FF - ~Innocent Love~ [chapter 2 pg 3]

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Payal Patel

@Payal25

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Guys! I am attempting to write to write 3 Fan-fictions that link together. 3 Stories, 3 couples. VarNi, SaVni and PriDa. This is the first Story. Featuring VarNi. I've decided to name it "Innocent Love" why? well. whenever I think of VarNi innocent comes to my mind, they're just so adorable! So well, I hope you enjoy my attempt at story writing. This would be my second 2nd real FF. This story will be written as a novel. I hope you like it! I don't have a synopsis as I'm just winging it, lol. So, you'll have to read and find out 😳

Adding more Characters Soon..

Chapter 1 - Pg 1
Chapter 2 - Pg 3

Tell me if you would like me to PM you whenever I update, Ill add your name here.

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Edited by Payal25 - 16 years ago

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Payal Patel

@Payal25

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Posted: 16 years ago

~Chapter One~

Roshini Gujraal knocked on her aunt Jassi's door. She looked around her.

Wooow, I don't remember the last time I was here! She thought I wonder if Jassi aunty has changed at all.

Roshini thought back to the previous day when her mom had told her that she was leaving for a business trip and taking her sister Avni with her, for company. Roshini hadn't wanted to go because she hated plane trips; she couldn't sleep in planes, resulting in black under eye circles. She didn't want to stay home alone either as her oldest sister Damini and Prithvi jiju were on their honeymoon. So her mom had decided to send Roshini to her aunt Jassi who lived in a small town away from Delhi.

Roshini knocked on the door again. She examined her nails as she waited.

Ooo, my nails look gorgeous! She thought looking down at her perfectly manicured nails

The door suddenly opened and a woman came out. She was an inch taller than Roshini and was chubby. She has a wide smile on her face.

"Roshini!" She cried pulling her into a big hug

"Jassi aunty!" Roshini said enthusiastically

Jassi aunty let Roshini go and looked at her beaming.

"I haven't seen you in ages!" Jassi aunty said "I couldn't even make Damini's reception because of your uncles back problem and her wedding was in a rush as well."

"It's okay Jassi aunty, how's Uncleji?" Roshini asked.

"Better than before, he goes on regular walks now but can't bend an inch." Jassi aunty answered

"Awwh, poor uncleji, don't worry, now that I'm here, he'll be better in a snap," Roshini said as she snapped her fingers.

"And that I have no doubt in..." She said and then looked around "Oh dear, I forgot to ask you in! Me and my mouth, once I start I can't stop! Come In dear!"

Jassi aunty led her in, Roshini wobbling with her luggage behind.

"Oh my, wait a minute, you'll break yourself! Put the bag down," Jassi aunty said as she turned around and called into the house "Jay! Jay!"

"I'm coming!" Came a voice from inside

"Wow! Jay Bhaiyaan's home?!" Roshini asked excited

"Oh yes! His collage is over now so he's home." Jassi aunty answered happily

Just then a guy came down the stairs. He was taller then Roshini with short black hair and brown eyes, he was grinning.

"Rosh!" he said as he came over beaming

"Jay Bro!" Roshini said happily

"How's my little sister?" he said pulling her into a hug

"Good," She smiled happily "How about you? I mean no calls, no e-mails, you disappeared after going to collage!"

"I know, I know," he said ruffling the back of his hair looking apologetically "sorry about that."

"You're forgiven; now that I'm here we'll catch up! Like Old times!" She said

"Afcourse! We were the closest out of all you three sisters. Damini was always busy with her own stuff and Avni didn't talk much because she was the shyest." He said

"That's true," Roshini agreed.

"Well, if you're done, the reason I called you was to take Roshini's things to the guestroom," Jassi aunty said "Poor things too fragile to lift anything."

Jay laughed and took Roshini's bag.

"I'll be back," he said as he left

Roshini looked around at the house she hadn't lived in for 8 years. She had been 13 when they lived in this town, when they'd moved away. Sure she visited but somehow she'd never actually been able to stay in this house for more then a couple of hours. She usually came down to visit every year but from the last two years she hadn't gotten the chance. It felt nice now to see the chocolate brown walls and the beige curtains that hung form the tall white windows. Sure the house wasn't big, it wasn't even 1/3 of the house she lived in, in Delhi, but it was warm, cozy and well... familiar.

"Hey Rosh! Come on I'll show you your room!" Jay said as he came back

"I'm pretty sure I know where it is and how it looks like," Roshini replied

"Yeah, well, we've redecorated," Jay said grinning.

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-Urvi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG YAY! The 1st LNMDJ FF!! Please please please PM me! I'll add you :D x

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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome title!
really suits varni and I love the characters u chosee!
Jay-pari..😍brings back old memories of ranbir-rano ❤️

and please pm me whenver u upd8!<333

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

omg!! soo glad you started ff.thnx for pm.i dont watch show, but a m def gnna read this(btw, can u update aphg if pos.? if not, i understand.thnx)

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-Urvi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

That's a cute update. Please continue soon. Really looking forward to read on! :D

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Posted: 16 years ago

MY PAPAYA <3
OMG congrats on your #2 FF.
Im really liking yours, and i NEVER read FF 😳
but i really like yours seems like an actually novel!
The way you described and put it AMAZING!
I'm really happy & excited for you.
You BETTER keep one PM'ING me for UPDATES.
LA LA LOVE, APRICOT <3

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 16 years ago

ooh!! wow payal di!! fabulous update!! itz a wonderful story so far! itz really really good. great descriptions and i feel like im rite there watching the scene unfold and am going inside the char. head to hear their thought. thnx soo much! .i really like it!! can't wait to see what happens.....btw, can u add me to your pm list plz di? thnx!

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Payal

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesomeness!!! yay...our first FF!! this is soo cool!! i totally want you to pm me when you update!! and im sure this FFs gonna be rocking skhocking just like you, my better half! :)

love ya! :)

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Payal Patel

@Payal25

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: heaven002x
Awesome title!
really suits varni and I love the characters u chosee!
Jay-pari..😍brings back old memories of ranbir-rano ❤️

and please pm me whenver u upd8!<333

thank you so much! 😳
Yes! I was so upset when Vinay got switched so I thought I'd bring them back somehow 😳

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
ooh!! wow payal di!! fabulous update!! itz a wonderful story so far! itz really really good. great descriptions and i feel like im rite there watching the scene unfold and am going inside the char. head to hear their thought. thnx soo much! .i really like it!! can't wait to see what happens.....btw, can u add me to your pm list plz di? thnx!

thank you so much Radhika! 😳 Oh! Am planning to end APHG soon just trying to figure out an appropriate ending 😳

Originally posted by: -x0AsMa04-
MY PAPAYA <3
OMG congrats on your #2 FF.
Im really liking yours, and i NEVER read FF 😳
but i really like yours seems like an actually novel!
The way you described and put it AMAZING!
I'm really happy & excited for you.
You BETTER keep one PM'ING me for UPDATES.
LA LA LOVE, APRICOT <3

APS! thank you so much! Yes I shall PM 😉
Love you!

Originally posted by: *payal_15*
awesomeness!!! yay...our first FF!! this is soo cool!! i totally want you to pm me when you update!! and im sure this FFs gonna be rocking skhocking just like you, my better half! :)

love ya! :)

Awh thanks Twin! 🤗