out in front of her, she was heart-broken. Sadly, with heavy tears flowing from her eyes, she went away from him. He didn't even try to stop her.

Heer kept thinking what her mistake was. Kya maine kuch galat kiya? Meri galati kya thi? Shayad... Meri sirf ek hi galati thi - ki maine Prem se itna prem kiya, ki jab who mujhse door chala gaya, toh main use ek pal ke liye bhi bhulaa nahin paayi.

Mujhse Hui Bas Yeh Khata
Maine Tujhe Chaha Sanam

Six months had passed since Prem and Heer broke up. In that time, Prem had already gotten himself a new girlfriend - Ashlesha. Ash, as everyone called her, was a new student. The only child of a rich, single father - with her mother having died after giving birth to her - she was pretty pampered.

When Heer and Prem broke up, Prem gave a challenge - to Heer, and the rest of their gang who supported her - that he will date the most beautiful girl in their college. And he did just that. Prem begin to date Ash - who was certainly very pretty, having gone on her late mother's looks; and her mother was an international supermodel.

Heer was certainly angry at Prem for having deceived her. Yet, she couldn't help but love him -afterall, she had loved him from childhood, and he was her first love. So, Heer couldn't do anything but watch, as Prem grew closer to Ash.

"Mujhe dukh hai ki Prem mera ho nahin saka. Woh shayad mera kabhi tha hi nahin. Lekin phir bhi, main hamesha use pyaar karti rahoongi. Aur agar woh khush hai, toh main bhi khush."

Chup Chup Ke Roti Rahi
Tune Diye Kaise Yeh Ghum

So, for Prem and Ashlesha's happiness, Heer kept her distance from Prem. But, how much ever she tried to move away, Prem seemed to some that much closer to her. Prem didn't exactly apologize for what he did with her, but he was more cordial with her, and his actions made her feel as if he was regretting that he was really sorry.

The other time when she fell down the stairs at her college, he rushed over to help her up. And at his birthday party a few weeks ago, some guys had started troubling her, but Prem came to the rescue.

Awkwardly, after that incident, Prem tried to apologize to Heer. But, Heer felt guilty. Prem was trying to come closer to her, when he had a girlfriend - Ashlesha. Heer didn't want to be the reason that Prem and Ash broke up. True, she still loved Prem, but she didn't want to be the one to cause him unhappiness.

So, Heer just told him "Agar tera pyar jaana chahe, toh use jaane do. Lekin agar woh vaapis aaye toh woh tumhara hai. Sirf tumhara."

And she went crying from the party, leaving Prem behind - looking really guilty, and with a somewhat confused expression on his face. Crying, Heer bumped into Yuvraj - her's and Prem's very good friend, from childhood itself.

As she cried into Raj's shoulders, Prem came up to them. Heer could feel Prem's piercing gaze on her back. But she didn't want to face him just yet. She told Raj to take her away from there. As Heer left with Raj, she did, however, manage to catch a glimpse of Prem's face - he was looking jealous.

O Bekhabar Beraham
Karle Chaahe Jitne Sitam

And today was their last day of college - their graduation dance day. Heer was already there, alone - but Prem would be coming with Ash.

Aaj ke baad main kabhi Prem ki zindagi mein vaapis nahin aaoongi. Kahin door chali jaaoongi, bohot door. Lekin chahe main Prem se alag hoon, kisi aur desh mein hoon, ya phir is duniya mein bhi na hoon; Prem ke liye mera prem hamesha zinda rahega. Kabhi kam nahin hoga yeh prem.

Na Chaahat Kabhi Hogi Kam
Mujhe In Aasoon Ki Kasam

As Heer thinks to herself, Prem suddenly appears in front of her. Heer tries to move away from him, but he blocks her way. Heer tries to run away, but Prem catches hold of her hand. Prem turns Heer around, so that she faces him. He then brings his face closer to hers.

Coming closer, he can see the tears in her eyes, he can feel her pain, and finally decides to confess. Getting down on his knees, in front of all the other students, who seem to be glued onto what is going on, he starts speaking - with tears coming out of his eyes as he says what he has to say.

"Mujhe pata hai ki main tere laayak nahin hoon, Heer. Maine tumhara dil bohot dukhaya hai. Lekin main bhi kya karta? Mujhe bhi der se pata chala ki mere tumhare liye asli feelings kya hain. Jab humara pichli baar break up hua, aur tumne mujhe thappad mara, mujhe pata nahin kyun, dukh hua, kyunki tum bhi ro rahi thi. Main tumse maafi bhi maanga chahta tha, lekin mera yeh male ego beech mein aa gaya. Phir jab mujhe laga ki tum Raj ke aur kareeb jaa rahi ho, toh main jalne laga. Aur phir maine woh challenge di ' ki main is college ke sabse khoobsurat ladki ko apni girlfriend banaaunga. Lekin jab Ashlesha meri girlfriend bani, toh mujhe pata chala ki maine kya miss kiya hai. Ashlesha bilkul tumse alag hai. Usme kuch khamiyaan hain, lekin tum Heer' Tum toh bilkul perfect ho. Mere liye perfect. Main tumse pyaar karta hoon Heer. Aur I'm sorry ki yeh baat mujhe itni der se pata chali. Sorry ki maine tumhara dil itna dukhaya. Sorry ki main itna naasamajh tha. Pata nahin ki tum mujhe maaf karogi bhi ya nahin, lekin main tujhse maafi maangke tumhara dukh shayd kam karoon. Shayad isse tum yeh sochna band karo ki tumne kuch galati ki. Tumhari koi galati thi hi nahin Heer. Main galat tha. Sirf main. Aur aaj, meri galati ke liye main tumse maafi maanga chahta hoon Heer. Please Heer, mujhe maaf kardo. I'm sorry Heer. "

Prem looks into Heer's eyes, and sees her crying heavy heavy tears. He gets up to wipe them, but Heer pushes his hand away.

"Tum hamesha yehi karte ho Prem," says Heer, "Hamesha... Pehle tum mujhe rulaate ho, aur phir kuch der baad maafi maangte ho. Tumhari isi aadat se mujhe chid aati hai. I hate you for this Prem. I hate you, I hate you, I hate you..."

Heer says this as she comes closer to Prem, she is still crying, but Prem is trying hard not to smile. "Has kyun rahe ho? Aakhein neeche. Sahi kaha tumne. Tum hi galat the. Lekin main toh bevakoof thi ki main tumhari jaal mein aa gayi."

Heer finally reaches Prem, and using her fists, she starts hitting him lightly on his chest. "I hate you Prem... I hate you... I hate you..." And saying this, Heer hugs Prem.

Prem, on the other hand, just puts his arms around Heer, and tells her, "But, I love you, Heer."

And sobbing slightly, but also somewhat calmed down, Heer replies softly "I love you, Prem."

All those who have been watching Prem's touching proposal, wipe the tears that have been formed in their eyes, and begin to clap for Prem and Heer. But Prem and Heer, who are still hugging, seem to be lost in their own world, in each other. Finally, Heer gets her Prem, and Prem gets his Heer - the two true lovers are now one.

Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar

Maine Kiya Hai Tujhse Sachcha Pyaar

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Posted: 16 years ago
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very emotional and romantic one shot...... loved it....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very very very emotional ..
loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow dear its really sweet
very lovely shot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow that was such a romantic shot!!! Very well written!!! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nitty2910

very emotional and romantic one shot...... loved it....

Originally posted by: shawanah

very very very emotional ..

loved it

Originally posted by: sugi77

😳lovelyy shot❤️

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wow dear its really sweet
very lovely shot
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to all those who replied... thanks so much for ur comments... they are deeply appreciated... plz do continue to read the future one shots i write... and enjoy them too... do not forget to criticize or comment on how u find them... so that i know where to improve...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
amazing one shot..really cute...👏👏👏

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