AR FF: Captured By Pirates Part1- Happy B-day Nij!

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Captured By Pirates.

WARNING: if anyone tries to copy or steal any of my following ideas or copy any scenes, consider the FF dropped and the person who ever holds responsible WILL be reported and dealt with. Thank You.

Intro....

Creak.....Swish......Creak......Swish......

"Ahoy! Bucko! The lass has awaken! Call de captain!"

Her head pounded, half conscious, she tasted the moisten salted water...breathing at first to gain her senses ....as she felt the ground swinging back and forth...instantly her mind recalled of her struggling to fight back the hooded figures that captured her in the kitchen, in the dark, but only remembered of being hetted on the head....instantly her eyes open to claim her surroundings....only to be shocked to see several blad dirty men, in torn cloths, gathered in front of her, grinning, smiling with teeth of what they had left......pirates?!.....as a sense of panic of life arise in her chest, as the numbness began to spread through her chest as her dart down to her body to see her dress torn at the side of her waist, where one of her sleeves were torn off, as she realised her hands were tied behind around the pillar, her eyes followed to the top of the pillar only to be hitched still in her breath as she stood in shock, her hair flew across her face, as the black flag with a skeleton cross blowing away.....I've been captured from the pirates......as she recalled the rumours of no captures ever came back alive, as they returned floating back to shore with just their dead bodies....as a shiver of tremor went through her of her own body floating to the shore.....

Tip Tap......Tip Tap......Tip Tap......Tip Tap....

AS the crowd broke loose, as she saw the sense of alarm from the rush of commotion as she saw the pirates, that were gathered in front, were now in search of a task to do on the ship....confused....she heard...Tip Tap...Tip Tap... coming closer, as she saw the dark hooded jacket walking down the stairs, followed by three others behind....squinting her eyes to see its face, under its pirate hat.... just a second after of recognizing the figure....CAPTAIN BLOOD MALIK.....

Vocabulary

Bucko: A Friend

Lass : a woman or a girl

Hi everyone, I know I know, I've got two to sort out, one needs major updating, that will be posted soon, I just got this random idea in my head, and thought this would be fun to write about.

Please do leave your comments

Natasha 😳

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Part 1

Staring right into those old-distant blue kholed eyes, as the most dangerous – wanted Captain Armaan Blood Malik picture was now standing in real, wanted for kidnapping, murders, robbery, face- to – face, on his ship had her heart pounding in fear of what is his next move, as she saw his gun in his hand infront of her, in his dirty boots, baggy-ripped pants, dirty off-white shirt, with a black long trench coat, where she saw him tucked his gun in his pants, was simply disgusted at his hygiene, yet the fear of tension was still lurking in her mind of her future....

"Arr This Wench! BLIMEY! Just lemme get one at this wench that gave me this black eye!" as she saw the pirate, shorter out of the four, coming right at her, as her eyes widen in fear as she saw his fist forming......he's going to punch me?!"......

But stopped by a laughter behind him, "AYE Abhiman Jack, Why ye laughing at?" as he was holding his stomach to stop his laughter as he saw Atul Sparrow cocked one of his brow furiously as his right eye was blacked out....."BLIMEY Atul! You were beaten out from a lass!", as he broke his hold, roaring into laughter, as it contagiously spread through the crew on the ship...as a smirk played on her lips, she saw Captain Blood Malik had a smirk playing on his lips as well, as she saw Atul Sparrow fuming red, seeing him cracking his knuckles, ready to knock her out dead......so it was him I punched.....her muscles tensed once he saw him charging towards her, but stopped in his tracks, when another voice broke the tension, raspy and deep.... "I told ye before, we were just to get the treasure chest and out, but ye stomach couldn't hold on.", said Rahul Beard, we he stood, tooth picking his teeth clean, "Instead we got a lass on board..." shrugging his shoulders.

"Aye...not any lass.....Lieutenant Shusank's lass....." as Atul Sparrow gave an arrogant smirk.

Feeling all 4 pair of eyes suddenly focused on her with interest, as she became conscious with fear of her sudden expected death....as there was an creaking silence on the boat... She felt "his" eyes strongly on her, looking at him, as her heart dared to look at the blue-eyes that roamed over her body hotly.....

"I say let the lass rot out her with nothing Captain?" as Atul Spparrow sneered at her.

Tip...Tap...Tip...Tap

Hearing a deep growl, as she held her breath as she saw the symmetrical line face in front of her asked.... "Where's the treasure?" in a gruff deep voice

Seeing her green eyes still and distant, as she stood emotionless......not giving an answer, pulling out his gun, not breaking the cold-stare between them, he thrust the gun on the side of her neck, under her jaw and clicked the gun open and growled under his voice, "The treasure!".....instead of getting a reaction from her, he saw her close her eyes....ready for his trigger....

Seeing her face up close for the 1st time, as her skin looked soft and white, where her hair blew over her face had still him from pulling his gun.... observing the outline of her eyes to her lashes.... "Whats ye name lass?"...he whispered gruffly....

*POW*

Opening her eyes in an instant, bewildered and scared of her state, thinking he had shot her, but found his back facing her, as the gun was pointed up in the air, hear him state... " Rahul Beard, Abhiman Jack, Atul Sparrow make the lass speak....remember I want her alive." seeing him stepping away, as she saw their shocked faces for a second, as she saw Atul Sparrow cracking his knuckles in delight, her pounding knowing whats next, where her mind panic....seeing Captain Blood Malik moving away, as the 3 pirates were coming forward......dryly in a whispered voice..... "Riddhima"....

Hi Everyone.

Here*s an update I got sneakily done, even though Im *Unactive* but I had to do this for my dear Nij, to show Im really sorry for missing out on your B-day. Here is your treat from me to you. I hope you like.

And ALSO for my fantastic reader and supporters, Im nowhere without you guys! Muah xo.

But on a serious note, I*ll be UNACTIVE till September 30th please, due to Ramadan and school.

Hopefully by then I*ll have the whole story written up by then 😊

It*s 1:45 am, as I got to wake up before sunset, therefore PMs later!!

Love you guys

Natasha

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yipppppppppppi me first

WOW
what a topic and intro i m already hooked i want more
its realy a gr8 idea
i bet ridhima is captured be armaan
its very very interesting story
cant wait to read more
and ya charecter skech wud be very good
forgot to say WELCOME BACK to ff
i have not seen u for long time hope everything is good
PS plz updat all the other ff ASAP
luv
nruit
Edited by arluver15 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh la la laa... a new adventure by nats...count me in :)
Reserved...will comment in detail later..muahh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice concept cont soon plz!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nooo way nats! haha this is wicked girl...armaan a pirate?!! hot lol
looking forward to it, update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awsome yaar counitnue soon pls and add me to your pm list
-amna-
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice intro..continue soon..plz PM me whenever u update..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#9
great intro
it's an interesting & new concept
plz pm me when you continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its very nice.plz continue soon and plz include me in ur pm list.

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