MayurFFKhaash Usko Jaan Pata Updated Part 4 page 9

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There she was. A perfect wife, waiting for her husbend to come home. Today he was late, she even tried calling his cell phone, but he didn't pick up. Something was wrong she felt. Her heart was racing faster as every second past. She waz looking at the clock, her husbend did come late sometimes when he was busy working in his office, but not as late as now. She looked again it was about to be two in 7 minutes, She got up looked outside her balcony. She standing there looking at the deep cold night, and then she closed her eyes, thinking how they met, and how he fighted with his dad to marry her, he finally marrying her, bringing her in this apartment, how he left his family for her, every moment seems to come in her mind. She was still in her balcony, way up high, Then she heard the dorr bell ring. She ran to the door, happy that finally he was there. She opens the door, but didn't find who she expected. It was not her husbend, it was the police. She asked them why they were there, and they say something that made her shocked. She went with them, in the hospital, there in that room, was lying a dead body, she got closer, afraid to find her husbend there. When she lifts the white cloth off, she start crying. It was her husbend.
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😃hope u like it. I will continue soon😃
Part 2 page 4
Part 3 page 6
Part 4 page 9
Part 5 page 10
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plz do continue huni! awesome start! pm me when u update!
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Thanks Zoah
whenever I update u are definalty recieveing a pm.😉
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OMG plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
im eagerlyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy waiting
veryyyyyyyyyyy interersting
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz pm me
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Oh my GOD...PLS UPDATE SOON DEAR. Its really GOOD.
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hey!
loved it.
can you plz pm me when you update next?
Edited by Nishithini - 16 years ago
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Hello dear superb start but hope to see this fic a good one.
update soon n do pm me too.

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Thank u so much, but I really can't update the next part, I have to do a lot of homework. 😭 So sorry. 😭
But Here is a promo. Type of.😊
It was Samrat Shergill, and she was Gunjan Samrat Shergill. She couldn't believe it, he was dead.
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Mayank thought about this. He wanted to help his friend Gunjan get over with her husbends death. But he wasn't a very good friend of theirs. Nupur comes when Mayank is still thinking about how to slove Samrat's death case., she sets her head in Mayank's shoulders.
Nupur: Kya hua
Mayank: Remember the Shergill's that we once ate dinner with?
Nupur: Yes. Why?
Mayank: Well, Samrat is dead, and Gunjan is very sad.
She gets her head off Mayu's shoulder
Nupur: oh so sorry. Do u think I should call her, just u know, be kind. She must be crying. After this she must be broken. So sad, before she lost that, and now she has lost Samrat.
Mayank: I know.
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I am soooooooooooo sorry,
I am just too busy.
I can't wait 4 Sat and Sun
so I can finally write more.
And read more FF😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey thanks for the promo! and wish u a very happy birthday huni!
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Hey Lina...it was a nice promo..oh samrat is no more..thats sad....is this like an investigative story?

am curious n very interested..pls keep writing ..after u finish ur homework.. ok? :)

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